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MaD_KnighT vs Doe Bagz
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes but ya crew can vote againist ya........ No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-03-05 at 02:43 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Doe Bagz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-03-05 02:16 PM.
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MaD_KnighT has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-03-05 02:22 PM.
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Fuck me, u got fuck all money so go change ya name.........
Cuz u jus da same old bitch dat never touched da game..... U never be as good as Knight cuz u never spat at da top table....... Time to break both ya legs in one cuz u already sound disable........ With the slick lines spittin greasy I'll blow this bitch breezy... Cuz you jus take my place in iLLunaTiKs id get it back easy…….. Ok we getting to da end but this is were da massacre begins…….. Because even ya homies know dat ur losses are my wins………. Jus suumat really quick to help wi my elevatin………. If u don’t get it don’t vote…………….. |
iight nigga, i'll do dis rematch shit wit no problem u only livin on dis earth cuz i fucked witta cheap condom and lets get dis understood dat my record aint shit but im gone try not to lose again like dis bitch * my bad white boy, dont go all "collibine" on me show up to my school wit yo water A-K's and .40s u wanna battle me again?, what type of shit u on? ya du-rag and fitted must be on too tight, poser be gone ** now lets talk about crews...what roster u currently on? i dont know cuz u run through crews like blood in tampons dis lil fella tryin to act hard in forums but in real life he hide fuckin broke ass junkie..yo poser type ass dont need rap, stay on pimp my ride! *** ---------------------------------------------------------------------- *=simple, he bout to lose another battle **=i guess he white, a white boy shot up collibine...but he a fake collibine wit water gunz ***=everytime i pay attention to him, he wit anotha crew...he gotta be a softie, and broke ass folk are always on pimp my ride lmao...g'luck |
Uppin dis shit 4 sum votes dawgs..................
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Voted For: MaD_KnighT
o.k this was a big disapointment rite here.... knight takes this but really didnt come with much himself, like ya sed a quik verse i've seen beta from ya man, ya punches were just too basic in this one, flow, structure etc. all gud but thats expected to tell tha truth... but you did get this because every punch that doe dropped was played, the condom line damn man thats soooo old and it didnt get any beta, just not feelin this at all, flow was only thing this one had goin for it, soz but its the truth be more complexed in future vote - knight please return the favour on this battle, bein slept on (honest vote), thanx http://community.rapverse.com/showb...127224&posted=1 |
did u read tha whole post?...or did u jus read tha first stanza?...fuck it, uppin
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Voted For: MaD_KnighT
vote-mad knight his verse was tight, the punches were good n i havent read any of his other battles but im assuming he elevated cuz this was hott! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for MaD_KnighT
checkin polss.....
both fam...................... |
reasons why i didnt vote 4 doe bagz
the condom thing was played the tampon line was played i jus thot the knights structure was tighter n over all his verse was better! sorry! |
and dough.............in the first line you called him nigga, in the second white boy?!?! just thought id point it out.
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lmfao its true dawg...............................
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Voted For: Doe Bagz
ight not a bad battle here both of you got mad potential... MaD_KnighT Fuck me, u got fuck all money so go change ya name......... Cuz u jus da same old bitch dat never touched da game..... ^ nice opener name play and ight punch U never be as good as Knight cuz u never spat at da top table....... Time to break both ya legs in one cuz u already sound disable........ ^ nice second line couldav been worded better With the slick lines spittin greasy I'll blow this bitch breezy... Cuz you jus take my place in iLLunaTiKs id get it back easy…….. ^ he aint take your place u left lol Ok we getting to da end but this is were da massacre begins…….. Because even ya homies know dat ur losses are my wins………. ^ decent personal and decent closure overall u have elevated since your last battle... you had some ight punches in there... nothing too special, but u did good... like i said last time try to word your punches better, go for creativity aswell, you will go far if u do that shit... not a bad verse overall jus keep spittin and you'll get the hang of it.... Doe Bags... iight nigga, i'll do dis rematch shit wit no problem u only livin on dis earth cuz i fucked witta cheap condom ^ wored alryyt played concept thought... had potential and lets get dis understood dat my record aint shit but im gone try not to lose again like dis bitch ^^ ight personal, couldav been worded better though my bad white boy, dont go all "collibine" on me show up to my school wit yo water A-K's and .40s ^ its columbine lol... nice concept not played decent punch u wanna battle me again?, what type of shit u on? ya du-rag and fitted must be on too tight, poser be gone ^ this a fake personal i dnooo now lets talk about crews...what roster u currently on? i dont know cuz u run through crews like blood in tampons ^^ haha witty line this had me laughin nice one dis lil fella tryin to act hard in forums but in real life he hide fuckin broke ass junkie..yo poser type ass dont need rap, stay on pimp my ride! ^^ not a good closure stretched seconed line... ryyt overall u had a couple of decent punches in there... you just need to focus on your flow and structure match that up before you start on your punches... when u got your flow n structure worked out start to thuink of some witty lines not played but just try... not a bad verse though i ainht votin coz they both my homies... pz hope this helps Crew vote removed |
u jus have.....................
Can u get it canceled plz!!!!!! |
tha b-gurl vote should be canceled too...its not a real vote...and my bad for tha nigga/white boy lines...i was rushed...lmao at dis whole battle
-DB |
Voted For: MaD_KnighT
mad knigh got dis he came harder n hiz verse had more punches sum of hiz linez was played on da real he put more effort n 2 it had more creative linez da punches was betta den hiz doe bagz ya shit was played cuz it was self gloryfied da fuk i wanna c u talk bout ya self 4? it was wakk u lost cum harder next time yo have betta punches and put sum personals n durr yo no i dont kno u so dont consider it a hate vote vote-mad knight Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^^aint a real vote...delete it...do yall know how to actually vote?...damn mad_knight, ya groupies need to chill...lmao, j/k
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Uppin dis shit.....................
N Bagz dis votes know a good verse when dey see 1......... |
Voted For: Doe Bagz
punches= doe mettas=doe wordplay=none personals=knight enjoyment=doe creativity=doe This was a pretty close battle man but does hit harder wit his punches. Knight man ya only decent punch was ya closer which was good but try n get more consistent with em ite. doez man ya verse was pretty good, you got good flow and a nice structure expet ya punches are there yet. Just keep at it. return da vote ite,peace. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188270 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: MaD_KnighT
Fuck me, u got fuck all money so go change ya name......... Cuz u jus da same old bitch dat never touched da game..... ^ight but not the best opener U never be as good as Knight cuz u never spat at da top table....... Time to break both ya legs in one cuz u already sound disable........ ^basic..but ight.. With the slick lines spittin greasy I'll blow this bitch breezy... Cuz you jus take my place in iLLunaTiKs id get it back easy…….. ^switch it around.. Ok we getting to da end but this is were da massacre begins…….. Because even ya homies know dat ur losses are my wins………. ^ight closer... overall....7.5/10 . . . . iight nigga, i'll do dis rematch shit wit no problem u only livin on dis earth cuz i fucked witta cheap condom ^lol..ight ight...ok opener.. and lets get dis understood dat my record aint shit but im gone try not to lose again like dis bitch ^ummm...no.. * my bad white boy, dont go all "collibine" on me show up to my school wit yo water A-K's and .40s ^no.. u wanna battle me again?, what type of shit u on? ya du-rag and fitted must be on too tight, poser be gone ^stop...just stop.. ** now lets talk about crews...what roster u currently on? i dont know cuz u run through crews like blood in tampons ^ight.. dis lil fella tryin to act hard in forums but in real life he hide fuckin broke ass junkie..yo poser type ass dont need rap, stay on pimp my ride! ^no.... ^overall...5.2/10.... ^elevate son.. vote:Mad Knight.. *** |
iight den...uppin for tha real votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin dis joint.............
Can we get some votes plz............ |
Voted For: MaD_KnighT
votin for mad ight mad got this due to hard punches mad punches- fire dog hard hittin n creative i liked urs better then does personals- hmm didnt really see nuttin hard multies- didnt see any strucutre nice strucutre flow- awesome flow rite on point Doe Punches- to basic fam get a lil harder as well personals- didnt see anything hard flow- nice flow i felt it multies- didnt see any strucutre - everywhere wasnt feelin it both elevate on ya personals n get a lil harder wit ya punches mad jus got this cuz his punches were creative n i was feelin his alot more then what doe was droppin good battle fams, stay elevatin be sure to RTF link below sig |
Plz could u we get sum more votes.................
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Plz cud we get sum more votes in dis joint plz....
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Voted For: MaD_KnighT
iight nigga, i'll do dis rematch shit wit no problem u only livin on dis earth cuz i fucked witta cheap condom ok.. and lets get dis understood dat my record aint shit but im gone try not to lose again like dis bitch * ok noting direct or hard hitting... my bad white boy, dont go all "collibine" on me show up to my school wit yo water A-K's and .40s ok againg noting hard hitting... u wanna battle me again?, what type of shit u on? ya du-rag and fitted must be on too tight, poser be gone ** weak as hell seriously what happen here... now lets talk about crews...what roster u currently on? i dont know cuz u run through crews like blood in tampons best line in ya verse so far... punch dis lil fella tryin to act hard in forums but in real life he hide fuckin broke ass junkie..yo poser type ass dont need rap, stay on pimp my ride! *** weak ending u could of came alot better and more prepared for this match flow was ok complex was weak punches u had 1 and thats it but u slack hard in this battle 5/10 Fuck me, u got fuck all money so go change ya name......... Cuz u jus da same old bitch dat never touched da game..... decent.. U never be as good as Knight cuz u never spat at da top table....... Time to break both ya legs in one cuz u already sound disable........ nice im feeling it.. complex/punch With the slick lines spittin greasy I'll blow this bitch breezy... Cuz you jus take my place in iLLunaTiKs id get it back easy…….. diss decent.. Ok we getting to da end but this is were da massacre begins…….. Because even ya homies know dat ur losses are my wins………. decent ending /personal not a bad verse ... a couple punches flow was good, complex was decent u was more creative and came direct at him good battle nice verse 7.5/10 P.S PLEZ RETURN THE FAVOR OF A VOTE... PEEP MY SIG PICK ONE OF THE 3 COPY AND PASTE IT THEN VOTE THANKS.... |
uppin dis 4 1 more vote plz.......................
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Voted For: Doe Bagz
vote goes to doebagz becuase of personals,sturcure and pretty much everything, easy win, one sided. vote=doeB Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin dis 4 1 more vote plz.......................
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Voted For: MaD_KnighT
mad took this easy.... overall i think mad is gonna take this one because his punches and personals were better... he had alot more depth with his vocab to . mk work on your punches a little more you've gotten alot better at what you doin though doebags - need a lot of work your structure is the structure for a topical so don't do that you had some alright punches but they just didn't hit as hard as 95% OF MK's no hate just don't mention gunplay and shit like that because it is really played out mk wins cuz of his creativity with his punches and personals |
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