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5. ... Vs. 60 ::..:$lobK::..:
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Battles go up Wednesday, Check Ins due on Friday before 11:59 PM EST, Verses due on Sunday before 11:59 PM EST. 10 Lines No Biting No Recycling No Feeding Only Voting Council May Vote On The Battle. Good Luck |
Checkin In Man..
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check who the fuck is 60?hes not even on the list or is that part of this herbs name?
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fixed cuz i had a typo in the first time posted
This herb listed ya interests as spitting......funny i thought hos swallowed King of Rapverse?...you couldnt pull it off with as many shots as Diallo!! Hate Bloods??.......but you pussy dont you bleed monthly or something? You can write ya verse on ya bandanna and couldnt 'C' one of my punches!! That out the way newb basher everyone of us know that you wack Slobk a gang banger of course!!!...all C.owards R.un I.N P.acks!! Eleavation not in your future like popped balloons and crashed airlines Plus you came to this battle shook since my name surrounds you like 5 times;) ........... shit even you said that you trash! Cuz in this battle you like little boxes on windshields........a EZ PASS!! :laugh: EXPLANATIONS Kids a gay ass gang banger claims hes crip and look at his name for the 7th line personal :thumbup: |
Im Shook Of This Fagget?.. Your Career Is Diminished..Dis "Nerd Goin Downhill".."Like Honor Roll Students On Ramps".. I'm Shook? Homie Went Into "Witness Protection" Almost As Much Times As His Rank.. * When He Lose..He Creates An Alias After..Homeboi Neva "Blessed" Like "Atheist Chapters".. Think Ya Personality Is A Factor? Stop Playin Hard..We All Noe CALI Is The Place For Actors.. I Cant Relate..With All The "Quakes" In CALI..Its Hard To Have Ur Mind In A "Steady State".. Elevate? In A Room Filled With "Obese Kids"..The Only Time Peeps Think U A "Heavyweight".. D-ICE "Melted", U Couldnt Stand The "Heat"? Changed Ya Name But Failed To B Discreet.. Failure Creeped..So I Hope U Take "Poetry To Da Heart"..So U Could Finally "Rhyme To Beats".. Cocky Homo..Talk Out Ya Ass So Much..But Never Once Have I Seen This Queer Defend.. Sick When? "CALIPH" Emerged And Then Went To "CALI" Wen Da PH Scale Overtook Him.. ** *- D-Ice, Cali, Caliph, ... Are All His Aliases **- Subtract The PH..And A PH Scale Is A Scientific Substance Used To Test The "Consistency" And "Resistance" Of Certain Objects..Word |
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... took this with harder punches, better flow, and a better verse..:..:$lobK::..: all your lines are streched and it really took away from your verse... Vote: ... |
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This herb listed ya interests as spitting......funny i thought hos swallowed King of Rapverse?...you couldnt pull it off with as many shots as Diallo!! like RB said..first line was kinda played...decent though..6/10 This herb listed ya interests as spitting......funny i thought hos swallowed King of Rapverse?...you couldnt pull it off with as many shots as Diallo!! blah......4/10 That out the way newb basher everyone of us know that you wack Slobk a gang banger of course!!!...all C.owards R.un I.N P.acks!! dope...9/10 Eleavation not in your future like popped balloons and crashed airlines Plus you came to this battle shook since my name surrounds you like 5 times that was alrite.......7/10 ........... shit even you said that you trash! Cuz in this battle you like little boxes on windshields........a EZ PASS!! good closer......7/10 OVERALL-27/50 slobl: Your Career Is Diminished..Dis "Nerd Goin Downhill".."Like Honor Roll Students On Ramps".. I'm Shook? Homie Went Into "Witness Protection" Almost As Much Times As His Rank.. * poor opener....2/10 When He Lose..He Creates An Alias After..Homeboi Neva "Blessed" Like "Atheist Chapters".. Think Ya Personality Is A Factor? Stop Playin Hard..We All Noe CALI Is The Place For Actors.. that was good.........6/10 I Cant Relate..With All The "Quakes" In CALI..Its Hard To Have Ur Mind In A "Steady State".. Elevate? In A Room Filled With "Obese Kids"..The Only Time Peeps Think U A "Heavyweight".. played..ive heard that bein said to fat kids way to much times..3/10 D-ICE "Melted", U Couldnt Stand The "Heat"? Changed Ya Name But Failed To B Discreet.. Failure Creeped..So I Hope U Take "Poetry To Da Heart"..So U Could Finally "Rhyme To Beats".. lol...that was good...7/10 Cocky Homo..Talk Out Ya Ass So Much..But Never Once Have I Seen This Queer Defend.. Sick When? "CALIPH" Emerged And Then Went To "CALI" Wen Da PH Scale Overtook Him.. ** closer was weak...3/10 OVERALL-20/50 V/... |
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Nice spit fam. Only advice is to lose alot of your ......... and !?!?!?!?!?!?!?!. Try cleaning up your verses with filler words rather than a bunch of messy things. lol. You did fine tho lyrically. Peez. |
^^Get Off His Nuts Yo Dam..
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DIDN"T REMEMBER GAY VOTING COUNCIL SHIT
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Werd Yo..They On His Nuts..Yo Flow Intelligent Let Sum1 Hoo Aint In The Council Vote Yo..
Fuck Y Dey Gotta Be In The Council For?..Let Sum1 Else Vote Yo..Get Off His Nuts.. |
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Dude for real his verse was better, why the fuck would I crew vote, I don't care who takes home the money, it was a fair vote.. |
^^Ion Think His Verse Was Betta..Ive Seen That Cowards Runs In Packs Line A Hella Of A Times..
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Find it and post links....:thumbup: |
^and Thats Word.............................................. ..........
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Stop Freeposting. Cali Had The Better Verse. Come To Grips That Youre Not As Dope As You Think You Are.
...: This herb listed ya interests as spitting......funny i thought hos swallowed King of Rapverse?...you couldnt pull it off with as many shots as Diallo!! ^^good metaphor ok setup could have been better 6/10 Hate Bloods??.......but you pussy dont you bleed monthly or something? You can write ya verse on ya bandanna and couldnt 'C' one of my punches!! ^^decent punch not much else 4/10 That out the way newb basher everyone of us know that you wack Slobk a gang banger of course!!!...all C.owards R.un I.N P.acks!! ^^another decent punch.. wasnt really feeling it 4/10 Eleavation not in your future like popped balloons and crashed airlines Plus you came to this battle shook since my name surrounds you like 5 times Good first bar, it wasnt a set up but good meta, 2nd line was ok 6/10 ........... shit even you said that you trash! Cuz in this battle you like little boxes on windshields........a EZ PASS!! ^^well we all know that last line was stretched to shit, but dope meta 6/10 Overall: 26/50 (52%) $lobK: Your Career Is Diminished..Dis "Nerd Goin Downhill".."Like Honor Roll Students On Ramps".. I'm Shook? Homie Went Into "Witness Protection" Almost As Much Times As His Rank.. * You started this bar off perfect but Ramps and Rank do not rhyme, you only get credit for the meta 3/10 When He Lose..He Creates An Alias After..Homeboi Neva "Blessed" Like "Atheist Chapters".. Think Ya Personality Is A Factor? Stop Playin Hard..We All Noe CALI Is The Place For Actors.. ^^2 more good metas, stop capitalizing the first letter of each word, it stretches your bar, so then you have to make the size smaller -2 points for the noob move 5/10 I Cant Relate..With All The "Quakes" In CALI..Its Hard To Have Ur Mind In A "Steady State".. Elevate? In A Room Filled With "Obese Kids"..The Only Time Peeps Think U A "Heavyweight".. ^^again with the capitals just stop that. decent bar 5/10 D-ICE "Melted", U Couldnt Stand The "Heat"? Changed Ya Name But Failed To B Discreet.. Failure Creeped..So I Hope U Take "Poetry To Da Heart"..So U Could Finally "Rhyme To Beats".. ^^ seen something very similar to your 2nd line, stop with the wack multies it killed the impact, You should have wrote something else besides 'Failure Creeped' ok bar 4/10 Cocky Homo..Talk Out Ya Ass So Much..But Never Once Have I Seen This Queer Defend.. Sick When? "CALIPH" Emerged And Then Went To "CALI" Wen Da PH Scale Overtook Him.. ^^im sorry but that PH shit was stupid. if the ph scale OVER!took him then the ph would still be there. And Overtook Him & Queer Defend do not rhyme. Him and Defend dont even rhyme. And you think youre verse was better with 2 non rhyming bars 2/10 Overall: 19/50 (38%) Vote/ ... Battle Closed ... Wins By K.O 3-0 |
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