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evil vs accomplish
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evil has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-24-05 10:52 AM.
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accomplish has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-24-05 11:00 AM.
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Yo this kid thinks he big and can rap and has a wife
Nigga you’re depressed and can’t accomplish anything at life Yesterday night why did you look so aghast* Because I was fucknig your mom in a Jason mask I’ve got lots of money so win lets bid This is like a heavyweight vs. a handicap kid Im lyricaly spitting, like I was shooting you down Report missing your gonna be the talk of the town So check in battle me try and take a hit Post 1 min after check in cause you use prewritten shit |
evil you battleing me should be ilegal cuz your to wack bitch the scores not equal fuck your mum u fat cunt this wins not yours im on a differen't level while your just bores your flow is a shambles i'll pull u apart in dif angles i bet your fuckin ugly cuz at birth ur face was mangled your brain is witless so how the fuck are you sickness after I beat ur weak verse i'll leave your ass skinless see your not evil I would say your more soft why are u reppin rv everyone wants ya to fuck off cuz you suck off all rappers ya skill is just wacker this guys a computer nerd he's a fuckin hacker im'a attack you for just trying to be the man I could beat you one handed your just my fan so go ahead write some shit that an't worth it you'll prob bite dem lines or try to purchace it fuckin clown my flows will keep u always down the only time ur good is when people mute ur sound your not on top you make hip hop like a circous damn bitch your worthless god made ya shit on perpous 20 mins im'a end this shit your wordplay is kinda gay why don't you just die cuz i don't want u 2 live another day you've been exstinct i hope this shit made you think don't bother makin verses everyone of them stinks |
This was feedback posted for evil
hey evil wat it do u had a nice verse good wordplay mayne you had god rhymes and all keep it up mayne
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Accomplish you had mad flow man keep it trill playa
in this debate imma have to state the trill emcee that would be accomplish b keep it trill ya'll yall both had some nice verses now don't get me wrong keep up the good work v//accomplish |
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Voted For: accomplish
one sided here, dont really need to explain, acc came harder and had better flow, punches and personals, evil you need to ewlevate, shit were to basic. Not hatin, just helpin. |
Voted For: accomplish
votin for accmplish ight a pretty weak battle from both but te vote goes to Accomplish accomplish gets it due to harder punches n a more creative verse both of you strucutre were good both ya flows was goo as well didnt see any multies or personals of anykind in ya verses I liked Accomplish's punches more then Evils's so thas why he got my vote both elevate on hard punches and personals/multies be sure to RTF link below sig holla |
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Voted For: evil
v/ evil i go with evil because his shit was more of a battle freestyle.........accomplish ya shit looks like a written poem........no direct hits.........both niggas need to work on openers and closers.........accomplish u got a nice structure but like i said i thought it was a poem........evil ur structure was good........nice punches but u could work on a betta approach keep at it........also, vote in one of my battles both of u |
Voted For: evil
evil you battleing me should be ilegal cuz your to wack bitch the scores not equal Wack.......3/10 fuck your mum u fat cunt this wins not yours im on a differen't level while your just bores wack......3/10 your flow is a shambles i'll pull u apart in dif angles i bet your fuckin ugly cuz at birth ur face was mangled dont judge a nother nigga wack...4/10 your brain is witless so how the fuck are you sickness after I beat ur weak verse i'll leave your ass skinless ELAVATE2/10 see your not evil I would say your more soft why are u reppin rv everyone wants ya to fuck off Wack please elavate1/10 cuz you suck off all rappers ya skill is just wacker this guys a computer nerd he's a fuckin hacker wack still 3/10 im'a attack you for just trying to be the man I could beat you one handed your just my fan so go ahead write some shit that an't worth it you'll prob bite dem lines or try to purchace it fuckin clown my flows will keep u always down the only time ur good is when people mute ur sound your not on top you make hip hop like a circous damn bitch your worthless god made ya shit on perpous 20 mins im'a end this shit your wordplay is kinda gay why don't you just die cuz i don't want u 2 live another day wack you've been exstinct i hope this shit made you think don't bother makin verses everyone of them stinks evil u got this cause u didint waste you're life spittin whack shit that never ended and accually made sence Return tha favor RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=187700 |
Voted For: evil
ok accomplish decent punches and disses a lil long winded though with the verse here was too long and it killed the effectiveness of your verse also flow was off in places and that hurt you as weell while evil had a good flow to his verse with punches and disses equal to yours and basically the better flow and being able to keep me more captivated with his lines made his verse more effective and gave him my vote. |
omg how could u think his played punches were better than mine I had 24 lines and he had 10 this was pretty one sided battle and I didn't bite off eminem I just thought that up them votes were wack... upping this shit!
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Voted For: accomplish
i'm gonna have to vote for this verse because it had alot more decent punchlines and wordplay accomplish took this battle easy the other verse had some real played punchlines and didn't have as many lines... vote accomplish |
Voted For: accomplish
EASY win. Accomplish - ya lines seemed kinda rushed, but there was some nice punches in there. Take ya time and type it so we can read it lol. Good punches, and this had a few multis in it and a nice rhyme scheme. Needs some work to develop though - some of this was basic. Evil. MY GOD. Are you 5? I could have shit alpha bits and hads words fall together better. None of that flows... None of the punches are good. It's like you bit the worst 10 lines out of the 5 oldest wack raps you could find, and threw them together and prayed for the best. God rest your pen. 1 |
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