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Love song I did for my girl...Leave feed!



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I have left feed on Triple N's Freestyle and Enygma's The Realness 2

intro was cool....i was feelin the beat, delivery was aiight...it was kinda laid back and it reminded me of master p, flow was pretty good ...i liked the multi's. chorus was a little much....i think its too loud so maybe if you turned that down it would be easier to listen to the chorus...lyrics were pretty emotional, but it made it more meaningful. i bet you got an all-nighter out of this song haha

^^ You bet your ass I did...LMAO...It was her anniversary present...Thanx for the feed fam...Uppin

mmmm....never liked love songs,nice beat tho,pretty good man,nice quality,nice lyrics,pretty good track

For some reason tis sounds like you're singing this on a microphone at a hall or something directly to someone. This shit was pretty cool though. You could have got rid of some of the loud Ps and shit, but other than that....it was pretty cool :thumbup:™

Thanx...I dont really know how to get the shit to sound professional, so if someone has any tips based on listening and what I need to improve on, get at me! Uppin...

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Uppin this shit for some fuckin replies!!

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aight. peepin my nikkuh... very slow beat.... i hate slow beats but yea im spose to b peepin ur vocals rite? yea this is tite i wanna do a song about my gulr.. yea u put in some emotion.. chorus really kicks it up... realy nyce good love song... angel line was coo. good shyt keep at it homie!

Weerd thanx fam...Get at me if u ever wanna collab...Uppin

This was nice ass fuck..who made the beat thats hot....Very deep and emotion...flow was on points damn..shit was nice ass fuck ock

Weerd thanx fam...Lookin to collab with someone so get at me if youre down...Weerd

Uppin this shit!

yo, this woz pure hotness! this woz off the hook. the flow woz on point, decent multis emotion put in it. very gud. 9/10

Thanx homie...Uppin this shit

looking for best song of the week.

listening:.. yo give me the f'n beat to this sogn!! i f'n love this beat! please!! dude serously!! i luv this beat.. i've been searchin for this beat for f'n long ass time lol

intro: very nice

quality: Okay.. but don't care still nice song lol

lyrics: oh shyt.. the queen is you. i see the ingenius in u?? werd very nice.. lol.. the lyrics are great man.. and is very emotional.. may I say i love these type of songs lol...


chorus: great

verse 2:
yea dreams do come true..
angels exist the proof is you..
werd ^ oh shyt better then me lol.. wow surprised me..
dude i luv this song i swear.. its f'n amazing as hell.. lol
omg dude.. f'n great lol.. f'n great as hell!!

chorus:

verse 3: ooh.. very nice multis.. wow.. i could tell you really worked on this song.. "all u need is wings to show the angel you are" werd lol.. dude.. we gotta collab.. "i can't wait till the day you say i do!" werd.. lol. very good lol..

i luv this song.. just quality to be worked on.. nothing else dude..

10/10!! oh my f'n shyt!! f'n good as hell

i luv this song.. heres the link to my song.. and proof to you that i luv these type of songs cuz listen to the type of song mine is werd!!

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181447

Wow...Im loving that feedback...Haha, weerd fam, we MUST collab...Uppin

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I'm feeling tha beat. I like tha intro. I like tha ad libs. Pretty descent. Lyrics are pretty good. Go with beat, and song topic. Chorus is nice. Goes well with the song. Quality is coo. I'm hearing too much beat tho, and not enough words. 2nd verse is tha same as the first one. pretty good, but when your chorus comes in, i think its too loud. I can sense the emotion in this song. I like tha 3rd verse. I give the song a 9/10

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Pretty dope!

Thanx famz...Uppin

the quality(of the recording) wasnt the best but it didnt matter cuz the song was really nice! the beat was cute as hell lol the lyrics were nice and i really like the chorus!!

Thanx ma...Uppin