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DiSeAsE 04-16-05 08:05 PM

SoLo vs generic disease
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

12 Maximum Lines so people will vote

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 04-19-05 at 08:05 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 04-16-05 08:09 PM

SoLo has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-16-05 08:09 PM.

System 04-16-05 08:10 PM

generic disease has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-16-05 08:10 PM.

King Solo 04-16-05 09:37 PM

12 Linez Hoecakez......................

Sorry I Gotta Whore Ya Like This Little Boy.......................


Beggin To Be In LS..Ya Ass Is Actin Like A Hoe The Way U On Ya Knees…
Even Ya So-Called Illness Is Basic..Don’t Wanna Catch That Generic Disease…*
Can’t Spit Hard Shit..Ya Lines Packin Nuthin But Fluff Like Bathroom Towels…
Dawg Face It Ya Rhymes Stink..Even You Said Every Vowel You Spit Is Foul…*
Drop A Filler Line To Help..I Know U One Of Those Who Don’t Believe-In-Us…
But I Ain’t Gotta Be Smart To Win..Notice He’s Only Optimistically A Genius…*
I Just Got Personal On Ya..Now I’m A Switch Style Like Rocky In Number 3…
Dude Loves Nature..Named “Woodpecker Dick” The Way U Humpin Trees…
I’m Gonna Put Colour To This Line To Compensate For Your Fuckin Dull Spit…
Think You Gone Win Battles Wit Multies..Thats Just More Times The Bull Shit…
To Finish You Off I’m Gonna Give Ya Hope..Check It I’ll Spit A Basic Rhyme…
Step Up, We Tossin Clocks In Bins..Cuz Battlin You Is Just Me Wastin Time…


Shit Is Only Necessary If He Changes Anythin…………….
* name is generic disease
* member title says “evry vowl I spit is foul”
* reppin “optimistically genius” in his sig

DiSeAsE 04-18-05 01:35 AM

im like an airplane except when I "land" a punch your eyes-pop instead of your ears
suddenly you fall to the ground people crowd around your eyes are re(a)d with tears
battling noobs cause your greedy until you lose cause you know, you’ll never beat-me
could never defeat me being my personal butcher is the only way you would “meet me”(meet or meat)
only way you could put me in a coma is with a decent auroma but since you stink that’s not gonna happen
keep it to your self hang your career up on a shelf don’t you notice noones clappin you need to quit rappin
im gonna rip-you like a wet tissue and both of us know that noone will miss-you cause your wack
there’s no returning, cause your not worth burning take out a pen and start learning cause you cant come back

DiSeAsE 04-18-05 01:38 AM

im like an airplane except when I "land" a punch your eyes-pop instead of your ears
suddenly you fall to the ground people crowd around your eyes are re(a)d with tears
battling noobs cause your greedy until you lose cause you know, you’ll never beat-me
could never defeat me being my personal butcher is the only way you would “meet me”(meet or meat)
only way you could put me in a coma is with a decent auroma but since you stink that’s not gonna happen
keep it to your self hang your career up on a shelf don’t you notice noones clappin you need to quit rappin
im gonna rip-you like a wet tissue and both of us know that noone will miss-you cause your wack
there’s no returning, cause your not worth burning take out a pen and start learning cause you cant come back

there we go

King Solo 04-18-05 02:24 PM

whats with these hoez droppin there spits twice................

anyway uppin this shit.......................

King Solo 04-18-05 10:51 PM

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FlowIntelligent. 04-19-05 12:07 AM

Voted For: SoLo

GD:

im like an airplane except when I "land" a punch your eyes-pop instead of your ears
suddenly you fall to the ground people crowd around your eyes are re(a)d with tears
^^no 2/10
battling noobs cause your greedy until you lose cause you know, you’ll never beat-me
could never defeat me being my personal butcher is the only way you would “meet me”(meet or meat)
^^decent meta wack punches 4/10
only way you could put me in a coma is with a decent auroma but since you stink that’s not gonna happen
keep it to your self hang your career up on a shelf don’t you notice noones clappin you need to quit rappin
^^stretched as fuck and wack 1/10
im gonna rip-you like a wet tissue and both of us know that noone will miss-you cause your wack
there’s no returning, cause your not worth burning take out a pen and start learning cause you cant come back
^^stretched and wack again 1/10

overall: 8/40 (20%)

SoLo:

Beggin To Be In LS..Ya Ass Is Actin Like A Hoe The Way U On Ya Knees…
Even Ya So-Called Illness Is Basic..Don’t Wanna Catch That Generic Disease…*
^^no 2/10
Can’t Spit Hard Shit..Ya Lines Packin Nuthin But Fluff Like Bathroom Towels…
Dawg Face It Ya Rhymes Stink..Even You Said Every Vowel You Spit Is Foul…*
^^decent punch 5/10
Drop A Filler Line To Help..I Know U One Of Those Who Don’t Believe-In-Us…
But I Ain’t Gotta Be Smart To Win..Notice He’s Only Optimistically A Genius…*
^^decent punch 5/10
I Just Got Personal On Ya..Now I’m A Switch Style Like Rocky In Number 3…
Dude Loves Nature..Named “Woodpecker Dick” The Way U Humpin Trees…
^^no 3/10
I’m Gonna Put Colour To This Line To Compensate For Your Fuckin Dull Spit…
Think You Gone Win Battles Wit Multies..Thats Just More Times The Bull Shit…
^^ehh ok 4/10
To Finish You Off I’m Gonna Give Ya Hope..Check It I’ll Spit A Basic Rhyme…
Step Up, We Tossin Clocks In Bins..Cuz Battlin You Is Just Me Wastin Time…
^^lol no 2/10

overall: 21/60 (35%)

Vote: SoLo

DiSeAsE 04-19-05 09:31 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by O.M.B
STRETCH YA LINES

Now, in multi land there is no such thing as stretched lines if you do them right... A lot of people when voting on my battles say "yeah.. lines were a little stretched." But if multis are done right, and you use a good rhymescheme that aint just at the end of a line, the line could be long as shit and still not be stretched...

But all those anti-multinators out there are like "omg the line is more than 10 words long!! its stretched dammit!! But just ignore em... And if ya line goes onto the next one, (if u know what i mean) then youll cop a flaming from voters even though it might flow... So yeah.. keep all that in mind.


uppin............................................. ...................

King Solo 04-19-05 10:28 AM

damn flow.......................that was some harsh voting!!!!

but anywayz uppin...............................

NewKid 04-19-05 11:15 AM

Voted For: SoLo

solo took dis shit diease ya shit was strait wakk it was all ova da place da punches was tired ya personals none no wordplay fukk a vocab i dont vote bout dat shit ya shit was trash cuz on sum real shit

solo ya shit wasnt hot but u beat disease lol u had sum aight punches nun dat i wuld brag about but dey was aight ya personals was aight ya shit wasnt all ova da place like disease verse u came harder n put more effort n 2 ya verse

solo got dis n mah opinion

DiSeAsE 04-19-05 01:53 PM

*cough* hate vote.... *cough* .........bump.......

King Solo 04-19-05 06:56 PM

*cough* shut the fuck up *cough*


uppin this shit some more.............

King Solo 04-20-05 08:36 AM

.................................*bump*........... ............................

Oz™ 04-20-05 04:01 PM

Voted For: SoLo

weak battle.....

genereic disease-

im like an airplane except when I "land" a punch your eyes-pop instead of your ears
suddenly you fall to the ground people crowd around your eyes are re(a)d with tears
not feelin it.....2/10
battling noobs cause your greedy until you lose cause you know, you’ll never beat-me
could never defeat me being my personal butcher is the only way you would “meet me”(meet or meat)
weak........2/10
only way you could put me in a coma is with a decent auroma but since you stink that’s not gonna happen
keep it to your self hang your career up on a shelf don’t you notice noones clappin you need to quit rappin
poor structure.....weak punch...1/10
im gonna rip-you like a wet tissue and both of us know that noone will miss-you cause your wack
there’s no returning, cause your not worth burning take out a pen and start learning cause you cant come back
weak punch...terrible structure..bad flow...1/10

OVERALL SCORE-6/40(15%)

Solo-

Beggin To Be In LS..Ya Ass Is Actin Like A Hoe The Way U On Ya Knees…
Even Ya So-Called Illness Is Basic..Don’t Wanna Catch That Generic Disease…*
decent personal...4/10
Can’t Spit Hard Shit..Ya Lines Packin Nuthin But Fluff Like Bathroom Towels…
Dawg Face It Ya Rhymes Stink..Even You Said Every Vowel You Spit Is Foul…*
str8 personal......5/10
Drop A Filler Line To Help..I Know U One Of Those Who Don’t Believe-In-Us…
But I Ain’t Gotta Be Smart To Win..Notice He’s Only Optimistically A Genius…*
not feelin it....3/10
I Just Got Personal On Ya..Now I’m A Switch Style Like Rocky In Number 3…
Dude Loves Nature..Named “Woodpecker Dick” The Way U Humpin Trees…
nah..........2/10
I’m Gonna Put Colour To This Line To Compensate For Your Fuckin Dull Spit…
Think You Gone Win Battles Wit Multies..Thats Just More Times The Bull Shit…
decent......6/10
To Finish You Off I’m Gonna Give Ya Hope..Check It I’ll Spit A Basic Rhyme…
Step Up, We Tossin Clocks In Bins..Cuz Battlin You Is Just Me Wastin Time…
Played.....0/10

OVERALL SCORE-20/60(33.3%)

yall boiz need to elevate..................

Oz™ 04-20-05 04:05 PM

lol @ disease changing his sig after reading solo's 3rd personal...good bitch move

word.....:thumbup:

DiSeAsE 04-20-05 08:56 PM

Huh? What personal I didn't even read his verse, so fuck you.

MaRVJay 04-21-05 01:07 AM

Voted For: SoLo

solo:
Beggin To Be In LS..Ya Ass Is Actin Like A Hoe The Way U On Ya Knees…
Even Ya So-Called Illness Is Basic..Don’t Wanna Catch That Generic Disease…*
^^GOOD PERSONAL/OPENER..BUT I DIDN'T LIKE HOW DIS RYHMED
Can’t Spit Hard Shit..Ya Lines Packin Nuthin But Fluff Like Bathroom Towels…
Dawg Face It Ya Rhymes Stink..Even You Said Every Vowel You Spit Is Foul…*
^^^OKAY...CUOLD OF USE IT A LIL BETTA
Drop A Filler Line To Help..I Know U One Of Those Who Don’t Believe-In-Us…
But I Ain’t Gotta Be Smart To Win..Notice He’s Only Optimistically A Genius…*
^^^GOOD PERSONAL
I Just Got Personal On Ya..Now I’m A Switch Style Like Rocky In Number 3…
Dude Loves Nature..Named “Woodpecker Dick” The Way U Humpin Trees…
^^^LOL...FUNNY SHIT
I’m Gonna Put Colour To This Line To Compensate For Your Fuckin Dull Spit…
Think You Gone Win Battles Wit Multies..Thats Just More Times The Bull Shit…
^^^WASN'T FEELIN DA SECOND LINE
To Finish You Off I’m Gonna Give Ya Hope..Check It I’ll Spit A Basic Rhyme…
Step Up, We Tossin Clocks In Bins..Cuz Battlin You Is Just Me Wastin Time…
^^^OKAY...EVERY1 DONE FLIP DIS LINE BUT HEY

disease:
im like an airplane except when I "land" a punch your eyes-pop instead of your ears
suddenly you fall to the ground people crowd around your eyes are re(a)d with tears
^^^NO
battling noobs cause your greedy until you lose cause you know, you’ll never beat-me
could never defeat me being my personal butcher is the only way you would “meet me”(meet or meat)
^^^^DA WHOL SET UP 4 DA "MEET ME" LINE MADE IT WACK AND IT WAS MADD LONG
only way you could put me in a coma is with a decent auroma but since you stink that’s not gonna happen
keep it to your self hang your career up on a shelf don’t you notice noones clappin you need to quit rappin
^^^^A WEAK ATTEMPT AT USIN A MULTI
im gonna rip-you like a wet tissue and both of us know that noone will miss-you cause your wack
there’s no returning, cause your not worth burning take out a pen and start learning cause you cant come back
^^^OMG....IT TOOK ME 5 MINUTES DA GET 2 DA END OF DIS BAR LOL...

V/SOLO.....WAY MORE CONSISTANT AND HE HAD PERSONALS

King Solo 04-21-05 11:34 AM

aight gud votin people................keep em comin *BUMP*

uppin for da win hoez!!!!!!

DiSeAsE 04-21-05 11:43 AM

LMFAO, GOOD VOTING,?? Honestly, you won, but this is shit voting, no one gets that if you have multis in your verse, your lines can be stretched, so fuck all the voters.

Oz™ 04-21-05 03:54 PM

but ur multies are garbage...and maybe u should read his 3rd personal...and dunt worry...u have potential...so fuck you

DON 04-21-05 09:10 PM

Voted For: generic disease

this battle was real close. both the punches were pretty weak but solo i like how u got real creative with tha verse and added color and said bout ok here goes a one lined filler that was good plus u had some personals. generic disease u had a good flow i didnt think it would work cause the lines were so long but u worked it in good with multis u had some good play on words and a couple good personals. overall ur punches r what got u the vote cause overall they were a little more clever and funnier, but it was real close

King Solo 04-22-05 05:33 AM

.....................*BUMP*....................... damn u DON takin away my KO!!!!

King Solo 04-22-05 12:11 PM

......................................*bump*...... ................................

King Solo 04-22-05 04:37 PM

.............................*bump Hoez*.................................

King Solo 04-23-05 08:23 AM

.......................*hump This Ma'fucka*.......................

Daubs 04-23-05 08:41 AM

Voted For: SoLo

on sided to me, generics verse want bad, solo just cam harder.


solo you had some nice punche in there.
To Finish You Off I’m Gonna Give Ya Hope..Check It I’ll Spit A Basic Rhyme…
Step Up, We Tossin Clocks In Bins..Cuz Battlin You Is Just Me Wastin Time…
^kinda played but still nice.

Overall nice personals and punches won you this.

disease, i was feelin a few of your punches but to connect harder you need to word them better.


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