OneStepBeyond vs Ca$per
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-25-05 at 04:36 PM

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OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-05 04:55 PM.

CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-05 04:56 PM.

Underestimating my skill you bitch... you better save your health,
And you're the elevation leader? bitch you need to elevate yourself,
Subtract the dolla sig, your broke, ya know ya ain't stashin the bills,
My styles 'SKI' cause to beat you I only gotta use half of my skills,*
This is one unfortunate event, think ya win with ya raps your crazy,
Man you need to 'get ghost', like you was hittin on patrick swayze,**
Retaliatin in the same degree is rare, ya think cause i sin im evil,
ya ain't that sharp but i know you slept on like pins and needles,***
ya can do whatever when they vote, who has the most numbers?
when you this bitch Casper, who you gonna call? Ghostbusters!

*Half of the word skills is Ski...
**That move "Ghost" with patrick swayze.. word
***im hoping you understand that

Opener….
Hey one step pull up yo skirt,cause yo ass is fruity like jello dessert…
Your fukkin record says enough,it proves u soft like marshmello fluff….

U talk shit like your dope,but im really not impressed….
U declined against saber,left that one unadressed….
3-3 dog and u people in your crew say your tha man……
then why u payin for yer crew forum in an installment plan?....

closer….
it takes u 2 hourz to drop a weak comeback that is trash....
want a real cumback?fart and look at your ass......


Pretty much self explanatory

uppin... all favors will be returned..............

by the way your last line was funny as fuck.......

lol thanx u had sum good lines too good luck.........uppin

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

pollllllllssssssssss.....crew battle...................

Voted For: CA$per

lol wow..............nice punches and had me rollin on da closeing lines.....nice.......lol cumfart havn't herd that in awhile

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lmao who r u dude???
explain your vote cuz or its gonna not count

haha thats a lovely explained vote.................

I Know Wtf He Voted On My Other One Too I Aint Even Know This Kid
Either Explain Or Stop Voting

i think hes in love....... lol

Funny.........ummm ^^^^^^to Tha Fukkin Top^^^^^^^^

Voted For: CA$per

aight, the opener from Casper was...diffrent, i personally thought it was creative an it made me laugh, dessert an fluff kinda dont rhyme, but it still had nice wordplay in it...

closer was good too, diss was right on point, humouress once again, even thom it was simple wordplay, it had a good effect....

the rest of the verse was pretty on point also, flow was good, structure cannot be faulted, ya rhyme scheme on ah whole was nice....personals are not noticeable, but neither are they in OSB's verse....this battle was more about the punchlines...in which Casper hit hard, especially with the installment plan line, that was nice...dunno if it was true, but real good shit....OSB, Ya verse was decent, lines such as: the pins & needles bar, really had a good effect, wasnt feeling the opener, an i have seen better from you OSB, for the more creativity, conststancy an humour, my votes goes too CASPER

But the pins & needles line was the highlight of the battle, i was like ''oooh'' for a second

could yall RTF in any of my battles?
thanks yall

Peace out.

uppin this yall...........................................

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

uppin for LL............................................

Voted For: CA$per

checkinnnnnnnnnnnn pollllllllsssssssssss....................

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remove dat vote accidentally pressed vote instead of feed
srry

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

onestepbeyond took this one easily, even though he ducked me.

casper. your verse was too basic, you had that one good bar at the end, but too late to make up for 6 lines. you should try harder. also, the first line was stretched, and didn't rhyme, poor structure plagued the fuck out of it.

onestepbeyond. you had some good stuff in there, creative and nicely thought out. good structure, and personals really killed him. thats all i need to explain.

v/onestepbeyond...easily

ps (to casper)... dont use my name in your whack battles, ever.

Voted For: CA$per

this was close but i vote casper.....

casper came better with less lines and good punches with better vocab..

onestep- you had some goog punches but some of em were corny.. u had some sick ones tho to!

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Voted For: CA$per

This one was pretty close... One steps line about ski was pretty gay though... was laughin AT it, not at casper. His patrick swayzey line was funny, but still kinda played against casper. The ghostbuster line though.... :p wack. lol

Casper - opener, not bad the jello shit was wack, but the record makin him soft brought it back. the installment plan line was dope, and the closer ended it. You came hella weaker than you could have, so it was close, but casper edged this out.

v/ Casper

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

checkin polls...pretty good osb,u merked him......

uppin for more votes yall.........................

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

opener-one
metaz-one
structure-one
closer-one

i really like one's verse, casper's wasn't bad but your lines seemed forced...ive seen betta from u

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

ay wht up OSB, just checkin whts the polls. hang on.

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clikc FEED.................. whoopes..............

Damn...people need to have better memory. all this damn accident voting...........

Agreed. And how about some explained votes too?...

mixtapes vote needs 2 b removed
jus tryna help out 4 da battle 2 b fair

uppin diss 4 fam

Voted For: CA$per

Underestimating my skill you bitch... you better save your health,
And you're the elevation leader? bitch you need to elevate yourself,
bad choice to use this as a opener, but a nice personals

Subtract the dolla sig, your broke, ya know ya ain't stashin the bills,
My styles 'SKI' cause to beat you I only gotta use half of my skills,*
eh, couldve been worded wayy better, but descent

This is one unfortunate event, think ya win with ya raps your crazy,
Man you need to 'get ghost', like you was hittin on patrick swayze,**
I understand it, but i wasnt feelin this. pretty wack right here

Retaliatin in the same degree is rare, ya think cause i sin im evil,
ya ain't that sharp but i know you slept on like pins and needles,***
eh, not all that...couldve been better

ya can do whatever when they vote, who has the most numbers?
when you this bitch Casper, who you gonna call? Ghostbusters!
terrible closer

your lines were organized very poorly, but you did have some nice punches and personals in there. I think you were forcing too many punches to sound good and thats why they came out all un-organized and flowed off. a pretty nice verse, but i dont know bout it

ca$per verse:

Hey one step pull up yo skirt,cause yo ass is fruity like jello dessert…
Your fukkin record says enough,it proves u soft like marshmello fluff….
hmm..first line sounded like it was guna be a dope bar. bad opener

U talk shit like your dope,but im really not impressed….
U declined against saber,left that one unadressed….
not lookin good for you right now..eh, not a good bar at all

3-3 dog and u people in your crew say your tha man……
then why u payin for yer crew forum in an installment plan?....
heating up i see...nice personal/punch. nice bar

it takes u 2 hourz to drop a weak comeback that is trash....
want a real cumback?fart and look at your ass......
pretty descent. not tha best worded bar i seen, but not tha worse

this verse was ight. I was more interested in this one than tha other. I guess cause this one was comical. Nice punches and personals. Bad first half of verse, but then you picked it up. I think your verse was more structure and organized and I think it flowed better. I give you my vote.

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

One sided battle..

OneSTepBeyond - Pretty good drop here, haha liked the closer was funny shit...had a nice flow to your verse, the punches were good and original...some good personals and some nice metas...good vocabulary...haha the patrick swayze punch...good shit, and i liked the elevation line too...nice verse.....7/10

CA$per - your verse wasn't that great...the first line was weak as hell, the second bar was an okay personal, not that great...the installment plan line wasn't that good...was really forced too...the closer was played as fuck...gay/sex jokes are weak...also, don't label opener, and closer...people are stupid...it's not hard to figure out...verse could use elevation...5/10

Vote: OneStepBeyond

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

checkin dem pollsssssss...................................

red bull=tha sorrow=beef vote or hate vote..............

Not it really isn't, I hate OneStepBeyond since he was in NOK...you're both faggots...just voting on what I thought...Hahaha I read all the votes in here...wow it's all dick riders...my vote was honest...he merked you...

How is every vote a D/R vote? I don't get it. I wouldnt doubt that OSB would keep all those votes anyway, because his crew don't know how to click feedback.

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

checkin pollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllls

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Vote-One Step

Explanation: His punches hit way more hard and it seemed he came more personal in his verse .. caspers in all honesty kinda seemed lame in this .. seen better from u casper

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OSB took this battle imo
casper-your verse was too simple no complexity at all...and your rhymes was basic...your opener was kind of weak...didnt really rhyme...and to me your opener has to be atleast decent to catch the readers eye.......
OSB-you had a more complexity to your verse and ur punches were more creative and hit harder....the ghostbusters thing was kind of funny it would have been a lot better if you re-worded it....u had a couple personals...and the ski thing was creative also i wasnt even thinkin like dat when u said that.....so my vote goes to.....one step beyond