LFS The Great vs LyricalMa$tamind
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-17-05 at 09:41 PM

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LFS The Great has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-05 09:46 PM.

this is the debut battle from me, LFS the Great,
Lryical Mastermind, yur bout to get lyrically raped,
I'm beggin don't whine cuz I'm crushin ya grape,*
I'll make you like Ashley Simpson, lip syncin ya tapes,
As this verse drags on the words is makin you corrode,
Changin ya 0 to a 1 like I was spittin in binary code,**
I spit luxury rhymes, my shit is rich like Red Lobster,
Do I look intimidated by a former internet mobster?
After look at ya record change you got me to blame,
Seein you undefeated is cliche like dollar signs in ya name....

* Wine is made with crushed grapes
**Binary Code is 0's and 1's

LyricalMa$tamind has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-15-05 08:07 PM.

Ayo I seize-ya-domain when i spit seiazure-to-ya-brain
With leisure-to-insane for reasons to explain
evals the definition of fascination with ambition beyond your imagination
With demolition for termination ill leave u shittin in ur annihilation
Spittin terror thats suicidal he'll trembel when i rip his SPINAL
Beat me in a battle? Shit your closer to bein the next AMERICAN IDOL
Fuck this bitch, i spit large dungeons and armor crunches
Good verses from him? I seen snakes throw harder punches
Neva will slang nor get money I'll stab u till you Puncture
its a shame when ya flow is juss as fucked as ya structure
LFS The Great FUCK YOU !! can you understand the message in its essence
never fear a mid-life crisis you'll always be stuck in adolescence
I’ll never surrender to this lame Man this cat’s a joke
If his name was DO he still wouldn’t be a half of dope!
Oh my bad that was your rap? Shit you need a script sir
Cuz I could'a swore your dumbass was drawin' a picture.
Fuck it dis battle wuz won before i even accepted
I drop quik shit jus tah murk bitch kno not tah test dis

This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
 

Damn this shit is tigh as hell good battle yall both held E.F. down I'm proud to say yall in my crew fo real!

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

Aii This iS What I Think

LFS

Plain and simple you didnt come prepared for this battle your lines were shortened your pucnhez didnt connect although i do see some attempts which is good but you lacked personals multis is what both of you lacked and the rest is jus history I think you should try a different style and work on your punchez connected harder than they do think b4 you type dont jus try to make shit ryme make somethin dope every chance you get .................Sorry but you dont get my vote

Lyrical

You came with a very long verse .... LOL .... which gave you a better chnce of warming up then hitting harder and then ending greatly which gave you the win if I really had a favorite bar it would be
Spittin terror thats suicidal he'll trembel when i rip his SPINAL
Beat me in a battle? Shit your closer to bein the next AMERICAN IDOL

Jus that one bar sort of stood out to me but the whole verse was jus BLAZED and I think that you deserve this win Plain and simple mayne

RTF in the linx in my sig Please

THANX 4 DA VOTE N FEEDBACK YALL
Still uppin dis hot ass battle b/w FAM

uppin dis battle...please vote lol...I hope I dont get swept lol...but its fam, no biggie lol

uppin dis battle b/w fam
hot ass battle yall please vote

This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
 

good drop ......................................feedback fo old fam

thanx 4 da feed
still uppin dis shit 4 sum mo votes yall
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

i think lf's verse was a little bit too simple for me to be giving him my vote. I gave my gove to LM because I seen more consistency in his verse. I like how he kept his multies goin thruout tha flow, and didnt try to switch up his style. Ur structure was a bit off, but thats tha least of ur worries. Try to think of some harder punches inside ur multies and I wouldnt doubt u'll be dope. Nice verse. LF-just come a lil bit harder, n work on punches. my vote goes to LM....


PLZ RTF LINK IN BOTTOM OF SIG....

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damn I feel a sweep lol..oh well I;m cool...my shit did suck badly lol

This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
 

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Voted For: LFS The Great

Checking polls.....................................

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And voting for LFS in the process. Well, as the great LyricalMa$tamind says "shit happens, simple mistake":..

lol thanks...now i wont get swept in this battle lol....

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

blahh, terrible battle, honestly. Lyrical you threw about 6 punches in that whole verse, it was almost a freestyle, no personals what so ever. some similies that spiced it up but nothin special. LFS the great, shit was wack and played, punches didnt hit and personals are wack. anyways ive seen better from lyrical, and i havent seen anymore from lfs, so my opinion is thats your best and thats terrible. v/ lyricalmastermind

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

honestly.....LFS's whole structure was good, punches, flow, wordplay and creativity; Ma$tamind had em also but his seemed 2 hit a lil harder.....i don't think he won by a landslide cuz dis was a tight battle but his direct hits stood out more

nice @ both MCs