Kesse vs BLACK~MAGIK
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting
No bullshit
No D/R votes

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 04-18-05 at 12:20 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

BLACK~MAGIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-16-05 08:45 PM.

Ya squad is weak, I'll rip you apart with speech
Watch this gay chump, get "raked up" like "autumn leaves"
Don't start with me, you garbage dude!
Ya flow is rookie, now watch me "expose this pussy" like "prostitutes" *
It aint a fable you wack kid, I'll leave you unable to back-bend
After I'm thru clappin "shots at ya dish" like "cable assasins" **
You'll get destroyed, Black~Magik is hot, this faggot is not
So I'll put this "jack in a box" like a "childrens toy" ***
Aint Nobody matchin me, especially this actress queen
face it, ya flows couldn't "bounce back" with "matress springs"
I'll attack his spleen, cock and bust, let the shots erupt
And leave his whole body with "no lid" like "topless cups"
When I'm 'squeezin the tech', I'm easily bringing 'heat to ya chest'
Plus I'll "shove my nikes up your ass" just to "keep it in check" ****
I'm Godly ho, stay "packin heat" like "Dominoes" *****
Damn dawg, all I need is a "tampon" to "stop your flow" ******
You're thru if you try me, look dawg, you losing is likely
And please, you couldn't "Be G" if you were that "group from the nineties" *******
Show respect to the guy, and if you question that I'm the best when I rhyme
Look dawg, you got shit "fucked up" like "sex in the sky!"




* Prostitutes expose their bodies to anyone with money

** Get it? shots at ya "dish" as in satellite= "cable" assassins

*** A Jack in the box is a toy for little kids

**** The Nike logo is a check

***** Dominoes pizza delivery men always pack the pizza in these little heated cases

****** Tampons stop the flow of periods for women

******* The Beegees...

Why the fuck did I have to explain all that? Damn RV is fuckin stupid nowadays...

Damn...where you at man? Are you gonna drop your verse or what homie?

Kesse...where you at man?? Drop your verse homie!!

Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-17-05 03:31 AM.

fusion of color and witchcraft, you having a whack name is my only conclusion
'hip-hop's theme music'??? oh i get it, that must be part of the illusion
a delusion? you can think whatever you want when my punches go through you
no confusion, you wont be winning this battle just cause your into voodoo
cause your not impressive at all...actually your skills are quite tragic
you aint putting on any show, cause B............... you just lack magic
fact is, the way he stiffens men.... you could call him the human starch
cause only time hes droppin anythin golden, is if hes on top of the arch
st.louis kid has skill? things must look different from a bird's eye view
how bout i ram this loss down your throat, and you can sing RV the blues
what are you gunna do....stir up a potion with bat ears or warts of a toad
cause the only time your rhymes ever sound any good......are in morse code
pms me asking for a 'challenge', so i know you musta prewritten your lines
i should be fine, cause for you its a challenge just to write decent rhymes
youll never hit any primes, always be some punk ass teen who just drops for fun
funny how your interests are rap and pussy....you aint familiar with either one
we all know your name is an equation, that squiggle sign is really a minus
and you can add whack to the problem, because youre reppin emericas finest
'once you go rap, you never go back'...just too bad you never got an invite
cause like your name, your rap future is a mirage that will never see light
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sorry man, just never got around to it....i was pretty busy...lol...but here it is, gl
uh, did plays off his name, and his profile stuff....and if you dont know what starch does, get out......or if you dont get the st.louis references, dont vote........lol....i shouldn't have to explain, pm me if you dont get it......or dont vote

explanation: "on line 12, morse code reference, he had a quote in his sig where morse code was totally glorifying him, so thats where that comes from"

Lol...real nice man...Good luck with this battle dawg...Lets get some votes goin in this motherfucker!!!!!

Where the fuck are the motherucking votes?? C'mon RV!!!!

^ yeah man, RV is slow as fuck.......hey, you should join up with the new crew im making, its gunna be dope :) + emerica's finest is whack

Goddamn can we get any motherfuking votes on this?

no, its hurting, but seriously, come join my crew, it will be dope, uppin

Uppin this motherfucker for more motherfucking votes!!!!

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This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

checkin the polls, cant vote anyways........................

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^ what he said....................................

This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 

checking polls.................................trying not to hit vote instead of hitting feedback..

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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

I gave this to black because I felt kesse's verse was uninteresting, and not hard hitting. Kesse, I felt your lines were too simple, rhymes and all. I didn't see nothing that was just tha shit in yo verse, and creative and unplayed. I cant give you my vote.
Black-I voted for you because I felt yo had harder hitting punches and better wordplay. I felt yo verse was also interesting to read, and you came with a better style in this one. I just didn't like yo structure, but it didn't take away from yo flow....my vote goes to Black~Magik

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Aiight thanx for the honesty man...finally someone fuckin voted!! Come on quit sleepin you hoes!!

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

blackmagik took this one easily. harder punches and better wordplay. tha explainin at tha end, you need to cut out. not all, but most. kesse, i wasnt feelin ya verse at all. most of ya personals couldve been directed towards anyone. i think ima go wit blackmagik on this. more consistency in this one too.

both structures were a lil off too, ya'll should work on that. and kesse your rhyming was wayy too simple dawg. you should elevate in that, my vote goes to magki again i say....


RTF peoples...in sig.....honest plz

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^ actually, not really....all the personals i used were plays off his name, profile or city.....but anyways, uppin

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i also like how you took that morse code quote outta your sig.......and actually, fuck you jdot, how could my personals be directed at anyone, you stupid faggot....and what, do you mean my rhyme scheme is basic? because i dont use multies everyline.......wtf? that was the worst explanation ever, i dont give a fuck, im gettin it removed cause its not honest at all, you just mad i sided with 9th

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Uppin this shit for some motherfuckin votes!!!!!!!

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Come on yall...Uppin for some goddamn votes!!!!!!!

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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

BM:

Ya squad is weak, I'll rip you apart with speech
Watch this gay chump, get "raked up" like "autumn leaves"
^^nice bar 8/10
Don't start with me, you garbage dude!
Ya flow is rookie, now watch me "expose this pussy" like "prostitutes" *
^^good meta stretched 2nd line 5/10
It aint a fable you wack kid, I'll leave you unable to back-bend
After I'm thru clappin "shots at ya dish" like "cable assasins" **
^^woah fire 10/10
You'll get destroyed, Black~Magik is hot, this faggot is not
So I'll put this "jack in a box" like a "childrens toy" ***
^^nice shit 7/10
Aint Nobody matchin me, especially this actress queen
face it, ya flows couldn't "bounce back" with "matress springs"
^^dam nice 8/10
I'll attack his spleen, cock and bust, let the shots erupt
And leave his whole body with "no lid" like "topless cups"
^^lmao 8/10
When I'm 'squeezin the tech', I'm easily bringing 'heat to ya chest'
Plus I'll "shove my nikes up your ass" just to "keep it in check" ****
^^played 3/10
I'm Godly ho, stay "packin heat" like "Dominoes" *****
Damn dawg, all I need is a "tampon" to "stop your flow" ******
^^good bar 2nd line played 4/10
You're thru if you try me, look dawg, you losing is likely
And please, you couldn't "Be G" if you were that "group from the nineties" *******
^^ dope 8/10
Show respect to the guy, and if you question that I'm the best when I rhyme
Look dawg, you got shit "fucked up" like "sex in the sky!"
^^lol nice 8/10

Overall: 69/100 (69%)

Kesse:

fusion of color and witchcraft, you having a whack name is my only conclusion
'hip-hop's theme music'??? oh i get it, that must be part of the illusion
^^nice bar 7/10
a delusion? you can think whatever you want when my punches go through you
no confusion, you wont be winning this battle just cause your into voodoo
^^ehh 4/10
cause your not impressive at all...actually your skills are quite tragic
you aint putting on any show, cause B............... you just lack magic
^^nice 7/10
fact is, the way he stiffens men.... you could call him the human starch
cause only time hes droppin anythin golden, is if hes on top of the arch
^^decent meta 5/10
st.louis kid has skill? things must look different from a bird's eye view
how bout i ram this loss down your throat, and you can sing RV the blues
^^alot of metas here 8/10
what are you gunna do....stir up a potion with bat ears or warts of a toad
cause the only time your rhymes ever sound any good......are in morse code
^^decent 5/10
pms me asking for a 'challenge', so i know you musta prewritten your lines
i should be fine, cause for you its a challenge just to write decent rhymes
^^no 2/10
youll never hit any primes, always be some punk ass teen who just drops for fun
funny how your interests are rap and pussy....you aint familiar with either one
^^dope 8/10
we all know your name is an equation, that squiggle sign is really a minus
and you can add whack to the problem, because youre reppin emericas finest
^^lol 7/10
'once you go rap, you never go back'...just too bad you never got an invite
cause like your name, your rap future is a mirage that will never see light
^^ehh 5/10

Overall: 58/100 (58%)

Vote: Black~Magic

Thanx for voting homie...Uppin for more votes.....

worrrd............................................

uppin for some more votes.........................

Uppin for some motherfuckin votes on this shit...

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

checkin dem polls................. long verse kesse ...very long
upppppppiinnnn this battle

Voted For: Kesse

kesse took dis he came harder n his shit wasnt sloppy

openor-he came harder punch was aight
punches-kesse shit was a lil bit betta
personalz-none
multies-none
structure-kesse
closer- kesse took dis shit period

kesse came way harder den armada so he gets mah vote 4 dis

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