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BiZzO 04-22-05 02:24 AM

Too Hott For Rv....
 
Im Too Hott for RapVerse, step back or catch shots to ya heart playa
Im the bread slaya, got bitches round me Breathin harder than Darth Vada
And thats just the half, got chicks with thick ass blowin me, tryin to get cash
The kid blast, u think its a Weight reducin drink the way ya Chest Slim-Fast
And that aint all homie, som cats be thinkin im phony, til i press-the-fire
Hot out the dryer, and dudes call me Goodyear cuz i got the Best-a-ttire
Turned vets to liars, they figured Murdz would rise and fall like tha stock Market
So they sparked it, and now im the Biggest kid of the show like Eric Cartman
So ima stick to knockin geeks and Droppin keys like Nervous vallet workers
Ontop with a purpose, these lames could only Catch-up with Beef on they Burgers
Sub-mergin, im somwhere between the best and elite while yall less and the weak
Cuz when i read ya lame spits, i tend to Daze Off like the End of the Week
Put the hawk to ya cheek, ill put ya Dawgs in belief i aint Barkin religion
soon as i pull da glock it'll make ya Fly off ya stoop like a Group of pigeons
Yall shouldnt risk this, im gifted, come at me, garauntee ya diss miss
Cuz Murdz-in with the illest battlers like u got the Smack DVD for X-mas

Young Drama 04-22-05 02:27 AM

Damn Homie

Im Feelin It

Are You In Da Regular Roster Or Elevation Cuz U Belong On The Regular If U Aint

BiZzO 04-22-05 02:35 AM

na homie i been put in elevation... lol bumma... i got plenty more Om's to come.. been writin..

Young Drama 04-22-05 03:02 AM

WELL JUS KEEP DROPPIN

TONY AND J IZ GONNA SEE IT SUMTIME SOON

BiZzO 04-22-05 03:06 AM

yeah peace....
1~

BiZzO 04-22-05 03:19 AM

feed back given......
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...458#post2102458

MC Virtuoso 04-22-05 07:35 AM

Sup mayn this is the best verse I've seen you drop thus far. Nice flow and punches..

1~

BiZzO 04-22-05 08:35 AM

thanks fam.... uppin...

PreZidict 04-22-05 11:42 AM

ayo real nice verse son.........feelin da whole thing...........peep my shit Da C-Kwence aight

BiZzO 04-22-05 07:50 PM

yeah aiight will do... uppin..

LyricalMa$tamind 04-22-05 08:07 PM

shit wuz hot homie
i liked ya whole structure n rhymez
u elevatin homie
nice wurk
mad propz
8.5/10

BiZzO 04-22-05 08:16 PM

thanks.. homie.....

Cannibal Sativa 04-22-05 08:36 PM

Hot shits," i tend to daze off like the end of the week" lmfao

Dirty Nigga 04-22-05 09:15 PM

sick rhymes Murdz!!
ya was killin it dawg, right from the opener ta the last line, consistant creative wordplay mixed with some pretty decent punches, structure an flow was on point also, not much i can fault

quote of the peice:
And that aint all homie, som cats be thinkin im phony, til i press-the-fire
Hot out the dryer, and dudes call me Goodyear cuz i got the Best-a-ttire
^^^
the attire line had me like ''oooh'''
nice shit

keep 'em comin' dawg, i gives it 8.5/10...real enjoyable, could you return the fave on my ''Thought You Knew'' key??

Peace out.

BiZzO 04-23-05 04:28 AM

yeah fo sure.. thanks all for feed...
uppin...

BiZzO 04-23-05 05:38 AM

uppinnnnnnnnnnn

BiZzO 04-23-05 07:50 AM

uppin this ish....

DQ 04-23-05 08:30 AM

Easy to read due to the excellent flow you had mainly because of those nice multis you used. Vocab was good, and you had nice creativity in there when it comes to your wordplay and such. Also stayed consistent with it because many can keep it up for few lines but hardly for an entire piece so props for that. Concept been done before and self-glorifciation pieces are usually boring as hell but yours was good!

My favo lines was opener:

Im Too Hott for RapVerse, step back or catch shots to ya heart playa
Im the bread slaya, got bitches round me Breathin harder than Darth Vada
And thats just the half, got chicks with thick ass blowin me, tryin to get cash
The kid blast, u think its a Weight reducin drink the way ya Chest Slim-Fast

^^Nice stuff!

DQ

BiZzO 04-23-05 08:36 AM

why thankyou for the feedback sweetie..
uppin....

BiZzO 04-23-05 06:20 PM

uppin....
any more feed?

BiZzO 04-24-05 12:01 AM

uppin this......

13th. 04-24-05 05:07 AM

A reali reali nice verse........
great flow n good punches

BiZzO 04-24-05 05:08 AM

upppin....
more feed please..

BiZzO 04-24-05 07:40 PM

thanks famm... uppin

BiZzO 04-25-05 04:18 AM

uppin disssssss

BiZzO 04-26-05 04:55 AM

uppin...........

The Militant 04-27-05 05:35 AM

damn man this shit was some dope ass shit nice vocab metaphors on point flow good structre good mulitis really good

keep dropin im lookin forward to ya next peice

BiZzO 04-27-05 05:37 AM

yeah thanks homie.. ill have somthin up soon...


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