MiSk vs ~christyles~
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-06-05 at 03:45 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

MiSk has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-03-05 03:45 PM.

~christyles~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-03-05 05:29 PM.

yo man ill probably drop tomarrow im prob battlin somethin else soon and i have shit to do later....jus lettin ya kno

just drop it before time runs out...
that will be a loss because of a no-show

also i'm not sure why it says: 6-unlimited

its suppose to be 6-10 lines

Before this nigga even attempts to battle, I already declare own-age
smashing him up like a "Chris-tal" bottle on a ships maiden voyage *1

I'm tha captain on this ship, called tha MiSk SS-12
if you were smart you'd keep ya lyrics back up on tha shelf

This counterfeit emcee really tries, afta each battle he posts his excuse
these "hits" are givin' him nightmares of his forgotten "child-abuse" *2

~christyles~ took me lightly, didnt realize I'm "native" to this son
this isn't a "raindance", its called beating you in this battle like a "wardrum" *3

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explanation:
*1 - Christal champange, just a play on his name
*2 - Check his previous battles, always puts an excuse
*3 - Native as in, Indian. Raindance & wardrum just relate

Explanation *3 is suppose to read:
Native as in being "at home" doing this and like an Indian. Raindance & wardrum relates to Indian.

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No hate ~christyles~, just battling
Good luck

Explanation *1 cont...
Tradition to smash a bottle of champagne on the boat on its maiden voyage

this battles gonna be a murkin, scrub thought he could take me?/
i come "punchin" and throw more "knock-outs" than joyce gracie!/
i come stabbin and bust-nuts with quick knife-cuts/
so sick i give this fool more diseases than fucked-sluts/
my verses so ill i eradicate entire african nations/
kid comes spittin with writtens, spliced frames with no verbal animations/
this kids flow is so dry, you'd think he'd be makin "ice"/
to bad the only thing hes "freezin" is pre-cooked rice!/



bar 1- pronounced grac(ee)....for anyone who cant match rhyming words....and joyce gracie is an undefeated UFC chamion who quickly knocks-out his opponents wen he fights....if u still dont get it dont vote
bar 3- if u think its off flow count the syllables....
bar 4- ice as in dry ice.....its very cold and can freeze ur fingers instantly

wow i just got fucked up i couldnt see ur verse before i posted mine............

nice drop...........good luck...................

upppiinnnn for votes..................................

Voted For: MiSk

kisk best lines are
Before this nigga even attempts to battle, I already declare own-age
smashing him up like a "Chris-tal" bottle on a ships maiden voyage *1

christyles~ took me lightly, didnt realize I'm "native" to this son
this isn't a "raindance", its called beating you in this battle like a "wardrum

chris best lines are
this kids flow is so dry, you'd think he'd be makin "ice"/
to bad the only thing hes "freezin" is pre-cooked rice!/
^^dats it....ya rest of verse had no personals and the punches were mild hitting....
misk, ya verse was pretty good for a new person
also had creative opener and nice closer
gotta go with misk here

thanks for the vote

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Voted For: MiSk

punches=misk
mettas=misk
personals=tie
wordplay=neither
enjoyment=misk
creativity=misk

he had harder punches, was a close battle but he just took. You both need to elevate more man, ya both need to sort ya flow and structure out.

thanks for the votes
thanks for the advice

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uppin for some honest votes............................................. ....

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whats up with the votin????
someone vote......................uppin

wheres the votes??????????????

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Voted For: MiSk

Misk

Before this nigga even attempts to battle, I already declare own-age
smashing him up like a "Chris-tal" bottle on a ships maiden voyage *1
^^^IIGHT OPENER
I'm tha captain on this ship, called tha MiSk SS-12
if you were smart you'd keep ya lyrics back up on tha shelf
^^^NICE PUNCH
This counterfeit emcee really tries, afta each battle he posts his excuse
these "hits" are givin' him nightmares of his forgotten "child-abuse" *2
^^^HAHA GOOD WORDPLAY I LIKE DAT LINE
~christyles~ took me lightly, didnt realize I'm "native" to this son
this isn't a "raindance", its called beating you in this battle like a "wardrum" *3
^^^O.K CLOSURE

things i liked.....
u had lotz of good punches but sum came weak
i liked ur wordplay and vocabulary diction
structure wuz nice n readable
u jus need to keep elevatin n u b str8
decent verse
8/10


Christyles

this battles gonna be a murkin, scrub thought he could take me?/
i come "punchin" and throw more "knock-outs" than joyce gracie!/
^^^NICEEEEEEE WORDPLAY WUZ GREAT
i come stabbin and bust-nuts with quick knife-cuts/
so sick i give this fool more diseases than fucked-sluts/
^^^SELF GLORY......NO-NO
my verses so ill i eradicate entire african nations/
kid comes spittin with writtens, spliced frames with no verbal animations/
^^^HAHA NICE LINE
this kids flow is so dry, you'd think he'd be makin "ice"/
to bad the only thing hes "freezin" is pre-cooked rice!/
GOOD, DECENT CLOSURE

things i liked....
i liked da wordplay and personals
ur punches wuz hittin n da structure wuz str8

things i didnt like....
u used "Self Glory" in sum lines....use doze lines 4 punches instead of saying how great a battler u are
jus keep elevatin n u b good
overall decent verse but self glory killed u
elevate b/c u r on ya way nice verse
7.5/10

VERY CLOSE BATTLE YALL BUT MA VOTE GOES 2
...............MISK
V/MISK

haha word is the battle over? great battle misk, i enjoyed that alot, see ya around

nah its not over....first one to 5 votes wins


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3-0 equals KO, as long as your opponant koo with it, take it to battle closings and have it shut

Voted For: MiSk

i beleive Miks took this with flow and punchlines which i look at most in battles, good verse both but vote goes to misk, be sure to return the favor by votin in my battle verse sin

thanks for the vote...........................
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Voted For: MiSk

VOTE FOR MISK :
-LIKE THR 3RD LINE IDENTIFYING YOURSLF WITH A BATTLE SHIP..... GOOD WORDPLAY ON LAST LINE RAINDANCE TO BATTLEDRUM , NO NEED TO EXPLAIN WHAT CRYSTAL IS CUT THAT OUT
_ CRYSTAL VERSE TOO BASIC NOT ENOUGH DEPTH PLAYED PUNCHES TOO MUCH EXPLANATION
-----MISK GETS MY VOTE