Tony Green vs .:F.ate:.
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 05-02-05 at 11:40 PM

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.:F.ate:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-29-05 11:41 PM.

this wut u want nigga? u think u on my fuckin level lil ass cock barf dick in tha booty ass bitch?i cant even believe i’m doin this shit mayne. be real Tony u suck at life nigga God hates u.apologize 4 bein born. u should die now so we all get tha joy of pissin on ya grave. watch me murda this fuck ass nigga

I’m a beast my lyrics’ll eat u alive like u edible
my music’s impeccable envision me wreckin u
chin-checkin u deckin u with legible flow
leavin u unconscious on tha flo’ bitch nigga let’s go

^^ i’d slaughter him wit my damn warmup

i’ll lay a trigga town nigga down like tha maggot he is
slap him wit verbage, such herbage shouldn’t have any kids
ha….this hoe ass nigga’d sell his soul for my lyrical content
tony have a conscience and realize that beatin me is nonsense
ya punches couldn’t come close to hittin son, let alone hurt me
i could stop now and still end up 2-2 like a Tayshaun Prince jersey
u forever d/r E.F. hoe get off crew hopper we focused
fuck structure, even if slip off i’m right....back…. on before u notice
when i’m around u wont utter a peep if u feelin froggy then leap
matta fact fuck you send ya crew i’ll leave ya sheep dead in a heap
a little advice tone’ hang it up dawg quit rap ya effort is useless
meet up wit tha Q tha two of you can marry in Massachusetts



chea…..this nigga Phony Queen aint got shit on me.i aint even goin hard on him. Consider this a fuckin slap on tha wrist compared 2 wut I could do 2 u. I spit 24/7 bitch. in tha middle of tha night I spit nigga.in tha middle of tha night I spit, while u sleepin. Thas how u know I’m a fuckin nightmare in dis rap shit. U got no chance nigga. I’m done wit u…don’t say my name til u can get on some real shit mothafucka cuz u a damn bum…let this be a lesson 2 u. we out dis bitch.1.

Tony Green has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-30-05 08:23 AM.

iight this bitch ass nigga want it be ready to go 1-3 check it, check it.............

.:F.ate:. the pac wannaba always talkin bout what a gun will do.*
I took OneStep out of E.F. and went 10 feet beyond you.*
But this beef is pointless lets not take it any farther.
So I'm just gone bomb one of Emerica's Finest like he was Pearl Harbor.
If you look at his aviator it says ready for whatever.
Paw Paw hear them shots you wasn't ready for that bereatta.
Nigga you's a Kid so stay playing with the Nets.**
Cause I'm gone sweep you 4-0 and move on to the next.**
No disrespect you doing what you doing just to get by.
"I said you was hot" so people call Tony Green a lie.
Livin' Legendz straight merk leave bitches in the dirt.
Your flowing is out of style like Fubu shirts.
.:F.ate:. loves men yes I will clear up the rumor.
Hes on my dick so much hes more annoying than a brain tumor.
Him and OSB is in the backseat secret lovers.
The closet he got to pussy is Lil Kim's "La Bella Mafia" album cover.
My punches hit you so hard its knocking tattoo's off ya.***
Couldn't "Snuggle" with a bitch if your ass was fabric softner.***
Post in your crew forum once and thats the most activity it ever gets.****
Blow your ass up in Dallas let you play with the Mavericks.****
This nigga bout to bite I know he pre-write.
Cause I'm posting before him and he accepted last night.

*******Closer******
I walk with a fist a.k.a the tooth losener.*****
And I carry black but it aint a album and it will let you meet Lucifer.*****

Explanations:
* He always talkin bout gunz and I left Emerica's Finest and OneStepBeyond is they co-leader.
**Jason Kidd play for the nets and the heat bout to sweep them 0-4 and move on to the next round.
***"Snuggle" is a Fabric Softner
****"Mavericks" are actually a wild Animal that stays on a range in Dallas.
*****Jay-z Black Album got a song named Lucifer

iight uppin fo votes .:F.ate:. should be a good battle!

Voted For: Tony Green

This was probably the worst Battle I'v ever read.

You are both trying too hard to rhyme and forgetting what the battles are about, But Tony Green actually came with some punches, not tht good but they were there.

Fate, I could tell from the start this wasnt a battle verse, its not all about rhying, its about dissing the other person, and with no punches, you cant do that.

Both of you need to elevate a lot

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checkin the polls....hopefully this ends the petty shit lol...plus it counts as a crew battle lol...two birds...one verse lol

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nice verse.... just checkin out the pollllsssssssss

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damn....stop writing stories. this battle guna be up forever now!

Do yo whole crew got loosing records? LMAO........

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meh............................................... .

iight uppin fo votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin to the top come on yall vote so I can get my win!

Voted For: Tony Green

blah, i didnt really wanna vote cause tony is my boy an i thought it may be considerd DR
But i can assure you its not, i did plan on leaving feed

but fatez verse is screwed, the structure is horrible, the rhymes are non existant, the flow was not there, punchlines lacked...i just didnt like your verse at all FATE

Tony:
nice shit, well for the most part, few lines were weak as hell an didnt really hit hard ta be honest with ya, liked the closer tho, an that fabric softner had me like ''oooh'' for a second

vote/ Tony.

return the favor both of y'all or i will have the vote removed :D

oops ^
i read the ''intro'' or whatever the fuck ever an thought dat was part of his rhyme
okay
but still

towards the end ya had dat tayshaun price line, i was like ooh okay, it may pick up a little....but it didnt, too basic

an please dont type a paragrpah before an after the verse, you had me confuzed! lol

vote still goes ta Tony.

Thanxx Teph and give me a link!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: .:F.ate:.

I’m a beast my lyrics’ll eat u alive like u edible
my music’s impeccable envision me wreckin u
OK...
chin-checkin u deckin u with legible flow
leavin u unconscious on tha flo’ bitch nigga let’s go
Eh...
i’ll lay a trigga town nigga down like tha maggot he is
slap him wit verbage, such herbage shouldn’t have any kids
Good...
ha….this hoe ass nigga’d sell his soul for my lyrical content
tony have a conscience and realize that beatin me is nonsense
OK....
ya punches couldn’t come close to hittin son, let alone hurt me
i could stop now and still end up 2-2 like a Tayshaun Prince jersey
Nice...
u forever d/r E.F. hoe get off crew hopper we focused
fuck structure, even if slip off i’m right....back…. on before u notice
Ha.....
when i’m around u wont utter a peep if u feelin froggy then leap
matta fact fuck you send ya crew i’ll leave ya sheep dead in a heap
Nah.....
a little advice tone’ hang it up dawg quit rap ya effort is useless
meet up wit tha Q tha two of you can marry in Massachusetts
Ha.....

Green was a little too played and cliche with his shit, he had some nice verses, but a lot of punches were forced so the flow took a hit from that..

Fate had some played shit, but the flow was good and even some of the weaker verses still kept in rhythym with the rest....better punches on his end too...

RTF, or I won't vote again..

Whatever this is either a alias or d/r vote n e ways I know I won this shit uppin!

Eh, totally fucked that vote up.......my bad..........got the names all fucked up..

Green
.:F.ate:. the pac wannaba always talkin bout what a gun will do.*
I took OneStep out of E.F. and went 10 feet beyond you.*
Nice personal...
But this beef is pointless lets not take it any farther.
So I'm just gone bomb one of Emerica's Finest like he was Pearl Harbor.
Usually played, but the Emerica spin gives it a good personal twist...
If you look at his aviator it says ready for whatever.
Paw Paw hear them shots you wasn't ready for that bereatta.
Eh.....
Nigga you's a Kid so stay playing with the Nets.**
Cause I'm gone sweep you 4-0 and move on to the next.**
OK.....
No disrespect you doing what you doing just to get by.
"I said you was hot" so people call Tony Green a lie.
Good.....
Livin' Legendz straight merk leave bitches in the dirt.
Your flowing is out of style like Fubu shirts.
OK....
.:F.ate:. loves men yes I will clear up the rumor.
Hes on my dick so much hes more annoying than a brain tumor.
No...........
Him and OSB is in the backseat secret lovers.
The closet he got to pussy is Lil Kim's "La Bella Mafia" album cover.
Ha...........
My punches hit you so hard its knocking tattoo's off ya.***
Couldn't "Snuggle" with a bitch if your ass was fabric softner.***
Set-up didn't really match with second, but still good....
Post in your crew forum once and thats the most activity it ever gets.****
Blow your ass up in Dallas let you play with the Mavericks.****
nah............forced
This nigga bout to bite I know he pre-write.
Cause I'm posting before him and he accepted last night.
Nice personal...

Should have voted for Green, better personals, flow and punches.........just reverse the feed I gave on my vote.......my bad...



RTF

Vote switched

Come on yall uppi fo the win!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Tony Green

Tony Green:
A reali reali tite verse. I really like all of it..........
Sum reali tite punches but u dont really need 2 explain ya punches it makes it sound herbish which it aint.......
Try keep ur lines the same lengh........
But a real tite verse..........
=8/10

.:Fate:.
A real good structure 2 this verse but i wosnt really feelin da verse as a whole.There were alot of really good punches but a lot of wack one's. No hate though fam..........
=7/10

V/Tony Green for having sum really tite punches............

Crew vote removed

Come on quit sleepin 1 more vote to win uppin to the top!

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Voted For: Tony Green

Tony Green:
A reali reali tite verse. I really like all of it..........
Sum reali tite punches but u dont really need 2 explain ya punches it makes it sound herbish which it aint.......
Try keep ur lines the same lengh........
But a real tite verse..........
=8/10


^^enough said

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checkin polls............................................. ..........

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that was nice. i liked your lines. dont know what to criticize bout...

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checking in to see how the votes are going sofar.

Voted For: Tony Green

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I’m a beast my lyrics’ll eat u alive like u edible
my music’s impeccable envision me wreckin u
chin-checkin u deckin u with legible flow
leavin u unconscious on tha flo’ bitch nigga let’s go

^^ i’d slaughter him wit my damn warmup
decent warm-up cool flow, average creativeness no punches...


i’ll lay a trigga town nigga down like tha maggot he is
slap him wit verbage, such herbage shouldn’t have any kids
decent
ha….this hoe ass nigga’d sell his soul for my lyrical content
tony have a conscience and realize that beatin me is nonsense
decent
ya punches couldn’t come close to hittin son, let alone hurt me
i could stop now and still end up 2-2 like a Tayshaun Prince jersey
ha nice, but no punch directed towards him get at him...

u forever d/r E.F. hoe get off crew hopper we focused
fuck structure, even if slip off i’m right....back…. on before u notice
WOW!! THATS LLOYD BANKS AND EVERYONE KNOWS IT U BIT!!!

when i’m around u wont utter a peep if u feelin froggy then leap
matta fact fuck you send ya crew i’ll leave ya sheep dead in a heap
OO-SHIT MORE LLOYD BANKS RHYMES U WILL GET BANND!!

a little advice tone’ hang it up dawg quit rap ya effort is useless
meet up wit tha Q tha two of you can marry in Massachusetts
WTF? weak ending plus u bit u'r weak u automaticly lose like autopmatic did when he bit agenist me prick...



F.ate:. the pac wannaba always talkin bout what a gun will do.*
I took OneStep out of E.F. and went 10 feet beyond you.*
danm he already won hands down how original was that...

But this beef is pointless lets not take it any farther.
So I'm just gone bomb one of Emerica's Finest like he was Pearl Harbor.
ha nice again..

If you look at his aviator it says ready for whatever.
Paw Paw hear them shots you wasn't ready for that bereatta.
nah mang not really feeling this..

Nigga you's a Kid so stay playing with the Nets.**
Cause I'm gone sweep you 4-0 and move on to the next.**
ha nice...

No disrespect you doing what you doing just to get by.
"I said you was hot" so people call Tony Green a lie.
nice..

Livin' Legendz straight merk leave bitches in the dirt.
Your flowing is out of style like Fubu shirts.
good

.:F.ate:. loves men yes I will clear up the rumor.
Hes on my dick so much hes more annoying than a brain tumor.
cool

Him and OSB is in the backseat secret lovers.
The closet he got to pussy is Lil Kim's "La Bella Mafia" album cover.
haha nice

My punches hit you so hard its knocking tattoo's off ya.***
Couldn't "Snuggle" with a bitch if your ass was fabric softner.***
ha ha nice..

Post in your crew forum once and thats the most activity it ever gets.****
Blow your ass up in Dallas let you play with the Mavericks.****
cool..

This nigga bout to bite I know he pre-write.
Cause I'm posting before him and he accepted last night.

ha good diss/personal..

*******Closer******
I walk with a fist a.k.a the tooth losener.*****
And I carry black but it aint a album and it will let you meet Lucifer.*****
decent ending.. u won hands down easy for more original lines better focus punches more creativeness i was feeling this verse thought it was really RAW WORDNESS HOLLA...

Voted For: Tony Green

.:F.ate:. Verse

i’ll lay a trigga town nigga down like tha maggot he is
slap him wit verbage, such herbage shouldn’t have any kids
^ Meh opener...shoulda come harder not gangsta shit it's wack for battles

ha….this hoe ass nigga’d sell his soul for my lyrical content
tony have a conscience and realize that beatin me is nonsense
^ Self-Glory...blah...rhyming ok jus the SG messed it for me

ya punches couldn’t come close to hittin son, let alone hurt me
i could stop now and still end up 2-2 like a Tayshaun Prince jersey
^ No diss, more self-g it's basic at best you need to step it up

u forever d/r E.F. hoe get off crew hopper we focused
fuck structure, even if slip off i’m right....back…. on before u notice
^ 1st line i thought this was gonna be good...but then right back on the self-g

when i’m around u wont utter a peep if u feelin froggy then leap
matta fact fuck you send ya crew i’ll leave ya sheep dead in a heap
^ more self-g...

a little advice tone’ hang it up dawg quit rap ya effort is useless
meet up wit tha Q tha two of you can marry in Massachusetts
^ closer...meh...diss = not there u jus refering for him to marry a gay man...which is played

Overall
Horrible to read i don't mean to be harsh...you had punches but they weren't aimed at Tony at all...basically it's what you'd put out in a regular gangsta track...which is very newb...concentrate on ya opponent...not yourself...thats my lesson today

Tony Green verse

.:F.ate:. the pac wannaba always talkin bout what a gun will do.*
I took OneStep out of E.F. and went 10 feet beyond you.*
^ 1st line ok personal...2nd line self-g slightly...but a diss is there

But this beef is pointless lets not take it any farther.
So I'm just gone bomb one of Emerica's Finest like he was Pearl Harbor.
^ Self-G "i'm just gonna bomb" replace to "u'll get bombed" or sumthin like that it's so easy

If you look at his aviator it says ready for whatever.
Paw Paw hear them shots you wasn't ready for that bereatta.
^ punch wack...personal wrongly approached...

Nigga you's a Kid so stay playing with the Nets.**
Cause I'm gone sweep you 4-0 and move on to the next.**
^ self-g 2nd line

No disrespect you doing what you doing just to get by.
"I said you was hot" so people call Tony Green a lie.
^ Diss there punch is prolly the best so far...but it's average...but finally a proper diss

Livin' Legendz straight merk leave bitches in the dirt.
Your flowing is out of style like Fubu shirts.
^ lol liked this one...good diss

.:F.ate:. loves men yes I will clear up the rumor.
Hes on my dick so much hes more annoying than a brain tumor.
^ ok bar diss = good slightly played on the gay thing though

Him and OSB is in the backseat secret lovers.
The closet he got to pussy is Lil Kim's "La Bella Mafia" album cover.
^ lololol better than the previous 1 i said was best

My punches hit you so hard its knocking tattoo's off ya.***
Couldn't "Snuggle" with a bitch if your ass was fabric softner.***
^ good punch...nice flow

Post in your crew forum once and thats the most activity it ever gets.****
Blow your ass up in Dallas let you play with the Mavericks.****
^ Ok bar again nice rhyme punch good

This nigga bout to bite I know he pre-write.
Cause I'm posting before him and he accepted last night.
^ na it fell off here didn't feel this

*******Closer******
I walk with a fist a.k.a the tooth losener.*****
And I carry black but it aint a album and it will let you meet Lucifer.*****
^ Wack closer...self-g man it was going so good as well at one point

Overall
Started the same as fate but you picked up and done some good punches however you fell back into self-g in the last 2 bars...self-g really is only words like ima do and i will i can shit like that...jus a lil re-wording can eliminate self-g and make a verse more hard hitting...

V/Tony Green...purely because his verse was longer therefore opened up more actual punches than self-g ones it was again due to consistancy...both were pretty equal on structure and flow personals were meh coz of the SG but yea that's my look on it basically.

RTF in ma sig (vs E.C) within 3 days or vote = removed


Vote removed by Mad Dog's request

Voted For: .:F.ate:.

Damn

Hostile ass battle...Both came Vicious, but Fate killed it...

Better punches, multies, flow...

Plus, I was feeling your hostility...

It's like I was actually listening to you rap it while I read it, which made it all the more dope

Nice shit

lmao...please remove this...........................good lookin out tho sheif

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upping 4 krrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrew

iight Tony Green is back uppin fo the win need one more vote!

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Voted For: Tony Green

vote-Tony Green

TG:
your verse was ok overall...structure was kinda off though...coulda worked on that and re worded the verse over..punches were pretty good...vocab was ok coulda through in some better vocabulary...personals were aght work more on that....opener was kinda wack tho and closer was good...

just keep workin on your skills and youll get on point...nice drop...

Fate:
your verse was pretty similar to TG's....structure was not there aswell....flow was good....punches were'nt has hard hitting has TGs...vocab was good though...personals were aight but kinda lacking....opener wasnt there i wasnt feelin the whole eating you thing...closer good tho

keep workin on your shit aswell this was a close battle but i give it to Tony Green

RTF please...link in my sig