Esco vs J DOT
 

Battle Rules:

6-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting
No Bitching
After this, no more hate. I'm getting tired of this

3-0=KO

Minimum posts to vote: 250

Check in by: 04-17-05 at 04:57 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Esco has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-17-05 04:39 PM.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-17-05 04:45 PM.

Fuck personals? A lil bitchy I see………





*I kicked him out of NOK. He might try and lie about it, but I did.
*He was bitching cause no one like NOK
*Whipped Topping
*His sig says “We all family…..get familiar”

How u the king of sac-town, when i claimed it before i Moved
your a wannabe Buck.Shot, When I NOK'D u out it was Proved
Livin Legend? Please, thats funny as a Dave Chappelle Show
Establishment kicked you out...cause DQ Is already they Ho!
no disrepect ta Her, because frankly, your more of a Vagina
Your a Thug? HA! Your cap-gun talk only appeal to a Minor
i'll define-ya with my Verse, an reveal your RapVerse Status
faggot only appeals ta old men in panties...like Trish Stratus!
u really think your flow Matters? even Tony Green has Pitty
''suck'' so much ya bitch lips stay on your Moms left Titty!
u can sit an say i'm not witty, an that u think am whack...
But you fail ta mention the time ya asked me ta Teach u Rap
askin ta drop a verse an make your open mics worth feed
everythin you ever dropped only NOK Would sit an Read...
god help if u ever had a seed, unless its from a Test Tube
ya rhymes aint ''shit''' even after u greased em up with Lube!
i'm feelin like Ice cube, cause i know ''today is a good day''
................................all i gotta do is use ''Dots'' ta end J!


Explanations:

Opening bar: He thinks he runs sac-town, an i used ta live there, an the next line: i talked about him bein hated by NOK an nobody in his crew likes him, 10 minutes later he left the crew lol

the Trish Stratus Line: she was in ''wwe'' an they are all old men in panties

Tony Green Line: Tony followed him into a crew cause he had pitty that nobody would recruit him

Teach U Rap Line: when we was in NOK, He asked me for some tips on rap

uppin this fa some votes......
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I got a offer from yo crew. Dont fool yourself. And, I said aight about me not kicking you outta NOK, but I NEVER ASKED NOBODY FOR TIPS WITH RAPPIN.. That's just beyond a fake personal

Voted For: Esco

Esco
How u the king of sac-town, when i claimed it before i Moved
your a wannabe Buck.Shot, When I NOK'D u out it was Proved
Aii Opener
Livin Legend? Please, thats funny as a Dave Chappelle Show
Establishment kicked you out...cause DQ Is already they Ho!
.. That Dave Chappel shit Is played ( NO HATE )
no disrepect ta Her, because frankly, your more of a Vagina
Your a Thug? HA! Your cap-gun talk only appeal to a Minor
/.... Umm Aii better than your last few bars
i'll define-ya with my Verse, an reveal your RapVerse Status
faggot only appeals ta old men in panties...like Trish Stratus!
...:: funny when you think about it but ,,,.. Still Not Hot
u really think your flow Matters? even Tony Green has Pitty
''suck'' so much ya bitch lips stay on your Moms left Titty!
when Will Yall rappaz learn That Momma Jokes Is Played
u can sit an say i'm not witty, an that u think am whack...
But you fail ta mention the time ya asked me ta Teach u Rap
..:: Damn Im Guessing Thats true To NICE
askin ta drop a verse an make your open mics worth feed
everythin you ever dropped only NOK Would sit an Read...
..:: Damn .... Its getting Hot in here
god help if u ever had a seed, unless its from a Test Tube
ya rhymes aint ''shit''' even after u greased em up with Lube!
..:: come on mayne Where da heat at from The other Bars
i'm feelin like Ice cube, cause i know ''today is a good day''
................................all i gotta do is use ''Dots'' ta end J!
The last Line was Nice Never seen nobody use that NICE

Overall:
I feel that you couldve done better you waited to long to try and hit him hard with the personals but yet Yu still come nice lets jus see how you do compared to Dot

J Dot
Esco kinda femine, changed cause his name said ‘LAYDE’(lady)
You’re a lame, just admit. Beating DOT’s not even a maybe
.. Aii opener
You a female ass nigga, Watch how DOT turf cats
Ran up on you, robbed you, then gave you yo purse back
:roll: Comidians LOL
Look kid, being tha best is way outta ya dreams
You a ‘femcee’, that’s why I kicked you outta Nok Out ‘Kingz’*
... nice Personal
Lie all you want. Don’t matter… I know the truth
I hate niggas who bitch a lot cause they team getting boo’d*
.. Umm Not all dat
And fuck tha team you with now, cause you da wackest nigga in
Say you not?...Look at yo record, I’m not convinced
Aii Personal
I can take this shit soft, cause I don’t care how you spit
You couldn’t be ‘topping’ Dot if yo first name was ‘whipped’*
Good Not Nice but Good
Talk loud if you want? That’s tha more times ima ace ya
U don’t know ‘cutting edge’, youngsters can’t play wit ‘razors’
..... Not all dat But aii
Got tazors to calm you down and give you a colgate smile
…Got lasers to box you in like a piece of tile
.. Aii .. Nuttin Special
[CLOSER]

We can be in tha same crew….LS, and I’d still hafto kill ya
Cause real recognize real and you don’t look ‘familiar’*
....Nice ....

overall:
You drop some Aii Stuff I was feelin This And You came wit some nice personals but so did he But If I had to say whos verse i was feeling id have to say:

Esco

Id have to say That The Underdog Toke this one SOrry But Mayne HONESTLY THIS WAS THE BEST BATTLE IVE READ IN A WHILE nice drop both of you

Can You RTF in my battle that I only need one more vote in to win Then you can check out any other ones that catch your attention LOL but please Check out the one That I Suggested first Which Is the One With me vs Mahatma Ghand

thanks, appreciate it, uppin this yall............

Hmmm....uppin. Good Drop esco. Other than tha fake personals, but ok drop. uppin

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uppin

Voted For: J DOT

I think J DOT took this one. I felt this battle was one sided. I don't think any of Esco's bars landed correctly. Yo structure was ight. I just didn't see nothing big and creative. It wasn't simple, but it wasnt hard. J DOT, you had a entertaining verse. U made me laugh at some points, but I think you lacked harder hitting punches. You did have some good personals in there, and some dope mettas, but that's about it. You can't win every battle like this. I gave you tha vote though, becuase I felt you had tha better style and I felt yo verse flowed better, and just hit harder.

I can take this shit soft, cause I don’t care how you spit
You couldn’t be ‘topping’ Dot if yo first name was ‘whipped’*
Talk loud if you want? That’s tha more times ima ace ya
U don’t know ‘cutting edge’, youngsters can’t play wit ‘razors’
Yo dopest lines, but still nothing big

esco:
i'm feelin like Ice cube, cause i know ''today is a good day''
................................all i gotta do is use ''Dots'' ta end J!
^yo dopest line, but still majorly played, you just worded it better than I ever seen

This battle was one sided. J DOT's dopest bars and overall verse took on esco's dope bar and overall verse in my opinion...No hate...

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that dude ALWAYS votes you
*hint hint*.......D/R??????
lol...

Uppin this

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Looks like he votes for alot of people. Are he D/R'n them too? I don't even know him, but thanx for the vote.

lol, okay then J
He just happens ta vote for u in all ya battles, but he aint no d/r...your right, what was i thinkin??????

uppin this yall..

Voted For: J DOT

Esco:

How u the king of sac-town, when i claimed it before i Moved
your a wannabe Buck.Shot, When I NOK'D u out it was Proved
^^decent 5/10
Livin Legend? Please, thats funny as a Dave Chappelle Show
Establishment kicked you out...cause DQ Is already they Ho!
^^no 2/10
no disrepect ta Her, because frankly, your more of a Vagina
Your a Thug? HA! Your cap-gun talk only appeal to a Minor
^^good bar 7/10
i'll define-ya with my Verse, an reveal your RapVerse Status
faggot only appeals ta old men in panties...like Trish Stratus!
^^good meta nice punch 7/10
u really think your flow Matters? even Tony Green has Pitty
''suck'' so much ya bitch lips stay on your Moms left Titty!
^^ehh 4/10
u can sit an say i'm not witty, an that u think am whack...
But you fail ta mention the time ya asked me ta Teach u Rap
^^good personal 6/10
askin ta drop a verse an make your open mics worth feed
everythin you ever dropped only NOK Would sit an Read...
^^decent 4/10
god help if u ever had a seed, unless its from a Test Tube
ya rhymes aint ''shit''' even after u greased em up with Lube!
^^no 1/10
i'm feelin like Ice cube, cause i know ''today is a good day''
................................all i gotta do is use ''Dots'' ta end J!
^^ok 3/10

Overall: 37/90 (41%)

J Dot:

Esco kinda femine, changed cause his name said ‘LAYDE’(lady)
You’re a lame, just admit. Beating DOT’s not even a maybe
^^ehh self glorified 2nd line decent personal in 1st line 4/10
You a female ass nigga, Watch how DOT turf cats
Ran up on you, robbed you, then gave you yo purse back
^^lol 6/10
Look kid, being tha best is way outta ya dreams
You a ‘femcee’, that’s why I kicked you outta Nok Out ‘Kingz’*
^^decent meta 4/10
Lie all you want. Don’t matter… I know the truth
I hate niggas who bitch a lot cause they team getting boo’d*
^^good bar 7/10
And fuck tha team you with now, cause you da wackest nigga in
Say you not?...Look at yo record, I’m not convinced
^^ehh 3/10
I can take this shit soft, cause I don’t care how you spit
You couldn’t be ‘topping’ Dot if yo first name was ‘whipped’*
^^your dopest bar 8/10
Talk loud if you want? That’s tha more times ima ace ya
U don’t know ‘cutting edge’, youngsters can’t play wit ‘razors’
^^decent meta 5/10
Got tazors to calm you down and give you a colgate smile
…Got lasers to box you in like a piece of tile
^^no 0/10
We can be in tha same crew….LS, and I’d still hafto kill ya
Cause real recognize real and you don’t look ‘familiar’*
^^good closer 7/10

Overall: 44/90 (49%)

Vote: J Dot

Thats a hard cd cover. And thanx for tha vote....uppin........return comin.

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Voted For: Esco

hey ok diz wuz a reel nice battl JDOT had a few nice linez but da diffrent stylez of da rhyme scheme favored esco becuz hiz verse seemed mo complex an the personals semed mo aggresive an original where az JDOTS linez were alot of stuff dat been said befo, kinda lyke ay cliche, but da battle wuz nice, esco had good wordplay towardz da end of hiz verse first few linez wuznt as dope but dey still hit they mark, JDOT ya personlz wuznt az tight yo u didnt go hard on focusin on escoz personal side where az he did an he hit u hard so mih vote goez 2 esco in diz battl dere iz no need 2 return da vote becuz u votd in mih battle alreeady but u dint j so return de favour pleaze

didnt understand ah word of the vote lol...nah, just fuckin with ya, appreciate the vote, noe more vote from either an its over??????????????

uppin this..

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

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Voted For: J DOT

jdot

Esco kinda femine, changed cause his name said ‘LAYDE’(lady)
You’re a lame, just admit. Beating DOT’s not even a maybe

ok opener..coulda been worded better for stronger effect 6/10

You a female ass nigga, Watch how DOT turf cats
Ran up on you, robbed you, then gave you yo purse back

ehhh... already calmed him feminine in first bar... kinda filler...no real punch to it 4/10

Look kid, being tha best is way outta ya dreams
You a ‘femcee’, that’s why I kicked you outta Nok Out ‘Kingz’*

three times in a row with a reference to females... i'm seeing a pattern here... makes it seem like ya got nothing else on him... guess it's kinda personal... not very effective though
5/10

Lie all you want. Don’t matter… I know the truth
I hate niggas who bitch a lot cause they team getting boo’d*

now we getting to the meat of the beef...lol..pardon the pun... that's a good personal with some punch to it... just a lil punch but i'm sure this one will hit a nerve or two 7/10

And fuck tha team you with now, cause you da wackest nigga in
Say you not?...Look at yo record, I’m not convinced

ehhh..filler line..hated it 3/10

I can take this shit soft, cause I don’t care how you spit
You couldn’t be ‘topping’ Dot if yo first name was ‘whipped’*

kinda bored me...good idea...bad way of expressing it... 5/10

Talk loud if you want? That’s tha more times ima ace ya
U don’t know ‘cutting edge’, youngsters can’t play wit ‘razors’

garbage line.. don't ever use this again... plus somebody tried to use a cutting edge line in my current battle...he used it better than you did... 3/10

Got tazors to calm you down and give you a colgate smile
…Got lasers to box you in like a piece of tile

boooooooooo 2/10

[CLOSER]

We can be in tha same crew….LS, and I’d still hafto kill ya
Cause real recognize real and you don’t look ‘familiar’*

ok closer....7/10 (46.6%)


tephlon

How u the king of sac-town, when i claimed it before i Moved
your a wannabe Buck.Shot, When I NOK'D u out it was Proved

ok opener...kinda personal..needed more punch though 6/10

Livin Legend? Please, thats funny as a Dave Chappelle Show
Establishment kicked you out...cause DQ Is already they Ho!

lol...kinda funny...but stay on ya opponent...lil bit of a personal...ineffective punch 5/10

no disrepect ta Her, because frankly, your more of a Vagina
Your a Thug? HA! Your cap-gun talk only appeal to a Minor

coulda been worded better...don't really feel the anger in ya verse 5/10

i'll define-ya with my Verse, an reveal your RapVerse Status
faggot only appeals ta old men in panties...like Trish Stratus!

lol...best line so far...funny...7/10

u really think your flow Matters? even Tony Green has Pitty
''suck'' so much ya bitch lips stay on your Moms left Titty!

booo..worst line so far.... 3/10

u can sit an say i'm not witty, an that u think am whack...
But you fail ta mention the time ya asked me ta Teach u Rap

good personal...that's gotta strike a nerve...lol... 7/10

askin ta drop a verse an make your open mics worth feed
everythin you ever dropped only NOK Would sit an Read...

felt the idea but the wording was all wrong...5/10

god help if u ever had a seed, unless its from a Test Tube
ya rhymes aint ''shit''' even after u greased em up with Lube!

ewwwwwww... that stunk.... 3/10

i'm feelin like Ice cube, cause i know ''today is a good day''
................................all i gotta do is use ''Dots'' ta end J!

not a good closer...again..the idea was there but there was nothing behind it... 4/10 (44.4%)

battle was kinda boring... thought the personals on both sides shoulda been stronger... neither one of y'all sounded mad enough to gain an edge over the other... lots of good ideas throughout but the wording killed y'all...

jdot wins by a mere 2.2%...rtf in my sig...out

uppin this yall.........................................

This was feedback posted for Esco
 

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Voted For: J DOT


J Dot-Yo My Nigga Came Hard With Them Personals Naw I'm Saying Cuzz This Shit Was Hott, He Had Some Good Wordplay That Shit Was Dope Cuzz, Man You Got Some Good Vocabulary, Strcture Was Aiight Cuzz Pretty Dope Shit Yo Nice Punches In Here

Esco-You Had Some Dope Shit To Man Wordplay Was Pretty Dope You Had Some Deep Shit Up In Here Them Personals Was Aiight To Cuzz, Structure Pretty Good Cuzz Not The Best I Saw Since I Bin Gone But Shit Was Aiight Man, You Need Some Elevation On Some Shit I Wont Say But Yea Cuzz

Both You Good Verses Cuzz

J Dot Got This
Yo Return The Shit Up In My Sig Nigga

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

dumbass lol u cant vote for crew
but thanks, i appreciate the feed LOL...

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This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

you got this...but i cant vote.....................uppin for m-eazy..