Lil C vs BLACK~MAGIK
 

Battle Rules:

6-14 UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 04-15-05 at 03:55 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

BLACK~MAGIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-05 04:32 PM.

Quick 15 minute key.....

Damage this? Please, you can't handle this text
Especially since everyone of my lines she reads, Lil C's panties get wet
You're nothing but lame, face it, you're a fucking disgrace
Why Lil C look like she stopped a fuckin truck with her face?
I mean it whore, you aint ready, just leave the war
This sluts legs "stay open" like "convenient stores"
I'll let the tech spray, I got shit to hit you quick
And you couldn't "get some dick" if you had a "sex change"
I'ma rattle this hoochie, but this shit really aint fair
Cuz usually the rapper dont go and battle his groupie
I'll beat this whore to death, so please don't push me
Because I will "eat this pussy" like "oral sex"

Damn girl where the fuck you at? If you don't show up to this battle, then just forget it, because I'm not setting it up for a third time...So hurry the hell up with ya pre-written verse...

Where the fuck you at ma? Im serious, if you dont show up this time, forget about it...1

Lil C has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-15-05 01:45 PM.

im here im here lol sorry took me a min but damn lol just got in da office n shit......but im here n gon post my verse

So put yo misses on chill, 'for you droppin' your guard/
This artist been scarred, his heart-is partly dropped till it's hard//
Further and further my verse is skirtin this broad/
If I'm unheard of, when you get word I serve the girth to your jaws//
Fifteen from a nine, OR, seven from fours/
I miss to mean a misdemeanor sent as heveanly swords//
Hell yeah, I put the motherfuckin SALT in his WOUND/
An alternate doom, dying when you WALK IN THE ROOM//
I'm stocked with the BOOM, you runnin' out of the bland/
Up the prize and I supply that which runs around the demand//
Spit a round at "The Man" and tell the cops it's on purpose/
I merk this, clown like, he's found in the CIRCUS//
Ya clothes drop, the ONLY TIME you "peel" with ya men/
I rapped you up till you was "blunted" and I'm "SEALIN YOU IN"//
The power's aroused, this coward's upped and opened his grill/
It's like, hittin's a game, so I'm, hittin' this dame/
And what the shit? the shit What you spitt-ed, shit you SHOULD be ASHAMED//
This bitch is paid on the 1st, and fuckin BROKE on the 3RD/
My shit is DOPE...... ya'll could up and try to SMOKE MY WORDS//

yo...it said 6-14 lines...you went over ma........

Voted For: Lil C

Vote lil c

I feel like this nigga underestimated his opponent and got smashed for it.....I was feelin the word play from lil c so thats where my vote went

black magikz shit seemed played out to me

it said 6-14 unlimited lol u messed up there pa....god y yall still callin me a male im a fuckin femcee yall seen my pics n shit...lol neways uppin dis yall

but it still says "6-14" which means youre not supposed to go over that...whatever, nice verse tho...I really didn't think you would come like that or else I would've came harder...nice shit

uppin this shit for some more fuckin votes........

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Well

Lil C
I feel you drop an ok verse but it was a lil too long for me and you dint really connect with the punchez that you threw some of your personalz were nice but none that were all dat ... i fell that you couldve done alot betta bcuz you should have toke your time ............. But no hate im jus voting
RTF in that link please thanx
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186106

Black Magic
Ok You drop a good verse Some bars i couldnt quit get what you were tryin to get across but when i read it over then i can see what you were saying .. I feel That You shouldve and prolly couldve said some hotter lines but Whats eva so
you still get my vote -
RTf in the link please
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186106

Both of You can RTF please In Either Battle in The link in my sig or in the link i gave you

Thanx

Thanx...Uppin this shit for more votes...Quit sleepin!

This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 

yeah this was a pretty good battle...I think Magik got it for his punches tho...Lil C had too many self-glorification lines...But w/e good battle

Aaw w come on mayne
I dont want a thanx

I want you to RTF Please

Im Begging you .............I voted in yo battle So Please RTF Please

Lol I will homie...Uppin this shit for more votes...

Uppin this motherfuckin battle for more votes!!!!!

Uppin this motherfucker for more motherfucking votes...

Lets get some fuckin votes in this bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin this bitch for some more motherfuckin votes!

Goddamn can we get any motherfucking votes on this?

Will someone PLEASE fucking drop a goddamn vote???

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

lilc has elevated alot ill admit that but unfortunately you still lost...this wuz bcuz the rules clearly state 6-14 lines, and yours is longer than that...you coodve had a chance if u woodve stayed within the limit but you lost thisone...

v/ BLACK~MAGIK

yjamx dawg...uppin for morre votes................

lol come on oh well; uppin dis fo some more votes guys....plz dont sleep on dis one like yall did my last battle dats still uppin fo votes

Uppin for some motherfuckin votes on this shit!!!!

Uppin for more fucking votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Where dem votes be at?????????????????????????????

Lookin for some fucking votes on this shit!!!!!!!!

Upping this shit for some more motherfucking votes

Uppin for some more fuckin votes! Jesus tap-dancing Christ WTF does it take??

This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 

Lil C but from me on another page when i find the link i shall expose :thumbup:

Uppin for some votes on this shit.................

Uppin for more fuckin votes.......................

uppin this bitch...

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

votin for black

ight overall a nice verse but balck got this due to harder punches

black- ya flow was nice i was able to keep wit it the whole verse
ya strucutre was tight as well nice n easy to read
Punches- some a bit plaid but hit hard never the less
I liked this punch fam:
I'll let the tech spray, I got shit to hit you quick
And you couldn't "get some dick" if you had a "sex change"
(creative lol i was feelin it)
Multies- i really didnt see any so elevate on that
Personals - didnt see any so elevate on ya personals

C
flow- was a lil on in off but it was descent
punches- didnt really see anything hard fam elevate on those
strucutre it was descent could be a lil better though
personals- didnt see any fam
multies- none that i saw

both need to elevate on ya multies n personals bein put into yo verses

c get some harder punches that are more directed towards ur oppenent

good battle fams
rtf

Aiight weerd...Uppin this shit for some more votes...

Uppin this shit for a fucking vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!