LOoNY TOoN vs Big City
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-04-05 at 08:04 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

LOoNY TOoN has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-04-05 07:38 PM.

Big City has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-04-05 07:40 PM.

Dog, you not even the main event, you just a sideshow dude
after this battle, ya career is "cut off:" like Mrs Schivo's food
Im ready to slam, spray bars at u, like a semi that jammed
How in the hell, ima lose to the rap version of Yosemite Sam
im deadlier fam, i part ya features when i spark the heater
Loony toon get his face "changed" like a parking meter
Time for ya departure, from rapverse go head n order ya ticket
Back to the block u can be wit Common on the Corner n kick it
When im flarin the brass, Toon you appearin in last
You arrogant ass, ya flow wack, its apparent its trash
im clearin a path, duke..u confused, ya purpose is screwed
treat Loony like a window,, cuz its "curtain's for you"
ya flow just sucks,... either that or its boring
Toon is already played out, he come on every saturday morning
So you can't come fresh, why don't you consider leaving instead
cuz City don't mean hair scrunchies when i "squeeze on ya head".......dog its nothin

uppin, u better hurry up and drop ya verse, before the time limit runs out dog

Yo….lets see if I still got it…

Kid tryin to step up! like smoking before ya *piss in a cup* ya *screwed up*
Left ya *heart at home*, theres *no beat* behind ya flows, just an internet thug
Just a Big *weenie*, get *roasted at comedian club meetings*, keep on reading
Taking a lyrical beating, gets *kicked* around like *Rockers with Bag Beenies*
I see no meaning in your verse, you can die *before ya mama*, be *first in the herse*
What’s worse, thought you were *driving to victory*, but you were *stuck in reverse*
*You steady*? Fuck that ill knock ya *off stance*, you thinking losing is an advance
*Stand above you*, raise ya IQ just by my presence, walk away and ya lose ya essence
*Christ’s second coming*, but even then you have no hope after *receiving his blessins*
Death is *religion*, *get blessed with bliss*, im higher than you like the oceans crests
Big City’s obsessed, fuck ya writtens and bittens,*get pissed on like pregnancy tests*

didnt really think about it...just logged on and saw i had a battle open...sorry i forgot...haha

lol i can see that, half of that verse didn't make much sense, but it all good uppin for votes

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Voted For: LOoNY TOoN

My vote is to toon, breakdown:

Big City-
Dog, you not even the main event, you just a sideshow dude
after this battle, ya career is "cut off:" like Mrs Schivo's food
^^not really feelin it, line seems played
Im ready to slam, spray bars at u, like a semi that jammed
How in the hell, ima lose to the rap version of Yosemite Sam
^^Koo punch feelin this 1
im deadlier fam, i part ya features when i spark the heater
Loony toon get his face "changed" like a parking meter
^^weak bar...elevate
Time for ya departure, from rapverse go head n order ya ticket
Back to the block u can be wit Common on the Corner n kick it
^^dont reely get your direction on this 1, common's song is tight
When im flarin the brass, Toon you appearin in last
You arrogant ass, ya flow wack, its apparent its trash
^^weak, not hard hitten
im clearin a path, duke..u confused, ya purpose is screwed
treat Loony like a window,, cuz its "curtain's for you"
^^ok punch, lacked a lil creativity
ya flow just sucks,... either that or its boring
Toon is already played out, he come on every saturday morning
^^^better attempt...
So you can't come fresh, why don't you consider leaving instead
cuz City don't mean hair scrunchies when i "squeeze on ya head".......dog its nothin
^^yea u get nuthin for this 1

Overall: 5.5/ 10

Toon-
Kid tryin to step up! like smoking before ya *piss in a cup* ya *screwed up*
Left ya *heart at home*, theres *no beat* behind ya flows, just an internet thug
^^funny as hell, nice word play
Just a Big *weenie*, get *roasted at comedian club meetings*, keep on reading
Taking a lyrical beating, gets *kicked* around like *Rockers with Bag Beenies*
^^good creativity...keep me readin
I see no meaning in your verse, you can die *before ya mama*, be *first in the herse*
What’s worse, thought you were *driving to victory*, but you were *stuck in reverse*
^^ok, see u was tryin wit somethin...lil played
*You steady*? Fuck that ill knock ya *off stance*, you thinking losing is an advance
*Stand above you*, raise ya IQ just by my presence, walk away and ya lose ya essence
^^good word play, multis were good too
*Christ’s second coming*, but even then you have no hope after *receiving his blessins*
Death is *religion*, *get blessed with bliss*, im higher than you like the oceans crests
Big City’s obsessed, fuck ya writtens and bittens,*get pissed on like pregnancy tests*
^^ these last three lines were good, the pregnacy test lined killed it though...nice creativity

Overall: 8/10

In the end Toon got this, pretty one sided, multi and creativity were un matched, punches go to Toon, lines were stretched but a good verse

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of course his last bar killed it, he got it from cassidy lol

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of course his last bar killed it, he got it from cassidy lol

This was feedback posted for LOoNY TOoN
 

just checking tha mu fuckin polls. and no we aint tha same person.....

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Voted For: Big City

Ok this was a decent battle both you dropped pretty good verses unlike half the other trash on RV. My favorite line from City was

How in the hell, ima lose to the rap version of Yosemite Sam

Had me laughin but he also had good metas like the parkin meter line and the curtain line and the scrunchy line pretty good but he aslo had moore personals the saturday mornin cartoon thing the yosemite sam line funny only thing i dint like is starting it with dog and ending it with dog its nothing took away from your finisherand boring and morning dont quite rhyme other than that solid verse



On to Loony Toon. You would have done better in this battle if it wasn't for the ****** star lookin things if the reader is smart he'll recognize the punches and most off those either weren't punches or just didn't connect. One that connected really well was

What’s worse, thought you were *driving to victory*, but you were *stuck in reverse*


Hahaha very nice originality displayed here just didn't see any personals in your verse thats what really put City at an advantage you just threw your verse together without researching the subject or mentionig his name in a creative way could have said somethin like "This Big City is about ot face a power outage, When i take his spark whats he gona be without it?" That was just somethin quick but you coulda done soomethin personal since you didn't have personals which are a cruciale part of a good verse this vote goes to Big City

Return the favor on my battle link in sig no hate votes please this battle has been open for like a month and a hallf please drop an honest vote with a godd thorough explanation that won't get diqualified like half the votes in my battle thank you

Voted For: LOoNY TOoN

you took this one with harder punches i think. I was feeling yo punches more. you had more and better multies also, and some of your personals were pretty descent and funny.
BC-suprise. This wasnt that good of a battle from you homie. your opener was the highlight of your verse to me...wow! im suprised. but some of your punches were ight, i just dont think you came consistent enough to take this. you had some good and funny lines, but i dont think you came out on top.
overall-i give my verse to LT, because I felt he came wayy more consistent with his punches and personals, and his verse just seemed a lil better overall. also multies played a big part in getting my verse.

please RTF in battle link in sig...

thanx

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This was feedback posted for LOoNY TOoN
 

uppin this for my fam Big City....reppin OG in this shit lol

This was feedback posted for Big City
 

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Voted For: Big City

wow.. i think Big City got this one.. it was close but damn i was really surprised after i read his verse.. i thought loony got it.. and then started reading BC's and was like damn this dude got some nice punches and word play... the flow was def better from bc.. same with structure... personals was about a tie.. but i think just the creativity of punches is what give this one to BC... so no hate.. vote bc

yeh im a rusty...thats expected...but if i lose i want a rematch...

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TiLt isnt Loony Toon. I know exactly who loony toon is. It's just same IP because thats tha network IP we hafto use during that week. School shit! But, oh well, you wanna bitch about votes, then do so. I was just checkin this battle out!

yall should b doin your school work instead of runnin around on RV lol

Voted For: Big City

votin for big

Big city gets this due to more creative punches and personals


Big
ight ya punches were nice n hard hittin but u threw alot of creativity into them which reall showed off your vocab skills and wordplay as well man
ya Personals were creative n hard hittin as well
ya multies- u r acutally one of the few that uses multies in ya verse but they were good in ya verse they helped alot
ya flow was on point man nice and easy to stay n tune with
ya strucutre was nice and even and easy to read

My fav line:
ya flow just sucks,... either that or its boring
Toon is already played out, he come on every saturday morning
(creative personal, like it)

Loony
Ya punches were nice n hard but very basic with your wording and creativity
didnt notice any personals from you that were worth mentioning so elevate on personals
ya multies was ight nice n descent threw a flare in ya verse
ya flow was off man, i couldnt saty in tune
ya strucutre was very choppy which made it hard to stick wit ya flow

i wasnt feelin ya verse it wasnt as hard as it should have been

nig gets this vote due to better more creative punches and personals


RETURN THE FAVOR PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
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RTF!!!!!

thanks for the honest vote armada, uppin for more

thanks for the honest vote armada, uppin for more
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well wtf you expect 8 minutes before you have to post...didnt know about this stupid time limit thing...its new...

thanks for the honest vote armada, uppin for more
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This was feedback posted for LOoNY TOoN
 

tthere was some hot lines in both raps...yours wins though...

thanks for the honest vote armada, uppin for more
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thanks for the honest vote armada, uppin for more
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