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::..:$lobK::..: (1-0) vs. Spektikul (1-0)
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Check In by Wednesday Verses are due Friday (12 est. time/midnight) 2 Lines Come dope.. |
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Check........................
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Best Status this kats ever had is being offline. Check it, yo yo... This douchebag is below me, yet already reached his lyrical summit He'll start to plummet - status might be legendary, but hes far from it |
Thank The Mod--Cuz Dis Battle Is Safety Fo Me Like Kids In Backseats N When Mimesis Beat U--Ur Career Was Done Like Injured Athletes |
aight battle
Spektikul......the first line was aight, nuthin too clever but the 2nd line where you played off that Legendary Status shit was nice!!! slobk........ya shit was weak man, stop bolding everything, that makes it look like forced wordplay and shit.....ya punch was pretty much weakness....ya cud've played off his name, his member title or anythin but ya didnt.....disappointin from ya V/ - Spektikul |
^^^Yo, thanks for the honest vote...
(Nice sig btw) Uppin for more.................... |
ok good personals and a nice punch win all the time and spek had that while slob had a decent punch spek had a more entertaining one which got him my votye.
vote-spek |
^^^ Dopeness, thanks homie...
Uppin for more honest votes like these..... |
v/ spek....less played, and more creative
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v/spek......he actually had a diss.....slobk, your shit is too basic and most of your metas dont even diss your opponent, like wtf, dont talk about childrens carseats....and your punch was basic as hell....
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v/spek........ honestly, because his was more hard hittin and a diss on Slob....... while slob had a easy to think of concept that didnt work very well togetha.....
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nice punchs by both of u but Spek's was more creative an had good personals.....
V/Spek..... |
spek , but slob you gettin better at punches jus keep working on them
v/ Spek |
Aite..Well It Long Had Been A KO..
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haha...nice effort dawg ^^^
Just as a note to yourself... In times like these when you are so limited as to what you can say with only 1 bar... You gotta throw in as much hard hitting shit as possible. And make sure both lines have a punch and witty wordplay. Your first line was more of a filler and your second punch didnt even hit me. Plus dont bold your words because it gives them too much emphasis... throwing the reader off. No hate dawg, I aint like that. Just helpin kats out whenever I can. :thumbup: |
lol spek got this, liked that punch dawg, gud wordplay and 2nd line was dope...took the fairly easy really
vote - Spek pz |
v/ spek
wasnt feeling injured athletes wasnt really feeling speks either |
Upping for some more votes...think its over tho.
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V/ Spek
Somethin bout it made it seemed played but it was coo |
Spektikul wins.
Spektikul (2-0) SlobK (1-1) |
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