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LFS the Great

*Talking*
Haha...we all got obseesions....we made a son...sing-along...please...this is an OG Production by the way..all of us...get ready for a LONG track lol

Hook: (every line is spoken in one breath)

A Half Dozen of Dastardly Delights and Fiendish Fetishs with a hint of Uncontrollable Desire for Assorted Trickets and Objects,
*breath*
To be spoken upon only with utmost respect or we will be forced to stomp your face while indulging in obsession's effects....


Hells Fire
obsession led to rapverse intangible tangle my words
succession of mental words interchangleable with verbs
every night a log on u got mail maybe a private message
Every twenty four hours i thread topically a story blessage
textually tryin to up my game to par and drop the bogey
turned it from the rap game to a star picture of the prognosee
adjectives and words differ from the laxitives to words
subjectives and herbs shiver from the vets to suburbs
people type life without gossip and learn not to jock it
he who write life contort visual messages from the pocket
puttin knowledge to paper and paper to homedge
writeing straight dopeage and not need straightedge
writers block only makes me break bricks harder
going from concrete to gravel since hood starter
im obsessed too many hours to write too many pieces to cite
im obsessed too many hours a night too many ways to knife
typing like mental messages of war leavin brains on scar
shrapnel left dental blessage of tar leaving stains on bar
i feel i need to keep coming here for the ellivation
and talkin about suffering to kids with the relivation
movin at night seemin cinco-patient(5am) to sinquopation
my cd about to drop home ward bound life is found
because even in this obsession the light may be found
cuz its not gambling if ya win, not eatin if ya thin
not teethin if ya chin, not swearin not a sin
if no wrong is done, no ones kill whats the harm
so ima keep this obsession till i cant feel my arm

~Hook~

l i n e
Aiyo, that’s really nice man, but im obsessive over a bastard
Parents gave birth before marriage, so what if she’s a hamster?
My brother embraced her... Felt sorry ‘cause she was blind
So I shoved some marbles up her ass to give her cats eyes
I surprised the veterinarian when he confronted her problems
He called me a sick fuck………then tossed me some condoms
My love life’s hittin’ rock bottom, writing love letters to animals
I whip snap her ass, getting her into gear like she mechanical
Made her fanatical, by ejaculating into her water dish
But when the droplets hit her lips, she suspected my affair with a fish..
So I left the bitch and obsessed about something ever so sexy
…………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦.Take it Kesse!,

Kesse
all you people bragging bout how you love something material
well its different for me, i like to go on about my cereal
lets be real, eat raisin bran, you get greatness in two scoops
all you have to do is follow your nose and enjoy some fruit loops
just eat some alphabits, and you can learn while at home
you want something that gives you a real buzz? try some honeycomb
and dont overlook the classics like cheeri-o's or corn flakes
take it from that lovable tiger, frosted flakes...they're grrrrrreat
even if its late, hit up a bowl with some milk and start to munch
how bout some golden grahms, wheaties, or even some capn' crunch
or the cinnamon toast kind, maybe rice crispies and start with a snap
crackle with corn pops, remember flinstones pebbles and apple jacks?
i dont care what they say, im not a kid but i still like my trix
and i still have fun making chocolate milk when i stir up my nesquik
i cant get enough of that sugar crisp, id make a spoon outta my arm
screw campfires, i get my marshmellows from chocula and lucky charms
you wanna come in here with your maturity, saying cereal is old
but i say fuck all the rest of you... i live my life by the bowl


~Hook~

D523
Fuck the work, vaseline if u know what i mean is where its at
Jerkin off in class while admiring the substitutates ass
Cum, pouring out like some sort of a sloping trough
WAIT? WHAT THE FUCK? MY HAND WONT COME OFF
Crazy glue? what the fuck? WHO DID THIS? I fuckin hate you!
People callin me smurf cuz lack of bloodflow makin my dick turn blue
Sweat beads beads building up, fuckit i dun had enough
Took the teachers scissors and i cut the fucking thing up
Couldn't take it, stress level at a supreme
Woah ? what ? i woke up and this OM was all a dream

LFS The Great & One Step Beyond
Baked good.... God damn... I'm gonna savor this bite...
Love at first sight, mouth waters and I stare in delight,
The flavor is like blueberrys... but don't stereo type,
More flavors... But one muffin could be savin my life,
Taking my knife, indulgin in greatness ,champion of sweets,
Lovin my Little Debbies , muffin's are common man's treats,
Cupcakes? CUPCAKES?!?!?! I guess ima common man in the past,
But cupcakes? that what you yell when a guys rammin your ass,
Rammin ass HA yall know best ,shit yall simply bread thats sweet,
Yall is soft, that's why you never see The Muffin Man in the streets,

You're a poser, snatch the real one cupcake man, took his stuff and ran,
The problem is, lets be honest, do you know the muffin man?
Muffin Man, he's joke I plan to put him on the corner of Drury Lane,
And throw cupcakes at his assistants and re-frost their jugular veins,
you're fuckin insane! i killed mrs. debbie and ain't had drama since,
Muffins are the common mans treats, at least i don't lack common sense,
Stop thinkin past tense cuz cupcakes are supreme to the finish,
Cuz the only place yall are Kings is the home to the British,
I'm questioning your thoughts... for real this homie is different,
Cupcakes taste like ass... actually more like dead ponys and spinach,
At least our mascot girl didnt spaz, screamin like she's in pain,
The muffins have made him go insane, and not just the main brain,
fuck a cupcake... but let me ask you this... why is your game lame?
is it cause your favorite food and boyfriend go by the same name,
Maybe it's cuz I'm wit the enemy cuz I'ma callin wifey my muffin,
And when I'm thru she'll see it's more than cupcakes I'm stuffin,

~Hook~

LFS The Great (talking)

Haha...we all got issues...we retarded for this shit haha..damn this took long to type...haha...fuck it...where did everyone go???

yeah, this was the shit...hells fire actually wrote a pretty intense verse....lol, for such a half-assed OM

lmlo......anways, dont ever call my crew retarded...we are optimistically genius, nah sayin, anyways, this was dope cause i was in it....

mmm, mmm, cant get enough of kesse

Uh Oh Not These long Crew names again .............Nice drop

wow 16 views...3 replies...nice...uppin

*applaudes*
gooooood shit OG...was feelin everythang...shit was sumthin i couldnt stop reading...dopeness...8/10...return tha fava (ALL YALL) in any of my OMz...links in sig...stay up yall...1

been a while sinced i OM'd lol...here ya go
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189128

peep my OM LFS..."Gettin Attention"...its hot fam

i got yu fam...uppin this OM

haha, yo yo, you like that or what, lmlo

anyways, yeh, this was pretty fun though, i laughed so hard at line's....uppin

:: bump :: :) :) :thumbup: leave some feed on this yall!

Dopest shit ever...10000000000000000000000000000009/10 bitches...Weerd

thanks for feed!!!! :: bump :: again :)

uppin this dopppppppppe om for some feed :)

uppin...this took forever to edit wit the colors and shit...my verse wit OSB was killer...LEAVE FEED FOR MY LABORS! lol

uppin this shit cmon man its funny shit here

uppin this shit...I'm pissed...I lost a CLOSE ass battle to LyricalMa$tamind....5-4...dammit lol....oh well i was down 3-1 so I'm cool....for now lol

uppin this OM....

PLEASE READ THIS SHIT! either this or Daubs OM...either one is good...

word.....im dope

dumbass read thie hook..bet you feel dumb lol...uppin this for intelligent feed

ok dis was an ok piece it was very good at the end it got borin no offense i loved hell fire line he really impoved since the first time he got here nice elevation line ya verse was decent could of impoved vocab doe keese i like ya verse also very very creative and it made me laugh a little the last two verse i really didnt like could elevate a lil and d523 lol funny verse even doe i didnt like it good open mic to all of yall

*Reads the hook*


Oh wow..."my bad"....he named the drop after every word in his hook


really 'intelligent' lmfao....what happened to naming a drop after a TOPIC...rather than a hook, your putting the whole fucking alphabet as your title, congratulations you know your ABC'S! but my unborn child can still do better.

nevermind....some people elevate when they're 50, well your 10 so i guess you still have time to.

your on the level below the level way below my level....the only way you can reach 2 tha top is when your reaching for your wig.

nevermind but..

ITZ CRI$$TYLE BABY :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :laugh:

aren't you gonna go out by saying "ITZ CRI$$TYLE BABY :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :laugh: " :huh:

no i changed back becayse halloween is evil...I dont carfe about you really...yur duckin myt battle lol...and l i n e ...i think he realized it was dumb....

shit was dope reading it we gotta keep droppin oms 0.G. oms=dopeness...haha yo im out

this was a crazy om, i dont really understand how u would come up wit this topic but its all good, nah mean. ok flows, lfs's could have been a lil better. hells fire verse was decent, kesse had a nice drop, vocab was good and structure was ok. so overall i give it an 8/10 shit was mad long too lol...
uppin this shit for the fam...1..

that was just beautiful

uppin this ish for the fam nah mean.........................

uppin this ish for the fam nah mean.........................
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NO

lfs

You changed your name back as soon as i dissed you, you herb

NOW you know it's evil :laugh:

what a joke

your just another 13 year old kid with no bone structure





You know

uppin this ish for the fam nah mean.........................
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