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Lil Roach vs da Illest!!
Battle Rules: 6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting and etc.......... :thumbup: 3 to 0 votes - tko :gfy: 4 to 1 votes - over ~wun~ Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-30-05 at 11:38 AM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. |
da Illest!! has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-28-05 01:27 PM.
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Lil Roach has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-28-05 04:50 PM.
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If you thought you was gunna win then im sorry to diminish ya hopes
I don't understimate cats but 4 days?? r u some kind of joke... Don't get cocky or you'll feel my knuckles like my name was sonic.. i hope they vote this but if they don't its coz its got ya name on it Lil roach is a faggart, a dumb prik who should stop wit the rhymes dude u can't call me dumb coz im not the one who posts 4 days fa 6 lines.... |
if u go over 6 homeboy then ya disqualified...................................... ................
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6 line cool
aight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~wun~ |
hurry up n drop i dropped yesterday. took me like 5 mins to type up its only 6 lines man
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nigga snap crackle and pop ya ass or stomp on like you was a beatle//
u post n bitch slapped wanting a battle so now i'm bout ta slaughter u like were cattle// i'm a pirate kill'n u wit a paddle so now i'm riden ya girl like she's a horse w/o saddle// i'm baby'n ya ass by given you a rattle, so tell on me ya tiddle taddle// i'm suckn ya gurls tities while u suck on a bottle// so i'm put'n yo ass ta sleep while me and yo gurl cuddle, i'm done so dont cry a puddle// |
yo homie ma computa is broke sorry it took me so long
g/l though took me 10 min since im a slow typer |
uppin dis shit
start peeps aight ~wun~ also i dont think a did so well |
upin dis noob need
ya'll votes 2b a vet ~Wun~ thanx |
This was feedback posted for da Illest!!
good shyt... once he comes out of the P.I.T.s he'll be back to beat you... it's obvious that you won this one... but the young jedi starts his training with the prophets... so keep ya skills sharpened and eyes and ears open
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Voted For: da Illest!!
yo this battle was alright roach you came weak as hell and did not rhyme to much but i'll give you a b for effort but my vote goes to ill cause he had good structure and some good ass punches vote: da illist Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
cheers man uppin this....................................all votes will be retuned
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Voted For: Lil Roach
LMAO man that was a fuckin hilarious flow da illest-shiiiiiiiiiit bitch up yo vocab and up everything hoe. yo flow is ridiculous and that shit dont even make sense. you must be called da illest cuz you make everybody throw up when they hear yo rhymes cuz they SUCK roach- LMAo yo openeer was funny as hell....but come at him dont make fun of his girl. yo flow was iight and yo ender was tight and funny |
Voted For: da Illest!!
-da Illest!!- If you thought you was gunna win then im sorry to diminish ya hopes I don't understimate cats but 4 days?? r u some kind of joke... ^^^^ 9/10 hahaha... good opener and personal Don't get cocky or you'll feel my knuckles like my name was sonic.. i hope they vote this but if they don't its coz its got ya name on it ^^^^ 8/10 like the wordplay in first line... second line was a decent hit Lil roach is a faggart, a dumb prik who should stop wit the rhymes dude u can't call me dumb coz im not the one who posts 4 days fa 6 lines.... ^^^^ 7/10 good hit and closer... but you already mentioned the 4 days 24/30 = %80 -Lil Roach- nigga snap crackle and pop ya ass or stomp on like you was a beatle// u post n bitch slapped wanting a battle so now i'm bout ta slaughter u like were cattle// ^^^^ 7/10 didnt like the first line... second line was ok i'm a pirate kill'n u wit a paddle so now i'm riden ya girl like she's a horse w/o saddle// i'm baby'n ya ass by given you a rattle, so tell on me ya tiddle taddle// ^^^^ 7/10 good first line... wasnt feeling the second line... sorry i'm suckn ya gurls tities while u suck on a bottle// so i'm put'n yo ass ta sleep while me and yo gurl cuddle, i'm done so dont cry a puddle// ^^^^ 8/10 good closer... second line a little stretched 22/30 = %73 Vote: da Illest!! **no hate to either of you, just honest opinion** http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=189109 ^^^^^^need some honest votes^^^^^^ |
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Voted For: da Illest!!
Imma go wit illest merely because his verse rhymed....I meaned if you're gonna rap you need rhyme....and u got it illest...good work kid....ok....rtf in my battle vs. Metaphor v/Illest...for flow and rhyme and punches...rtf man! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for Lil Roach
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u need'a improve ya structure fam. ................................. ................................. ^^^ have ya bars set out like that, line after line, an try making the lines a similiar size.... |
Voted For: Lil Roach
It was close but I choose Lil Roach i like the beginning and it kinda fell off from there |
Voted For: da Illest!!
illest is gettin the win in this battle. his stuff was just hotter. |
uppin fo mo votes
com on peeps start vot'n ~wun~ |
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Voted For: da Illest!!
Dont really like short battles like this that much cause you cant really break it down. But imma have to go with illest on this one cause his punches were just hittin harder. Both weren't all that creatve but illest was more consistent. vote: da Illest!! |
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Voted For: da Illest!!
Aii I dont Know much About Either Of you But I Can Say That You Both need some elevation NO HATE Jus Statin That Your prolly Already Know But If I had to give my vote to anybody in this battle it would be .....Da Illest....Basically Bcuz He came with much more stronger punchez and then he kept his structure in Neat order and his rymes was on although his flow fell off at the end but anyway I feel that he takes this battle RTF any battle Link in my Sig |
Voted For: da Illest!!
Diz Wuznt Da Titest Battle I Ever Saw, Both Culd Use Sum Elevation In Da Creativity Ov Da Punchlinez & Lil Roach Dont Strech Yo Linez Lyke Dat Cuzz, Makez Yo Shit Have No Flow And Harder 2 Read, But Fo I Guess Da Better Punchez An Da Better Structured Verse, Da Illest Getz Mah Vote Plz Return Da Favor In Mah Signature |
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