::..:$lobK::..: vs CA$per
 

Battle Rules:

10- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

THE JURY VS LIVING LEGEND'Z

G-LUCK

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 05-02-05 at 09:20 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

::..:$lobK::..: has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-05 02:27 AM.

CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-05 02:43 PM.

thing is this guys obese,he just adds a k at tha end....
either that or you find spellin to hard to comprehend.....
2 dayz to drop dogg,man u sure u aint illiterite....
u let me battle u and u great aha aint u consederate...
uh-oh hear comez tha expected,"dog your a friendly ghost"....
what tha fukk is this a contest,on who can say it tha most.....
dogg yer styles CRAMPED,u either a bitch or a fag…..
tha only time u “SHED BLOOD”is when u on yo monthly rag
This guys in tha jury, but guy is more like judge judy…..
Dogg u dreamin,get yo fam to kiss u sleepin beauty….

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

Slobk: Okay your verse was cool. Most of your lines werent that great. You need to work on wording you meta's better and getting some witty punches. But you elevating so its all good. You had 2 bars that were decent. The flow was alright in yah verse. Just keep working at it.

Stupid Fag..Yo I Have Never Seen An Ignorant Fool This Bad!!!..
"Snype Ur Home" Away From U..So U Have "No Room" To Brag..
Push Me? Makin Me "Break A Tear" Is Da Only Way Ull "Move Me"..
U Don Get Pussy..Cuz Casper Only Gets Bitches In Movies!!!..

Vs.

Casper: Your verse was a smoother read without all those ' ' things around the words and shit. So thats a plus. Flow was good throughout. Punches were more direct than his and hit harder. Same amount of quotables but yours were better.

uh-oh hear comez tha expected,"dog your a friendly ghost"....
what tha fukk is this a contest,on who can say it tha most.....
thing is this guys obese,he just adds a k at tha end....
either that or you find spellin to hard to comprehend.....

v/ Ca$per

And yes i know i cant vote but please hit up the battle in my sig since I took time to read this and leave an honest vote/feedback

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

just checkin the poll./............................

This was feedback posted for ::..:$lobK::..:
 

Aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight let get some votes..............

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

Nice ass battle b/w bof yall
i like all tha punches n personals hit 4 bof yall
cant vote b/c of cru
but good battle
uppin dis 4 fam
uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

It Was One-Sided..Casper U Suck Man..I Aint Even Try On This Battle Cus

This was feedback posted for ::..:$lobK::..:
 

Casper- Opener= Good personal..got the Yao reference..
2nd bar- OK meta...
3rd bar- Ha..
4th bar- Good personal..
5th bar- Eh, closer doesn't really matter...

Casper- OK opener
2nd bar, ok wordplay..
3rd bar- didnt advance the battle..
4th bar- really played
5th bar- personal was ok, but line was dull..

Just feeling the flow and metas on Slob's...personals weren't strained, they were actually pretty funny...Casper's was ok just some played lines and a few stalls that seemed like filler instead of punches...

Just honest feed since I can't vote..

My bad, first feed was for Slobz..............................

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

checkin pollls.................................../

Yo can we plz get some votes........I'll the mista will return favor, word.

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

polls i be checkin........................................... ...

And I will too...On my other name of course. Aliases arent even all that fun.


:banghead:

Waisted my time.

uppin this for votes yall .....favours will be returned

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

viewin pollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzz zzzzzzz

uppin for vots yall com on .........................

This was feedback posted for ::..:$lobK::..:
 

checkin polls/......................................

uppin for votes yall com on ill return tha favour immediatly......

Alright let's get some damn votes yo......................

Uppin Dis Battle..Lets Get Sum Votes Yo.................

Voted For: CA$per

Easy decision here... Casper takes this win..

SLobk-Ya opener ruined ya verse for me.. no punch in it, and didn't really have nothin goin for it.. the rest of ya verse was aiite.. you coulda had some more personals, but i liked ya last 4 lines..The closer was nice, a good personal, but like Casper said we seen it comin, cuz the ghost lines is gettin old against him.. overall you weren't bad, jus coulda had some more personals and stronger punches..

Casper- Nice verse from you.. kept it simple, but still nice lines.. Opener was nice, funny line and good personal, and 3rd line was nice, jus the end of the bar was wack.. I liked the line about "friendly ghost" but it wasn't a diss, jus took away the effect of his personal.. The monthly rag line was good but played, and the last bar was decent, but u said Guy too many times.. still a pretty nice bar.. Overall you had nice punches, and some nice personals, especially in the opener which killed it for u.. Nice verse

Overall Casper takes this with stronger personals, and just harder punches, better disses to his opponent.. but nice verses from both..

V/Casper

uppin this battle yall com on dont be shy ill return tha favour

This was feedback posted for ::..:$lobK::..:
 

checkin the pollz..........slobk got this one/////

fukk outta here looks like it ehh homie lmao uppin 1-0 casper yeye

uppin again com on yall hit this so we can see tha victor since tha jury is underestamating me fer no reason so com on vote and leave a link ill RTF

Voted For: CA$per

slobk your shit was streched here no punches at all ill snype your home?wtf thats horrible sun thats no punch you need to work on that and up your vocab at least typing in diffrent fonts and colors wont hide your shits streched here in parts and has no flow to it one personal is played as fuck on him so that dont count either punches and personals win battles and you have none 2/10
casper not much better but good enough nice structure decent flow to it punches werent anything great but at least you had them and that wins battles personals was decent here vocab good as well so with better punches personals and just bout everything else you get my vote 5/10
rtf on link in sig

Voted For: CA$per

thing is this guys obese,he just adds a k at tha end....
either that or you find spellin to hard to comprehend.....
^^^
first bar had me like ''ooh''....good shit

2 dayz to drop dogg,man u sure u aint illiterite....
u let me battle u and u great aha aint u consederate...
^^^
naaah, aint feelin dat.

uh-oh hear comez tha expected,"dog your a friendly ghost"....
what tha fukk is this a contest,on who can say it tha most....
^^^
that was aight, i could see ya idea, maybe could of worded it a little better

dogg yer styles CRAMPED,u either a bitch or a fag…..
tha only time u “SHED BLOOD”is when u on yo monthly rag
^^^
pretty played punch, but u served well enuff ta have an effective

This guys in tha jury, but guy is more like judge judy…..
Dogg u dreamin,get yo fam to kiss u sleepin beauty….
^^^
LOL, Had me laughin, nice shit.

Casper:
pretty good verse, some played concepts, but u worded them ta your effect, good shit.....maybe could of added a little more on the personal side, but u still got my vote, fa sho.

Slob:
Casper? Such Creativity..Besides Urself, Hoo U Think Feelin U G?
High Losses..Like NBA Centers U Cant Win If U Always Friendly B
^^
naw, aint feelin dat at all, first line had no effect an the second is not a good concept ta roll with

Stupid Fag..Yo I Have Never Seen An Ignorant Fool This Bad!!!..
"Snype Ur Home" Away From U..So U Have "No Room" To Brag..
^^^
okay, the second line had me like ''oooh''...definately the best u had ta offer.

Casper's Waitin For Action To Occur..Like Kids In College Dorms..
Dis "Livin Legend" Makes "Dead Inspirations" Glad Dat Dey Gone..
^^^
c'mon man, u had a killer bar in the previous one, then ya dropped this, the second line seemed a little forced, but only u know if it was or not, mine is just an opinnon lol

A Win? Homie Like "Loose Holes" U Besta Believe I'm "Nailin It"..
Tranz$ferred To Casper, To Try N Win More Matches Wit An Alias..*
^^^
that was an okay openin line, i was like yea somthin hot is comin...an it didnt, the second line had no meaning what so ever

Push Me? Makin Me "Break A Tear" Is Da Only Way Ull "Move Me"..
U Don Get Pussy..Cuz Casper Only Gets Bitches In Movies!!!..**
^^^
very weak closer homie, the first line is kinda dissin yourself sayin he can make u cry lol....an the closer is just...well no, u shouldnt have used it lol

Slob:
ya verse had some okay wordplay, but the personals an punches just didnt hit

you had the highligh of the battle with that ''no room ta brag'' line, but you didnt have enuff consistancy throughout....casper came a little basic, but his shit had more consistancy an he stayed on point with the disses, so my vote goes ta casper.

uppin this for votes yall favour will be returned...

upp to tha top cheaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...................

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

checkin polls...........................................

bump to tha ma-fukkin top get sum honest votes up in here please close this shit chea

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

casper u had a spark when ya started but now ya just garbage lol...

casper:
thing is this guys obese,he just adds a k at tha end....
either that or you find spellin to hard to comprehend.....
^^VERY WEAK OPENER FAM...
2 dayz to drop dogg,man u sure u aint illiterite....
u let me battle u and u great aha aint u consederate...
^^^DID NOT RYHME....
uh-oh hear comez tha expected,"dog your a friendly ghost"....
what tha fukk is this a contest,on who can say it tha most.....
^^^LOL FUNNY THING IS HE DID SAY DAT FRIENDLY LINE..SO UMM I'LL SAY DIS BAR WAS OKAY
dogg yer styles CRAMPED,u either a bitch or a fag…..
tha only time u “SHED BLOOD”is when u on yo monthly rag
^^^^PERIOD PUNCHES R PLAYED OUT
This guys in tha jury, but guy is more like judge judy…..
Dogg u dreamin,get yo fam to kiss u sleepin beauty….
^^^LMAOOOO WHUT????...

slobk:
Casper? Such Creativity..Besides Urself, Hoo U Think Feelin U G?
High Losses..Like NBA Centers U Cant Win If U Always Friendly B
^^^^DA FRIENDLY GHOST LINE IS PLAYED FAM..AND HE SAID U WOULD SAY IT..
Stupid Fag..Yo I Have Never Seen An Ignorant Fool This Bad!!!..
"Snype Ur Home" Away From U..So U Have "No Room" To Brag..
^^^OKAY PUNCH..
Casper's Waitin For Action To Occur..Like Kids In College Dorms..
Dis "Livin Legend" Makes "Dead Inspirations" Glad Dat Dey Gone..
^^^LOL GOOD PERSONAL
A Win? Homie Like "Loose Holes" U Besta Believe I'm "Nailin It"..
Tranz$ferred To Casper, To Try N Win More Matches Wit An Alias..*
^^^ANOTHER GOOD PERSONAL/PUNCH
Push Me? Makin Me "Break A Tear" Is Da Only Way Ull "Move Me"..
U Don Get Pussy..Cuz Casper Only Gets Bitches In Movies!!!..**
^^LMAOOOO DOPE CLOSER...I LIKE DA PERSONALS

OKAY...UMM DIS WAS A VERY 1 SIDED BATTLE...SLOBK TOOK DIS IN EVERY CATAGORIE....CASPER STEP YA SHIT UP FAM SERIOUSLY CUZZ U SAID A WHOLE BUNCH OF NOTHIN NO CREATIVITY,PERSONALS YA WHOLE VERSE WAS FILLER...

RETURN DA FAVOR...IN MY BATTLE WITH TYPICAL...IF NOT DIS VOTE WILL BE TAKEN AWAY

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

jus chkin polls..........................................

Voted For: CA$per

casper took this one easy

casper had better vocab and a better flow . i wasn't really feeling the opener though but besides that i just thought your punches were more creative and were waaaay more original....just get your structure fixed make your lines equal out more

slobk you had a good verse and some good vocab but it was just a boring read over all and really didn't diss him all that much i know what you were trying to do but i just don't think you could convey it in the way you should have . anyways i just wasn't really feeling yours as much as caspers becuase of the lack of flow in it but it was still a nice drop

Voted For: CA$per

This was a pretty weak battle but ima have to gie this one to casper

Casper
thing is this guys obese,he just adds a k at tha end....
either that or you find spellin to hard to comprehend.....
Nice play off his name , but slob=Blood's
2 dayz to drop dogg,man u sure u aint illiterite....
u let me battle u and u great aha aint u consederate...
First line was good , then it fell off
uh-oh hear comez tha expected,"dog your a friendly ghost"....
what tha fukk is this a contest,on who can say it tha most.....
Decent
dogg yer styles CRAMPED,u either a bitch or a fag…..
tha only time u “SHED BLOOD”is when u on yo monthly rag
Pretty good, could have been worded better
This guys in tha jury, but guy is more like judge judy…..
Dogg u dreamin,get yo fam to kiss u sleepin beauty….
Pretty weak closer, could have been better

:..Slobk..:
Casper? Such Creativity..Besides Urself, Hoo U Think Feelin U G?
High Losses..Like NBA Centers U Cant Win If U Always Friendly B
Not really feelin it
Stupid Fag..Yo I Have Never Seen An Ignorant Fool This Bad!!!..
"Snype Ur Home" Away From U..So U Have "No Room" To Brag..
LOL, nice
Casper's Waitin For Action To Occur..Like Kids In College Dorms..
Dis "Livin Legend" Makes "Dead Inspirations" Glad Dat Dey Gone..
I dont think thats rhymes..could have been better
A Win? Homie Like "Loose Holes" U Besta Believe I'm "Nailin It"..
Tranz$ferred To Casper, To Try N Win More Matches Wit An Alias..*
Good personal ,and solid punch
Push Me? Makin Me "Break A Tear" Is Da Only Way Ull "Move Me"..
U Don Get Pussy..Cuz Casper Only Gets Bitches In Movies!!!..**
Pretty good closer, nice personals solid punch

[b]Slobk you would have one this if you just came alittle harder , you sorta feel off in the middle of your verse..and i just felt casper came harder... Overall vote Casper.. keep it up