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lyrical mage vs o.v.Dose
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-27-05 at 10:05 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
O.V.Dose has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-27-05 09:09 PM.
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lyrical mage has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-27-05 09:11 PM.
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im about to give this man a dose of his own reality
send in the medic we about to have another casualty why you takin over doses come on tell'em whats up did you lose money in a battle and now you bankrupt naw, come on now people this is the mcee o v dose then up on battles this nigga rather up on his posts man should be a scientist and make a autobiography after a few punches he will be a master in craniology so then he can get a scholarship and go to a college wackass state a place where you cant get knowllege(look at where hes from) yo from the looks of this verse i know im the tightest i just flamed a nigga up like he just caught bronchitis |
This kid moved to Washington D.C. so he could call himself a wizzard
This nerd aint intimidating....hes about as dangerous as running with scissors I figure he'll lose interest in this battle and go read some magic spells Mage dreams of conjuring skills but from what ive seen it doesnt seem to help Keep asking yourself if all this rap shits worth it when you cant do text right You just werent cut out for it..........like a Gingerbread Mans sex life I get my main entertainment from watchin you try to make up a statement You just barely scrapin by...............like the people that shovel pavements Im humble with my greatness while you're just blasphemous with your wackness Only 'tricks' that this magician pulls: Little girls from soccer practice Eye-lash out at this ass clown before he has a chance to back down Within a blink of an eye you'll KNOW lyric got 'smashed' like white trash dads passed out |
yo i messed up
im about to give this man a dose of his own reality
send in the medic we about to have another casualty why you takin over doses come on tell'em whats up did you lose money in a battle and now you bankrupt naw, come on now people this is the mcee o v dose then up on battles this nigga rather up on his posts man should be a scientist and make a autobiography after a few punches he will be a master in craniology so then he can get a scholarship and go to a college wackass state a place where you cant get knowllege(look at where hes from) yo from the looks of this verse i know im the tightest i just flamed a nigga up like he just caught bronchitis yo i messed up on the first verse look at this one |
im about to give this man a dose of his own reality
send in the medic we about to have another casualty why you takin over doses come on tell'em whats up did you lose money in a battle and now you bankrupt naw, come on now people this is the mcee o v dose then up on battles this nigga rather up on his posts man should be a scientist and make a autobiography after a few punches he will be a master in craniology so then he can get a scholarship and go to a college wackass state a place where you cant get knowllege(look at where hes from) yo from the looks of this verse i know im the tightest i just flamed a nigga up like he just caught bronchitis yo messed up on the second one look at this one |
im about to give this man a dose of his own reality
send in the medic we about to have another casualty why you takin over doses come on tell'em whats up did you lose money in a battle and going bankrupt naw, come on now people this isthe mcee ov dose then up on battles this man rather up on his posts man should be a scientist and make a autobiography after a few punches he'll be a master in craniology so then he can get a scholarship and go to college wackass state a place where you cant get knowllege(look where hes from) yo from the looks of this verse i know im the tightest i just flamed a nigga up like he just caught bronchitis. somthing was wrong i couldnt get my verse right but this is it |
the other two i messed up on the verse woulnt do it right so i hope the third one works
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aiight lets get some honest votes on this battle
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Voted For: O.V.Dose
V/O.V.Dose....this was a one sided battle O took this wit good punchs mixed wit personals an good structure....L ur verse was a little weak it seemed like u came to lightly an ur punchs need werk....NO Hate...... RETURN THE FAVOR (or i'll never vote on one yah battles agian) Opener=O Closer=O Punchs=O Structure=O Personals=O Wordplay=O Multi's=Tie Vocab=O Overall=O.V.Dose.... |
Voted For: O.V.Dose
im about to give this man a dose of his own reality send in the medic we about to have another casualty No... why you takin over doses come on tell'em whats up did you lose money in a battle and now you bankrupt Eh... naw, come on now people this is the mcee o v dose then up on battles this nigga rather up on his posts Uh.... man should be a scientist and make a autobiography after a few punches he will be a master in craniology No... so then he can get a scholarship and go to a college wackass state a place where you cant get knowllege(look at where hes from) Most played rhyme ever is college/knowledge, this blew.. yo from the looks of this verse i know im the tightest i just flamed a nigga up like he just caught bronchitis Best line of your whole spit.. This kid moved to Washington D.C. so he could call himself a wizzard This nerd aint intimidating....hes about as dangerous as running with scissors Eh, ok... I figure he'll lose interest in this battle and go read some magic spells Mage dreams of conjuring skills but from what ive seen it doesnt seem to help Ha.....word... Keep asking yourself if all this rap shits worth it when you cant do text right You just werent cut out for it..........like a Gingerbread Mans sex life Good... I get my main entertainment from watchin you try to make up a statement You just barely scrapin by...............like the people that shovel pavements Good punch combo... Im humble with my greatness while you're just blasphemous with your wackness Only 'tricks' that this magician pulls: Little girls from soccer practice Ha..... Eye-lash out at this ass clown before he has a chance to back down Within a blink of an eye you'll KNOW lyric got 'smashed' like white trash dads passed out Sick... No contest, Dose just steamrolled mage, punchlines were great, this battle was so one-sided, it's almost unfair.... RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=186523 |
Voted For: O.V.Dose
Aii here it is ............ OVdose Aii Yu came with a good drop pretty decent structure fell off at on etime but still it was a good drop nuttin really spectaculaur but yet enough to take the win so basically you take this battle for comin witha punch and a few personals but not nuttin really all dat Lyrical mage Aii Man Your lines were vcery basic i dint see any punchez and def not any personals so i dont think that you should get this win becuase you need to come with some punchez and if not a punch then atleast a personal .....so you didnt drop any of those and if any which one? so plainly and simple you didnt drop all that OV DOse wins this battle RTF in the link in my sig |
Aiight lets get some more votes on this, favors will be returned shortly
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Voted For: O.V.Dose
v/ O.V.Dose EXPLANATION: O.V.Dose took it in every category....da dude is creative as hell....for example.... Keep asking yourself if all this rap shits worth it when you cant do text right You just werent cut out for it..........like a Gingerbread Mans sex life ^^very nice Im humble with my greatness while you're just blasphemous with your wackness Only 'tricks' that this magician pulls: Little girls from soccer practice ^^tight ass personal OPENER - O.V. MIDDLE - O.V. CLOSER - O.V. Mage u went on and on about nothin....nothin really connected....creativity was BLAH....u had no direct hits fam why you takin over doses come on tell'em whats up did you lose money in a battle and now you bankrupt ^^terrible overall O.V. had personals, creativity, punches, wordplay(not by much) down packed...da middle portion of his verse took it tho....return da favor in any battle...1 |
Voted For: O.V.Dose
This kid moved to Washington D.C. so he could call himself a wizzard This nerd aint intimidating....hes about as dangerous as running with scissors 6/10...nice punches but not the best they coulda been I figure he'll lose interest in this battle and go read some magic spells Mage dreams of conjuring skills but from what ive seen it doesnt seem to help 5/10...wasnt feeling these lines Keep asking yourself if all this rap shits worth it when you cant do text right You just werent cut out for it..........like a Gingerbread Mans sex life 8/10...haha, this was great, if the first line was better this wooda been a 9 I get my main entertainment from watchin you try to make up a statement You just barely scrapin by...............like the people that shovel pavements 6/10...decent punches Im humble with my greatness while you're just blasphemous with your wackness Only 'tricks' that this magician pulls: Little girls from soccer practice 6/10...second line made up for the first Eye-lash out at this ass clown before he has a chance to back down Within a blink of an eye you'll KNOW lyric got 'smashed' like white trash dads passed out 6/10, lol funny 74% im about to give this man a dose of his own reality send in the medic we about to have another casualty 4/10...wack opener homie why you takin over doses come on tell'em whats up did you lose money in a battle and now you bankrupt 5/10...still not feelin it naw, come on now people this is the mcee o v dose then up on battles this nigga rather up on his posts man should be a scientist and make a autobiography after a few punches he will be a master in craniology 5/10 wasnt feelin this clusterso then he can get a scholarship and go to a college wackass state a place where you cant get knowllege(look at where hes from) 6/10...getting better yo from the looks of this verse i know im the tightest i just flamed a nigga up like he just caught bronchitis 6/10...decent closer 52% mage, just work on your structure and punches, cuz they werent hittin hard at all in this battle...nice verse by o.v., im impressed...this battle wasnt as close as i thoguht it wood be v/o.v.dose rtf |
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