~christyles~ vs confidential
 

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Check in by: 05-03-05 at 06:03 PM

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~christyles~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-03-05 05:34 PM.

confidential has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-03-05 05:36 PM.

You write fair, but you a homo thug ya whole style is type squarrrrrrrre
I stall for none, so my punches is a Hit...All 4 One like fuckin I Swearrrrrr

i aint trying to act hard like u cuz u know a few thugs who bust gats
u must of lost-facts, cuz imma straight smoke ya ass like blowin erbal outta ya crack

my flow straight DOPE, make u wanna shot it up N start riots
Proud to be 17? Ima eat this Pro Teen Mill like im on the Atkins Diet

I'm straight monk'y-n around n u still better off Cage-n Kong...
U got no dope thoughts but CON put heat to ya ears like ya brain's a bong... be-gone

alrite here i go

call ya ghostwriter to make-sets, ya gonna get murked we'll take-bets/
this kid misses more punch-lines than keanu dodges bullets!/
so i pull the trigga and send this kid into the next generation/
"fuck confidential" is this raps salutation, quick bar disintegration/
on a rampage, makin mc's eyes-sag and cleanin up the carnage with bloody-rags/
my lyrics so lethal, how you gonna spit rhymes when zipped up inside a body bag?/
now this kid's clit is raw and hes bleedin' out the gap, im a certified "gyno-killer"/
got "caught up" in murkin cause this fools pussy is hairier than Michael Jackson in thriller!/



good luck.....felt like i stretched a couple of those lines but watever, the middle too are fillers and i had to key this quick, about 7 min cause i g2g....like right now haha peace

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Voted For: confidential

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You write fair, but you a homo thug ya whole style is type squarrrrrrrre
I stall for none, so my punches is a Hit...All 4 One like fuckin I Swearrrrrr

^^ da fukk yo LoL good try at da multies 4/10

i aint trying to act hard like u cuz u know a few thugs who bust gats
u must of lost-facts, cuz imma straight smoke ya ass like blowin erbal outta ya crack

^^ wakk 0/10

my flow straight DOPE, make u wanna shot it up N start riots
Proud to be 17? Ima eat this Pro Teen Mill like im on the Atkins Diet

^^ aight punch 3/10

I'm straight monk'y-n around n u still better off Cage-n Kong...
U got no dope thoughts but CON put heat to ya ears like ya brain's a bong... be-gone

^^ LoL dat shit was wakk 2 1/10

call ya ghostwriter to make-sets, ya gonna get murked we'll take-bets/
this kid misses more punch-lines than keanu dodges bullets!/

^^ wow shit aint even rhyme 0/10

i aint goin on dis shit was wakk confidential won hiz linez rhymed and he came harder n hiz verse

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kid u cant be fuckin serious.........bullets and bets doesnt rhyme......does lets and bets rhyme? correct me if im wrong but bulLETS does have lets in it doesnt it? and lets rhymes with gets....u r seriously fucking wack.....and the kid had one bar that didnt rhyme his 2nd.....gats and crack...and supposedly my first didnt even tho it did........that was one fuckin wack vote.....i mean seriously i can take it if the kid beat me, but not for a fucken retarded reason as that my opener doesnt rhyme even tho it does..........UNBELIEVABLY WACK

yo dont fight with the voters just take it as them helping out and learn from it and get back to the lab and write something even better word...

thanks for the vote upp'in for a couple more

helping me out? how is he helping me out? he gave us no advice watsoever but rather bashed our verses and is a fucknig retard for thinking that bets and bullets doesnt rhyme......

and a further not if u dont get the firs tline then dont vote........our example here being newkid

upp'in for more votes and christyle chill already no need to get all worked up ova a little battle....


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Voted For: ~christyles~

hey this was some good shit nice punches and ya structure was bad i had a hard time following it but it was decent

con that was straight but you cpuld have came harder my vote chrystal

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weak votes are lame..............................

ur tellin me...........uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

upp'innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.................... ......

man, nobody likes us confidential......uppinnnnnnnn

come on a few more votes.............................

ya come on lets close this damn battle uppinn this shit

upp'in............................................

Voted For: confidential

votin for Confidential

ight con got this due to more creative punches and had a more serious approach to this battle

Con
ight man ya punches wdre to the point
ya personals were descent
i was feelin ya flow it was easy to keep wit and ya strucutre was nice and easy to read as well
dint see many multies out of you ide like to see more so elevate on those

Chris
Ya punches were nice but nopthing seemed to be directed to con at all. ya had a niuce flow was well but i didnt see many personals that were hard hittin, you dodnt seem like u put alot into this verse.
Ya strucutre was choppy from spot to spot
ya had descent multies

elevate on personals man they r a big help

vote goes to Con
better punches, more creativity


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upp'in this battle.....................................

Voted For: confidential


You write fair, but you a homo thug ya whole style is type squarrrrrrrre
I stall for none, so my punches is a Hit...All 4 One like fuckin I Swearrrrrr
^^weak,and 2nd line bit stretched
i aint trying to act hard like u cuz u know a few thugs who bust gats
u must of lost-facts, cuz imma straight smoke ya ass like blowin erbal outta ya crack
^^decent
my flow straight DOPE, make u wanna shot it up N start riots
Proud to be 17? Ima eat this Pro Teen Mill like im on the Atkins Diet
^^decent
I'm straight monk'y-n around n u still better off Cage-n Kong...
U got no dope thoughts but CON put heat to ya ears like ya brain's a bong... be-gone
^^decent

Conclusion-Well...your verse was ntuin special.But it was decent.Ur flow is average.Nutin here made me say "ooh" or "damn" and that's a problem.

call ya ghostwriter to make-sets, ya gonna get murked we'll take-bets/
this kid misses more punch-lines than keanu dodges bullets!/
^^wtf?,weak ass pucnh & didn't flow one bit
so i pull the trigga and send this kid into the next generation/
"fuck confidential" is this raps salutation, quick bar disintegration/
^^well,this flowed better but hit weaker
on a rampage, makin mc's eyes-sag and cleanin up the carnage with bloody-rags/
my lyrics so lethal, how you gonna spit rhymes when zipped up inside a body bag?/
^^decent
now this kid's clit is raw and hes bleedin' out the gap, im a certified "gyno-killer"/
got "caught up" in murkin cause this fools pussy is hairier than Michael Jackson in thriller!/
^^flow bad,but punch OK

Conclusion-Ur shit needs to flow better.Make it rhmye!!!.Ur punches were not creative at all.It could have been better if you used it right

Vote-Confidential
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189907

actually k-trini ur a retard all that shit does flow count the syllables all the bars have lines with matching syllables if there not like 1 syllable apart........learn wat flow is before u start voting aobut it......and ocnfidential this battle is urs i odnt care im givin up mc'in anyway or at least text just not my thing

upp'in..........
dont complin already just leave it alone...

Voted For: ~christyles~

Aight, well not such a good battle. But Christyles gets my votes for a few better lines. Like just 1. it was even but i was more pushed towards his punches. So Christyles

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dont complain? im gonna fucken complain wen kids have no fucking clue wat there talking about..........watever i dont give a shit someone close this battle

Voted For: ~christyles~

call ya ghostwriter to make-sets, ya gonna get murked we'll take-bets/
this kid misses more punch-lines than keanu dodges bullets!/
wack opener
so i pull the trigga and send this kid into the next generation/
"fuck confidential" is this raps salutation, quick bar disintegration/
nope..
on a rampage, makin mc's eyes-sag and cleanin up the carnage with bloody-rags/
my lyrics so lethal, how you gonna spit rhymes when zipped up inside a body bag?/
decent
now this kid's clit is raw and hes bleedin' out the gap, im a certified "gyno-killer"/
got "caught up" in murkin cause this fools pussy is hairier than Michael Jackson in thriller!/
no

overall, work harder on ur punches… seriously

You write fair, but you a homo thug ya whole style is type squarrrrrrrre
I stall for none, so my punches is a Hit...All 4 One like fuckin I Swearrrrrr
hell no
i aint trying to act hard like u cuz u know a few thugs who bust gats
u must of lost-facts, cuz imma straight smoke ya ass like blowin erbal outta ya crack
decent
my flow straight DOPE, make u wanna shot it up N start riots
Proud to be 17? Ima eat this Pro Teen Mill like im on the Atkins Diet
wack
I'm straight monk'y-n around n u still better off Cage-n Kong...
U got no dope thoughts but CON put heat to ya ears like ya brain's a bong... be-gone
no son..

overall, elevate,

Christ took this one though.. just came less wack

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Voted For: ~christyles~

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Voted For: confidential

Aight, nada good battle but it was a close battle. The only strong punches and lines that i felt from both were yalls openers. But con was more consistent with his half-ass punches opposed to chris's sometimes unseen punches. Like you said, the filler in the middle and lack of creativity in your lines cost ya. Both elevate

Vote: confidential

upp'in to end this battle............................

Voted For: ~christyles~

the last line is the best one, thats what one it for you, you both really didn't have any personals ill have to say, 10/4 for confidential and 6/10 Christyles

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Voted For: ~christyles~

I guess Christyles won this battle
flow= Christyles
personal=Christyles
multis=none
vocab=Christyles

took this one...

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upp'in for more votes plez............................

upp'in this battle fam....................................

Voted For: confidential

Confidential
You Get my vote With All Honesty LOL Bcuz I dont know whether the other dude was dissing you or dissing himself LOL so Ima give you the vote for coming with some aii punchez nuttin all dat but they was Aii /\
Nice drop \/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\\//


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upp'in this battle.....................................

Voted For: confidential

Yo Diz Wuznt Even Close, Fo Real Confidential Wrapped It Up In Da First Bar, I Really Dont Need 2 Explain Why, Jus Check Da Rhymez, Better Erythin, Punches, Mettas, Flow, Errthin Went 2 Confidential

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