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iLL Cee vs CA$per
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6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting House Rules u know. Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 04-22-05 at 05:32 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-05 05:04 PM.
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iLL Cee has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-05 05:05 PM.
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Opener…
Ill cee wow 3 winz,how u gonna talk bout no flow… When 1 of tha three wins was a fuckin no show…. U talk a whole lot but not much decisive action…. I just cut your rymes in half like an improper fraction… U say livin legendz is wack,but your green with envy…. And that played out line,how many times u say im friendly…. Closer….. Enough wasted text on this kid,hes not even competion…. Cause I shifted your ryme around,like automatic transmissionz |
What i been waiten for.
Finnally after a Couple nights of Pre-Written ur Rdy to Lose.. Its a Wonder how u get Votes poeple see ur Shit and Hit Snooze.. Now its time for u to lose ya "Pride" Cause im the Next Mufasa Right.. Being Dead dont make u safe from me,Cause ill Merk ya in the AfterLife.. How did you get in the LL crew..Is there somethin that i'm Missin.. I mean how is it that a fuckin ghost could even be considered Livin.. Take my Knife..Split ya Bars Cause You cant come 1/2 As hard As-Me.. You just wasted Time Batllin me Cause its obvious im a Better Artist-See.. |
Voted For: CA$per
Ca$per just straight up ghosted him. He had better punches. Keep it yo u doin it big. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Lmao at this dick ride haha vote will be removed for inadiquite feed haha.
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on another note.
were did i say anything about flow? And if i didnt take action how come i said i wanted to battle u 2 nights ago? Fractions=Played Transmissions=played How am i "Green" Period lmao. Im sorry but why waste ur time. |
your record bitch dont 3-3 decisive action u always talk shit dont explain my ryme hoe
now i know u worried or why would u explain my ryme bitch lmao uppin on this hoe |
Talk in english plz i didnt understand a word u just said.
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It makes no sense lmao,what are you tryin to prove?
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Voted For: iLL Cee
Ill cee wow 3 winz,how u gonna talk bout no flow… When 1 of tha three wins was a fuckin no show…. nice personal U talk a whole lot but not much decisive action…. I just cut your rymes in half like an improper fraction… played but i was feelin dis punch U say livin legendz is wack,but your green with envy…. And that played out line,how many times u say im friendly…. blah!...i'm new so i probably dont get it Enough wasted text on this kid,hes not even competion…. Cause I shifted your ryme around,like automatic transmissionz tight close ya shit got like a 7/10 Finnally after a Couple nights of Pre-Written ur Rdy to Lose.. Its a Wonder how u get Votes poeple see ur Shit and Hit Snooze.. aha!...good line Now its time for u to lose ya "Pride" Cause im the Next Mufasa Right.. Being Dead dont make u safe from me,Cause ill Merk ya in the AfterLife.. very tight line...feelin dis one da most How did you get in the LL crew..Is there somethin that i'm Missin.. I mean how is it that a fuckin ghost could even be considered Livin.. nice personal...real nice Take my Knife..Split ya Bars Cause You cant come 1/2 As hard As-Me.. You just wasted Time Batllin me Cause its obvious im a Better Artist-See.. weak closin OPENER: ca$per MIDDLE: iLL CLOSER: iLL v/ iLL Cee cuz his shit was all around tight, personals took it for him... |
uppin this yall....................................
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Voted For: iLL Cee
yo this was close battle, but I think Ill got this . Casper, shit was alright. You had pretty good flow. I jus don't think your punches hit all that good. But it was still pretty nice verse. pretty good. keep elevatin' man. Ill, you had nice shit too. But yea, links kinda played out, but shit pretty nice still. You had a real nice flow on your shit. Nice punches too. I was feelin' this sshit. good shit. vote/Ill pc Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for iLL Cee
I would have gave iLL Cee this one but seeing as I only have 8 something posts, I can't. Both sides came weak and you both used 1/2 lines which was sorta fishy. But I would give iLL Cee this because he actually threw personals, and caspers was weak punchlines and fillers.
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Voted For: iLL Cee
This battle was alright. casper. Your verse was alright. You had some mediocre punches, and one alright personal. I've seen better, seems like you fall of from time to time. Ill. Verse was pretty good. Good structure, and more personals. The verse flowed well too. You both had alright verses, But i think Ill's punches were harder, and he came with more and much better personals. Alright battle. V/Ill Cee Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for CA$per
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ill Cee can suck my dick for wat it's all worth.....go ahead and get da vote dqed just shows how much of a worried bitch you is
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Voted For: iLL Cee
Opener… Ill cee wow 3 winz,how u gonna talk bout no flow… When 1 of tha three wins was a fuckin no show…. 6...aight personal but nuthin too hard hittin!! U talk a whole lot but not much decisive action…. I just cut your rymes in half like an improper fraction… 5...this was a weak line, not really a punch!! U say livin legendz is wack,but your green with envy…. And that played out line,how many times u say im friendly…. 5...better shit, but in the 2nd line...where did he say you were friendly!! need sum proof to back that up!! Closer….. Enough wasted text on this kid,hes not even competion…. Cause I shifted your ryme around,like automatic transmissionz 6...decent closer, gud 2nd line!! OVERALL: 22/40 Finnally after a Couple nights of Pre-Written ur Rdy to Lose.. Its a Wonder how u get Votes poeple see ur Shit and Hit Snooze.. 4...BOOOO!! pre writ lines are gay!! Now its time for u to lose ya "Pride" Cause im the Next Mufasa Right.. Being Dead dont make u safe from me,Cause ill Merk ya in the AfterLife.. 9...HAHA!! funny ass shit, 2 personals in 1 bar!! How did you get in the LL crew..Is there somethin that i'm Missin.. I mean how is it that a fuckin ghost could even be considered Livin.. 7...another hot personal......gud shit!! Take my Knife..Split ya Bars Cause You cant come 1/2 As hard As-Me.. You just wasted Time Batllin me Cause its obvious im a Better Artist-See.. 6...not bad, cud've been better!! OVERALL: 26/40 gud battle, casper keeps comin with these mediocre punches that arent really affective, ya need to beef those up and get a bit more creative, ill cee, ya had a couple of dope personals in there but drop the pre writ lines cuz they are played and gay!!! V/ - iLL Cee |
This was feedback posted for CA$per
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Voted For: iLL Cee
Opener… Ill cee wow 3 winz,how u gonna talk bout no flow… When 1 of tha three wins was a fuckin no show…. decent U talk a whole lot but not much decisive action…. I just cut your rymes in half like an improper fraction… nope U say livin legendz is wack,but your green with envy…. And that played out line,how many times u say im friendly…. not really a punch here Closer….. Enough wasted text on this kid,hes not even competion…. Cause I shifted your ryme around,like automatic transmissionz this 1 was aight Finnally after a Couple nights of Pre-Written ur Rdy to Lose.. Its a Wonder how u get Votes poeple see ur Shit and Hit Snooze.. this 1 was coo Now its time for u to lose ya "Pride" Cause im the Next Mufasa Right.. Being Dead dont make u safe from me,Cause ill Merk ya in the AfterLife.. nah, not even close How did you get in the LL crew..Is there somethin that i'm Missin.. I mean how is it that a fuckin ghost could even be considered Livin.. nope Take my Knife..Split ya Bars Cause You cant come 1/2 As hard As-Me.. You just wasted Time Batllin me Cause its obvious im a Better Artist-See.. decent overall iLL Cee took this one, no hate though but iLL Cee just came harder in the punches, & had a couple of personas… |
Voted For: iLL Cee
CA$per Opener… Ill cee wow 3 winz,how u gonna talk bout no flow… When 1 of tha three wins was a fuckin no show…. ^coo personal as opener U talk a whole lot but not much decisive action…. I just cut your rymes in half like an improper fraction… ^no punch but nice wordplay U say livin legendz is wack,but your green with envy…. And that played out line,how many times u say im friendly…. ^not really feeling it... Closer….. Enough wasted text on this kid,hes not even competion…. Cause I shifted your ryme around,like automatic transmissionz ^good wordplay, again no punch though Nice verse but your biggest problem here is that you have very good wordplay, good creativity but you lack to turn it into a hardhitting punch. You have mad potentialm if you can turn that creative thinking into bold personals and punches. Had your flow on lock, structure as well as vocab were excellent. iLL Cee Finnally after a Couple nights of Pre-Written ur Rdy to Lose.. Its a Wonder how u get Votes poeple see ur Shit and Hit Snooze.. ^hehe, dope opener Now its time for u to lose ya "Pride" Cause im the Next Mufasa Right.. Being Dead dont make u safe from me,Cause ill Merk ya in the AfterLife.. ^lmao, nice personal How did you get in the LL crew..Is there somethin that i'm Missin.. I mean how is it that a fuckin ghost could even be considered Livin.. ^rofl...funny shit... Take my Knife..Split ya Bars Cause You cant come 1/2 As hard As-Me.. You just wasted Time Batllin me Cause its obvious im a Better Artist-See.. ^okay closer Nice verse right here man! You stayed consistent with the hardhitting punches and the dope personals, good creatvity and wordplay in there. I was feeling your flow, your structure was good and you found a good balance in your vocabulary. Keep it up man! My vote goes to iLL Cee, sorry CA$per...no hate but you got outclassed... |
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