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Kin*Ethic™ vs Typical
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3-5 Bars No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 04-28-05 at 01:58 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Typical has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-27-05 02:02 PM.
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im swinging to rock ya chin, like we were in a brawl
so da only multi's u spit: r pieces of ur jaw! ill devise him an edit: put his demise to my credit i graduated: but never took kindly to ethics The only thing i got alot of: is money n guts i cereal kill, cuz wat u ‘post’: is ‘honey n nuts peace ill eat u on a desserted island with my recital mastery so i could point at ur avy and say my rhymes r ur final fantasy watch ur wishs turn to sand in an elegant breeze cuz ur delicate speach never had a fishs chance in a pelicans beak |
Kin*Ethic™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-27-05 02:56 PM.
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Put ya |Mouth-InA-Spin| once blood |Spouts-&Ya-Cringe| Cuz after this u 'Wont See Typical' Like kids lifting large |Amounts-InA-Gym!| I |Doubt-UCan-Win| Cuz my punches 'Change Typical' & literally put him |Out-OnA-Limb!!|
Ill |Refire-Things-To-Smoke-Tha-Man-After| I |Rewire-Machines-To-Poke-A-Man-Faster!| .. Punches |Choke-This-Mans-Laughter| & will quickly 'Put An End To Pica' like a |Retiring-Pokemon-Master!!| Ram |Bolts-In-Ya-Thights| & have ya |Poked-In-Ya-Eyes| To blaze ur |Revolting-Disguise!| .. Watch no one |Vote-For-This-Guy|, Read Here Cuz this battle will never |Result-In-A-Ty!!| Idiot Disclaimor 1. If You Do Something Out The Normal/Typical You Go Out On A Limb 2. tyPICAal PICAchu is a pokemon 3. Battles Cant Result In Ties .. TYpical TY/Tie |
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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™
v/ Kin*ethic Da Breakdown: Punches Ethic... Personals none really...Typical Wordplay Ethic... Multiz Ethic... Text Flow Ethic... Structure Typical... Creativity Ethic... Typical's verse was tight...some lines were sloppy n not well worded which thru u off...Ethic took da opener, middle, and closer...therefore he gets my vote RTF...i got like 30 battles open wit no votes lol Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Kin*Ethic™
Checking the polls, yo kinethic seriously man holla at the jury. lol.
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lmao iono man im still feeling out rapverse but ill think about it .. thanks for the offer |
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uppin this shizzle ........ for some votizzles>>!!
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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™
hmm, very one sided battle, ethics, your style is hollafront, but its koo, i dont mind readin it especially if its this creative, nice catch on the pica punch, good name play throughout n ya verse wasnt to complex to ruin ya punches, shit was solid. . typical, you just didnt come hard enough, your style against his wouldve been hard pressed to be a challenge, he fits alot more complexity into his verses with multi's, nameplays n the way its stretch n is hyphinated, your punches were below average from what ive read from you before..nice try but you just didnt have a quality verse.......... . both of you return the favor.......... |
wow im losing?
that sucks...lmao i think i won but kins verse was flowed and worded hot... upin for votes |
[sarcasm]Yea You Should Be Winning Typical[/sarcasm]
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Voted For: Typical
im swinging to rock ya chin, like we were in a brawl so da only multi's u spit: r pieces of ur jaw! Nice.... ill devise him an edit: put his demise to my credit i graduated: but never took kindly to ethics Ha.. The only thing i got alot of: is money n guts i cereal kill, cuz wat u ‘post’: is ‘honey n nuts This is almost identical to one of my concepts, but fuck it, coincidences happen..... ill eat u on a desserted island with my recital mastery so i could point at ur avy and say my rhymes r ur final fantasy Nah.... watch ur wishs turn to sand in an elegant breeze cuz ur delicate speach never had a fishs chance in a pelicans beak Hot closer......... Put ya |Mouth-InA-Spin| once blood |Spouts-&Ya-Cringe| Cuz after this u 'Wont See Typical' Like kids lifting large |Amounts-InA-Gym!| I |Doubt-UCan-Win| Cuz my punches 'Change Typical' & literally put him |Out-OnA-Limb!!| Eh......... Ill |Refire-Things-To-Smoke-Tha-Man-After| I |Rewire-Machines-To-Poke-A-Man-Faster!| .. Punches |Choke-This-Mans-Laughter| & will quickly 'Put An End To Pica' like a |Retiring-Pokemon-Master!!| Only OK punch... Ram |Bolts-In-Ya-Thights| & have ya |Poked-In-Ya-Eyes| To blaze ur |Revolting-Disguise!| .. Watch no one |Vote-For-This-Guy|, Read Here Cuz this battle will never |Result-In-A-Ty!!| OK personal.... Kin's multis were WAAY too forced to be effective, Typical was more creative with his shit, and the flow was smooth......... |
verbal got tha hottest sig...ace in the hole...thats hot if u know poker
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Kin's multis were WAAY too forced to be effective, Typical was more creative with his shit, and the flow was smooth.........[/QUOTE]
what was it u were saying ethics? |
Voted For: Kin*Ethic™
damn this verse was dope good wordplay structre was good also vocab great flow was pretty good i cant be mad at this nice piece here multies crazy Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Kin*Ethic™
im voting for u man not because of ya punches just becasue he was wack n u was more complex. Theirs nothingwrong wit ya structure as the multies flow nice but wot I didnt understand is why are u highlighting parts in the same punch that don't even correlate with eachother?? ya style is cool though and i think you just need to improve on the way you incorparate things into your verse.peace typical man your verse was just wack allover,no funny punches,no concepts, and no strong wordplay, even though ya opponent didnt use it, that could u've been u r advantage. Elevate a bit more before u take on dudes like him ite.peace |
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I Highlighted THe Multis LMAO.... And Typical What Were You Saying??? Dumbass |
Voted For: Kin*Ethic™
kin won this..he had a more creative verse, beta flow & structure,wasnt feelin the caps n shit...made it hard to read, but u had the better punches. ova cat cudnt make as basic punch, verse was kinda basic.. need to upp ya game..jus elevate Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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ur proud that a nigga wit a 2-2 rec voted for u...congradulations... da illest... if im so whack set up a battle |
lmao@this ... anyways uppin for this to be over again
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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™
o.k average battle really but not bad.... kin - o.k man you bring alot of multi's to ya verse and im feelin that and ur structure doesn't bother me as long as its simple enough to flow to which its is, ya flow was dope, flawless due to the strong multis, however i think your punches lacked in places due to insertin these multis, the pokemon line was abit of a none event didnt mean much, not really a play on his name cos your only usin part of it, but overall it was a nice verse i liked the closer in both ya first and third bars..... typical - o.k man first off ya structure is a little out but blah its flowin to me mostly, opener is not bad but not great either heard this concept before and the closer was quite creative and avoided bein played, but between that it all went wrong ya punches just weren't hittin just thought ya fell off, again plenty of multi's makin it a gud read but basically kin got ya here verdict - kin gets this on the whole it was a beta all round verse, just thought i'd leave some decent feed for both please can ya both return the fav on the link below seein as i did take some time on this, thx http://community.rapverse.com/showb...127224&posted=1 |
Thanks For Voting... Ill Return Votes Once I Get My Computer Back Up
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Voted For: Typical
Put ya |Mouth-InA-Spin| once blood |Spouts-&Ya-Cringe| Cuz after this u 'Wont See Typical' Like kids lifting large |Amounts-InA-Gym!| I |Doubt-UCan-Win| Cuz my punches 'Change Typical' & literally put him |Out-OnA-Limb!!| Ill |Refire-Things-To-Smoke-Tha-Man-After| I |Rewire-Machines-To-Poke-A-Man-Faster!| .. Punches |Choke-This-Mans-Laughter| & will quickly 'Put An End To Pica' like a |Retiring-Pokemon-Master!!| OMG.....THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE WORST STRUCTURE EVER I WOULD BREAK DOWN LINES BUT I CANT EVEN GET IN BETWEEN YA SHIT....SO ILL JUST BREAK IT DOWN HERE. THAT GYM OPENER WAS WACK... THE POKEMan LINE WAS GOOD BUT, HOW OLD ARE YOU? THE CLOSER WAS A STATEMNT AT BEST....NO PERSONALS, NO HARD PUNCHES AND YA STRUCT FUCKED THE FLOW UP TO THE POINT THAT I HAD TO READ THIS LINE BY LINE, NO HATE, CUZ I CAN TELL YA GOOD BUT....WTF? WITH YA ORGANIZING? . . . . im swinging to rock ya chin, like we were in a brawl so da only multi's u spit: r pieces of ur jaw! THIS WOULDA BEEN WACK HAD KIN NOT CAME OUT SPITTING ALL TYPES OF MULTIS, NOW ITS A GOOD PERSONAL ill devise him an edit: put his demise to my credit i graduated: but never took kindly to ethics DECENT BAR ANOTHER PERSONAL The only thing i got alot of: is money n guts i cereal kill, cuz wat u ‘post’: is ‘honey n nuts peace CUTE, BUT NOT HARD HITTING ill eat u on a desserted island with my recital mastery so i could point at ur avy and say my rhymes r ur final fantasy EHH, watch ur wishs turn to sand in an elegant breeze cuz ur delicate speach never had a fishs chance in a pelicans beak THIS IS THE DOPEST BAR IN THE BATTLE... . . . TYP WINS FOR HAVING SOME PERSONALS AND GOOD PUNCHES KIN SHOUDLNT BE ALLOWED TO USE STRUCTURE LIKE THAT BUT IF HE FIXES IT HE'LL BE NICE |
Wow This Site Is The Most Newbish Ever.. A Battle Should Be Read Line By Line Anyways Dumbass ..
I Mean C'mon How Do People Vote Based On Structure Roflmao .. This Is Ridiculous |
This was feedback posted for Kin*Ethic™
checkin the polls for my home-dizzle Kin*Ethic lol...OG run shit
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This was feedback posted for Kin*Ethic™
checkin, kin takes'er easily......................
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yea lmao word.. funny how the only people that vote against me are people whos votes are based on structure.. smh
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its not only ya structure.....its how you substituted personals for multis....this is a battle site, but wow at ya fanbase on RV |
Voted For: Kin*Ethic™
....kinda one-sided here Kin - 1st of all..........fix ur structure..but thats me tho ur punches were decent, some were lame & wack, but the flow was lackin here...vocab was pretty decent...but overall u had an aight drop, nuttin much tho Typ - u had a weak drop, those punches need to upgrade a lil more typ...the structure was aight, & the flow was a little too short here, & ur vocab was decent...but overall typ work on ur punches tho.... v/ Kin |
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roflamo.. substituted personals for multis? wtf? ahhhh herbs these days... |
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