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DeHotBwoy 04-24-05 07:59 PM

PreZidict vs Hoodz 1
 
Battle Rules:

8-10 max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No feeding
No D/r
No Pre-writtin shit

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 04-24-05 at 08:49 PM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.

System 04-24-05 08:01 PM

PreZidict has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-24-05 08:01 PM.

System 04-24-05 08:05 PM

Hoodz 1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-24-05 08:05 PM.

DeHotBwoy 04-24-05 08:16 PM


Yo i can cap ya best so u better go to " Lidz "
And the reason u tight cause u slip ya dick in little kids
Am i hurting ya feeling fell the injections of these lyrics
I put a ghost on my punch's so when i throw u fear it
Yea i stay in the rap biz for life and i allways stay on topic*
I put the heater to ya ass so u can accually drop some " Hot Shit"
And im the kind of dude not to fuck wit without gettin hit
And i just spit so hott its like puttin a condom on ya body its ripped
No more explination i won this like the Heat vs the damn nets
You a fan of my raps im J.O im leavein you fuckin fan-recked*

* Heater = Hot you should get it
**Fan-Recked Jermain O'neal hit that dude

PreZidict 04-24-05 08:24 PM

dis reject thought passin a tree meant drivin by woods
cuz he like shirts in da summa..white n come wit no hood!
fuck a bullet, my verse'll "lay urs down" like smooth talkers*
hood not old but his lines "senile" n need a permanate walker!**

metal u neva heard of, listen O.J. i'll smother u wit gloves
in battles u specialize in losses..hood rarely wins 1***
put da scope in ya mouth..u'll gargle like i'm cleanin ya gums!
heard ya sex life sucks, hood couldnt bust wit a bubble 4 cum!

hood u ain't winnin ya votes dead while mines alive
ur text records ya job??..no wonda u here from "9 to 5"****

*smooth talkers get chics to lay down (i'm sure u get it)
**old people use walkers
***hood_1 <<< his username
****his text record is "9-5"....regular workin time is 9 to 5....so he here all da time (has no life) dis is his job

DeHotBwoy 04-24-05 08:26 PM

good shit uppin and nigga im black & white mixed next time get ya facts straight to have a personal :thumbup:

PreZidict 04-24-05 08:31 PM

i didnt know whut ya race was son lol just used it...cuz durin da summer time every body wheres "white" tees......feel me.......but uppin 4 votes

Effect 04-25-05 06:46 AM

Voted For: PreZidict

this verse was the best the other one was just wackness I really felt this verse made more sense then than the other dimwitted verse his punchlines were all played and gay so im'a vote for you... haha bitch

King Solo 04-25-05 12:17 PM

Voted For: PreZidict

Yo i can cap ya best so u better go to " Lidz "
And the reason u tight cause u slip ya dick in little kids
4...wack!! played shit!!
Am i hurting ya feeling fell the injections of these lyrics
I put a ghost on my punch's so when i throw u fear it
5...better but still pretty weak!!
Yea i stay in the rap biz for life and i allways stay on topic*
I put the heater to ya ass so u can accually drop some " Hot Shit"
5...these hot shit lines are played to!!
And im the kind of dude not to fuck wit without gettin hit
And i just spit so hott its like puttin a condom on ya body its ripped
5...a little multi but weak line!!
No more explination i won this like the Heat vs the damn nets
You a fan of my raps im J.O im leavein you fuckin fan-recked*
6...best line of verse, but still cud be better!!

OVERALL: 25/50



dis reject thought passin a tree meant drivin by woods
cuz he like shirts in da summa..white n come wit no hood!
7...LMAO!!! a funny opener!!
fuck a bullet, my verse'll "lay urs down" like smooth talkers*
hood not old but his lines "senile" n need a permanate walker!**
7...more hot funny shit!!
metal u neva heard of, listen O.J. i'll smother u wit gloves
in battles u specialize in losses..hood rarely wins 1***
6...aight not really feelin this one!!
put da scope in ya mouth..u'll gargle like i'm cleanin ya gums!
heard ya sex life sucks, hood couldnt bust wit a bubble 4 cum!
6...aight again but not ad gud as when you started!!
hood u ain't winnin ya votes dead while mines alive
ur text records ya job??..no wonda u here from "9 to 5"****
7...dope closer, nice meta to finish off with!!

OVERALL: 33/50


plain and simple, prez came withm ore harder hittin punches in this battle, his openin 2 bars were funny and he finished well, the other 2 bars were average....hoodz 1 didnt really drop anythin that had me thinkin "yea that's good" just basic shit that was either filler or shit that i've seen before!!!

V/ - PreZidict

RTF!!!! battle in my siggy!!! Hit that shit!!!

~1~

PreZidict 04-25-05 03:54 PM

2-0...........nodoubt SoLo i'ma vote in ya shit...........uppin for more votes niggas

PreZidict 04-25-05 07:58 PM

ayo uppin dis battle...............vote niggas..................whats good

PreZidict 04-26-05 11:54 AM

whats good??.............uppin dis shit.............vote niggas we got like a thousand views

PreZidict 04-26-05 05:00 PM

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppin dis shit again...................vote

PreZidict 04-27-05 03:43 PM

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn dis shit

PreZidict 04-27-05 09:20 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin 4 votes

PreZidict 04-28-05 04:08 PM

uppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnn nnn.....jesus christ

Verbal 04-28-05 04:26 PM

Voted For: PreZidict

Yo i can cap ya best so u better go to " Lidz "
And the reason u tight cause u slip ya dick in little kids
No.........no........no........
Am i hurting ya feeling fell the injections of these lyrics
I put a ghost on my punch's so when i throw u fear it
No............no........no...
Yea i stay in the rap biz for life and i allways stay on topic*
I put the heater to ya ass so u can accually drop some " Hot Shit"
Alright, you were seriously going downhill...
And im the kind of dude not to fuck wit without gettin hit
And i just spit so hott its like puttin a condom on ya body its ripped
Eh........
No more explination i won this like the Heat vs the damn nets
You a fan of my raps im J.O im leavein you fuckin fan-recked*
Weak........

dis reject thought passin a tree meant drivin by woods
cuz he like shirts in da summa..white n come wit no hood!
Alright...
fuck a bullet, my verse'll "lay urs down" like smooth talkers*
hood not old but his lines "senile" n need a permanate walker!**
Ha.....ok...you really like spinning the 'senile' shit...
metal u neva heard of, listen O.J. i'll smother u wit gloves
in battles u specialize in losses..hood rarely wins 1***
OK personal..
put da scope in ya mouth..u'll gargle like i'm cleanin ya gums!
heard ya sex life sucks, hood couldnt bust wit a bubble 4 cum!
OK...
hood u ain't winnin ya votes dead while mines alive
ur text records ya job??..no wonda u here from "9 to 5"****
Nice spin...


I'm giving it to Prez, hood didn't come hard at all, basically threw this shit away...prez was a little flimsy on some of his rips, but he had some good punches, humor and some complexity, plus he actually had personals..

M-Eazy 05-01-05 03:59 PM

This was feedback posted for Hoodz 1
 
pollllllllllllllls.............checkin............ .

PreZidict 05-01-05 04:46 PM

vote up in dis one 2...............i 4got about dis shit......................

Sik Wit It 05-27-05 10:32 PM

Voted For: PreZidict

Pre took this one....came way harder in the punches...even
tho some of them were played here, Hoodz, u came wack in
this battle though....no hate

AckRite 06-01-05 08:08 PM

Voted For: PreZidict

Aeyo Imma Vote On This Shit...Been Up 4 A While LOL...I Know How You Niggaz Feel

Hoodz_1:

Yo i can cap ya best so u better go to " Lidz "
And the reason u tight cause u slip ya dick in little kids
Nice 2nd Line....Nothin Serious Tho....5/10
Am i hurting ya feeling fell the injections of these lyrics
I put a ghost on my punch's so when i throw u fear it
Dat Was Soft...5/10
Yea i stay in the rap biz for life and i allways stay on topic*
I put the heater to ya ass so u can accually drop some " Hot Shit"
Heard Dis Line Before....Old....4.5/10
And im the kind of dude not to fuck wit without gettin hit
And i just spit so hott its like puttin a condom on ya body its ripped
Nah...Not Hard Enough...5/10
No more explination i won this like the Heat vs the damn nets
You a fan of my raps im J.O im leavein you fuckin fan-recked*
Dat Was Aight Fam....5.5/10

Ya Verse Was On Point Jus Didnt Hit Hard Wit Ya Punches Or Creativity....You Didnt Use Much Wordplay So Cant Comment On That

Prezidict:

dis reject thought passin a tree meant drivin by woods
cuz he like shirts in da summa..white n come wit no hood!
Real Nice Both Lines Were Good...7/10
fuck a bullet, my verse'll "lay urs down" like smooth talkers*
hood not old but his lines "senile" n need a permanate walker!**
Again Nice Lines....7.5/10
metal u neva heard of, listen O.J. i'll smother u wit gloves
in battles u specialize in losses..hood rarely wins 1***
Nah Not Really Dat Nice...5/10
put da scope in ya mouth..u'll gargle like i'm cleanin ya gums!
heard ya sex life sucks, hood couldnt bust wit a bubble 4 cum!
That Was Aight Nothin Serious Tho...6/10
hood u ain't winnin ya votes dead while mines alive
ur text records ya job??..no wonda u here from "9 to 5"****
Best Line Outta Ya Shit, Good Personal....8/10

OPENER: Prezidict
MIDDLE: Prezidict
CLOSER: Prezidict

That Opener & Closer Took It...Both Need Work On Structure...Wordplay Was Tight In Prezidict's Shit...Hoods Try Harder Punches Fam....RTF Nukkaz

..$cream At Me..


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