diman vs (Jimmy Pocketz)
 

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(Jimmy Pocketz) has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-20-05 06:22 PM.

diman has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-20-05 08:18 PM.

heres the scoop, more cats quote troop than donald trump.
ya in the trunk, cause hittin the curb's the only way ya tunes bump.
hes got tim boots & crunk juice, but whats in Jim's pockets?
kid winds up in the basement, when he wants out the closet.
truth is, troop L's from lames. its a shame ya fall to white belts.
JP ya losin ya flow, like a beatnik poet circumsizing himself.
i mean were cool troop, but ones gotta L & ones gotta W.
rv's like american idol, popularity wins...ima ruben studdard you.
ya wanna stack like J-hov & ya wanna blow like diddy blow.
but ya just a background prop, like jermain in music videos.
thinks he was born a legend, that shit is said so often...
...like the paris sex tape, i put this on the net & ya never forgotten.

this ni99a dropped 12 linez...........of garbage...........*Nuff Said*

Voted For: diman

Diman:

heres the scoop, more cats quote troop than donald trump.
ya in the trunk, cause hittin the curb's the only way ya tunes bump.
^^decent bar 4/10
hes got tim boots & crunk juice, but whats in Jim's pockets?
kid winds up in the basement, when he wants out the closet.
^^nice bar 8/10
truth is, troop L's from lames. its a shame ya fall to white belts.
JP ya losin ya flow, like a beatnik poet circumsizing himself.
^^ehh ok 5/10
i mean were cool troop, but ones gotta L & ones gotta W.
rv's like american idol, popularity wins...ima ruben studdard you.
^^lmao nice 8/10
ya wanna stack like J-hov & ya wanna blow like diddy blow.
but ya just a background prop, like jermain in music videos.
^^nice bar 7/10
thinks he was born a legend, that shit is said so often...
...like the paris sex tape, i put this on the net & ya never forgotten.
^^decent meta ok closer 5/10

Overall: 37/60 (62%)

JP:

Listen Im...a Living Rv Legend so Drop?..Why u even Try Than
Drippin Easter Egg Coloring Liquid on Males.& Still cant "Di" Man
^^set up glorified but dope meta in 2nd line 5/10
Look Kid Ya Rhyme Scheme is Dead and Dirty like Shitfull Spirits
And ya Rep is Foreign & Misunderstood like Readin Pitbull Lyrics
^^good meta wack set up 6/10
Only Kid on Rv who Battlez Rappers Still Stop Showin ya Wealth
U Not a Pimp..Like a Reversed Gun Shooter.u only Blowin ya Self
^^decent kinda played concept 4/10
We can Take it Automobilistic...Your a Moped and im Porsches
U Beatin on me ..Like a Kid wit Rigamordez runnin a 40 in Forces
^^ good meta and multies decent punch 6/10
Im the Teacher u the Student...Show me what u "Classed Bout"
Dimans the Plumber Type..Every Conlfict he End up "Assed Out"
^^good closer 9/10

Overall: 30/50 (60%)

Vote: Diman .. close battle

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Flow...i will E Smack u next time u come drop an half ass vote like dat again

get dat shit outta here


he dropped 12 linez.........Pure Dq lol...will i or wont i?

your trippin troop, battle rules say ( 10 lines + )

+ = plus sign... are you retarted? uppin.

you seriously got that vote removed, cmon troop...
lets be fair, i didnt vote on any of his battles... this was
not a returned favor, he took the time to analyze each
line idividually, so why are you removing votes dog? uppin.

Voted For: diman

not a strong battle yall...

Diman, ya verse had no real flow too it, an ya disses in parts were far too basic.....ya had some aight ideas, but you needed ta word them more creatively, verse came across as a no flowing basic rap....wasnt feelin it (no hate)...real nice closer tho, an it is so true, i was gonna give you the win just for the closer alone lol

Jimmy, ya verse in parts was just pointless for example:
We can Take it Automobilistic...Your a Moped and im Porsches
U Beatin on me ..Like a Kid wit Rigamordez runnin a 40 in Forces
^^^
they wasnt bad lines....they just seemed like fillers...propps for that reverse shooter line tho...that was the highlight of the battle, but troop had alot more creativity so he gets my vote

RTF In any of my battles ya see open on frontlines

Peace.

Vote switched

^^^
get my vote changed ta troop LOL, My bad.....

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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

V/Jimmy Pocketz....this was a good battle..but pocketz took this he came wit punchs that were creative an consistent i liked the opener type hot....also good structure an personals...diman..ur verse had some ight lines ur closer line was played but u had some good punchs an some played....u need to work on that...........No Hate....RETURN THE FAVOR...
Opener=j
Closer=j
Personals=j
Structure=Tie
Punchs=j
Multi's=tie
Wordplay=j
Vocab=j
Overall=Jimmy Pocketz

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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

heres the scoop, more cats quote troop than donald trump.
ya in the trunk, cause hittin the curb's the only way ya tunes bump.
5...aight opener, an average meta!!
hes got tim boots & crunk juice, but whats in Jim's pockets?
kid winds up in the basement, when he wants out the closet.
6...LMAO!!! funny line!!
truth is, troop L's from lames. its a shame ya fall to white belts.
JP ya losin ya flow, like a beatnik poet circumsizing himself.
7...LMFAO!!! decent comic shit!!!
i mean were cool troop, but ones gotta L & ones gotta W.
rv's like american idol, popularity wins...ima ruben studdard you.
4...not feelin this!!! first line was filler!!! 2nd line was weak!!
ya wanna stack like J-hov & ya wanna blow like diddy blow.
but ya just a background prop, like jermain in music videos.
4...not feelin it, aight meta!!
thinks he was born a legend, that shit is said so often...
...like the paris sex tape, i put this on the net & ya never forgotten.
6...decent closer!!

OVERALL: 32/60 (53%)


Listen Im...a Living Rv Legend so Drop?..Why u even Try Than
Drippin Easter Egg Coloring Liquid on Males.& Still cant "Di" Man
4...nah!!! self-glorifyin in the 1st line!!!
Look Kid Ya Rhyme Scheme is Dead and Dirty like Shitfull Spirits
And ya Rep is Foreign & Misunderstood like Readin Pitbull Lyrics
6...decent punch, nice meta!!!!
Only Kid on Rv who Battlez Rappers Still Stop Showin ya Wealth
U Not a Pimp..Like a Reversed Gun Shooter.u only Blowin ya Self
8...LMFAO!!! 2nd line cracked me up!!!
We can Take it Automobilistic...Your a Moped and im Porsches
U Beatin on me ..Like a Kid wit Rigamordez runnin a 40 in Forces
5...not feelin it!!! 1st line borderline self-g!!
Im the Teacher u the Student...Show me what u "Classed Bout"
Dimans the Plumber Type..Every Conlfict he End up "Assed Out"
5...again borderline self-g in the 1st line!!

OVERALL: 28/50 (56%)

close battle, neither was consistent with solid punches, jimmy self-glorified a few times but that one line had me laughin, diman was way too inconsistent and just dropped mediocre punches sp Jimmy takes this battle.

V/ - Jimmy Pocketz

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=189760

return the favour!!! :thumbup:

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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

Aight Diman was that badd actually.

Puches: JP liked the closer, and the bar before that. Shit was nice.
Personals: about even, both had like one that was ehhhh
Flow: JP easy
Vocab: JP

Fav Bars:

Diman:

ya wanna stack like J-hov & ya wanna blow like diddy blow.
but ya just a background prop, like jermain in music videos.

JP:

Im the Teacher u the Student...Show me what u "Classed Bout"
Dimans the Plumber Type..Every Conlfict he End up "Assed Out"

Diman has potential, but your punches are set up horribly man, good concepts, shitty execution. JP: Shit wasn't like WOW, but it certainly got the job done, nice job by both of y'all.

-CJ-

Vote = (Jimmy Pocketz)