Verbal vs PreZidict
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-19-05 at 08:07 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Closed - expired battle win

Verbal has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-16-05 08:09 PM.

PreZidict has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-16-05 08:13 PM.

My words shock coma patients with seizures and violent convulsions
Yet *Dict* is missing positive *ions*, his words lack electric pulses (diction)
His rhymes are like faulty assembly lines, they're missing some components
So on a whim I detach his limbs and leave an incomplete opponent
Pre's the type that rolls with fakes, phonies and snitches in hood crimes
He could have yayo from Cuba, and the kid still wouldn't have good lines
He bites lines like teething babies, but that imposter just makes me laugh
Last he week he forged my signature and told peeps it was my autograph
The poor kid was begging for autographs and asked for mine
So I broke my watch and told Pre, "I don't have time....."

chea famski.......uppin 4 votes now...........lets go

ayo damn can we get somes votes niggas....wtf....not even 1 smh

That's what I'm saying.....upping again for some votes.

wow.......whats good??? 3 days no votes........vote on dis shit

dammmmmn......can we get some votes on dis shit.......i'll return da favor wtf

aight come on now......almost 100 views yet no votes???.......kinda ridiculous namean

For real, it only takes a minute to throw down a vote..

Alright, I'll bump this up one more time..............

Might as well up this shit again...................

damn.............we neva gonna get votes for dis battle son..................shit been up for a week n some change

For real, I'm betting we can up this until August before we get the first vote..

exactly fam........gotdamn...........i hate uppin battles it shoulda been done afta both verses were up.....vote ppl

Shit, this is my 7th battle and I've only had votes on one....peeps don't respond to battles and they get closed or if they do, like this one it takes 2 weeks to get any votes..

Upping............................................ .....

Voted For: Verbal

aii this is what i think

Explanation
Aii Verbal You came with some nice punchez and your structure was clean and decent and your personals came really nice this battle is a very nice battle not all that but a very nice battle if you ask me you both came outr and ya did ya thang verbal dropped a good Verse wit punch after personal and continued and then prezidct came and dropped his shit which was also good but the structure was sloppy and the color of ya verse.......amn its killing my eyes as i type but anyway to cut this thang short id likle to say verbal gets my vote plain and simple

RTF in the linx in my Sig

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Nice drop

both of yall

But dont forget to RTF ..............PLEase

yo fuck da structure..........dis battle is mad old.........vote on direct hits, da betta verse....betta lines........betta creativity........dis like my 1st battle so i fucked da structure up......vote up

Shut the fuck up, prez....stop trying to sway votes. This was my first battle too, so you don't have an excuse. Don't tell peeps how to vote.

This was feedback posted for Verbal
 

Flow - Verbal's flow was slightly better and his structure was a lot easier to read

Punches - Verbal had a few pretty good punches while i wasnt really feeling Pre's. it seemed like he was trying to hard to connect. both had some played concepts

Personals - Neither really had any personals

Multies - PreZ had a lot more multi's but it seemed he was tryin more for multi's than hard punches. Verbal had less multi's but came with harder punches

Vocab - neither was too good. Verbal repeated himself a few times and that took away from your verse a little

Originality - Verbal was more original, he had some played lines but not as many as PreZ. that "dog" and "bitch" thing has been played to DEATH

Upping again man, this is getting old..............................

very old......................n verbal i wasnt bitchin.....................or tryna sway votes..............cuz if i lose i lose................i'd be a man about it...............vote up

Well safe to say anytime someone doesn't like a vote, it gets disqualified...I'm just trying to get this shit closed since it's been up for 2 weeks now.....

Come on this shit is sad....................uppin........

Upping............................................ ............

This was feedback posted for Verbal
 

your opponents weak a lot of people on here is weak...you aint so bad.

Voted For: PreZidict

PUNCHLINES: Prezidict
WORDPLAY: Prezidict
VOCABULARY: Verbal
MULTIPLES: Prezidict
CREATIVITY: Prezidict.....

EXAMPLE:

son u facin ya last win, ya lyrics "sea-nile" even "moses" think u "old fashion"...
birthed twice? i'ma blast twins, den "shake ya stomach" like "ali when fastin"...

Lmaooo I Heard ALI-Shakin Bars Before...But I Neva Heard No Shit Like Dat...Dead Ass...Dis Made Me HAVE To Vote

in da rap game, u like "talented emcees" in a draft...u not "last-in!"...

Lol...Jeah It Wasnt Strong...But Funni...You Gotta Think About Shit Like Dat

why u happy "dog"?? i thought bein a "bitch" was a bad thing...
only time verbal "meats-applause" is when he "clap-men!

Lmaoooo Niggaz Probably Aint Get Ya Shit...But Dat Shit Was A Nice Hit...Direct...Ya Lines Funni As Fuck

Verbal....I Liked A Few Lines Such As:

The poor kid was begging for autographs and asked for mine
So I broke my watch and told Pre, "I don't have time....."

Aha!...Dat Was Creative But Ya Shit Was More Vocabulary Than Direct Hits Or Punches...Dat Nigga Prezidict Had Hella Punches/Creativeness/Wordplay Feel Me?....So He Gets Dat Vote....Nice Battle Kids

RTF...