Little Birdie
 

Once again, it's metal.... I know how much you all enjoy metal on this site... :thumbup:



Little Birdie

(Verse 1)
Do you like being tortured?
I like the fire in your eyes
You look so beautiful when you're screaming
Suffering these lies
What could you have done so wrong?
You ruined my whole life
Driving me further everyday
But now it's time to die

Screaming
Bleeding
But now it's time to die

(Chorus)
I hate you
I'll kill you
But now it's time to die
Torturing you
Dying slowly
But now it's time to die

(Verse 2)
You made my life living hell
But no longer will I hurt
I'm ridding myself of this pain
Conceiving Satan's birth
A little birdie told me you hated me
Now it's your turn for pain
Choking you til you bleed from your eyes
Pulling at your chains
Torture
Torture
Torture

(Chorus)

Screaming
Bleeding
But now it's time to die

Torture
Torture
Torture

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........................ Brutal, isn't it?..........................

im not impressed u got no impresive words.. 3 word lines???com on i know u better than that

It's metal.... what can I say?
All those lines are screaming lines....
You can't scream full sentances very well....
Believe me, I've tried

metal? in a rap based site? like ca$per............. no comment on ya song

Yes, because I'm:

1. Here for poetry and no one is up to battle, so I post my lyrics

AND

2. Trying to get my music out there.... on the web

1. i will battle you
2. this is a rapsite...

^ screaming metal is the worst kind of metal.......seriously, why the fuck you gotta scream....its just, gay

I'm starting with noobs... on poetry battles, you are aware of that, aren't you?

I'm new, you've been here longer. I wanna merk some noob who thinks that thet're better than every1 else.

agreed screamin metal make me want to kill those screamin it i fuckin cant stand it

^^battle me i've never done a poetry battle before ...and i think i am better than everyone else ...prove me wrong that was to leah

and yo unless u use more than 3 words per sentance youll be merkin no one and gettin merked just advise

Mine isn't all screaming.... just sum of it...
And Turban, fine, but I'm going and probebly can't drop util tuesday.
You still up for it?

^ stop freeposting in here......or else we will all assume you like heavy metal but you are secretly hiding it

sure you tell me the topic then and we will drop on tuesday....i'll write it 5 mins before the battle prolly but o well

damn i heard this song my murderdolls called- maniquen or w/e jesus how do the fools throats stay in one piece. screamin top of they lungs for like 5 minutes strait .

Bwah ha ha ha!
I knew it. lol. j/k
I guess my "crackaness" is wearing off on you. lol

Love. Easy to write about, easy to rhyme with. You up?

love? alright lame topic but what ever ....tuesday it is just pm me when u want me to drop

..........wack
nuff said
like err1 else said
.........no comment

ok well im gonna tell you right now that people here are close minded that wouldnt know a good concept if it jumped up and slapped its dick in thier face... i personaly liked that because i enjoy some metal as well as rap. now that strikes me more of a goth metal type thing like slipknot would do. see everyone, rap is poetry... country music is poetry and yes METAL IS POETRY... if it can be sung, screamed or vibed to then it is poetry and THIS IS POETRY... i give it a 10/10 because first of all u posted it here knowing people would hate it because its a rap site and 2 because it is REALLY REALLY good!!! from one poet to another, keep up the good work

^^^
I love you, I worship you.... you are my savior..... BIG RESPECT!
Thank you for the comments... good AND bad :)

I'm bumping this.....