Big City vs AckRite
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feedz

Drop In 2 Kiddo

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 05-04-05 at 08:51 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

AckRite has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-04-05 07:53 PM.

Bigcity Lacks Wins, Guess Battlin A Newbie Will Obtain U Glory
His 'Definition Of Hard' Is Illiterate, He Only 'Reads When Horny'
Stupid All Ya Records Say Zero...Can't Even Master As Editer
Super Hero From Maryland?....Nigga Your No 'Captain America'
Your Votes Form More Rings Than Froot Loops And Tucan Sam
You Less Likely To 'Beat Me'…Then A Prostitute With No Hands!
Citys Strategies Flawed..So Ill Punch Ya Til Ur Inner Cavity Falls
& Uppercut You So High..You'll Be Defying ALL Of Gravity's Laws!
Son Ya Raps Are Worthless, 'Purple & White' Avy? Da Worse Mix
Cuz Ur Verse Is Only 'On Point' If Ur Tryin To Be Wack On Purpose


(1) His Avatar Is Captain America, He Lives In Maryland
(2) Da Colors Of His Avy Or Da His Name Is Purple & White, Kinda Gay

Big City has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-04-05 08:46 PM.

What u want wit me, fool? ,man ...this dude can get it
cuz all ya punches is "fallin short" like abusive midgets
this fat dyke named ackrite, betta keep his yap tight,
or get both "cheeks" slashed twice, like he got an ass bite
dog, pitch ya trash mic, n save all that cash, that you prolly spent
or them slugs,will hum n will stick ya gums like its poly- dent
this bitch is kinda moody yall, he gay he's prolly scoopin balls
Sittin on ya cellphone, is the only time u got a "booty call"
smoke this clown's wig, you small, you just a pound kid
and you aint Guerilla Black, so stop trynna sound "B.i.g"
this five-0 snictch, will find it "tuff ta hide" like a Rhino pic
im finding ya verse "hard to swallow" like the Schivo chick...its nothin

Jeah.......You Exceedin Tha Line Limit Fool.......But Its Aight Lets Get Some Votes In Now

oh damn, thats fuckin wack........oh well good battl e neway

Nah We Gettin Votes I Don't Care.............& I Like How You Moved Ya Avy After I Used It In My Verse LoL Tryna Make Me Look Stupid?

nah i was gettin rid of it cuz im not wit that crew anymore.....iit was a coincidence i just happened to do it now.......lol

uppin this battle right here, lets get some votes in this bitch

Oh Really...@...A Coincidence, Aight I Won't Even Stress It But Lets Get Some Votes In People

Vote In Hea Man........Whats Good Niggas On This Site Don't Like To Vote But Want Votes In Return.....Ironic

uppin this battle right here, lets get some votes in this bitch
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uppin this battle right here, lets get some votes in this bitch
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uppin this battle right here, lets get some votes in this bitch
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Vote Up Ma'Fuckas............What The Fuck Is Da Hold-Up

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that was iight all give it to you that was sick with punches but wheres the mults wheres the inners and stuff to live up the shit for real u no i had to give it to the other cat becuse his shit was mult and raw with punches but good battle

We Need Votes Partna............VOTES!!.............Lets Go

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Voted For: AckRite

close battl but i think ackrite took it fo da more humouress an witty punchlez an da disses wuz rite on point, both structure kinda good both had nice flow 2 but da punchez from ackrite hit they mark an wuz moe creative so ackrite gets mih vote and if yull culd return da favor dat'd bee dope?????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????bye

1-0...........Me...........Uppin Dis For More Votes

Voted For: Big City

mettas=big
punches=big
flow=tied
personals=ack
creativity=big
concepts=big

yo big ya first lines was played! so dont use it again, n the next 4 lines were wack but the last 5 were decent shots with good wordplay, I liked that guirila black line man, that was dope^^.good job. Ackrite man your only line that I liked was the gravilty law line, had a good flow to it but apart from that you need to get better concepts n better punches.peace, rtf coz I got a really old battle that needs to be voted on, thx http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188270

uppin for votes, thanks for the honest feedback yall............

Stupid My Concepts Werent Played....I Doubt If You Undastood Em'.....Ne Ways Uppin For More Votes

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Polls.............................................

Up Dis Shit......Once Again........For Da Millionth Time........Only 2 Vote.....Come On Now

Voted For: Big City

big city:
What u want wit me, fool? ,man ...this dude can get it
cuz all ya punches is "fallin short" like abusive midgets
^^^DA RYHME SCHEME ON DIS BAR WAS GOOD BUT DA PUNCH WAS WACK
this fat dyke named ackrite, betta keep his yap tight,
or get both "cheeks" slashed twice, like he got an ass bite
^^^MULTIS N FLOW WERE DOPE....BUT DATZ IT
dog, pitch ya trash mic, n save all that cash, that you prolly spent
or them slugs,will hum n will stick ya gums like its poly- dent
^^^WHOOO I LIKE DIS BAR...DOPE PUNCH/MULTIS
this bitch is kinda moody yall, he gay he's prolly scoopin balls
Sittin on ya cellphone, is the only time u got a "booty call"
^^^LMAOOOOOOOO VERY THOUGHTFUL N CLEVA
smoke this clown's wig, you small, you just a pound kid
and you aint Guerilla Black, so stop trynna sound "B.i.g"
^^NAH DIS LINE IS PLAYED NOW I SAID DIS BOUT A COUPLE MONTHS AGO
this five-0 snictch, will find it "tuff ta hide" like a Rhino pic
im finding ya verse "hard to swallow" like the Schivo chick...its nothin
^^^^DECENT CLOSER...DA PUNCH WAS OKAY


ackrite:
Bigcity Lacks Wins, Guess Battlin A Newbie Will Obtain U Glory
His 'Definition Of Hard' Is Illiterate, He Only 'Reads When Horny'
^^NAH WASN'T FEELIN IT
Stupid All Ya Records Say Zero...Can't Even Master As Editer
Super Hero From Maryland?....Nigga Your No 'Captain America'
^^^DA CAPTAIN AMERICA PART WAS WACK..BUT EVERYTHING ELSE WAS OKAY
Your Votes Form More Rings Than Froot Loops And Tucan Sam
You Less Likely To 'Beat Me'…Then A Prostitute With No Hands!
^^DECENT PUNCH...NOTHIN SPECIAL
Citys Strategies Flawed..So Ill Punch Ya Til Ur Inner Cavity Falls
& Uppercut You So High..You'll Be Defying ALL Of Gravity's Laws!
^^^I WAS FEELIN DIS EVEN THO GRAVITY LINES R OLD...I LIKE DA FLOW ON DIS SHIT
Son Ya Raps Are Worthless, 'Purple & White' Avy? Da Worse Mix
Cuz Ur Verse Is Only 'On Point' If Ur Tryin To Be Wack On Purpose
^^WEAK CLOSER....


V/BIG CITY.....he came with some hott shit...noth of u started off kind of weak but then picked it up but city turned up more....

thanks for the honest feedback, marv uppin this joint

BLAH.............................................. .............Uppin

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checkin the pollz....maybe a little biased 'cause you fam, but you should have this one on lock....

lol
wtf @ 2-1 down, thats unexpected.......how did that happen?! LOL..

thanks for the honest feedback, marv uppin this joint

thanks for the honest feedback, marv uppin this joint

uppin this battle right here, lets get some votes in this bitch
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uppin this battle right here, lets get some votes in this bitch
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