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Freestyle-King vs l i n e .
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10-15 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-25-05 at 04:38 PM Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in. |
l i n e . has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-25-05 04:10 PM.
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Freestyle-King has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-25-05 04:17 PM.
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Listen "king", we all know you're wack, no need to flaunt it
And yeah your style's free... 'cause nobody wants it... Get stomped jew, you wouldn't be wanted if Hitler was alive Cause the only buzz you create is standing next to a bee hive Like kiddy rides, you get dizzy from poor thrills... Look! Lil D has $235! ..You can finally afford to pay bills! Like caulk kid? I'll toss you a bottle of mono for your audio tracks Now your verse has an excuse to be tired...like race tracks Couldn't snap-back with whiplash, you crack like new trees Please, I'll have you off the board quicker than skaters with DC's I'll help out with your needs... *SIKE* I really don't care... I'd tell you to word up... ...But you'd throw your verse in the air stupid. |
yo boy. wat u wating fo gee, a nigga like me, to drop my shit and PEE/
Cause if u have seen, im the illest in this scene, i had ur mom on the wall screamin at ME/ what the fuk is wrong with you, my punchlines will knock you on the streetz and make u wear a TUTU/ i heard you were a jew, if it was true, my shit would infect you like the FLU/ i got 2 bars down, already i have you lookin like a CLOWN/ im lyrically bound, 2 impound, when peeps try to read yo shit its like they DUMFOUND/ yo shit is sensible, but that's the way u are so SENTIMENTAL/ mine is the opposite, my shit will stay in yo brain and make you go MENTAL/ you have no chance to win, you strugglin like you were intoxicated with GIN/ this is a sin, so just praise the lord, you were smilin so much when u read my shit it turned it into a GRIN/ hit this shit up mayne...uppin.... |
nice flow man now lets get some votes
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This was feedback posted for l i n e .
wow, line should get this easy.....nice battle....
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hit this up playas
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Voted For: l i n e .
Listen "king", we all know you're wack, no need to flaunt it And yeah your style's free... 'cause nobody wants it... Ha... Get stomped jew, you wouldn't be wanted if Hitler was alive Cause the only buzz you create is standing next to a bee hive Punch was good.. Like kiddy rides, you get dizzy from poor thrills... Look! Lil D has $235! ..You can finally afford to pay bills! Ha... Like caulk kid? I'll toss you a bottle of mono for your audio tracks Now your verse has an excuse to be tired...like race tracks Played, not really feeling it.. Couldn't snap-back with whiplash, you crack like new trees Please, I'll have you off the board quicker than skaters with DC's OK... I'll help out with your needs... *SIKE* I really don't care... I'd tell you to word up... ...But you'd throw your verse in the air stupid. Good finish Took this battle, Freestyle knows his verse was wack....line was solid, good punches.... |
man that is fuked up mayne u vote for the one i lose but when i got a winning one u say
chekin polls.......... man that is so gay man that should be a hate vote because that is all u have been saying man ur wack fuk u king suks wat a queer u know wat u are the fuk face man fuk u i was trying to be nice to u and u just disrespect me man fuk u that is fuked up playa im out uppin |
^ wtf are you talking about, im not going to vote because line is in my crew....and, i would have voted against you anyways, because line had a better verse....and holy fuck, i could barely translate that jibberish ^ in that last post.............AND, i havn't voted on any of your other battles....so i say again, wtf are you talking about?
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If you weren't such a dumbass, you'd see I voted for you on that battle.
Advice: trade in the mic for a skateboard, you whining pansy. |
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yo boy. wat u wating fo gee, a nigga like me, to drop my shit and PEE/ Cause if u have seen, im the illest in this scene, i had ur mom on the wall screamin at ME/ Pee and poop jokes, and fucking his mother...like I said. Wack. Good verses use wordplay, technique, innovation, creativity and complexity. You had none of that....two lines didn't even connect....what I'm getting from this verse is that you squat to take a piss, and somehow go from that awkward scenario to fucking his mother, probably the first time I've ever heard anyone say that. Ever. what the fuk is wrong with you, my punchlines will knock you on the streetz and make u wear a TUTU/ i heard you were a jew, if it was true, my shit would infect you like the FLU/ Your punches will make him wear a tutu? So you punch like a ballerina? And try to explain your second verse without sounding like a complete idiot. That line made no sense... i got 2 bars down, already i have you lookin like a CLOWN/ im lyrically bound, 2 impound, when peeps try to read yo shit its like they DUMFOUND/ More filler. Looks like you're straining to finish the battle. Rhyming multiple words does not make a good verse. If it doesn't make sense. It's apparent you don't know the real meaning of "dumfound", and not only that but you made more of a punch at the audience then the person you're battling... yo shit is sensible, but that's the way u are so SENTIMENTAL/ mine is the opposite, my shit will stay in yo brain and make you go MENTAL/ You're complimenting him to begin with, and then it tapers off into absolute nonsense. You're trying to rhyme without even thinking about what your verses mean. W-a-c-k. you have no chance to win, you strugglin like you were intoxicated with GIN/ this is a sin, so just praise the lord, you were smilin so much when u read my shit it turned it into a GRIN/ ....weak..........wack..........nuff said..... |
kesse i wasn't talkin to u fag i was talking to this cat and u didnt vote for me u said that u would
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shit man chill its an ONLINE TEXT BATTLE. p.s cant you only up 5 times or ur dq'ed?? Just a thought. Also, some constructive critisicm...your verse was entirely self glory.. i didnt see a punch directed at me and everything you said was basic and contained no similies, metas, nothing... I don't take this online shit seriously its just a hobby not my life.. daaaanngg |
This was feedback posted for l i n e .
Wow....one sided...l i n e . took this definately..
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errrbody voteeeeeeeeee..............................
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^ uh, i did not say i'd vote for you....please wise up and think before you speak plus, on RV you can up battles more that 5 times, just once every 3 hours.....just because battles are slept on like crazy/different battle system, so, yeah... /stop bitching because you lost |
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Voted For: l i n e .
Vote=Line Explanation: Easy freestyleking had nothing appealing really .. his verse lacked any good concepts or hard hitting punches .. lines verse did have some really played out concepts so i almsot didnt vote for him based on that but in the end freestyles verse was just to basic to be beat anything of lines... RTF Plz Both Of You With Honest Votes If Possible |
how does this get 180 views but only 2 votes...damn
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*gets all his posts by upping this thread*........
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Voted For: l i n e .
votin for Line ight line got this due to better rounded punches and personals line: punches- creativer n hard hittin fam like them more then Frees structure- nice and easy to keep with flow- on the dot wit ya flow nice mulites- didnt see any elevate on them personals- nice n hard hittin wordplay- nice use of ya vocab fam free punches- creative but not as hard hittn get a lil harder strucutre descent flow- good flow easy to keep wit multies- nah didnt see any personals- didnt see any elevate both elevate on multies free elevate on multies n personals ight so line gets it i like his punches and personals free didnt have that hard approach i was lookin for good battle fams be sure to retun the fav batte link below sig holla good battle fams |
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Voted For: l i n e .
line wins... king ya structure was off...flow & multies were there..but you failed to land a punch, a lot of self gloryfyin which is a big no-no..youre sposed ta diss ya opponent, whole point of a battle, this u failed to do. line you had a couple punches, struc was a lil off...a cou[ple bars wernt really punches, jus keep elevatin n u`ll b fine |
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Voted For: l i n e .
Ok, vote goes 2 Line, much better punches and flowed real good and was an actual freestyle. His lines made more since so he gets my vote Vote: Line |
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