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Judicial vs Tephlon
Battle Rules:
6 - LINES No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Two Respectable Heads Going at it in about 15 minutes...gonna be good Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 05-03-05 at 10:34 AM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Judicial has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-03-05 10:06 AM.
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i could sit u n a room labeled 1 and give u a hall pass
u can leave n comeback and still wouldnt be in the first class(1) ima cause lyrical supression to this manz RV obsession(2) give em a radar,he still aint detectin this subliminal message This kid is seriously wack for his amount of RV experience he bitches more than girls on they monthly menstrals...period..(3) Explanations..... (1)..The Name of his crews tryout thread is First Class (2)..He was bragging about when he gets 6000 posts strobe told him he can do anything on the site he wants. (3)..If you know Tephlon you know he bitches and complains bout fuckin everything... -If you dont understand dont vote Drop a link for a returned voted---Honest |
Tephlon has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-03-05 10:28 AM.
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Judicial? the jury? hahah, CHECK IT..........
Mistah A Got u to battle? .........................,,,,,,.your runnin a pussy ass crew just ask Mizz Fyre.........even she's ashamed of you!!!! i rest my case in 2 lines, so i'll just waste these next four cause the only ''hot text'' u ever have is cyberin your whore! callin yourself a respectable head?... ......................................please tell me that aint a fact?? i got approched by this whack, because opposites attract! .......................................... Mizz Fyre = Left The Jury Cause They Was Pussy lol His whore = DQ (His RV Wifey lol) |
Voted For: Judicial
alrie good battle short but ight judicial...... punches goodand on target.....flow good i could follow easy.. personalz...on target hit directly......i liked tha last line best good hit homie alrite tephlon...flow was ok structure was aight punches hit a lil bit...but u went to soft like u thought you had it no prob so u stoped tryin which gave judicial this win easily..... next post ill leave a link for my crew battle against slobk thanx yall Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188498
HIT THIS ITS GETTIN MAD SLEPT ON THANX |
Voted For: Tephlon
Mistah A Got u to battle? .........................,,,,,,.your runnin a pussy ass crew just ask Mizz Fyre.........even she's ashamed of you!!!! OK personal.......isn't Fyre in your clique? i rest my case in 2 lines, so i'll just waste these next four cause the only ''hot text'' u ever have is cyberin your whore! OK... callin yourself a respectable head?... ......................................please tell me that aint a fact?? i got approched by this whack, because opposites attract! OK closer... could sit u n a room labeled 1 and give u a hall pass u can leave n comeback and still wouldnt be in the first class(1) Set up was too elaborate for the punch.. ima cause lyrical supression to this manz RV obsession(2) give em a radar,he still aint detectin this subliminal message No... This kid is seriously wack for his amount of RV experience he bitches more than girls on they monthly menstrals...period..(3) Played, but OK personal.. Teph- OK, nothing special...decent closer and opener...at least you rhymed.. Judicial- 2nd bar was filler....didn't rhyme...opener was too stretched out to be an effective punch, last bar was played, could have come up with better analogy than menstrual bitches..just in my opinion...just some work on the structure and some more original concepts needed.. Just my honest vote...RTF |
This was feedback posted for Tephlon
checkin the polls, weak from both really here..............
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Voted For: Judicial
i could sit u n a room labeled 1 and give u a hall pass u can leave n comeback and still wouldnt be in the first class(1) ^^good opener,1st ine partial filler but decent setup, good personal and crew nameplay..lil simple..decent..6.5/10 ima cause lyrical supression to this manz RV obsession(2) give em a radar,he still aint detectin this subliminal message ^^1st line couldve been way better,weak setup get more complex with your setups fam...2nd line was a decent concept but it wasnt delivered very good....5/10 This kid is seriously wack for his amount of RV experience he bitches more than girls on they monthly menstrals...period..(3) ^^seemed forced, periods, kinda played in the way you used it, really wasnt liking the forced ryhme scheme in your bars.. with more inners or assonasance ryhmes it wouldve been much better man......5/10 . 16.5/30 . -------------------------------------- . Mistah A Got u to battle? .........................,,,,,,.your runnin a pussy ass crew just ask Mizz Fyre.........even she's ashamed of you!!!! ^^weak setup,...ok punch, but its not very creative.6/10 very short lines, you couldve been much more complex. i rest my case in 2 lines, so i'll just waste these next four cause the only ''hot text'' u ever have is cyberin your whore! ^^this was koo,..good meta, decent setup, 6.5/10 only thing wrong with it is its not direct..... callin yourself a respectable head?... ......................................please tell me that aint a fact?? i got approched by this whack, because opposites attract! ^^closer did it for me, good meta, goodsetup... dont know why you feel you havta use all the periods in your verse thou,......... .overall, better creativity and overall better punches . return the favour in the sig.no hate Vote switched |
i will get that fixed,...........damn votin system
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tephlons last bar gets a 7/10,which makes it 19.5/30..
good battle by both considering the time limits... but tephlons punches were much more creative......pc...rtf |
This was feedback posted for Judicial
Checking this shit out..............................And no i didnt get him to battle you. Anyway uppin.
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uppin...prem u said we both came wack and we both spit in like 3-5 mins....not really wack in dat amount of time...but anyways uppin dis shit....
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2-1 up, should be a close battle, we both came alright for the amount of time we had.........
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tephlon clear out your pms yo..im tryin 2 send you something.....yeah well uppin dis again
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Voted For: Tephlon
Chekkin pollz shits close.. Removed |
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This was feedback posted for Judicial
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what the hell is goin on with this battle?
1-0 ta me? its should be 2-1 ta me?!?!?!?! what the fuck LOL Uppin. |
yeah i know LMAO....everytime i get on that fuckin votes are changed around or some shit..
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word ^^^
i don't know what happend, i never asked for any of ya votes ta be removed, all i did was ask for ''jack rackams'' vote ta be changed.... an its ended up 1-0 ta me? thats weird LOL.... |
uppin....since our votes got taken away,removed,switched and what ever else the mods did.......lol........uppin
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This was feedback posted for Judicial
They were both pretty good verses for only 15 minutes. both had good flow, judicial had better vocab, it was basically a personals battle where Judicial had 2 good personals and 1 aiight personal and Tephlon had 1 meh personal, 1 good personal, and and aiight punch.
V/ Judicial for his hard hittin personals Plz hit this up with an honest vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188471 |
^^lol feedback dont count yo...get 200 posts and den come holla at dis battle...sorry but vote on some battles you can actually vote on that will make RV a better place..
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This was feedback posted for Judicial
^^^nice job battlecats. IM UPPIN' THIS SHIT FOR MY BOY JUDE!!!^^^
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uppin this i guewss...................shit is gettin mad slept on
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This was feedback posted for Judicial
Personals-Judicial....u got him on this category..Teph u had a nice personal in there to.
Punches-Tephlon..only seen one but the "Hot text" punch was funny and creative. Vocab-Judicial....nice use of vocab Multis- None...try usen sum multiples in there Structure-Judicial...Not hard to read.Teph ya structure was fucked up playa. Overall Vote-Judicial due to the personals,vocab and structure. Teph u had one extra line over the specified number of barz. Both emcees had a nice verse honestly...all i gotta say now is just elevate more. *this is how i'd vote if i could,but im only given feedback |
Voted For: Tephlon
tephlon- i think you had a decent verse, punches were solid all the way through but you had one played concept which was your last line. your flow was ok, hte best thing about your verse was your personals. they all hit hard. best bar- i rest my case in 2 lines, so i'll just waste these next four cause the only ''hot text'' u ever have is cyberin your whore! i award you 60%. judicial- your verse was decent but was weaker than tephs. punches were weak but your main downfall wa that one line in your second bar. you just glorified yourself and there was no punch. on the other hand your follow up was good. best bar- This kid is seriously wack for his amount of RV experience he bitches more than girls on they monthly menstrals...period you get 35%. v/tephlon. rtf in my sig against ca$per teph. no hate. |
This was feedback posted for Tephlon
checkin polls............................................. ..
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Voted For: Tephlon
I think that Tephlon got this battle because i feel that Tephlon came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Tephlon got it they were used effectifely and were on point Judicial u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Tephlon good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Tephlon and flow and structure i'll give to Tephlon. V/Tephlon There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly within 3 days or vote removed :thumbup: |
This was feedback posted for Tephlon
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i could sit u n a room labeled 1 and give u a hall pass u can leave n comeback and still wouldnt be in the first class(1) Ok ima cause lyrical supression to this manz RV obsession(2) give em a radar,he still aint detectin this subliminal message Needed re-wording and creativity added, ok This kid is seriously wack for his amount of RV experience he bitches more than girls on they monthly menstrals...period..(3) lol ok VS Mistah A Got u to battle? .........................,,,,,,.your runnin a pussy ass crew just ask Mizz Fyre.........even she's ashamed of you!!!! Str8 personal i rest my case in 2 lines, so i'll just waste these next four cause the only ''hot text'' u ever have is cyberin your whore! Weak+played callin yourself a respectable head?... ......................................please tell me that aint a fact?? i got approched by this whack, because opposites attract! .......................................... Yeah this was the only nice bar of the battle Please return the vote on the battle in my sig please |
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