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Too Hott For Rv....
Im Too Hott for RapVerse, step back or catch shots to ya heart playa Im the bread slaya, got bitches round me Breathin harder than Darth Vada And thats just the half, got chicks with thick ass blowin me, tryin to get cash The kid blast, u think its a Weight reducin drink the way ya Chest Slim-Fast And that aint all homie, som cats be thinkin im phony, til i press-the-fire Hot out the dryer, and dudes call me Goodyear cuz i got the Best-a-ttire Turned vets to liars, they figured Murdz would rise and fall like tha stock Market So they sparked it, and now im the Biggest kid of the show like Eric Cartman So ima stick to knockin geeks and Droppin keys like Nervous vallet workers Ontop with a purpose, these lames could only Catch-up with Beef on they Burgers Sub-mergin, im somwhere between the best and elite while yall less and the weak Cuz when i read ya lame spits, i tend to Daze Off like the End of the Week Put the hawk to ya cheek, ill put ya Dawgs in belief i aint Barkin religion soon as i pull da glock it'll make ya Fly off ya stoop like a Group of pigeons Yall shouldnt risk this, im gifted, come at me, garauntee ya diss miss Cuz Murdz-in with the illest battlers like u got the Smack DVD for X-mas |
Damn Homie
Im Feelin It Are You In Da Regular Roster Or Elevation Cuz U Belong On The Regular If U Aint |
na homie i been put in elevation... lol bumma... i got plenty more Om's to come.. been writin..
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WELL JUS KEEP DROPPIN
TONY AND J IZ GONNA SEE IT SUMTIME SOON |
yeah peace....
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feed back given......
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...458#post2102458 |
Sup mayn this is the best verse I've seen you drop thus far. Nice flow and punches..
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thanks fam.... uppin...
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ayo real nice verse son.........feelin da whole thing...........peep my shit Da C-Kwence aight
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yeah aiight will do... uppin..
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shit wuz hot homie
i liked ya whole structure n rhymez u elevatin homie nice wurk mad propz 8.5/10 |
thanks.. homie.....
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Hot shits," i tend to daze off like the end of the week" lmfao
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sick rhymes Murdz!!
ya was killin it dawg, right from the opener ta the last line, consistant creative wordplay mixed with some pretty decent punches, structure an flow was on point also, not much i can fault quote of the peice: And that aint all homie, som cats be thinkin im phony, til i press-the-fire Hot out the dryer, and dudes call me Goodyear cuz i got the Best-a-ttire ^^^ the attire line had me like ''oooh''' nice shit keep 'em comin' dawg, i gives it 8.5/10...real enjoyable, could you return the fave on my ''Thought You Knew'' key?? Peace out. |
yeah fo sure.. thanks all for feed...
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uppin this ish....
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Easy to read due to the excellent flow you had mainly because of those nice multis you used. Vocab was good, and you had nice creativity in there when it comes to your wordplay and such. Also stayed consistent with it because many can keep it up for few lines but hardly for an entire piece so props for that. Concept been done before and self-glorifciation pieces are usually boring as hell but yours was good!
My favo lines was opener: Im Too Hott for RapVerse, step back or catch shots to ya heart playa Im the bread slaya, got bitches round me Breathin harder than Darth Vada And thats just the half, got chicks with thick ass blowin me, tryin to get cash The kid blast, u think its a Weight reducin drink the way ya Chest Slim-Fast ^^Nice stuff! DQ |
why thankyou for the feedback sweetie..
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any more feed? |
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A reali reali nice verse........
great flow n good punches |
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more feed please.. |
thanks famm... uppin
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uppin disssssss
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damn man this shit was some dope ass shit nice vocab metaphors on point flow good structre good mulitis really good
keep dropin im lookin forward to ya next peice |
yeah thanks homie.. ill have somthin up soon...
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