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LFS The Great vs LyricalMa$tamind
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-28-05 at 11:44 PM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. |
LFS The Great has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-23-05 11:45 PM.
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LyricalMa$tamind has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-24-05 02:16 PM.
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Ay yo LFS THE GREAT came back 4 anotha murkin
Punches hit hard dey leavin dis nigga internally hurtin Look lyrically i'll burn you so you betta start usin drop drills cuz police trainings the only way you'll eva gonna cop skills see you gotta crawl b4 you walk you startin off tryna clash titans battle me again when ya elevation's higher then gas prices cuz i bet you swear you can rip me but by ya verse it aint dun yet you really thought you was ready when you not like young sex you should've took that as an advantage w/all dat time to spit kid if you gargled diarehea you still could've spit shit LFS THE GREAT 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??) You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss. But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss" resurrected from the grave, ill reintroduce you to the cemetary cuz ill fuck up this bitch like a texan vetinary slice ya spleen, rip out ya bowel and stuff it down ya throat cuz it's the only way your shit could make any emcee around ya choke he's a joke, but the punchline's as funny as brain cancer(cancer's not funny...get it) your disses couldnt turn heads if you doubled up as a breakdancer Lyrically blessed and known for rippin deese lames 22 lines 2 murk u again now give up the rap game(i already battled him and murked him 5-0) |
hurry up n spit homie dayum i aint waitin 4 eva
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come on mayne i aint got all dayyyy
hurry up homie ....................1 |
wtf r u doin mayne itz been a long ass time
shit i bet u pussied out fuck hurry up n spit homie damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn |
God damn...rushin me and shit...I don't FUCKIN LIVE ON RV!...damn I got shit in EALITY to fuckin deal wit...in factr I already know I lost this shit...thwey gon say 'it was too short" "basic" but fuck it I don't care anymore....fuck it
Ending this crew battle, LL aint winnin against EF, LFS is taking over, I could beat ya crew by myself, Comin out swingin harder than the last time you dissed me, Only way you can talk crap is if I shit in ya Rice Krispies, Before this battle shoulda stopped at Ca$per to raise up to me, I don't bother readin ya verses they got natrual viscosity,** How you gon be a livin legend when died wit no legacy, I rearranged the language by makin LFS the Great a G, LL ran from the Finest like bitches but TG got his merrymen, Ya crew is full of spinoffs, yall some wanna be Emericans,*** Bitch you're skills is fake like hoodrats rockin Mi-No-Nos, But I got good news, I saved some money by switching to GEICO, Cuz this battle is done, but I'll end on a positive note, Kids don't be like Ma$taminad and go and get ya feelings hurt, **Viscosity - resistance to flow ***LL is former EF members |
uppin..btw I'm leavin RV (not that anyone cares) so this was just some shit I threw out to not get DQed...I hate it myself...guess yur 9-1...bitch lol...Stay Up.
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Voted For: LFS The Great
Ay yo LFS THE GREAT came back 4 anotha murkin Punches hit hard dey leavin dis nigga internally hurtin Weak opener... Look lyrically i'll burn you so you betta start usin drop drills cuz police trainings the only way you'll eva gonna cop skills Alright... see you gotta crawl b4 you walk you startin off tryna clash titans battle me again when ya elevation's higher then gas prices Eh........ cuz i bet you swear you can rip me but by ya verse it aint dun yet you really thought you was ready when you not like young sex No.... you should've took that as an advantage w/all dat time to spit kid if you gargled diarehea you still could've spit shit Played........ LFS THE GREAT 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??) OK... You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss. But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss" Good... resurrected from the grave, ill reintroduce you to the cemetary cuz ill fuck up this bitch like a texan vetinary Eh... slice ya spleen, rip out ya bowel and stuff it down ya throat cuz it's the only way your shit could make any emcee around ya choke ............ he's a joke, but the punchline's as funny as brain cancer(cancer's not funny...get it) your disses couldnt turn heads if you doubled up as a breakdancer No........... Lyrically blessed and known for rippin deese lames 22 lines 2 murk u again now give up the rap game(i already battled him and murked him 5-0) Eh...so-so closer... Ending this crew battle, LL aint winnin against EF, LFS is taking over, I could beat ya crew by myself, I would say played, but personal twist made it aight.. Comin out swingin harder than the last time you dissed me, Only way you can talk crap is if I shit in ya Rice Krispies, OK... Before this battle shoulda stopped at Ca$per to raise up to me, I don't bother readin ya verses they got natrual viscosity,** Word... How you gon be a livin legend when died wit no legacy, I rearranged the language by makin LFS the Great a G, Eh..... LL ran from the Finest like bitches but TG got his merrymen, Ya crew is full of spinoffs, yall some wanna be Emericans,*** Ha.... Bitch you're skills is fake like hoodrats rockin Mi-No-Nos, But I got good news, I saved some money by switching to GEICO, Played.. Cuz this battle is done, but I'll end on a positive note, Kids don't be like Ma$taminad and go and get ya feelings hurt, Eh...weak closer.. I really wasn't feeling LM's spit, he suually comes with original shit, but when I can anticipate the punch and I'm feeling deja vu after reading every line, I don't consider it a good spit....The cancer line was TERRIBLE, the spit shit line was played, the might last bar was weak and the set-up was forced, LFS's GEICO line was played, closer was weak, but LFS had better personals...that's why he gets my vote... |
thx uppin...btw that GEICO line was a filler in itself lol
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uppin.........................this................
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fuckin hate vote
u jus mad(verbal) b/c of our battle we got closed damn dont matta doe mah shit murked him upppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn |
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uppin da mah fuckin battle
and yall PLEASE READ A MAH FUCKIN VERSES B4 U VOTE DONT D/R OR HATE VOTE PLEASEE |
This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
Good battle..........checkin polllllllllllllllllllsssss
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This was feedback posted for LFS The Great
checking polls..........................................
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Ending this crew battle, LL aint winnin against EF,
LFS is taking over, I could beat ya crew by myself, Well, That didnt rhyme. I would work on your opener too... Comin out swingin harder than the last time you dissed me, Only way you can talk crap is if I shit in ya Rice Krispies, That was what you call an incomplete punch. It prolly sounded good to you, but it wasnt a good punch at all. Made no sense to me. Before this battle shoulda stopped at Ca$per to raise up to me, I don't bother readin ya verses they got natrual viscosity,** Ok vocab here, but RV is dumb..lol How you gon be a livin legend when died wit no legacy, I rearranged the language by makin LFS the Great a G, Ight, now it just seems like you rhyming. LL ran from the Finest like bitches but TG got his merrymen, Ya crew is full of spinoffs, yall some wanna be Emericans,*** I see you trying. This line was ight. Just not worded all that. Bitch you're skills is fake like hoodrats rockin Mi-No-Nos, But I got good news, I saved some money by switching to GEICO, LOL. WTF? This made no sense? How is this a diss? This couldve been worded way better... We can throw down RV money for this battle, and I'll be saving money like Geico something like that. This couldve easily been made into a diss Cuz this battle is done, but I'll end on a positive note, Kids don't be like Ma$taminad and go and get ya feelings hurt Ehh...Not all that good. Try more of dissing you oponent and less of dissing his crew members next timep I think you are on the right track with this battle, but I don't think you quite there yet. You had chances to have some dope punches, it's just the way you word them. Work on dissing your oponent. Your structure is the least of your worries, you need some good mettas, punches, and personals in this to take some easy wins. Just work on that. You got potential though, I just don't think you took this one, that's honest. If you were in LL, we could give you pointers, and help you elevate, but....(you know). But, it was a pretty descent verse. Oh, I also felt like you were just rhyming. There was a big lack of punches, and all that other shit people vote for. Work on that. Rhyming is good, but it gota make since. Your battling, start dissing your oponents. ~1~ |
UPPINNNNNNNNN 4 sum votes pleaseeee
n READ DA VERSES B4 U VOTE NO HATE VOTES O BULLSHIT VOTES VOTE 4 DA BETA BATTLER |
uppin...btw thx J Dot...that helped a lot man....holla
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This was feedback posted for LFS The Great
ay wht up checkin out the polls fuck damn ppl want short ass time.. n shit.. g luck
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READ DA VERSES NO D/R O HATE VOTES |
uppin this battel...btw why do you have to have 50 characters anyway lol...vote plz...
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Voted For: LFS The Great
open: Mastamind had a better opening cause it rhymed better. Close: once again mastamind had more rhyme and he did hit with the fact that he ko-ed u Personals: I liked both bois personals including the one about mastamind leavin his old crew and the other was mastaminds last line. Multis: LFS Comin out swingin harder than the last time you dissed me, Only way you can talk crap is if I shit in ya Rice Krispies, just hilarious very nice MastaMind:Look lyrically i'll burn you so you betta start usin drop drills cuz police trainings the only way you'll eva gonna cop skills very nice i like the WHOLE cop skills thingy my vote: Mastamind he had better rhymes and more flow Vote switched |
u accidentally voted 4 da wrong dude
datz mah vote homie thanx 4 da feed and vote tied up (1-1) yall come on n vote voooooooooooooootttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeee |
i was jokin wit the intro....cuz all my feed in the last battle was that my verse was too short...but wut ever
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uppin this battle for more votes dammit....i'm hungry lol
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This was feedback posted for LFS The Great
i dunno, thought LFS's verse was funnier....both ya'll need to stop with the self-glor though, that hurts your verses
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