Typical vs confidential
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

good luckmy verse wont be the same as i told u befor

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-27-05 at 01:17 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

Typical has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-27-05 12:48 PM.

confidential has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-27-05 12:51 PM.

ur not bright… da typ strikes like snakes wit raddles
if ur so nice…y u had to beg a week for a battle
this nigga dares to try: but I lock him in hell
becuz ur "flow" compared to mine, is a "drop" in a "well"
tha shit u leakin, has no trace of what’s needed for hot speakin
I get y ur names confidential, ur skills are "top secret"
dis kid couldnt get hot, if I lent ‘em a leather
so go fuck wit a ‘new B’, like u inventin a letter!
Acceptin this… u didnt think first of ur health
next time read ur name: and "keep ur verse to ur self"

thanks again con...
good luck

ima go read ur first verse now to see if u hert my feelings

This battle will make u update ya record after I drop bombs
So now u can add 'i was verbally Raped on RAPVERSE.COM

My lines are carefully sought, wits are what u rarily got
I'll kill the voices in ya head & leave u buried in thought

2ed time around?, lets just say i see u hater
cuz ya verse aint worth a look like the nipples on my avator

ya clip is empty, busting off blanks like a 80 year old masterbater
and this shit gonna get ugly like ya girl... cuz u need a mask-to-date-her

Ur awfully gay so doggy I wrote this in sloppy haste
So I'll save the voters some time, "Vote =confidential, now copy/paste...

good luck

ya girl hot... even while standing outside naked by a cold-gate

are u a chic?
just askin

i think i came harder last time then i came weaker cuz i aint htink u was gonna come again on time

nice verse we should link up later on or something aight holla

upp'in for votes

i ment ya girl.... * like ya wify*
not as in ya girl, as in *me*

im a male

good shit kid,,,,,,,,,.....................................

my bad.....my last girl wasnt that hot so i wasnt used to da compliment

Voted For: Typical

Typical - Good spit man, it flowed well... was weak in some spots but overall not to bad of a verse.

Best Line - tha shit u leakin, has no trace of what’s needed for hot speakin
I get y ur names confidential, ur skills are "top secret"

Worst Line - dis kid couldnt get hot, if I lent ‘em a leather
so go fuck wit a ‘new B’, like u inventin a letter!

confidential - Iight spit, the flow was a little off, but you had some good wordplay and punches.

Best Line - Ur awfully gay so doggy I wrote this in sloppy haste
So I'll save the voters some time, "Vote =confidential, now copy/paste...

Worst Line - 2ed time around?, lets just say i see u hater
cuz ya verse aint worth a look like the nipples on my avator

OVERALL - Close battle here, but I have to give my vote to Typical. He had the better flow. His punches were also hitten hard. Con you need to work on your flow. Also try to think of more creative punches to breing to your battles.

Vote - Typical

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Voted For: Typical

v/ Typical

ur not bright… da typ strikes like snakes wit raddles
if ur so nice…y u had to beg a week for a battle
6 eh...it was aight...not much...but a nice opener

this nigga dares to try: but I lock him in hell
becuz ur "flow" compared to mine, is a "drop" in a "well"
7 feelin dis line...real nice

tha shit u leakin, has no trace of what’s needed for hot speakin
I get y ur names confidential, ur skills are "top secret"
7 coulda been worded a lil betta but it was aight

dis kid couldnt get hot, if I lent ‘em a leather
so go fuck wit a ‘new B’, like u inventin a letter!
8 ya best line

Acceptin this… u didnt think first of ur health
next time read ur name: and "keep ur verse to ur self"
8 nice closer...not as powerful as da line before it tho

^^36

This battle will make u update ya record after I drop bombs
So now u can add 'i was verbally Raped on RAPVERSE.COM
4 BLAH?!?!?
My lines are carefully sought, wits are what u rarily got
I'll kill the voices in ya head & leave u buried in thought
6this was aight...not too serious
2ed time around?, lets just say i see u hater
cuz ya verse aint worth a look like the nipples on my avator
7 kinda tight
ya clip is empty, busting off blanks like a 80 year old masterbater
and this shit gonna get ugly like ya girl... cuz u need a mask-to-date-her
4 noooooo..poor wordin
Ur awfully gay so doggy I wrote this in sloppy haste
So I'll save the voters some time, "Vote =confidential, now copy/paste...
9 ok...this was da tightest line...das crazy lol

^^30

altogether.....Typical's opener n middle were betta.....but con took da closer.....voted for Typical cuz his verse had a stronger approach.....return da favor in any of my battles plz......1

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Voted For: Typical

This battle will make u update ya record after I drop bombs
So now u can add 'i was verbally Raped on RAPVERSE.COM
OK...
My lines are carefully sought, wits are what u rarily got
I'll kill the voices in ya head & leave u buried in thought
Nice..
2ed time around?, lets just say i see u hater
cuz ya verse aint worth a look like the nipples on my avator
Nah..........
ya clip is empty, busting off blanks like a 80 year old masterbater
and this shit gonna get ugly like ya girl... cuz u need a mask-to-date-her
Terrible.......
Ur awfully gay so doggy I wrote this in sloppy haste
So I'll save the voters some time, "Vote =confidential, now copy/paste...
Called the punch before I saw it, but still a good closer..

ur not bright… da typ strikes like snakes wit raddles
if ur so nice…y u had to beg a week for a battle
eh....
this nigga dares to try: but I lock him in hell
becuz ur "flow" compared to mine, is a "drop" in a "well"
Nice..
tha shit u leakin, has no trace of what’s needed for hot speakin
I get y ur names confidential, ur skills are "top secret"
eh....got the concept but delivery was kind of off..
dis kid couldnt get hot, if I lent ‘em a leather
so go fuck wit a ‘new B’, like u inventin a letter!
Nice....................
Acceptin this… u didnt think first of ur health
next time read ur name: and "keep ur verse to ur self"
hot closer.....


Con started out hot, and his verses just tapered off...this battle definitely wasn't a throwaway, Typical had some real original spits, the last two were slick...

thanks for the vote everyone

typical i think my 1st verse i drop was better but nice drop fam

upp'in for more votes

thanx kid
i liked ur shit as well
it was original
upin for votes

upin.............................................. .......

Voted For: Typical

ur not bright… da typ strikes like snakes wit raddles
if ur so nice…y u had to beg a week for a battle
^ok opener....
this nigga dares to try: but I lock him in hell
becuz ur "flow" compared to mine, is a "drop" in a "well"
^ok....but basic...
tha shit u leakin, has no trace of what’s needed for hot speakin
I get y ur names confidential, ur skills are "top secret"
^ok...but thats like glore-in for him..
dis kid couldnt get hot, if I lent ‘em a leather
so go fuck wit a ‘new B’, like u inventin a letter!
^ok...
Acceptin this… u didnt think first of ur health
next time read ur name: and "keep ur verse to ur self"
umm no.....bad closer...

overall:8.3/10..
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This battle will make u update ya record after I drop bombs
So now u can add 'i was verbally Raped on RAPVERSE.COM
^bad opener...too basic..
My lines are carefully sought, wits are what u rarily got
I'll kill the voices in ya head & leave u buried in thought
^ummm no..
2ed time around?, lets just say i see u hater
cuz ya verse aint worth a look like the nipples on my avator
^basic....and played..
ya clip is empty, busting off blanks like a 80 year old masterbater
and this shit gonna get ugly like ya girl... cuz u need a mask-to-date-her
^horrible closer...

overall:3.5/10

OMG your shit...all that shit talkin u doin...LOL...kidd...i already owned u..lol....

Ur awfully gay so doggy I wrote this in sloppy haste
So I'll save the voters some time, "Vote =confidential, now copy/paste...

Voted For: Typical

-confidential-

This battle will make u update ya record after I drop bombs
So now u can add 'i was verbally Raped on RAPVERSE.COM
^^^^ 7/10 decent opener...concept of 2nd is playedf

My lines are carefully sought, wits are what u rarily got
I'll kill the voices in ya head & leave u buried in thought
^^^^ 9/10 hard hit, good vocabulary, funny

2ed time around?, lets just say i see u hater
cuz ya verse aint worth a look like the nipples on my avator
^^^^ 7/10 ehhh...decent hit...could of been better

ya clip is empty, busting off blanks like a 80 year old masterbater
and this shit gonna get ugly like ya girl... cuz u need a mask-to-date-her
^^^^ 7/10 good hit...could of been better

Ur awfully gay so doggy I wrote this in sloppy haste
So I'll save the voters some time, "Vote =confidential, now copy/paste...
^^^^ 5/10 not a good closer...not much of a hit...self glory

35/50 = %70



-Typical-

ur not bright… da typ strikes like snakes wit raddles
if ur so nice…y u had to beg a week for a battle
^^^^ 7/10 decent opener...decent hit

this nigga dares to try: but I lock him in hell
becuz ur "flow" compared to mine, is a "drop" in a "well"
^^^^ 8/10 hahaha...good hit...good flow

tha shit u leakin, has no trace of what’s needed for hot speakin
I get y ur names confidential, ur skills are "top secret"
^^^^ 10/10 funny, hard hit, good flow, good wordplay

dis kid couldnt get hot, if I lent ‘em a leather
so go fuck wit a ‘new B’, like u inventin a letter!
^^^^ 9/10 hahaha...funny...hard hit

Acceptin this… u didnt think first of ur health
next time read ur name: and "keep ur verse to ur self"
^^^^ 8/10 good closer...good wordplay...good hit

42/50 = %84


Vote = Typical