Typical vs marvjay1009
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 04-21-05 at 12:45 AM

Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in.

Closed - Expired / old battle win

jea..lets get it goin fam...........

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-20-05 01:16 PM.

Typical has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-20-05 01:26 PM.

look...a quick key...

i won about 20 text battles in a row,so how da best not marv?
typ "getin out of a aFRiCaN JaiL"'s da only time u "LEFT HOT BaRS"
been here 9 month's no1 known's u,goin against me da earn rank
i made typical's moms drink "cum 4 dollar's" now she really a "sprem-bank"
ya bar's suck n ya flows missin,fam u'll neva go gold spittin.
u hand out ya cd 2 dj's but like "hard headed kids" they "dont listen".
go head test-my-click,typical u'll get feed-five-clipps.
when i say u gon be a "john-doe" i mean "dead" not "rich".
yes im sick!..typ u know u cant flow pass dis fella.
u should of worked at a "bank" cuzz ya SNiTCHiN ass known as a "teller".

This is a ny thing
ayo
I’ll be in your hood soon, wit a Bronx cap and clean jeasey
lookin for Marv to smack! cuz I heard he "Queens Early!"
this kids wish is that his balls were big enough to juggle wit
unfortunately, Queens niggaz aint run shit since russle quit!
To eat me: ud need a bigger plate, of da lie u facilitate
git it strait! Da Bronx began what dis man chants to imitate
jay feeds like a leach! He’ll kill ur line to inspire da bloody pen
a peach of a Queen, who dont eat niggas rhymes, but study them
since ur not righteous u mightjust die. like a logs stump.
now u in hell. cuz u sucked Nas, but never listened to God's Son


good luck

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

typical-

I’ll be in your hood soon, wit a Bronx cap and clean jeasey
lookin for Marv to smack! cuz I heard he "Queens Early!"
no...........0/10
this kids wish is that his balls were big enough to juggle wit
unfortunately, Queens niggaz aint run shit since russle quit!
that was wack and not needed..0/10
To eat me: ud need a bigger plate, of da lie u facilitate
git it strait! Da Bronx began what dis man chants to imitate
say what.......0/10
jay feeds like a leach! He’ll kill ur line to inspire da bloody pen
a peach of a Queen, who dont eat niggas rhymes, but study them
now we gettin there....2/10
since ur not righteous u mightjust die. like a logs stump.
now u in hell. cuz u sucked Nas, but never listened to God's Son
terrible closer..1/10

OVERALL SCORE-3/50


Marvjay-

i won about 20 text battles in a row,so how da best not marv?
typ "getin out of a aFRiCaN JaiL"'s da only time u "LEFT HOT BaRS"
played........3/10
been here 9 month's no1 known's u,goin against me da earn rank
i made typical's moms drink "cum 4 dollar's" now she really a "sprem-bank"
first n second line dont connect...and im sure u meant SPERM...8/10
ya bar's suck n ya flows missin,fam u'll neva go gold spittin.
u hand out ya cd 2 dj's but like "hard headed kids" they "dont listen".
nah.........2/10
go head test-my-click,typical u'll get feed-five-clipps.
when i say u gon be a "john-doe" i mean "dead" not "rich".
decent........5/10
yes im sick!..typ u know u cant flow pass dis fella.
u should of worked at a "bank" cuzz ya SNiTCHiN ass known as a "teller".
poor closer.....4/10

OVERALL SCORE-22/50

V/MARV

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is dis guy fuckin seriouse?
ur full of shit!
no offence to marv but
dats bull
how did his generic 2nd bar earn an 8 on ur twisted scale but i get a 0...
ride on dick rider....

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

MarvJay:

i won about 20 text battles in a row,so how da best not marv?
typ "getin out of a aFRiCaN JaiL"'s da only time u "LEFT HOT BaRS"
^^ok meta wack punch and set up 3/10
been here 9 month's no1 known's u,goin against me da earn rank
i made typical's moms drink "cum 4 dollar's" now she really a "sprem-bank"
^^good meta 5/10
ya bar's suck n ya flows missin,fam u'll neva go gold spittin.
u hand out ya cd 2 dj's but like "hard headed kids" they "dont listen".
^^good multies and meta decent punch 7/10
go head test-my-click,typical u'll get feed-five-clipps.
when i say u gon be a "john-doe" i mean "dead" not "rich".
^^ok 5/10
yes im sick!..typ u know u cant flow pass dis fella.
u should of worked at a "bank" cuzz ya SNiTCHiN ass known as a "teller".
^^decent meta wack punch 4/10

Overall: 24/50 (48%)

Typical:

I’ll be in your hood soon, wit a Bronx cap and clean jeasey
lookin for Marv to smack! cuz I heard he "Queens Early!"
^^decent bar 5/10
this kids wish is that his balls were big enough to juggle wit
unfortunately, Queens niggaz aint run shit since russle quit!
^^lol good bar 6/10
To eat me: ud need a bigger plate, of da lie u facilitate
git it strait! Da Bronx began what dis man chants to imitate
^^no 2/10
jay feeds like a leach! He’ll kill ur line to inspire da bloody pen
a peach of a Queen, who dont eat niggas rhymes, but study them
^^no 2/10
since ur not righteous u mightjust die. like a logs stump.
now u in hell. cuz u sucked Nas, but never listened to God's Son
^^decent meta 5/10

Overall: 20/50 (40%)

Vote: MarvJay

uppin i will return honest vote
i am my worst critic
this is wak
but its coo
its funny how da same two niggas dat thought he beat pandomonium thinks he beat me...
whatever
well explained dick rides always piss me off

thinks he beat pandomonium *
thinks murcinal beat pandomonium*

i geuss ya got each others back...

when da fukk did i battle panomonium n who da fukk is dat??....aneway uppin 4 more votes

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...18&page=2&pp=15
check dis to see how da three niggas above suck each other off in shifts
flow itelligent has to be da best, he keep da scores close and da sucking to a minimum...
vexing

lol yo fam 3-0 dis battle is gettin closed...i refuse da go 2 5 with ya bitchin

tha rules stand
im not sayin i want to switch shit up, and wait for dis and for dat...
thats not me
but u cant say that vote from murcinal wasnt ridin...
i aint worried about losin, im orried about being robbed...

Voted For: Typical

ok lets start with the bad.
marv, ya opener was no good for a meta
typ ya opener was too basic a personal
marv ya next line was played as hell
typ ya imitate line was punchless
marv ya hard headed line was used at least 300 times
typ ya bloody pen line was just aiight
it come down to these two bars
this kids wish is that his balls were big enough to juggle wit
unfortunately, Queens niggaz aint run shit since russle quit!
since ur not righteous u mightjust die. like a logs stump.
now u in hell. cuz u sucked Nas, but never listened to God's Son
vs..
go head test-my-click,typical u'll get feed-five-clipps.
when i say u gon be a "john-doe" i mean "dead" not "rich".
yes im sick!..typ u know u cant flow pass dis fella.
u should of worked at a "bank" cuzz ya SNiTCHiN ass known as a "teller".


and being very fair, both cats are cool
but the closer by typ was a nice personal
ima give it to him
marv you had no personals and ya punches werent up to par

i think ima retire from dis site soon...niggaz cry 2 much 4 me

look...thas y i left da first time dik riders and niggas breakin down verses
i saw u vote for murcinal against pandemonium
and he voted for u here so i figuered ya had a little voting clik
i personally thought he lost verses pandemonium
but hotshh! said u cool so i'll calm down wit the accusations

oh u logic then.......yeah we use da have madd beef...dis typical kid is crazee it didn't battle be4 dis 4 like a year its nothin tho 2 me i dont have 2 bitch about votes...if u would drop some hot shit u wouldn't have 2 worry about dat

ok i deserved that...
now i know murcinal didnt get my russell line as a personell and not just a "i hate queens thing"
its cool
i do think its a good battle to vote on tho
we flamed dis shit up...








marv dont get gassed!

comon fellas........its an internet site
ill up this for you though

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

marv's verse:

i won about 20 text battles in a row,so how da best not marv?
typ "getin out of a aFRiCaN JaiL"'s da only time u "LEFT HOT BaRS"
Nice opener. Clean diss. Nice punch

been here 9 month's no1 known's u,goin against me da earn rank
i made typical's moms drink "cum 4 dollar's" now she really a "sprem-bank"
Nice wordplay. Nice punch. Clean Diss

ya bar's suck n ya flows missin,fam u'll neva go gold spittin.
u hand out ya cd 2 dj's but like "hard headed kids" they "dont listen".
Again, good wordplay. Nice diss, Nice punch. Showin some consistency too

go head test-my-click,typical u'll get feed-five-clipps.
when i say u gon be a "john-doe" i mean "dead" not "rich".
Same as the others...First line couldve been better tho

yes im sick!..typ u know u cant flow pass dis fella.
u should of worked at a "bank" cuzz ya SNiTCHiN ass known as a "teller".
nice closer, nice punch. nice wordplay

U came wit some consistency wit your barz in this one, and focused thruout yo whole verse on dissin yo oponent. This verse was flawless i think. Nice wordplay, clean structure, and nice disses.

typical verse:
I’ll be in your hood soon, wit a Bronx cap and clean jeasey
lookin for Marv to smack! cuz I heard he "Queens Early!"
Badly worded, and flow was off...couldve been better

this kids wish is that his balls were big enough to juggle wit
unfortunately, Queens niggaz aint run shit since russle quit!
Eh, nice...Not all that, but nice

To eat me: ud need a bigger plate, of da lie u facilitate
git it strait! Da Bronx began what dis man chants to imitate
vocab was here, but it was still off. Not too good for me

jay feeds like a leach! He’ll kill ur line to inspire da bloody pen
a peach of a Queen, who dont eat niggas rhymes, but study them
Kinda a nice bar, but not at all a good diss

since ur not righteous u mightjust die. like a logs stump.
now u in hell. cuz u sucked Nas, but never listened to God's Son
I think you tried to force a good diss outa this one

[b]yo verse was just ight for me. I seen no consistency in this one. Yo flo was off at tha beginning, but u picked it up near the end, but i think it was too late. Just ight for me(this verse). I think it couldve been wayy better.

I'ma give my vote to marv, becuase like i said, he came wit more consistency, and harder punches. His disses were directly towards typical, where-as, most of typical's disses couldve been towards any queens person. marv gets my vote


RTF...link in sig............one of em, dont matter which one...they gettn slept on, and ya'll kno how slept on battles feel, so hit em up plz. 3 min of ur time.

basically all he said was queens....in his whole verse

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

i won about 20 text battles in a row,so how da best not marv?
typ "getin out of a aFRiCaN JaiL"'s da only time u "LEFT HOT BaRS"
5...self-g in the 1st line, 2nd line was clever!!
been here 9 month's no1 known's u,goin against me da earn rank
i made typical's moms drink "cum 4 dollar's" now she really a "sprem-bank"
8...LMFAO!!! funniest shit i heard in a while!!
ya bar's suck n ya flows missin,fam u'll neva go gold spittin.
u hand out ya cd 2 dj's but like "hard headed kids" they "dont listen".
7...nice shit!!! gud meta!!
go head test-my-click,typical u'll get feed-five-clipps.
when i say u gon be a "john-doe" i mean "dead" not "rich".
7...hot!!! decent metas again!!
yes im sick!..typ u know u cant flow pass dis fella.
u should of worked at a "bank" cuzz ya SNiTCHiN ass known as a "teller".
4...wack man!!! self-g lines are gay!!! marv ya shud know better!!!

OVERALL: 31/50


I’ll be in your hood soon, wit a Bronx cap and clean jeasey
lookin for Marv to smack! cuz I heard he "Queens Early!"
5...nah!! not feelin this, 1st line filler!!
this kids wish is that his balls were big enough to juggle wit
unfortunately, Queens niggaz aint run shit since russle quit!
6...nice personal off his sig!!!
To eat me: ud need a bigger plate, of da lie u facilitate
git it strait! Da Bronx began what dis man chants to imitate
5...weak shit!!! not feelin none of it!!
jay feeds like a leach! He’ll kill ur line to inspire da bloody pen
a peach of a Queen, who dont eat niggas rhymes, but study them
5...ya consistent i'll give ya that!!
since ur not righteous u mightjust die. like a logs stump.
now u in hell. cuz u sucked Nas, but never listened to God's Son
5...weak closer!!!

OVERALL: 26/50

marv took it easy, typical was just too basic and had no real punches, that one personal on his sig was all that was gud about ya drop....marv came with some hot shit and one of the funniest lines i have heard in a while....dropped a couple of self-g lines which are gay and played but still did enough to take this easily!!!

V/ - MaRVJay1009

RTF!!! I know you'll vote honest Marv...what's bettin that Typical votes against me if he RTF's!!! LMAO!!! :thumbup:

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