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Shard vs Kesse
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate No D/R No Bullshit gl yo Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 04-26-05 at 01:41 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Shard has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-26-05 12:44 PM.
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Kesse ineptly repping, fists connect with ya neck bitch
then envelop ya throat like a fuckin' titanium necklace! its evident, man I'm like sediment jus' goin with flows while he ain't roll liquid if he out on the ocean in boats garrotin' this clone..I'm fasta if you slow mo my prose with K voters screamin' Home Oh! like phonin abodes yo hold the phone..I take it back he really nice though cuz he slam the board, buildin my stage for live shows like Tonight Show riots, I'm burnin a j n' breakin chins K worries about 'nothin'........when referrin to his wins Thats right, no explanations necessary.... Holla. |
Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-26-05 01:36 PM.
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ill show this newb some pity, but still giving the first part of merciful
im sick with wits, keep hit'n this bitch, cause i dont have any personals my verse'll rip ya, go pass out on the wall, cause you'll be plastered always on the bottom, but call yourself a pimp, you got that booty mastered fruity bastard, ill clock ya jaw, chop ya raw, order up a banana split cause jones, you make a habit of hanging off guys pants, like indiana's whip this battle was like an all night sex-athon...from the start you were screwed its not your own shit brewed, dropping your verses, and a commotion of artists ensues you're garbage dude, cause ive heard better beats from a childrens carousel so farewell, this loser cant come even with me if i gave him a pair-o-'L's ________________________________ jones is also slang for an addict, so you know.....if you dont get the wordplay, dont vote......thank you......and gl shard |
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hmmm.... lets get some votes on this...
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Voted For: Kesse
Vote-Kesse Explanation: This was a really close battle between you two i kind of got bored with your verse kesse to be honest cuz ur opener sucked ass then it got better towards the end .. shard kind of the same with you but you only had like one good concept while kesse had a couple.. thats why he gets my vote.. good battle .. RTF Please when you have the time with an honest vote |
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Voted For: Kesse
ill show this newb some pity, but still giving the first part of merciful im sick with wits, keep hit'n this bitch, cause i dont have any personals Ha....ok, let's see what you've got then.. my verse'll rip ya, go pass out on the wall, cause you'll be plastered always on the bottom, but call yourself a pimp, you got that booty mastered Ha... fruity bastard, ill clock ya jaw, chop ya raw, order up a banana split cause jones, you make a habit of hanging off guys pants, like indiana's whip Ha..... this battle was like an all night sex-athon...from the start you were screwed its not your own shit brewed, dropping your verses, and a commotion of artists ensues Nice... you're garbage dude, cause ive heard better beats from a childrens carousel so farewell, this loser cant come even with me if i gave him a pair-o-'L's Good closer... Kesse ineptly repping, fists connect with ya neck bitch then envelop ya throat like a fuckin' titanium necklace! Played but nice spin.. its evident, man I'm like sediment jus' goin with flows while he ain't roll liquid if he out on the ocean in boats Eh, OK... garrotin' this clone..I'm fasta if you slow mo my prose with K voters screamin' Home Oh! like phonin abodes OK... yo hold the phone..I take it back he really nice though cuz he slam the board, buildin my stage for live shows Nice... like Tonight Show riots, I'm burnin a j n' breakin chins K worries about 'nothin'........when referrin to his wins Hah...nice closer... Both had nice wordplay and versage.....but Kesse's punchlines had me laughing more, I really had to decide the shit on humor and punches, and Shard sacrificed that for structure in some parts, but this was a good battle...pretty evenly matched.. |
Oh yeah, and RTF if you've got nothing better to do..
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Voted For: Kesse
YEP...YEP..YEP THIS ONE WAS EASY..KEESE DID HIS THANG... PUNCHES,PERSONALS,WORDPLAY,METAS AND STRUCTURE ALL GO TO KEESE...THE OTHER DUDE WAS OUT GUNNED AND OUT MATCHED....HE GOT LOST IN HIS OWN VOCAB......KEESE DONT THINK YOU THE SHIT THO THIS KIDD IS MORE OF A TOPICAL CAT IGHT...GOOD DROP THO...WAY TO PARTICIPATE SHARD....... |
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........... man I seen better votes than the ones in this thread be disqualified...
Lyrical Clarity I don't know you.... How you gon' say I'm a topical cat when I don't know you? I ain't posted ne topicals on this site or under this name... so uh... yea... Kesse... Good battle... I liked ur Indiana Jones line... ~ghost |
yo yo, yeh eh...nice battle......you have an alias eh? or you on RB?
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Voted For: Kesse
Sup both,,... Kesse won this battle pretty easy,.. Shard come good but didn't really have the same effect with his punches... Alright Kesse,,... Opener was dope,... ill show this newb some pity, but still giving the first part of merciful im sick with wits, keep hit'n this bitch, cause i dont have any personals ^Dopeness didn't have a personal but fliped it to make one if you know what I mean... Kesse had much better flow, with nices inners... he had better complexity and far better punches I flet that alround Kesse won this pretty easy... Shards,... You come nice but like both the lack of personals didn't help but u still could have looked Kesse up on the site. You had nice flow but you kept it pretty basic.. Alright punches,.. but they wasn't real ones u need to work on them... You didn't do to bad... Stay up both 1~ |
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nope my first time on the net in a while... I used ta be M.I./Jorum Jacobs over on Rapcityz before the shit bombed... but its been like 2 years.... |
This was feedback posted for Kesse
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word.....yeah, no offense, but you look a little rusty, lol......uppin
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