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Kesse (1-0) vs. Kin*Ethic™ (1-0)
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chiggidy.......
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Rest In Peace Kesse!!
Ill |Snuff-All-Who-Verse-Me| & 'Fight Thru Ur Best Attack' Like a |Tough-Mario&-Luigi!| .. Ill win by 'Takeo' & Ram 'Spikes Thru Ur Chest To Ur Back' Like Bowser Wearin A Backwords |Buffalo-Jersey!!|
Idiot Disclaimor 1. His Sig And Avy Are Bowser 2. Takeo Spikes Plays For The Buffalo Bills 3. Takeo=TKO 4. Bowser Has Spikes On His Back..Get It If You Dont Get The Punch Then Dont Vote It Cant Be That Hard To Get Lol |
hmmm......seein as i might forget about this, i'll write it right now
got no skill, only props you gettin is from a video game......maybe try all you want, cant get the spark to stay lit the flame in your avy |
...kin's was mad stretched...& weak
v/ Kesse |
Kin,you got any other names like on dif sites ive seen that funky ass structure before.
Ima have to give it to Kin barely just cause his punch hit harder but it is a little long.. i feel if Kesse would have tried he would have won eazy. |
ahhh......suppose to be 'like the flame' ahh, fook spellin errors
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i gotta give this to Kin*Ethic...............even though ya punch was mad stretched it was still harder than Kesse......Kesse just didnt seem to try and that punch he dropped was like sumthin i wud expect a newb to drop.................
V/ - Kin*Ethic |
gotta go with kesse here ... kins punch was like 245354352 lines :nono:
v/ Kesse |
v/ kesse just a better punch
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Kin..... u had more explanations on that one bar than i do on whole battle verses.....
i still woulda given it to u if it wasnt so stretched...... but it is, and even tho kesse dropped real weak u just tried to pack two times too much stuff v/kesse altho it pains me to vote against sumone who seemed to try TOO much |
ROFLMAO!!!!!!!
How Is It Stretched When Theirs Multis And Two Rhyming Multis In It .. Roflmao@Voting Because You Think It Was 4 Lines In It And ROFLMAO@ Voting Because I Have An Explanation In There... Newbies I Swear Skirptz-Doesnt Count IllCee-Me Solo-Me Flow Intelligent-Doesnt Count New Method-Doesnt Count Fux-Kesse Im Only Going To Say This Once .. Leave A Valid Explanation On Both Punches On Why It Was Better Or It Wont Count.... 2-1 Me Uppin For Valid Votes |
Ill |Snuff-All-Who-Verse-Me| & 'Fight Thru Ur Best Attack' Like a |Tough-Mario&-Luigi!| .. Ill win by 'Takeo' & Ram 'Spikes Thru Ur Chest To Ur Back' Like Bowser Wearin A Backwords |Buffalo-Jersey!!|
Lol. Nice wordplay on that. Punch was decent. Pretty creative. Not really likin' the multies though as they didn't rhyme that nice. got no skill, only props you gettin is from a video game......maybe try all you want, cant get the spark to stay lit the flame in your avy Eh... This wasn't very good. You got personal on his avy, but it was worded horrible and didn't really attack your opponent. Also first line is just filler. Vote - Kin*Ethic™ - He easily took this with better wording, wordplay, multies, flow, structure, and punch. Not too mention no filler. You people need to learn how to vote. Nuff said. |
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ok your punch was horribly worded, horribly forced with the wordplay, and not really even a goood concept got no skill, only props you gettin is from a video game......maybe try all you want, cant get the spark to stay lit the flame in your avy slightly better concept and wording, v/kesse for having a overall better punch |
actually glockoma, my first line was not a filler....if you know anything, the dude in his sig/avy is from final fantasy, which is a video game.......fuck, this battle is at
2-2.......or how bout we let the mod decide? word |
Kesse took this 1 4 me cuz i jus wasnt feel Kin's at all........
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Wat Kind Of Explanation Is That 3-3 |
v- Kesse
Kin- Man, you structure annoys me, just be glad this battle isn't voted on structure. Aight you tried to pack way too much into this bar, wordplay was there, but you stretched this out too much. Flow was off and ish. Also, punch was hurt by "i'm gonna..." That's stating. Kes- Not that great of a punch, but the personal was aight. Kinda witty. More of a punch than kin's. |
aight, my vote goes ta kesse
Kins was real strecthed, an the opening line was weak as hell...second line took too long ta get to the point...kesses was simple yet effective, so kesse gets my vote |
roflamo whatever...
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keese dope punch alot of dudes dont remember that wizard from that fucking hard ass nintendo game but dope personal into your punch kin your shit was streched and weak here
vote keese |
I Guess Being Complex On This Site Gets You Nowhere...
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meh, i didn't think it was a bad punch, just you focus too much on multies and sometimes that takes away from the effectiveness, and you kinda self glorifyed the first line...and your structure was stretched, which makes in less enjoyable.......it wasn't your best punch, it was clever, just not that hardhitting
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Its Not Stretched When Theres Multis Throughout The Whole Thing...lmao@that
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well whatever you wanna call it......its still a helluva long punch man
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Wow...multies...*Pats Kin on back* Your punch was still mad streched man...It doesn't flow worth shit...and it wasn't even that hard hitting...
Kesse's punch flowed good and was straight up...bit of a newbish punch...but whatever...Kesse took this... Vote: Kesse.. |
1st Line - 23 syllables
2nd Line - 28 syllables = 51 syllables in one punch.... = Streched... |
Kesse and Kin Ethic, if one of you sways again you will be DQed.
Just shut the fuck up. I'll DQ the votes that aren't explained.. just let people actually fucking vote. |
/keese
. . . I blow my high reading kins fucked up structure |
V/ Kesse
Wack battle tho |
Kesse wins.
Kesse (2-0) Kin Ethic (1-1) |
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