Murdz vs morse code
 

Battle Rules:

10-Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

THE JURY VS LIVING LEGEND'Z


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morse code has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-29-05 09:25 PM.

Murdz has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-30-05 08:16 AM.

after 'c' and 'd' unfairness of this battle i can safely weakly 'disc' you
try to 'guess whos' better than you 'sorry' do you need a 'clue'
my 'flows' 'cummin' 'hard' but not from the 'head' on my 'dik'
learn your table mannerz before you try to eat this beef 'kid'
you always 'have a fit' about votes like 'gettin sized for your clothes'
you couldnt 'attract' replies to your open mics if you were 'up in the poles'
stuck in a dead pose ill have murd in the er permanently zzz-ng
your skill must be 'sinken' cuz theres no talent that m 'ccc-ing'
only time your keys make sumthin freeze is when you hit pause
tryin to spit youll end up with sum coffin cuz without 'respect' i murdered murdz 'aus'

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guess who,sorry,and clue are all board games
you flow/freestyle from your head
MCing=i'm seeing=seaing
check the link in last line

Fuck Tha Jury Bitchez...

Murdz Straight Dissen, Got Your 'Head Gripped Tight' As I Put Ya Mind In Submission
My Clip Is Hissin, And Im no 'Weak Body Builder' But Ill Have This Heavyweight Missing
you claim to be ill but yet you fail to show signs
Prolly thinkin Im the snitch type the way I'll be with the 5-0 in no time*
bitch Im Your Real Maker, its Like A 'Bird Fetish' The Way i always catch u duckin in the act
And My Gat! It Will Leave Ya 'Spine Wide Open' Cause 'The Jury' Is Never Gaurding Ya Back
Morse I hope that verse wasnt the 'textin skill' that you raved bout
Be Forreal...Ya 'school clothes' is prolly the only 'match you've laid out'
Face it, Like Farmers thats mad at donkeys...you'll get ya 'ass kicked'
Cuz Battlin Murdz is a 'grave mistake' like 'funeral homes accidently switchin caskets'


* - 5-0 is the votes ima win by...lol

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

Aiight aiight......................uppin..........

uppin, this, ayo, my last line the link wuz to show his profile, on location it said

location-respect....,aus

^ but he changed his profile......................

lol... yeah dat true.. good battle homie... :thumbup:

^^ Ye ye not hate from us the jury, to you living legend'z.........

yaeh homie.. aiight uppin this ish..... lets go....

Voted For: morse code

ok this was REALLY weak battle. Both y'all both need to elevate. But here's breakdown:

Morse:
you always 'have a fit' about votes like 'gettin sized for your clothes'
you couldnt 'attract' replies to your open mics if you were 'up in the poles'
stuck in a dead pose ill have murd in the er permanently zzz-ng
your skill must be 'sinken' cuz theres no talent that m 'ccc-ing'

v.s

Murdz:
Morse I hope that verse wasnt the 'textin skill' that you raved bout
Be Forreal...Ya 'school clothes' is prolly the only 'match you've laid out'

basically, not many dope punches in this. Both had flow and structure, good, but you both need to work on makin' your punches much harder. Morse had more harder hitting ones. Like I liked that poles line. good shit. Morse gets this. no hate. pc one.

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This was feedback posted for morse code
 

polls bitches.....................................

Voted For: morse code

checkin da polls..uppin also......................

Vote removed

fuck me......get that vote removed please...im like real fuckin tired from work and im like fuckin half asleep im real sorry bout that guys......

This was feedback posted for Murdz
 

Who this was a nice battle, but murdz got off...I dunno...I think murdz is taken it.... :)


Good drop murdz

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

morse got da win on diz one fo show he hasd da better punchlinez, da better metaphorz an all roun dbetter verse murdz yo linez wuz stretched in placez n da punchez waznt as hard an personal so my vote goez 2 morse

^^ Word.............uppin for some votes.............................

This was feedback posted for Murdz
 

after 'c' and 'd' unfairness of this battle i can safely weakly 'disc' you
try to 'guess whos' better than you 'sorry' do you need a 'clue'
eh.....
my 'flows' 'cummin' 'hard' but not from the 'head' on my 'dik'
learn your table mannerz before you try to eat this beef 'kid'
ok.....
you always 'have a fit' about votes like 'gettin sized for your clothes'
you couldnt 'attract' replies to your open mics if you were 'up in the poles'
ok....
stuck in a dead pose ill have murd in the er permanently zzz-ng
your skill must be 'sinken' cuz theres no talent that m 'ccc-ing'
eh.....
only time your keys make sumthin freeze is when you hit pause
tryin to spit youll end up with sum coffin cuz without 'respect' i murdered murdz 'aus'
ok personal/closer..

Murdz Straight Dissen, Got Your 'Head Gripped Tight' As I Put Ya Mind In Submission
My Clip Is Hissin, And Im no 'Weak Body Builder' But Ill Have This Heavyweight Missing
eh.......
you claim to be ill but yet you fail to show signs
Prolly thinkin Im the snitch type the way I'll be with the 5-0 in no time*
ok.......
bitch Im Your Real Maker, its Like A 'Bird Fetish' The Way i always catch u duckin in the act
And My Gat! It Will Leave Ya 'Spine Wide Open' Cause 'The Jury' Is Never Gaurding Ya Back
good......
Morse I hope that verse wasnt the 'textin skill' that you raved bout
Be Forreal...Ya 'school clothes' is prolly the only 'match you've laid out'
original....
Face it, Like Farmers thats mad at donkeys...you'll get ya 'ass kicked'
Cuz Battlin Murdz is a 'grave mistake' like 'funeral homes accidently switchin caskets'
good closer....

morse.......some forced lines, wasn't feeling your punches...flow was aight, 2 ok bars, rest was pretty weak..

Murdz, ok spit...got off to a slow start, but some good verses in there, some original punches....




Can't vote because of post count, but RTF, I've got about 3 battles up...

Uppin............................................. ..........................

yo mayne.. i didnt do as well as i coulda on this verse.. shoulda tried harda.. but damn my basketball takin all my time at the moment.. play 2 games a week train the other 5 days...

yo WTF!!! y you removin all my fuckin votes that shit was explained, wtf, i see how it is....ight then

Yo murdz why you removed them votes man?................They were explained, but it's w.e.

I asked them to take off judicials vote, and they took em all off. They were unexplained according to the mod's or whoever do that job, so leave it at that.

i believe u though cuz they do that to me too sumtimes, but next time ill just get it remi=oved....sry didnt realize judicial vited accidentally, but w/e.....uppin

yo man. i did nothin i came back here after bball and all votes were gone.. i said nothin...

Yo uppin...........................................

uppin.............................././././././././

uppin for sume muthafuckin votes on thsi mutherfuckah

This was feedback posted for Murdz
 

checkin tha polls............................................. ..........

uppin fuh suhm muh fuhckin votes..................

Voted For: Murdz

votin for murdz


murdz got his due to a more creative verse and a much better series of punches and personals

Murdz
punches- damn fam hard hittin punches they were very creative
personals- creatvie and hard hittin as well
flow- ncie flow i was feelin it
strucutre a lil choppy coulda bee better
multies- good use of multies

nice verse
i was feelin ya punches like mad and the creativeness

morse
Punches- nice but all over the place
personals- descent personals nuttin special
flow- good flow i liked it
multies- didnt see any elevate on those
structure good strcutre easy to keep with

if ya punches would have been a lil more on point u woulda had my vote

but murdz was way harder n way mopre creative

so vote goes to murdz

good battle fams

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Voted For: morse code

bah, both were weak

murdz...you really need to work on structure man, still stretching lines and it takes away from effectivness of punches, couple self-glore lines in there....attempted at being creative, some punches just came off as weak though....nothing really complex, everything was too simple and i didn't really enjoy reading your verse....keep up though

morse, umm, you had a few punches i laughed at, but a few that were totally whack....opener was good, cept for the set-up line which could have been worded a little better....some stuff you had good ideas, but poor ass wordplay fucked em up, really need to work on that....and vocab, both yall need to elevate with that....you two were basically tied in this, cept morse had better structure/flow and had a few better disses/more punches connected....so going off that....

v/morse code

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vote, you fuckin bitches, damn, lets get this shit voted on..........