PreZidict vs Tycoon
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding
No Pre-Writtens
No Unexplained Votes

Lets go...........

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 04-28-05 at 08:44 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

PreZidict has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-28-05 08:15 PM.

Tycoon has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-28-05 08:36 PM.

Tycoon liftin techs?? no, he only beats when listenin 2 techno
pee'd on apartment buildings cuz he want a COMPLEX-FLOW!
he aint allowed 2 curse..when he high i'm puttin a hex-low
u a ugly kid, every birds-afraid of ya face u fuckin scare-crow!

homie u frail!, bein born 2 da devil dont mean u da fetus of hell
how could i fail?, must be a known smoker..he's no virgin to L's!*
ya losses surmount in abundance, whats his rank.....0 outta 100
like abducted deaths...might have 3 wins but u still ain nothin!**

ya rhymes aint brilliant, livin in portland they still wont blaze***
faggot stuck his dick in a obstacle n still couldnt be FUCKIN A"MAZED"****
u have no brains, so my last bar'll slip ya mind like clumsy thoughts
neva knew a person could slob themselves..til dis retard sucked himself off!


*smokers always high, therefore he not a virgin 2 L's...(L's = losses) he always losin
**when ppl bodies abducted afta they die theres "nothin" to be found...no trace...he won 3 battles but it means "nothin"
***portland trail-blazers...an nba team
****his dicks in a obstacle...an obstacle can be a maze...a dick fucks somethin...u should get it now...read it twice

by excepting this battle you apperrantly have wild imagination
your skills is weak and like bill murray, lost in translation
i'm beatin' you into submission, like im spittin' wit verbal bullwhips
thinkin' you gon win is justa hallucination, like you on acid trips
my words will devoure your dome lik sum fuckin head lice
this aint no rap battle this a stick-up a regular win heist
becuz ya punches "half-baked", take that fairytale shit back to tha bakersman
you mad cuz ya justa tran, tryin' cut off sum balls like dude from tha ladies man
your skill couldn't be fly if you was a fuckin' bald eagle
even ya wordplay is under me, and can never be "Equal
your text mathmatically incorrect like infinity replicated
your brain is ment to contain small shit like car seats

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Voted For: PreZidict

ok tycoon big words dont help when you have no personals or punches to back them up then they just waste space and fuck your flow up you had no good puncvhes personals or good disses and them things win battles 2/10
prez you had good punches here some i feel couldve been worded better but still came accross pretty decent.structure was ok fix it up a little vocab was decent but you won where its counts with much better punches and disses more personals would help but are unneeded when you outclassed ty so badly with punches here 6/10

thanks for votin.................uppin for moves votes.....................

ayo these battles MADDDDDDDDD old..........vote up on these shits i want em closed!

ayo this battles hella old....can yall vote so it can close?

ayo uppin this old shit too............................................... .............................early!

This was feedback posted for PreZidict
 

These niggas weak on RV, now y'all got tha truth/
Every thing I spit sick, like I got tha Flu/
Y'all wanna battle me, then do what you got to do/
Before I give you more shots than a doctor do/
EASY

Tell PreZidict to battle me so I can bite his fuckin head off

Voted For: PreZidict

Prezidict

Tycoon liftin techs?? no, he only beats when listenin 2 techno
pee'd on apartment buildings cuz he want a COMPLEX-FLOW!

Ehh, this didnt hit to hard. It had a nice flow though. Alright opener I guess.

he aint allowed 2 curse..when he high i'm puttin a hex-low
u a ugly kid, every birds-afraid of ya face u fuckin scare-crow!

Again, this didnt hit hard. You needed to be more creative here and come with a deeper punch. Pretty average shit here.

homie u frail!, bein born 2 da devil dont mean u da fetus of hell
how could i fail?, must be a known smoker..he's no virgin to L's!*

Lol..this was alright. Nothing too complex but it hit. Alitte humorous so this was OK.

ya losses surmount in abundance, whats his rank.....0 outta 100
like abducted deaths...might have 3 wins but u still ain nothin!**

This was alright. Nothing too amazing.

ya rhymes aint brilliant, livin in portland they still wont blaze***
faggot stuck his dick in a obstacle n still couldnt be FUCKIN A"MAZED"****

Well, this was complex but it didnt really hit as a punch. Average.

u have no brains, so my last bar'll slip ya mind like clumsy thoughts
neva knew a person could slob themselves..til dis retard sucked himself off!

Lol..what the hell? OK finisher.

Tycoon

by excepting this battle you apperrantly have wild imagination
your skills is weak and like bill murray, lost in translation

No..this had real bad wording and bad spelling too lol. SHould have reworded this.

i'm beatin' you into submission, like im spittin' wit verbal bullwhips
thinkin' you gon win is justa hallucination, like you on acid trips

This didnt flow at all really. Should have had something else here. A some wordplay or something like that because this didnt hit.

my words will devoure your dome lik sum fuckin head lice
this aint no rap battle this a stick-up a regular win heist

Not bad..nothing too creative here actually. It just wasnt bad.

becuz ya punches "half-baked", take that fairytale shit back to tha bakersman
you mad cuz ya justa tran, tryin' cut off sum balls like dude from tha ladies man

Man and man dont flow together.

your skill couldn't be fly if you was a fuckin' bald eagle
even ya wordplay is under me, and can never be "Equal

Wack.

your text mathmatically incorrect like infinity replicated
your brain is ment to contain small shit like car seats

Uhh, no. This didnt flow at all. Weak finisher.

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Well there really aint any need for further explaination. Prezidict took this easily.

Vote- Prezidict

Voted For: PreZidict

PreZidict : u got some fucking dope punch's in there...wow..



Tycoon liftin techs?? no, he only beats when listenin 2 techno
pee'd on apartment buildings cuz he want a COMPLEX-FLOW!

wow nice first line it was creative

he aint allowed 2 curse..when he high i'm puttin a hex-low
u a ugly kid, every birds-afraid of ya face u fuckin scare-crow!

dope last line man...very imaginative...

homie u frail!, bein born 2 da devil dont mean u da fetus of hell
how could i fail?, must be a known smoker..he's no virgin to
L's!*

haha lol word

ya losses surmount in abundance, whats his rank.....0 outta 100
like abducted deaths...might have 3 wins but u still ain nothin!**

mmmm

ya rhymes aint brilliant, livin in portland they still wont blaze***
faggot stuck his dick in a obstacle n still couldnt be FUCKIN A"MAZED"****

haha worddddd!

u have no brains, so my last bar'll slip ya mind like clumsy thoughts
neva knew a person could slob themselves..til dis retard sucked himself off!

LMAO yeah this was fucking fucky loll

damn this was dope;

vote : PreZidict

Voted For: PreZidict

Tycoon liftin techs?? no, he only beats when listenin 2 techno
pee'd on apartment buildings cuz he want a COMPLEX-FLOW!
aight
he aint allowed 2 curse..when he high i'm puttin a hex-low
u a ugly kid, every birds-afraid of ya face u fuckin scare-crow!
decent
homie u frail!, bein born 2 da devil dont mean u da fetus of hell
how could i fail?, must be a known smoker..he's no virgin to L's!*
wack shit
ya losses surmount in abundance, whats his rank.....0 outta 100
like abducted deaths...might have 3 wins but u still ain nothin!**
good
ya rhymes aint brilliant, livin in portland they still wont blaze***
faggot stuck his dick in a obstacle n still couldnt be FUCKIN A"MAZED"****
meh, weak
u have no brains, so my last bar'll slip ya mind like clumsy thoughts
neva knew a person could slob themselves..til dis retard sucked himself off!
coo closer

by excepting this battle you apperrantly have wild imagination
your skills is weak and like bill murray, lost in translation
nope
i'm beatin' you into submission, like im spittin' wit verbal bullwhips
thinkin' you gon win is justa hallucination, like you on acid trips
okay
my words will devoure your dome lik sum fuckin head lice
this aint no rap battle this a stick-up a regular win heist
weak
becuz ya punches "half-baked", take that fairytale shit back to tha bakersman
you mad cuz ya justa tran, tryin' cut off sum balls like dude from tha ladies man
decent
your skill couldn't be fly if you was a fuckin' bald eagle
even ya wordplay is under me, and can never be "Equal
nah
your text mathmatically incorrect like infinity replicated
your brain is ment to contain small shit like car seats
wack closer

Prez took this one.. just had way harder punches than
Tycoon. here.. ty elevate on ur punches & fix your structure
& maybe add some personas in there like what Prez did..
but overall though.. tyc.. elevate more

lmao good looks @ all da niggas who voted 4 me...plz uppin this 4 da last vote

Voted For: PreZidict

by excepting this battle you apperrantly have wild imagination
your skills is weak and like bill murray, lost in translation
^^^OK......4/10
i'm beatin' you into submission, like im spittin' wit verbal bullwhips
thinkin' you gon win is justa hallucination, like you on acid trips
^^^1st line glorified,2nd ight....4/10
my words will devoure your dome lik sum fuckin head lice
this aint no rap battle this a stick-up a regular win heist
^^^whack.......2/10
becuz ya punches "half-baked", take that fairytale shit back to tha bakersman
you mad cuz ya justa tran, tryin' cut off sum balls like dude from tha ladies man
^^^OK.....5/10
your skill couldn't be fly if you was a fuckin' bald eagle
even ya wordplay is under me, and can never be "Equal
^^^suks....3/10
your text mathmatically incorrect like infinity replicated
your brain is ment to contain small shit like car seats
^^^whack...2/10

Flow was ight.U need to make your shit more creative.U structured ur verse OK.But ur problem was punches.They just didn't hit hard.Try puttin personal and add werdplay/metas.

Tycoon liftin techs?? no, he only beats when listenin 2 techno
pee'd on apartment buildings cuz he want a COMPLEX-FLOW!
^^^Nice.......7/10
he aint allowed 2 curse..when he high i'm puttin a hex-low
u a ugly kid, every birds-afraid of ya face u fuckin scare-crow!
^^nah........3/10
homie u frail!, bein born 2 da devil dont mean u da fetus of hell
how could i fail?, must be a known smoker..he's no virgin to L's!*
^^This didn;t hit hard.........2/10
ya losses surmount in abundance, whats his rank.....0 outta 100
like abducted deaths...might have 3 wins but u still ain nothin!**
^^OK.......6/10
ya rhymes aint brilliant, livin in portland they still wont blaze***
faggot stuck his dick in a obstacle n still couldnt be FUCKIN A"MAZED"****
^^a lil basic,this used too much....4/10
u have no brains, so my last bar'll slip ya mind like clumsy thoughts
neva knew a person could slob themselves..til dis retard sucked himself off!
^^^OK.............5/10

U had some Ok punches.But some were played like a-maze one.At times you were to basic like the scarecrow one.Flow was ight.Structure was good.Punches were mediocre.The first punch was the best one.

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