K!ng-Y@Yo vs Verbal
 

Battle Rules:

8-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-17-05 at 10:05 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Verbal has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-17-05 09:36 PM.

K!ng-Y@Yo has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-17-05 09:37 PM.

I'm the lord in all accord, you're just an upstart vassal
You're left humbled and crumbled as the king of a sand castle
Cokehead's sniffing my lines, and getting my hooks up his nose
I could inspire this illiterate idiot to write books on my flows
Your lines resemble crippled snails, so it's pretty fitting
That I leave slugs in your chest for slow-mo spitting
You're a free agent for a reason, just check the statistics
You couldn't even be the MVP of the Special Olympics
"Verbal is your savior, lord and master" just repeat the refrain
I should slit verbal in your wrists so you could say my name in vein

Same to you, thanks for bringing a quick spit.
Let's get some votes.

No problem for da quick spit....i hate it when somebody takes da hole 3 days to prewrite there shit......dis might be a close battle but i think u got me i aint battled in 2 months....but its all good....~1~ UPPIN FOR HONEST EXPLAINED VOTES PLEASE!!!!!

Voted For: Verbal

eeeee yeah....all the way one sided

king yayo...your stuff was too basic, not really any hard, creative punches in there....and last line was totally self-glorifying and not directed at verbal at all, and basically it contradicted the outcome cause you got merked, no offense/hate, but its probly cause you havn't battled for a while, word, well, hope you get back into your groove...word

verbal, not bad, had some complex stuff in there, creative too...but most of the concepts were played...you had decent wordplay to make them better though, so keep that up....last bar, it was pretty good, i laughed at it...and your opener was tight too, haha, laughed at it, just a couple chuckles, you look like you got a good grip on battling, keep up yo.....

v/verbal

Thanks for da honest vote kesse..........uppin for more honest explained votes.....~1~

Yeah, thanks for voting Kesse.....hate to freepost, but uppin again.

Uppin dis shit honest and explained votes ONLY ~1~

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Upping...............come on..................................

This was feedback posted for Verbal
 

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This was feedback posted for K!ng-Y@Yo
 

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Voted For: Verbal

verb got this,
I'm jus warming up kid and i'm already on fire,
Fuck verbal dis is physical abuse through a wire
na...

I can see it now dat i still got da talent dat it takes,
1/2 way threw my verse my lines already got u half baked
was ok..

Dis noob comin at Yayo wit a name like "Verbal",
Name like dat i should have known u was herbal
could have been worded a lot better.
But fo real dawg dont take dis KO offensively,
Dis shit gonna go down as da worst merkin in history
doesnt even rhyme properly


I'm the lord in all accord, you're just an upstart vassal
You're left humbled and crumbled as the king of a sand castle
pretty nice

Cokehead's sniffing my lines, and getting my hooks up his nose
I could inspire this illiterate idiot to write books on my flows
was ok

Your lines resemble crippled snails, so it's pretty fitting
That I leave slugs in your chest for slow-mo spitting
nice...

You're a free agent for a reason, just check the statistics
You couldn't even be the MVP of the Special Olympics
hmm...

"Verbal is your savior, lord and master" just repeat the refrain
I should slit verbal in your wrists so you could say my name in vein
nice finisher.

easy for me, no hate yayo just wasnt feelin your verse as much.

RTF if ya can

Thanks for voting Dazz, I've been sitting on this battle for a minute.....uppin #230

Voted For: Verbal

You're a free agent for a reason, just check the statistics
You couldn't even be the MVP of the Special Olympics
^tha reason why I gave you da vote

I felt that line killed his whole verse. King Yayo, yo verse was ight, but no punches that were descent enough to win this. Yo structure and everything was on point, just throw a few personals, mettas or punches in there, and you could easily be dope. That's all you need work on.
verbal-yo verse was slackin until that bar. and tha bar following that was played. You cant win every battle wit one bar. You just got lucky in this one. Yo flow was kinda off. I just gave you tha vote because you had a punch in your verse, and yo verse seemed a lil above simple...

~1~

Can't ask for more than an honest vote.........upping...........

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Voted For: Verbal

verbal got this shit. way betta punches and multies. king y@yo u gotta come harda man.

One more to close this one..........................

Voted For: Verbal

Vote=Verbal

Explanation: Eh weak battle verbal got this only cuz he came personal and king yayo didnt say barely anything bout his opponent .. u can tell u were rusty but its all good .. the say my name vein was a good concept tho too verbal i liked that ..