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Young Blaze vs D523
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Crew votes.. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-27-05 at 04:23 PM Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in. |
D523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-27-05 03:50 PM.
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Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention
Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension Haha, look at this rookie, trying to be a hot emcee Your lyrics put us in a deep sleep like we all have narcolepsy Your rhymes make me sick to my stomach, im about to throw up You had a better chance of winning if you didn’t even show up Felt left out, so he made up that he was the rookie of the year.. thats nice It's obvious you repeat everythin you say, in the rules u put no crew votes twice Why did i accept, good emcees to battle is what i prefer 13 wins? well i guess that 13 is your unlucky number |
Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-27-05 04:20 PM.
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I Slap Frauds,This Drones A Broke Joke I'll Bomb-this-Crook…
Im 4 Loot- You Cant Even See-'D'OH Wid 'Simpsons Comic Books.. Steppin Up? Ya Wrong-Foot..Hes Trippen Ya Straight Ripped-Son. Coz Given ''Detailed-Reports'' The Only Time 'D'SCRIPTs-Shon!! (Description) Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash.. Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft... A Fuckin' Hookers Lips Spit Him On a Parking Meter… The Kid was Hot Once..In a test tube..On a Hospital Heater… With Back Hands y’n “Ran-A-Face-Lift” With Slams-Of-Greatness.. Prove “I Gave (OG’s)there Rap Start” Like The Dude In SanAndreas.. ^^^his crew ight leets do this...... |
uppin this shit for some votes!
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This was feedback posted for D523
not bad, this looks like a good battle.....and WHAT!??! you better not be dissin OGs there young blaze, lol......ahh well, this was a pretty good battle, keep up to both
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Voted For: D523
Young BLaze I Slap Frauds,This Drones A Broke Joke I'll Bomb-this-Crook… Im 4 Loot- You Cant Even See-'D'OH Wid 'Simpsons Comic Books... ^Alright Steppin Up? Ya Wrong-Foot..Hes Trippen Ya Straight Ripped-Son. Coz Given ''Detailed-Reports'' The Only Time 'D'SCRIPTs-Shon!! ^Another ok line Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash.. Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft... ^BANANAZ A Fuckin' Hookers Lips Spit Him On a Parking Meter… The Kid was Hot Once..In a test tube..On a Hospital Heater… ^Hot With Back Hands y’n “Ran-A-Face-Lift” With Slams-Of-Greatness.. Prove “I Gave (OG’s)there Rap Start” Like The Dude In SanAndreas.. ^good D523 Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension ^good...funny Haha, look at this rookie, trying to be a hot emcee Your lyrics put us in a deep sleep like we all have narcolepsy ^hot Your rhymes make me sick to my stomach, im about to throw up You had a better chance of winning if you didn’t even show up ^play'd Felt left out, so he made up that he was the rookie of the year.. thats nice It's obvious you repeat everythin you say, in the rules u put no crew votes twice ^funny Why did i accept, good emcees to battle is what i prefer 13 wins? well i guess that 13 is your unlucky number ^wack Overall I would both yall verses was hot but Blaze had more punches and thats what I like in battles D had some funny lines but i like blaze style a lil better so I give my vote to him v/Young Blaze Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo wtf u voted for me an gave it to d523 i'll get it changed lol...
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at the top it say i voted for D523 but i voted for blaze i dont kno wat that is all about but for the record i vote for Young Blaze |
uppin this shit for some more votes!
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Voted For: Young Blaze
I Slap Frauds,This Drones A Broke Joke I'll Bomb-this-Crook… Im 4 Loot- You Cant Even See-'D'OH Wid 'Simpsons Comic Books.. Type Tight...7 Steppin Up? Ya Wrong-Foot..Hes Trippen Ya Straight Ripped-Son. Coz Given ''Detailed-Reports'' The Only Time 'D'SCRIPTs-Shon!! (Description) alright 6... Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash.. Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft... pretty good 6... A Fuckin' Hookers Lips Spit Him On a Parking Meter… The Kid was Hot Once..In a test tube..On a Hospital Heater… ok 6 With Back Hands y’n “Ran-A-Face-Lift” With Slams-Of-Greatness.. Prove “I Gave (OG’s)there Rap Start” Like The Dude In SanAndreas.. nice 7 32/50 Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension good 8. Haha, look at this rookie, trying to be a hot emcee Your lyrics put us in a deep sleep like we all have narcolepsy alright 6 Your rhymes make me sick to my stomach, im about to throw up You had a better chance of winning if you didn’t even show up played to me 5 Felt left out, so he made up that he was the rookie of the year.. thats nice It's obvious you repeat everythin you say, in the rules u put no crew votes twice 6 Why did i accept, good emcees to battle is what i prefer 13 wins? well i guess that 13 is your unlucky number hmmmm 6 31/50 YOUNG BLAZE winner Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: D523
I Slap Frauds,This Drones A Broke Joke I'll Bomb-this-Crook… Im 4 Loot- You Cant Even See-'D'OH Wid 'Simpsons Comic Books.. kinda lame... no offence - 4/10 Steppin Up? Ya Wrong-Foot..Hes Trippen Ya Straight Ripped-Son. Coz Given ''Detailed-Reports'' The Only Time 'D'SCRIPTs-Shon!! sal right - 5/10 (Description) Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash.. Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft... Didnt rhyme/flow - 3/10 A Fuckin' Hookers Lips Spit Him On a Parking Meter… The Kid was Hot Once..In a test tube..On a Hospital Heater… Almost hit it but was irrelevant to the first line...unless of course Another Hooker came along and fucked the parking meter moments later, thats a different story. But we dont really see that too often do we. - 5/10 With Back Hands y’n “Ran-A-Face-Lift” With Slams-Of-Greatness.. Prove “I Gave (OG’s)there Rap Start” Like The Dude In SanAndreas.. nah - 3/10 20/50 Salright I spose... Coulda seen a little bit more effort though... Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension pretty clever - 6/10 Haha, look at this rookie, trying to be a hot emcee Your lyrics put us in a deep sleep like we all have narcolepsy salright - 5/10 Your rhymes make me sick to my stomach, im about to throw up You had a better chance of winning if you didn’t even show up meh - 4/10 Felt left out, so he made up that he was the rookie of the year.. thats nice It's obvious you repeat everythin you say, in the rules u put no crew votes twice pretty good personal - 6/10 Why did i accept, good emcees to battle is what i prefer 13 wins? well i guess that 13 is your unlucky number Didnt really ryme... but good try 3/10 23/50 This was a very close battle... But I think That D523 Takes this with better structure, better flow, and better diction. V/ D523 |
Voted For: Young Blaze
Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension Little stretched, but aight... Haha, look at this rookie, trying to be a hot emcee Your lyrics put us in a deep sleep like we all have narcolepsy Could have been stronger... Your rhymes make me sick to my stomach, im about to throw up You had a better chance of winning if you didn’t even show up OK... Felt left out, so he made up that he was the rookie of the year.. thats nice It's obvious you repeat everythin you say, in the rules u put no crew votes twice Ha... Why did i accept, good emcees to battle is what i prefer 13 wins? well i guess that 13 is your unlucky number Eh........weak... I Slap Frauds,This Drones A Broke Joke I'll Bomb-this-Crook… Im 4 Loot- You Cant Even See-'D'OH Wid 'Simpsons Comic Books.. Ha....OK Steppin Up? Ya Wrong-Foot..Hes Trippen Ya Straight Ripped-Son. Coz Given ''Detailed-Reports'' The Only Time 'D'SCRIPTs-Shon!! Eh... not feeling it.... Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash.. Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft... OK... A Fuckin' Hookers Lips Spit Him On a Parking Meter… The Kid was Hot Once..In a test tube..On a Hospital Heater… Damn... With Back Hands y’n “Ran-A-Face-Lift” With Slams-Of-Greatness.. Prove “I Gave (OG’s)there Rap Start” Like The Dude In SanAndreas.. Good closer.. I'm not big on the pop culture references, but I usually don't factor that into the vote..personals and connection between lines went to 523, but Blaze had complexity and multis hands down...523's first two bars really could have used some tweaking, the punch wasn't as heavy as it could have been.....Some of Blaze's lines were stretched, but humor and punches made up for that, but he wins my vote by opening strong with a complex multi and closing with a nice personal.. |
uppin for some more votes.. thanks everyone that voted well rtf !
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Voted For: Young Blaze
ok heres how it goes I Slap Frauds,This Drones A Broke Joke I'll Bomb-this-Crook… Im 4 Loot- You Cant Even See-'D'OH Wid 'Simpsons Comic Books.. 6/10...6 cuz the 2nd line was good but first wasnt, nice punch though Steppin Up? Ya Wrong-Foot..Hes Trippen Ya Straight Ripped-Son. Coz Given ''Detailed-Reports'' The Only Time 'D'SCRIPTs-Shon!! (Description) 7/10...nice punch here,sticking with the 'D' shit...it helped the punch out Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash.. Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft... 5/10...this punch is pretty played and first line was badA Fuckin' Hookers Lips Spit Him On a Parking Meter… The Kid was Hot Once..In a test tube..On a Hospital Heater… 6/10...wasnt really feelin the heater lineWith Back Hands y’n “Ran-A-Face-Lift” With Slams-Of-Greatness.. Prove “I Gave (OG’s)there Rap Start” Like The Dude In SanAndreas.. 5/10...didnt like the last line, it was bad 29/50 Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension 7/10...woodve got better but the first line wasnt great...but 2nd line was nice Haha, look at this rookie, trying to be a hot emcee Your lyrics put us in a deep sleep like we all have narcolepsy 6/10...also had a wack first line but 2nd was niceYour rhymes make me sick to my stomach, im about to throw up You had a better chance of winning if you didn’t even show up 4/10...wack, both played ass hell Felt left out, so he made up that he was the rookie of the year.. thats nice It's obvious you repeat everythin you say, in the rules u put no crew votes twice 6/10...decent personals, line was stretched though Why did i accept, good emcees to battle is what i prefer 13 wins? well i guess that 13 is your unlucky number 5/10...played 28/50 overall: nice battle here, both have good openers but should improve on closers, also d523 could upp the multies,both have nice personals and punches, also both need to try and make each line of the bar have a nice punch othwise the first line is useless...nice battle here though v/ young blaze |
werd, i liked this battle, by the way both rtf, if you want :)
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uppin this shit for some more votes!!!
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Boostin this shit for these guys, show some love..... No good deed goes unpunished. Stop being selfish, if you read a battle, then take 2 minutes outta your life to vote.
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what elementality said.. vote peoplee
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Voted For: Young Blaze
pretty good battle here, decent punches from both and some ok multies, but ima have to go wit Young Blaze on this joint. he had some hot punches in his shit and better flow. Young blaze= nice verse dog, some pretty decent punches in there, u had the best punch in the battle. some pretty good multies but some of ya bars were kind of a stretch to make sense. kinda weak closer and opener tho. *young Blaze's* best bar= Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash.. Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft... ^^hhah hot shit, best bar in the battle, good delivery and nice flow on this shit D523=ok verse from you, ya had some decent punches and an ok flow, but overall not too hot otherwise. most of ya punches i heard before; shoulda put some multies in ya verse to give it some flava, nah mean. but u came pretty hard, just not enuff. *D523"s* best bar= Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension ^^funny, good delivery i was feelin ya opener here. overall= young blaze got this shit nice drop from ya. RETURN THE FAVOR...LINKS ARE IN THE SIG...1.. |
Voted For: D523
Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension 5...aight meta but weak line!! Haha, look at this rookie, trying to be a hot emcee Your lyrics put us in a deep sleep like we all have narcolepsy 6...better but still needs work!! Your rhymes make me sick to my stomach, im about to throw up You had a better chance of winning if you didn’t even show up 2...bleh!! weak and played out!! Felt left out, so he made up that he was the rookie of the year.. thats nice It's obvious you repeat everythin you say, in the rules u put no crew votes twice 4...nah not feelin it!!! and way stretched!! Why did i accept, good emcees to battle is what i prefer 13 wins? well i guess that 13 is your unlucky number 4...wtf!!! not even a punch really!! OVERALL: 21/50 I Slap Frauds,This Drones A Broke Joke I'll Bomb-this-Crook… Im 4 Loot- You Cant Even See-'D'OH Wid 'Simpsons Comic Books.. 7...nice shit, gud opener and pretty funny!! Steppin Up? Ya Wrong-Foot..Hes Trippen Ya Straight Ripped-Son. Coz Given ''Detailed-Reports'' The Only Time 'D'SCRIPTs-Shon!! 7...hotness, gud wordplay!! Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash.. Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft... 6...weaker, but still not too wack!! A Fuckin' Hookers Lips Spit Him On a Parking Meter… The Kid was Hot Once..In a test tube..On a Hospital Heater… 5...played concept but ya puti n a nice twist to it!! With Back Hands y’n “Ran-A-Face-Lift” With Slams-Of-Greatness.. Prove “I Gave (OG’s)there Rap Start” Like The Dude In SanAndreas.. 6...gud closer, nice vocabs to!! OVERALL: 31/50 aight young blaze killed this battle.....D523 came with some played concepts and just was too basic....no real punches and didnt get creative at all........blaze had some dope wordplay in his spit, couple of nice plays on D's name and some decent vocabs......overall had a far better verse and was more hard hittin!!!! V/ - Young Blaze Aight yo return the favour on that lyricalflowz battle one of ya cuz ya aint got the post counts to hit the others!!! pz!! Vote switched |
ass clown shit!!!!
i voted on the wrong one don't worry i'm a post sum shit so strobe can fix that!!!!! |
lol ......tru tru this happened alot in this battle......lol
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