MetEoR-K vs Yung Wun
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-21-05 at 03:35 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

MetEoR-K has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-21-05 03:09 PM.

Lookin' at my merk list, guess whos Next in Line
A no-skill bitch, who thinks he's the Best to Rhyme
Talk that shit, and I'll turn you into a Neck-less Mime
Your own crew hates you, so your Left to Die
You ain't a livin legend, if you were livin in heaven
I would still shoot your ass down with a AK 47
Your too scared to call out so you sent me a Private Message
I thought it'd be a challenge, which is Why I Accept It
You really do suck if you have no battle Credits
I'll make your count negative, so what are you Left Wit
Shit drippin from your mouth, you full of shit Mr. Yung Wun
Gimme a mil? You hide yoru record so how do I know you Won One?
But if thats so, I guess I'll start buyin some bling
Cuz you ain't stand a chance, you just a dumb thing

references-http://community.rapverse.com/private.php?do=showpm&pmid=428251

^^ If it doesn't work he said he would give me a mill if I won the battle Lol.

Yung Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-21-05 03:18 PM.

'Jus passin the time....

..::*Yawn*::..
Im TIRED OF BEATIN HERBS with the FIRE THAT LEAVES EM BURNT,
This aint 'American History X' but MetEoR-Kl 'RETIRE FOR EATIN CURBS!!'
Ya LIFE NEEDS TO BE PRESERVED cuz wun RIPS WIT EASE,
And Im 'Fast To Fuck Alicia' the way I be 'QUICK WIT KEyS!'

..::Herb Slicing::..
You cant HALT MY PLATOON cuz Ill Delete-You-Wit-Words,
Ill dash 'SALT IN YA WOUNDS' cuz Ima 'Season-This-Herb!!'
Ima Beast-In-This-Verse you aint TOO WORTH IN THE LIGHT,
Plus 'MetEoR-K has a sour flavor' like the 'NEW VERSION OF SPRITE!'
You aint BLESSED FOR CONTENDER cuz yung'll HEX THIS PRETENDER,
So Ill 'Slice this Herb 'MetEoR-K'' like I had a 'VEGETABLE BLENDER!'

heated
When da TEXT(techs) CONFRONTS HIM it will push ya CHEST & GUTS IN have ya entire FLESH ERUPTIN till ya knees and NECK ARE TOUCHIN (Ouch!!) 'Everyones feelin wunl' cuz they know DEATHS CORRUPTIN plus Im 'quicker with a blade' than surgeons conductin BREAST REDUCTIONS!!//
Engaged in this NITE OF TRUE SPITS my KNIFE IS RUTHLESS & this 'dog claims he loves war' but his BITE IS TOOTHLESS//I'll MERK HIM IN TEXT fo CERTAIN ITS NEXT 'stop sendin me messages sayin you wanna battle' cuz ya FLIRTIN WITH DEATH!!!//
I emerge in STELTH FROM DA ABYSS an easy victory you'll get DEALT WITH CLIPS cuz da only way ya gona defeat me?? is by takin someone ELSES SHIT!!!//

a quick 17 its over

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Damn wtf, Either I hate you, or I hate you, nice shit tho

Voted For: Yung Wun

blah
pretty weak battle.....

Meteors rhyme scheme was far better, he just had very very played an basic rhymes an disses...
the flow was prolly more on point from meteor, but young wun was more creative, an seemed more complex with his verse, alot of self glorification Young wun, stay away from that.....ya had the better punches, ya structure is fucked up tho...an there was alot of pointless lines, but you was far more original with your rhymes, so you get my vote

rtf in any of my battles ya see yall

i appreciate it, thanks...

peace out
v/ young wun

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Voted For: Yung Wun

V/Wayne....this was a one sided battle wayne took this wit good punchs an multi's this structure was a little off but ur vocab an diss's made up for it....met... had a basic verse u came to lightly to me so work on ur punchs an vocab an personals.........NO Hate......
RETURN THE FAVOR (or i'll never vote on one yah battles agian)
Opener=w
Closer=w
Punchs=w
Structure=M
Personals=w
Wordplay=w
Multi's=w
Vocab=w
Overall=wayne

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Voted For: Yung Wun

this is an easy battle yo...an easy one...4real...young wun killed the multi's...even though his structure was fucked up and he fell off punches near the end...he still creamed you son...cuz he BOMBED ur ass wit punches and used some good vocab in there as well...*note* stop sayin "herb" lol...

basically meteor-k, u need to elevate on punches, multis and the rest said...ur verse was basically about flow...and u were just usin self glorification (which is not good in a battle)...and u were just braggin...I think u had some personals though,but that wasn't enuff...

my vote= wun...

now return the favour in my OM...I dont have the link...just cruise in the open mic and look for my name...simple...

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Voted For: Yung Wun

Aii This is what I think .............

Aii Think That Wayne Really laid down the punch after Personal afetr Ounch Verse and tahat what I Like to see I mean Its ok To have a all Punch verse or all personals But its better when you mix it up The way That Wayne did It Bcuz It Puts that Extra Flare in Ya verse and youll get more votes that way .............. BUt also Wayne your structure was jus ...ILLL(((( Mayne that shit was sloppy and I hope taht you work on that in the future mayne

RTF in The battle Link In My Sig PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Yung Wun

Umm, not even fair. Vote goes 2 Yung Wun.

Im TIRED OF BEATIN HERBS with the FIRE THAT LEAVES EM BURNT,
This aint 'American History X' but MetEoR-Kl 'RETIRE FOR EATIN CURBS!!'
Ya LIFE NEEDS TO BE PRESERVED cuz wun RIPS WIT EASE,
And Im 'Fast To Fuck Alicia' the way I be 'QUICK WIT KEyS!'
Thats all he realy needed. Eazy