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Blac-Out vs GKillaz05
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10-16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Good Luck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 05-03-05 at 04:25 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-03-05 03:56 PM.
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Blac-Out has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-03-05 04:19 PM.
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You aint ahead of me in the game, ive already lapped you...
Grab your led and aim, but grabbin' the W you cant adapt to... I'll slap your grin off and laugh, while you try to act tough... You been soft like 'huggies' staff, and I cracked your bluff... Blac-outs goin to act like a lil baby, he cant break my punch... The kids whack and crazy, like takin' Fat Joe out for lunch... But if you did he'd be payin' instead, and thats a true fact... After that you be layin' in his bed, hangin from his nut sack... Thinkin' you're a G that's outta control, about to be a lord?... The only hot keys you've stole, were on my damn keyboard... Audience be bored and snorin', Battles always get slept on... You cant elevate like the floor, N blac's gettin' stepped on... I kept on comin wit tragic blows, u turn pussy like Timberlake.. Its like blacs doin a magic show, The way his bars are fake... Blac-out I heard you go 3 Roundz, I'll admit that I hated it...* You came wit horrible sounds, that song RV over-rated it... *Blac gots a song on the RV Mixtape, called 3 Roundz, I heard it and thought it was weak. But they thought it was good enough to be on there?.. but boy where they wrong..lol Good Luck |
yo ima get straight to the point, you wack and yes ill damage ya
wen u spit, ur shit trash, thats proof, theres no nice rappers livin in Canada u wanna beef? i got the hammer tucked, its nothing lets get it poppin this kid can not win, im the nigga u not toppin my glock, it stay cocking, buh u, dawg u the weakest ill let the heat spit and leave ya ass in a deep ditch i found out ya future, yea i had a talk wit jesus he said if u made rappin ur personal career, youll never be rich so i can tell that he pissed, ill rip this cat in pieces ill let the hawk cut ya skin repeatadly times so youll need to be re-stitched wen it cums to Blac, niggas love how he spits niggas like "hes gutta,gangsta,and is overall nice" buh G killa........nigga, hes which? none of them, hes a bitch and ill let the foe' (4) fire and put the heat to ya fuckin scalp like a blow dryer G killa, man this hoes' tired so ill leave him to sleep half a dozen under in the yard, under those flowers wen it cums to G killaz. man hes a straight up bitch to me all ill do is grip the heat, cock it, clap, then hes history |
lol, ite lets get this shit poppin'.....................
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18 Lines?.. lol hmmmm......................
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im wack, and im over-rated? hmmm..............ya ass so wack, u got almost 2,000 posts and ur dumb ass not even heard of...........hmmmm......funny
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Told ya your damn battles get slept on, UPPIN....
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ite well if my battles are being slept on, then obviously urs r too u dumb ass, juss shut the fuck up saying all that dumb shit, cuz u sound real dumb sayin that
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Voted For: GKillaz05
ick weak battle but i'll vote on it cuz i'm feeling nice gz killed the blac out partially because his punches were actually punches . my glock, it stay cocking, buh u, dawg u the weakest ill let the heat spit and leave ya ass in a deep ditch that blac out will not get you wins your rhyme scheme was off the whole way through and your structure was off but yea gz took this becauser he through in a few alright worded punches step it up to both of you work on your personals and wording more .... RTF LINK IS IN MY SIG |
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return the favor gzkilla in my battle link is in my sig
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Voted For: GKillaz05
voted for G ight G got dis tp more harder punches and better personals G good punces hard hittin, nice personals and very creative wordplay, good strucutre elevate on ya multies Black came a lil basic wit punches n ya personals were weak elevate on ya multies as well, ya flow was good and ya structure as well but ya wordplay was basic fam punches- g personals- g multies- neither flow- tie structure- tie wordplay- G g gets it i liked his punches and his personals more then Blac's |
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battle link below sig good battle man |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
yo ima get straight to the point, you wack and yes ill damage ya wen u spit, ur shit trash, thats proof, theres no nice rappers livin in Canada ^ight opener....... u wanna beef? i got the hammer tucked, its nothing lets get it poppin this kid can not win, im the nigga u not toppin ^not that great..... my glock, it stay cocking, buh u, dawg u the weakest ill let the heat spit and leave ya ass in a deep ditch ^basic and too much self glore.. i found out ya future, yea i had a talk wit jesus he said if u made rappin ur personal career, youll never be rich ^ok...... so i can tell that he pissed, ill rip this cat in pieces ill let the hawk cut ya skin repeatadly times so youll need to be re-stitched ^umm no.. wen it cums to Blac, niggas love how he spits niggas like "hes gutta,gangsta,and is overall nice" buh G killa........nigga, hes which? ^no.... none of them, hes a bitch and ill let the foe' (4) fire and put the heat to ya fuckin scalp like a blow dryer ^WTF...no.. G killa, man this hoes' tired so ill leave him to sleep half a dozen under in the yard, under those flowers ^horrible... wen it cums to G killaz. man hes a straight up bitch to me all ill do is grip the heat, cock it, clap, then hes history ^bad closer.. ^elevate... overall:4.3/10.... . . . . . . . You aint ahead of me in the game, ive already lapped you... Grab your led and aim, but grabbin' the W you cant adapt to... ^ok opener... I'll slap your grin off and laugh, while you try to act tough... You been soft like 'huggies' staff, and I cracked your bluff... ^ok... Blac-outs goin to act like a lil baby, he cant break my punch... The kids whack and crazy, like takin' Fat Joe out for lunch... ^lol..nice.. But if you did he'd be payin' instead, and thats a true fact... After that you be layin' in his bed, hangin from his nut sack... ^basic... Thinkin' you're a G that's outta control, about to be a lord?... The only hot keys you've stole, were on my damn keyboard... ^basic...and played.. Audience be bored and snorin', Battles always get slept on... You cant elevate like the floor, N blac's gettin' stepped on... ^??umm no.. I kept on comin wit tragic blows, u turn pussy like Timberlake.. Its like blacs doin a magic show, The way his bars are fake... ^ok... Blac-out I heard you go 3 Roundz, I'll admit that I hated it...* You came wit horrible sounds, that song RV over-rated it... ^ok closer.. overall:8.1/10... vote:GKillaz05... |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
mettas=killa punches=killa wordplay=killa personals=killa overall=killa ya punches were harder n made alot more sense, although that shit about fat joe was a bit fucked up, didnt make much sense but the rest of ya verse was strong enough to beat him. Blac out man you need to sort ya structure out n learn how to incorporate wordplay n punchlines proparyly ite peace. rtf,http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188270 |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Blac-Out ya shit was aight, had a decent flow, sort of a relaxed feel to it.....ya opener was fuckin weak man, the first line was just some shit talkin filler and the second part was not even a real punch, more like a statement.....and the closer was similar, ya just talkin about being all hard wit guns and ya gonna blast him, where is the punch, ya entire verse was all i'm hard, i got guns, ya shit, i'm gonna blast ya.......no real punches at all and you self-glorified more than once which makes it even wacker....ya need to actually have punches...once ya mastered that maybe you'll have sumthin worth reading......overall 3/10 GKillaz05 ya still a little rusty but ya shit was nice.....it flowed well and ya kept shit together so props for dat!! :thumbup: the opener was weak though, you had some filler to begin with and that shit about grabbin the W is played like "WHOA".....ya closer was aight, a fairly decent personal but no need to explain shit ya know people don't like that.........overall ya verse was good....ya had some nice punches in between, vocabs was pretty basic but got good in some places....creativity - well i didnt see much really but still ya had more than enough to own this guy!!! overall 6/10 V/ - GKillaz05 Return the favour!!! :thumbup: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188074 if ya don't then prepare to see my vote removed!!! :thumbup: |
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