(Jimmy Pocketz) vs 9th Degree
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r, hate, or bullshit in general.

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 04-22-05 at 08:53 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-05 04:12 PM.

I've improved since September, don't think I'll only beat you one time
'Cuz you're handicapped, and I don't mean your 1st 6 months of punchlines
I'm bringin' verbal murder, I doubt you could slay me, coward
We'll see the birth of a legend, and Troop organized the baby shower
I remember the "top 10" lists, somehow on most you made it
Always placed above Lay-Text, which is true - you're overrated
Sorry, I'm a nice guy, it just depends from who you hear it
So once I kill your elevation, I'll smile and lift your spirits
Kid, you're not gangsta, we don't care if you don't live in a good hood
'Cuz the only way you'd get a kill...is if looks could
Fuck it, I ration the merking, you can't handle it all
Though you're good as gold, that wiggers buy at those stands in the mall

Good luck :thumbup:

(Jimmy Pocketz) has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-05 08:02 PM.

This a Sport Ya Not Athletic.I Call u Mickey cuz u Boast Fighters
Dont hate Rv cuz ya Quotes go Un Noticed Like "Ghost Writerz"
1st.. u was Middleweight u Far From in Shape Flexin ya Pudge
Dizzle you wouldnt be off the "Hook" if u was Sexin Tha Judge
Ya Point of Discussion goes Unheard like Mimes Stoppin Scraps
Stumbling Gauzes ova 9th Degree Burns only time u Droppin Raps
Cuz ya 2 Buddie Bud with Socrates so Ima call you a Fag.Freeko
U Hood? lie in its Own u couldnt Attract Steel if u was Magneeto
Tell the truth...U Pay 4 Puss..U Probly got ya Own "Quater Stank
Last Battle u not Gone Make it..Like Traveling on a Quater Tank
u tha type 2 Beat Yaself... Then Pretend like u was Jus Jumped
Congrats 9th Wins Then Ashton Pm u and Say u was Jus Punked

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Voted For: 9th Degree



This a Sport Ya Not Athletic.I Call u Mickey cuz u Boast Fighters
Dont hate Rv cuz ya Quotes go Un Noticed Like "Ghost Writerz"
^^decent, but not a good opener
1st.. u was Middleweight u Far From in Shape Flexin ya Pudge
Dizzle you wouldnt be off the "Hook" if u was Sexin Tha Judge
^^""not needed....simple but decent
Ya Point of Discussion goes Unheard like Mimes Stoppin Scraps
Stumbling Gauzes ova 9th Degree Burns only time u Droppin Raps
^^eh, your best so far
Cuz ya 2 Buddie Bud with Socrates so Ima call you a Fag.Freeko
U Hood? lie in its Own u couldnt Attract Steel if u was Magneeto
^^nah, this was wack
Tell the truth...U Pay 4 Puss..U Probly got ya Own "Quater Stank
Last Battle u not Gone Make it..Like Traveling on a Quater Tank
^^no punch.....full filler
u tha type 2 Beat Yaself... Then Pretend like u was Jus Jumped
Congrats 9th Wins Then Ashton Pm u and Say u was Jus Punked
^^decent but played concept...
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overall, your flow lacked, creativity was average
personals were simple, nothin to good outta ya verse...
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I've improved since September, don't think I'll only beat you one time
'Cuz you're handicapped, and I don't mean your 1st 6 months of punchlines
^^lol,.this was a good opener...
I'm bringin' verbal murder, I doubt you could slay me, coward
We'll see the birth of a legend, and Troop organized the baby shower
^^ohh, lol,...funny shit
I remember the "top 10" lists, somehow on most you made it
Always placed above Lay-Text, which is true - you're overrated
^eh, decent
Sorry, I'm a nice guy, it just depends from who you hear it
So once I kill your elevation, I'll smile and lift your spirits
^^decent
Kid, you're not gangsta, we don't care if you don't live in a good hood
'Cuz the only way you'd get a kill...is if looks could
^^nice setup n good punch/personal.
Fuck it, I ration the merking, you can't handle it all
Though you're good as gold, that wiggers buy at those stands in the mall
^^eh, this was aight.
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overall, you had some ok punches but 2 bars stood out
amoung the rest n seemed to connect iin my opinion..
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i gotta go with 9th on this, he just had better punches
flow....n creativity was also better...structure was eh though..

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fuck outta here wit dem lame ass votes

how long we been on rv people

when 2 people drop good ass hell
thats disrespectfull 2 give a shitty ass 2 line vote

thats why rv is dieing.....kids are lazy now

shitz erased................

Voted For: 9th Degree

9th...
I've improved since September, don't think I'll only beat you one time
'Cuz you're handicapped, and I don't mean your 1st 6 months of punchlines
i guess i missed this one, wasnt feelin it for an opener...4/10

I'm bringin' verbal murder, I doubt you could slay me, coward
We'll see the birth of a legend, and Troop organized the baby shower
this was funny but it was more like a statement than a diss...6/10

I remember the "top 10" lists, somehow on most you made it
Always placed above Lay-Text, which is true - you're overrated
good shit,nice observation...8/10

Sorry, I'm a nice guy, it just depends from who you hear it
So once I kill your elevation, I'll smile and lift your spirits
(chuckle) das coo, man...7/10

Kid, you're not gangsta, we don't care if you don't live in a good hood
'Cuz the only way you'd get a kill...is if looks could
oooooo...dat hert, imactful delivery on that one...9/10

Fuck it, I ration the merking, you can't handle it all
Though you're good as gold, that wiggers buy at those stands in the mall
awww, i thought u would have killed it till i read this...4/10

...38/60

pocketz...
This a Sport Ya Not Athletic.I Call u Mickey cuz u Boast Fighters
Dont hate Rv cuz ya Quotes go Un Noticed Like "Ghost Writerz"
wording was off but good meta...6/10

1st.. u was Middleweight u Far From in Shape Flexin ya Pudge
Dizzle you wouldnt be off the "Hook" if u was Sexin Tha Judge
didnt really like da wordplay on this one...4/10
Ya Point of Discussion goes Unheard like Mimes Stoppin Scraps
Stumbling Gauzes ova 9th Degree Burns only time u Droppin Raps
(chuckle)cool man, but set up wasnt all that...6.5/10

Cuz ya 2 Buddie Bud with Socrates so Ima call you a Fag.Freeko
U Hood? lie in its Own u couldnt Attract Steel if u was Magneeto
alright but wording was a lttle bit of an obstacle here...5.5/10

Tell the truth...U Pay 4 Puss..U Probly got ya Own "Quater Stank
Last Battle u not Gone Make it..Like Traveling on a Quater Tank
creative, good idea...6/5

u tha type 2 Beat Yaself... Then Pretend like u was Jus Jumped
Congrats 9th Wins Then Ashton Pm u and Say u was Jus Punked
not that hot but hey...i liked it...6.5/10


..32.5/60

good battle, if it was closer 9th still wouldve took it for da better flow
i thought this was gonna be better tho

hit this up will ya
vs jimmy pocketz
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187166
vs marvjay1009
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187048

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by the way...i droped my verse already pocketz...
later

Been out of town, good to see we got this going. Uppin'

lol,.as if you deleted that vote...
hey troop why you such a whiner?..
seriously, you still pullin that noob shit deleting votes

cuz u dropped them Shitty ass newb votes.....

been here how long and dont kno how 2 vote?

ya shut the fuck up

a votes a vote...
you just find an excuse if it aint for you
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stop actin tough homo, you kno rv see's through it

Voted For: 9th Degree

Aight Check It..

Was Just Gonna Check Polls but Decided To Vote On This.

Jimmy Pockets Ya Verse Was Mediocore, Your Punches Weren't Really That Effective and You Lacked A Lot of Personals Except In The First Bar. Just An Average Battle Drope Here.

9th Degree You Mad Up Some Shit, but Overall Ya Verse Was Better. You Had Better Punches, More Personals, and More Thought Put Into Your Battle Verse. Keep My Name Outta Ya Verses Though...*Can't Wait To Merk You :-D*

Vote: 9th Degree For Overall Better Punches and Personals.

~R~

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lol,.......^^^^^^^^^^^^
troop.........how you like that vote kiddo, gonna delete that too?
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just blacklist me like the bitch you are little one

Voted For: 9th Degree

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ehh i wasn't feelin this battle too much, both yall verses sounded kinda forced n lazy lol but its all good, but ima have to go wit 9th on this joint. On account of most of pocketz punches didnt' really connect or make too much sense in this battle.

JP-idk i wasn't feelin about 80% of ya verse and didn't think u tried very hard to make ya punches connect. sounded a lil forced to me. had some decent lines in there and good structure. ya flow was there but not the punches or multies to back it up, but u did have some ok personals
*pocketz best bar*=
u tha type 2 Beat Yaself... Then Pretend like u was Jus Jumped
Congrats 9th Wins Then Ashton Pm u and Say u was Jus Punked
^^ok bar, pretty good delivery, i've heard the concept before tho

9th degree-not the best i've seen from you, alot of ya punches didnt land either, ya had good flow and some decent personals .no multies, alot of ya bars sounded forced also. but ya had some pretty good lines in there that i liked.
9th degree's best bar=
I remember the "top 10" lists, somehow on most you made it
Always placed above Lay-Text, which is true - you're overrated
^^decent attempt at a personal, and some ok setup and flow
but one of the better bars in this battle

overall=9th's verse was just barely better than pocketz neither of yall came htat hard, but 9th edged it out in my opinion.
RETURN THE FAVOR LINKS ARE IN THE SIG!!!

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Voted For: 9th Degree

JIMMY POCKETZ-

This a Sport Ya Not Athletic.I Call u Mickey cuz u Boast Fighters
Dont hate Rv cuz ya Quotes go Un Noticed Like "Ghost Writerz"
DECENT OPENER...4/10
1st.. u was Middleweight u Far From in Shape Flexin ya Pudge
Dizzle you wouldnt be off the "Hook" if u was Sexin Tha Judge
DECENT...5/10
Ya Point of Discussion goes Unheard like Mimes Stoppin Scraps
Stumbling Gauzes ova 9th Degree Burns only time u Droppin Raps
BLAH....FIRST LINE WAS GOOD SECOND WAS IIGHT..5/10
Cuz ya 2 Buddie Bud with Socrates so Ima call you a Fag.Freeko
U Hood? lie in its Own u couldnt Attract Steel if u was Magneeto
PLAYED....3/10
Tell the truth...U Pay 4 Puss..U Probly got ya Own "Quater Stank
Last Battle u not Gone Make it..Like Traveling on a Quater Tank
WACK........3/10
u tha type 2 Beat Yaself... Then Pretend like u was Jus Jumped
Congrats 9th Wins Then Ashton Pm u and Say u was Jus Punked
TTTTTEEEEERRRRIIIBBBLLLLLLEEEE CLOSER...2/10

OVERALL-22/60

9TH-

I've improved since September, don't think I'll only beat you one time
'Cuz you're handicapped, and I don't mean your 1st 6 months of punchlines
GOOD OPENER...5/10
I'm bringin' verbal murder, I doubt you could slay me, coward
We'll see the birth of a legend, and Troop organized the baby shower
LOL...NICE...7/10
I remember the "top 10" lists, somehow on most you made it
Always placed above Lay-Text, which is true - you're overrated
PRETTY GOOD...6/10
Sorry, I'm a nice guy, it just depends from who you hear it
So once I kill your elevation, I'll smile and lift your spirits
DECENT..5/10
Kid, you're not gangsta, we don't care if you don't live in a good hood
'Cuz the only way you'd get a kill...is if looks could
COULDVE BEEN WORDED BETTER..4/10
Fuck it, I ration the merking, you can't handle it all
Though you're good as gold, that wiggers buy at those stands in the mall
NOT FEELIN IT...3/10

OVERALL-30/60

V/9TH DEGREE

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This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

HAHA checking polls 9th u merked him.....Troop no hate but u washed up dawg like old dirty dishes......u fallin off cuzz?

Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

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Meh, uppin'.

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i'm jus gonna up this one for ya ninth....c'mon ppl

Voted For: 9th Degree

aight, dont get me wrong, this was a good battle and all, but 9th's verse was killer

jimmy, not bad man...see you're kinda gettin back into the rhythm, but seriously, alot of the shit was just whack, or else your wordplay ruined it, no hate or anything, but lines looked like they would be good, then the punch just killed it, nothing really that special in here either, no personals, at all, which really hurts........had good structure and flow though, if that counts for anything, but keep up man

9th, nice verse man, i was laughing at alot of your lines, i kinda thought your last line was a little whack/stretched, worded at little weird, but still, overall, this verse dominated, haha, good personals, nice punches.........personals were what really killed in this one though, good job man, keep up fo-sho

v/9th degree

Voted For: 9th Degree

This a Sport Ya Not Athletic.I Call u Mickey cuz u Boast Fighters
Dont hate Rv cuz ya Quotes go Un Noticed Like "Ghost Writerz"
7...decent personal and a good meta!!
1st.. u was Middleweight u Far From in Shape Flexin ya Pudge
Dizzle you wouldnt be off the "Hook" if u was Sexin Tha Judge
5...not feelin it, lines about being middleweight or wateva are just played!!
Ya Point of Discussion goes Unheard like Mimes Stoppin Scraps
Stumbling Gauzes ova 9th Degree Burns only time u Droppin Raps
7...decent meta and a good play off his name!!
Cuz ya 2 Buddie Bud with Socrates so Ima call you a Fag.Freeko
U Hood? lie in its Own u couldnt Attract Steel if u was Magneeto
3...wack and played, homo shit is played and i've used a magneto line before, want proof i got links!!
Tell the truth...U Pay 4 Puss..U Probly got ya Own "Quater Stank
Last Battle u not Gone Make it..Like Traveling on a Quater Tank
7...decent, first line was the best!!
u tha type 2 Beat Yaself... Then Pretend like u was Jus Jumped
Congrats 9th Wins Then Ashton Pm u and Say u was Jus Punked
8...LMAO!!! best part of ya verse, 2nd line was funny!!!

OVERALL: 37/60


I've improved since September, don't think I'll only beat you one time
'Cuz you're handicapped, and I don't mean your 1st 6 months of punchlines
8...LMAO!!! funny ass opener:thumbup:
I'm bringin' verbal murder, I doubt you could slay me, coward
We'll see the birth of a legend, and Troop organized the baby shower
6...aight line but not that good!!
I remember the "top 10" lists, somehow on most you made it
Always placed above Lay-Text, which is true - you're overrated
8...hot line!!! one of the best punchlines i seen for a while!!
Sorry, I'm a nice guy, it just depends from who you hear it
So once I kill your elevation, I'll smile and lift your spirits
7...decent line!! gud metas!!
Kid, you're not gangsta, we don't care if you don't live in a good hood
'Cuz the only way you'd get a kill...is if looks could
7...LMAO!!! some more funny lines!!
Fuck it, I ration the merking, you can't handle it all
Though you're good as gold, that wiggers buy at those stands in the mall
5...nah!!! worst part of ya verse just wasn't feelin this bar!!

OVERALL: 41/60

aight this battle was dope....jimmy came with some decent punches but i think fell off in places with a couple of played concepts, the closer was dope as hell though. 9th pretty much killed this battle with funny ass lines and hot personals that ripped Jimmy completely.

V/ - 9th Degree

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