morse code vs BLACK~MAGIK
 

Battle Rules:

10- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


TJ VS O.G.

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 04-29-05 at 01:04 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

morse code has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-26-05 02:40 PM.

BLACK~MAGIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-26-05 02:42 PM.

Yo...

This kid is weak........you 6-0? shit, watch me end his streak
Try and stop me, get thrown "in a box" like "hockey penalties"
I'll cave your face in, and if you doubt my game's amazing
I'll fuckin' "eat you dogg"............. but I "aint no asian" *
You schoolin' this vet, won't happen like you rulin' at text
How you hard when you're 14 and haven't hit puberty yet? **
This fag is nothin, real emcees can see past his bluffin'
And he's 6-0, because he calls my home, and asks for punches***
Just face it, you're weak kid, I'll leave your face in the cement
.........This fake "couldn't be sick" if he caught "fatal diseases"





Explanations:

Since I know Morse Code in real life, most of my punches were personals

* He is asian...Some asian people eat dogs

** He's 14 and real short and hasnt really sprung yet (lol, sry dawg)

*** He called my house askin me to give him punchlines for alot of his battles (not all of them)

No hate man...just a battle...

wutever skill level you at, im two times better that
ya reppin the arch, then im the m on a mickey dees bag
even if my punches were average, you'd be that little orange fish *1
ill throw rocks at your house, and leave your door witta sore-henge
your a chicken AND a fag....you stay fighting with them cocks
have you hiding behind the counter, like viagra, in children shops
im owning this ho, like putting a sold, sign on a golf course
remember microcker, he had the same DNA as yours
im constantly stealing your spotlight, like flashlight thieves
matter fact, it left you in the black, magik,vanish pleeze

1*nemo

if you dont get the punches please do not vote

Nice verse man...May the best man win...Good shit...uppin for votes...

^coodnt of said it better.....
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uppin..........

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

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Voted For: morse code

wutever skill level you at, im two times better that
ya reppin the arch, then im the m on a mickey dees bag
5...ok honest shit....this was a weak opener!!!!
even if my punches were average, you'd be that little orange fish *1
ill throw rocks at your house, and leave your door witta sore-henge
6...better but that nemo line was gay!!
your a chicken AND a fag....you stay fighting with them cocks
have you hiding behind the counter, like viagra, in children shops
7...nice shit, gud meta and shit!!
im owning this ho, like putting a sold, sign on a golf course
remember microcker, he had the same DNA as yours
7...lol!!! gud line!!
im constantly stealing your spotlight, like flashlight thieves
matter fact, it left you in the black, magik,vanish pleeze
7...nice personal on his name!!

OVERALL: 32/50


This kid is weak........you 6-0? shit, watch me end his streak
Try and stop me, get thrown "in a box" like "hockey penalties"
5...ok meta, 1st line was played filler!!
I'll cave your face in, and if you doubt my game's amazing
I'll fuckin' "eat you dogg"............. but I "aint no asian" *
7...LMAO!!! asian shit was funny!! kinda racist tho!!
You schoolin' this vet, won't happen like you rulin' at text
How you hard when you're 14 and haven't hit puberty yet? **
7...LoL!!! more funny shit, 2nd line was dope!!
This fag is nothin, real emcees can see past his bluffin'
And he's 6-0, because he calls my home, and asks for punches***
6...aight punch, droppin off from previous two!!
Just face it, you're weak kid, I'll leave your face in the cement
.........This fake "couldn't be sick" if he caught "fatal diseases"
6...played shit but u didnt do it too gay!!

OVERALL: 31/50

Close battle!!! I found it hard to break the two apart but in the end Black Magik dropped a couple of played lines, one of which was just played filler..........morse code just had a slightly better tally of punches, but ya need to stop explainin shit and drop the speechmarks and bold and italics shit!!!!

V/ - morse code

RTF!!!! link is in my siggy!!!!

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

jus peepin' polls. Nice battle by both. pc.......................

Weerd...uppin...

This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 

pollsssssssss.biznatches.......................... .

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Magik takes this battle... The punches were understandable and hard... The structure could be better... For example minimize the .............. and get straight to the point... another thing is your vocab... it isnt bad, but it does need to be uped... this isnt your best battle by far, lol... no hate... Now morse code... your shit was aight... I wasnt really feeling what you had to say... your vocab was aight, your punches were kinda wack here and there, no hate... your structure was off as well... so Magik takes this...

weerd...thanx for the vote...Uppin this shit...

I'll put 22'z in your azz on aim bitch....................... :thumbup:

^ no you wont.....................................

This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 

Polls.............................................

OG side took this easy..

Uppin this shot for some more votes...

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

black:
This kid is weak........you 6-0? shit, watch me end his streak
Try and stop me, get thrown "in a box" like "hockey penalties"
^^^^NICE OPENER..DA HOCKEY PUNCH WAS ORIGINAL
I'll cave your face in, and if you doubt my game's amazing
I'll fuckin' "eat you dogg"............. but I "aint no asian" *
^^IVE SEEN DIS CONCEPT A FEW TIMES BUT IT WAS COOL THO
You schoolin' this vet, won't happen like you rulin' at text
How you hard when you're 14 and haven't hit puberty yet? **
^^^^OKAY PERSONAL DIDN'T HIT REALLY HARD
This fag is nothin, real emcees can see past his bluffin'
And he's 6-0, because he calls my home, and asks for punches***
^^^^^LMAOOOOOOOOO WOW IF HE REALLY DOES DATZ A SHAME....GOOD PERSONAL THO
Just face it, you're weak kid, I'll leave your face in the cement
.........This fake "couldn't be sick" if he caught "fatal diseases"
^^^REAL WACK CLOSER FAM...

morse:
wutever skill level you at, im two times better that
ya reppin the arch, then im the m on a mickey dees bag
^^^WEAK OPENER...SHIT DIDNT RYHME
even if my punches were average, you'd be that little orange fish *1
ill throw rocks at your house, and leave your door witta sore-henge
^^^^LOL WHUT?...WACK SHIT FAM
your a chicken AND a fag....you stay fighting with them cocks
have you hiding behind the counter, like viagra, in children shops
^^^DA 1ST LINE WAS DOPE....DA SECOND LINE WAS SUPER WACK...REAL TALK
im owning this ho, like putting a sold, sign on a golf course
remember microcker, he had the same DNA as yours
^^^YO WHY CANT U FINISH A DOPE BAR ...DA 1ST LINE WAS CLEVA BUT DA SECOND WAS WEAK
im constantly stealing your spotlight, like flashlight thieves
matter fact, it left you in the black, magik,vanish pleeze
^^NAH....


morse dissapointed me in dis battle sayin a bunch of dumb shit..u cant finsh a whole bar u half assin it...and black ya verse was solid dat personal about him callin u 4 punches probly end his text career good shit...

RETURN DA FAVOR..

^lol i gues you didnt get the sore-henge, sorenge part...and dat one bar i added that link, so if u checked you can see that his alias wus microcker, which he used to vote for himself, then after going to battle stats and searching, you can see he battled himself,so next time check the link poeple....just thoguh id say that

uppin

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Explanation: Aight black got this .. becasuse simply morse codes punches werent connecting at all and really had no set up to his punches .. black had punches plus the personals he gave were kinda funny since yall know eachother in real life nah mean ..

Vote=Blak

Plz Both Of You Return The Favor On My Battle With Big City

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Uppin for more votes on this shitznt bitches!!!!!!

werd....lets get some more votes..................

Aiight yo uppin for morse code............................................

Uppin this shit for more honest votes...

uppin............../.',/.;/,.;'/,;,.'/;'/,.;';,'';';/.,

^^^^^^^^^ What he said...

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

listen nigger ya flow is wake and ya lingo i ant p diddy i don't dance to jinggles but i'll pop ya top off like a can of pringles niggers always talking bout what they keeping but when ya enemy pull up in a lincoln you be in the bathroom praying like a deckin

^wtf, lmao, plz homie, get outta here....uppin....

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

checkin polls........................................

Vote up!...............................................

Uppin this shit...

Voted For: morse code

V/Morse Code.....this was a good battle but Morse came wit it for real this punchs mix wit personals an vocab also good structure that gave him my vote....Magik u had a good verse but sum ur punchs were played i seen better from u u seemed like u came to lightly u had good structure not many good personals........NO Hate......
RETURN THE FAVOR
Opener=mc
Closer=mc
Punchs=mc
Structure=tie
Personals=mc
Wordplay=mc
Multi's=Tie
Vocab=mc
Overall=Morse Code....

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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

wutever skill level you at, im two times better that
ya reppin the arch, then im the m on a mickey dees bag
^^decent opener, but not hard hitting...5/10
even if my punches were average, you'd be that little orange fish *1
ill throw rocks at your house, and leave your door witta sore-henge
^^nice scheme but punch was weak..5/10
your a chicken AND a fag....you stay fighting with them cocks
have you hiding behind the counter, like viagra, in children shops
^^viagra in children shops?...hmm, lol,,,6/10
im owning this ho, like putting a sold, sign on a golf course
remember microcker, he had the same DNA as yours
^^set up was koo, but you messed up the punch...4/10
im constantly stealing your spotlight, like flashlight thieves
matter fact, it left you in the black, magik,vanish pleeze
^^decent closer, nameplay was ok, 6/10
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26/50
overall you had some decent concepts but need to work on makin your punches hit, none of them really connected well
its like you focused to much on complexity n forgot to diss your opponent...no real good personals either....
try to focus your verse more on your opponent next time
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This kid is weak........you 6-0? shit, watch me end his streak
Try and stop me, get thrown "in a box" like "hockey penalties"
^^way forced ryhme scheme...5/10
I'll cave your face in, and if you doubt my game's amazing
I'll fuckin' "eat you dogg"............. but I "aint no asian" *
^^well worded, punch connected...7/10
You schoolin' this vet, won't happen like you rulin' at text
How you hard when you're 14 and haven't hit puberty yet? **
^^played concept(this punch is in the rv tutorials)4/10
This fag is nothin, real emcees can see past his bluffin'
And he's 6-0, because he calls my home, and asks for punches***
^^nice personal(if its true).....7/10
Just face it, you're weak kid, I'll leave your face in the cement
.........This fake "couldn't be sick" if he caught "fatal diseases"
^^weak closer but still ok, 5/10
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28/50
overall you were more consistent, creativity needs work but
you had 2 punches that hit well n won this battle for ya.
up your vocab n complexity, you also lost marks for having a very forced ryhme scheme on a couple bars...no hate
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close battle to both........RTF IN THE SIG

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Aight
not the strongest battle here yall

Morse:
flow was a little weak in places, wasnt feeling your punches neither, few decent metas, an the wordplay was okay...closer was pretty decent, but the line golk line was horrible lol

Black:
decenbt verse, personals were on point, flow was good, the wording of the verse was decent so it made the verse just go with the flow...punchlines were good, i thought the asian line was weak tho...wasnt feelin that line at all, on the hole for more effort, ,creativity an better punches...black gets my vote

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^^^
theres the link, could yall RTF

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Uppin thru the fuckin roof...bitches

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

ok returning the favor since morse code voted in one of my battles.......ok morse good structure and flow here good vocab too but your punches and personals werent really good they lacked not wack but far from dope some didnt even seem to rhyme while black omg you had dope ass personals iill eat you dog hahahaha oh that was dope good ass punches and disses also dope all over good structure and personals as well as vocab dope overall drop here black got this......

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LMAO at you getting all these votes removed...They were explained fine...But whatever...uppin this shit to the fuckin roof...Let's get this shit closed...

i only had one removed homie, but then strobe came in here and removed more, cuz if u look he removed summa mine too, so......but anyway, uppin