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MaRVJay1009 vs redzone
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8 lines 3 votes=tko No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 04-15-05 at 02:41 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
REDZONE has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-15-05 02:20 AM.
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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-15-05 02:23 AM.
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da best? yea im simply,no written dis a quick key.
redzone's record is like "oprah" cuzz its "win-free". im sick b,marvjay's da mc most of you rv cats fear. since u '0-3' afta i merk u u'll be "04" like "last year". ........trust me i got guns fam if i pull it heads blown. like "farve at da goal line" i'll "throw bullets in da REDZONE". |
you can't be serious, mah eagles bomb on ya like brett Farve fa tha packers...
guranteed ta eat cha like cow nuts fa tha money on fear factor... MarvJay findin out tha Hardaway, I'm shootin shots atcha life... neva think twice pullin ya green card and get cha family swiped... you a pussy wit a period, use ta leakin alot... tha barrel'll leave permanent time-out in tha case ya speakin alot... Ya amuse me, fillin mah laughter as I develope ya slaughter... kidnap ya seed, let Mike Jackson fondle and mangle ya daughter... |
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fa sho mah nigga
you heard tha man uppin fa votes now, handle tha business homies
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Voted For: REDZONE
Weak ass battle for sure... But I gotta give the win to REDZONE -Redzone you had no multis....weak punches maybe none even decent.........But ya rhymes were more original then Marv's -MaRV- ...weak ass punches...you tried to connect some with the 04 punches but no they were jsut not happenin and that oprAH line is so played out...i was probably the first to use it but overall your rhymes were not happnin |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
marvjays verse......good opening lines.....like the wordplay in the Oprah line......nice punches by referring to his record....overall pretty good verse.....came harder wit the punches.....you get the vote Redzone......not really any good punches that stood out........could have come harder coz i didn't feel that the verse was direct enough....... |
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Aii since this was a short battle ima give a short explanation Marv You did MARVolous lol i feel that you couldve dropped a lil bit harder to have the number of bars you had but im guessing you drop second bcuz you didnt go your hardest :P Plain and simple you won Easily Although you dint drop your best you drop hard enough RTF in The last battle in My sig its the shortest battle and its very easy to see who won :roll: REDZONE mayne your drop was good but id have to say that you didnt come hard enough Plain but not siple lOL I feel that you need to learn how to use your bars wisely Bcuz i feel that you waited to long to try and Bring it all out And thats what messed you up BIG TIME RTF in The last battle in My sig its the shortest battle and its very easy to see who won :roll: PLEASE thanx |
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Aye Marv come on mayne PLEASE RTF all my battles getting slept on
and Im winning all of em Easilly so thats why i dont understand why ppl dont drop votes in it You dont even have to have a Long explanation .....Jus like a basic explanation like a paragraph PLEASE DO THAT MAYNE |
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
You killed him! Opener: da best? yea im simply,no written dis a quick key. redzone's record is like "oprah" cuzz its "win-free". Nice line. the win-free line killed em' Middle: im sick b,marvjay's da mc most of you rv cats fear. since u '0-3' afta i merk u u'll be "04" like "last year". that was a nice punch. Like the use of last year, that was tight. Closer: ........trust me i got guns fam if i pull it heads blown. like "farve at da goal line" i'll "throw bullets in da REDZONE". THis was a little weak. You coulda done alot better on this line. REDZONE you can't be serious, mah eagles bomb on ya like brett Farve fa tha packers... guranteed ta eat cha like cow nuts fa tha money on fear factor... kinda weak. it was iight....i guess MarvJay findin out tha Hardaway, I'm shootin shots atcha life... neva think twice pullin ya green card and get cha family swiped... didn't rhyme well at all. the second line in this punch was iight you a pussy wit a period, use ta leakin alot... tha barrel'll leave permanent time-out in tha case ya speakin alot... nothin. i repeat.....nothin Ya amuse me, fillin mah laughter as I develope ya slaughter... kidnap ya seed, let Mike Jackson fondle and mangle ya daughter... Iight, but you shouldah said son. michael jacksoon likes little boys.. this line killed it for you Marv: all together your verse was better than Zonez. you came harder with the punches. you put ore thought into your shit. Zone: shouldah came with harder punches VOTE MARVJAY1009 |
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
OPENER - marv MIDDLE - marv CLOSER - marv creativity....marvj wordplay....marvj flow...marvj punches...marvj enjoyment....marvj he got it in all cat's...red's seemed kinda forced n dey didnt connect...verse was off so i gave it 2 marv |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
damn this was ridiculous, i think ima have to go wit Marv even tho he only did 3 bars, they was pretty hot. redzone came ight wit his verse, good structure some decent attempts at some disses, but marv got this joint in the bag wit his punches. They were more creative and had some nice personals and creativity. redzone's best bar= you can't be serious, mah eagles bomb on ya like brett Farve fa tha packers... guranteed ta eat cha like cow nuts fa tha money on fear factor... ^^^solid bar could have been set up better tho, cuz you need it to flow marv's best bar= da best? yea im simply,no written dis a quick key. redzone's record is like "oprah" cuzz its "win-free". ^^all ya bars was good but this was my vfav one good personal n nice play on words overall marv took this wit a more creative verse and bette rpunches. HOLLA BACK AT ME links are in the sig...1 |
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