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b-gurl vs confidential
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6 - 20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 6 Check in by: 05-07-05 at 11:54 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
b-gurl has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-05 11:29 AM.
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confidential's here to show his 'potential'
its consequential* that i fuck up his credentials he didnt realise that wen i spit-its torrential** like a Rain storm,'pac-a-mac', its essential 2 beat this bitch,im so hot -im 'quintessential'*** didnt take much thot, hes 'in-consequential'**** callin evry1 out, actin big and 'presidential!' hate 2 mention boi, but ur rhymes r 'non influential' *-the result **-forceful,'torrential rain' ***-perfect example of class/quality ****-Lacking importance |
confidential has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-05 11:50 AM.
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u a female emcee so actually i admire-when
u rhyme, cuz slang gotta be hard to understand when u live in ireland.... b-gurl i aint want to do this, but getting fuck was part of the plan but u aint worth the money in the bank..just the money on hand *HA* if we was locked in a studio i would walk off in hanf-cuff for verbal-rape cuz ya best spit comes after u swallow....plus i got it on tape u said u'r crib was nice but now I can tell that u fibbed though If u don't live in a trailor then why r there tail lights in ur window? *HA* Sike that aint ur pad, but u aint lettin the truth come out either Cuz u just snapped a pic on the job where u work as a house cleaner http://community.rapverse.com/attac...achmentid=11056 N fuck ya spit, cuz its the crabs on ya pussy that got me scared diminished in strength, i'll leave u verbally impaired BITCH.... good luck baby girl |
explanation....
her bank look like this.... Money on Hand: 80 Money in the Bank: 22000000 Bank Account Number: XPETBK-40704 and she is from: ireland she is: 17 for the 4th and 5bar in my verse... she had posted some pic of her-self in her crib: http://community.rapverse.com/attac...achmentid=11056 now lets get some votes and i should of posted this in my verse at the bottom i FUCKED UP but here are the explanation if u need them... |
Voted For: b-gurl
confidential's here to show his 'potential' its consequential* that i fuck up his credentials ^^ THIS IS NOT A PUNCH..MORE SELF/GLORY 1/10 he didnt realise that wen i spit-its torrential** like a Rain storm,'pac-a-mac', its essential ^^ SELF GORY...BUT GUD RHYME! 2/10 2 beat this bitch,im so hot -im 'quintessential'*** didnt take much thot, hes 'in-consequential'**** ^^ BETTER..BUT STILL..3/10 callin evry1 out, actin big and 'presidential!' hate 2 mention boi, but ur rhymes r 'non influential' ^^KINDA PUNCH..3/10 B-GURL..YA STRUCTURE WAS GOOD..FLOWED WELL AND U HAD NICE VOCAB.# BUT PROBLEM IS ALL THATS LIKE ONLY 15-20% OF A GOOD VERSE THE REST IS ALL ABOUT PUNCHES & PERSONALS WHICH U HAD NONE. YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO DISS YA OPPONENT. YOU DID WELL TO RHYME ALL THOSE WORDS THO PROPS..BUT IT ISNT NESSACARY. U CUDA SAID SUMTHIN LIKE this guy will neva be sick..coz hes so non "influ"ential.. Ya rhymes are like ya bank balance..you no "cred"ential.. its all about how u word stuff..jus get more creative see how i usued influ as a meta for influenza/sickness and cred ential as credits i.e money.. jus upp ya game gurl confidential u a female emcee so actually i admire-when u rhyme, cuz slang gotta be hard to understand when u live in ireland.... ^^gud personal...6/10 b-gurl i aint want to do this, but getting fuck was part of the plan but u aint worth the money in the bank..just the money on hand *HA* hmmmm..5/10 if we was locked in a studio i would walk off in hanf-cuff for verbal-rape cuz ya best spit comes after u swallow....plus i got it on tape ^^lol...decent 6/10 u said u'r crib was nice but now I can tell that u fibbed though If u don't live in a trailor then why r there tail lights in ur window? *HA* ^^^like it nice bar 7/10 Sike that aint ur pad, but u aint lettin the truth come out either Cuz u just snapped a pic on the job where u work as a house cleaner http://community.rapverse.com/attac...achmentid=11056 ^^lol.yup decent personal wit da link as proof 6/10 N fuck ya spit, cuz its the crabs on ya pussy that got me scared diminished in strength, i'll leave u verbally impaired BITCH.... ^^^ok closer 5/10 yeh...gud drop confidential...basically murdered bgurl wit punches and creativity..keep it upp Vote switched |
This was feedback posted for b-gurl
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Voted For: confidential
I really wanted to vote for Bgirl here.... she has the more consumate flow and sharpened intellect... but she didn't attack her opponent at all.... She got thumbs up from me for her complexity and thought process, but first dude grabbed this with some actual punches... tho nothin that great... Vote Confidential... rtf... |
Voted For: b-gurl
well my vote goes to b gurl she came hard with good vocab and decent punches con, you did better in your battle w/me elevate no hate con just wasn't felling it and what's up with the bad link? Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upp'in this battle................................
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Voted For: b-gurl
confidential's here to show his 'potential' its consequential* that i fuck up his credentials he didnt realise that wen i spit-its torrential** like a Rain storm,'pac-a-mac', its essential 2 beat this bitch,im so hot -im 'quintessential'*** didnt take much thot, hes 'in-consequential'**** callin evry1 out, actin big and 'presidential!' hate 2 mention boi, but ur rhymes r 'non influential' =7/10 a ok verse just make ya lines longer n it will be alot better.......... vs u a female emcee so actually i admire-when u rhyme, cuz slang gotta be hard to understand when u live in ireland.... b-gurl i aint want to do this, but getting fuck was part of the plan but u aint worth the money in the bank..just the money on hand *HA* if we was locked in a studio i would walk off in hanf-cuff for verbal-rape cuz ya best spit comes after u swallow....plus i got it on tape u said u'r crib was nice but now I can tell that u fibbed though If u don't live in a trailor then why r there tail lights in ur window? *HA* Sike that aint ur pad, but u aint lettin the truth come out either Cuz u just snapped a pic on the job where u work as a house cleaner http://community.rapverse.com/attac...achmentid=11056 N fuck ya spit, cuz its the crabs on ya pussy that got me scared diminished in strength, i'll leave u verbally impaired BITCH.... =6.5/10 also an ok verse but alot of it didnt ryhme.......... v/b-gurl.......... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yeah thanx efecx, was like my first battle lol wasnt prewritten or anythin, the punches i spose r more subtle than straight out callin him bitch lol but i'll do that next time! lol ;)
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upp'in and no exchanging votes,
i want honest straight up explain votes |
Voted For: b-gurl
yo this was a aiight battle yo.... b-gurl - i liked your verse, your punches were very good your flow stayed on point the whole time, you had a nice opener and closer... your vocab was overall pretty good i liked your structure alot better than confidential.. overall nice verse 7/10 confidential - your verse was a bit more simple, your vvocab needs to be improved and ur flow was pretty good... work a bit more on ur openers and closers but overall you had a pretty good bunch of punches but girl hit harder and i just liked her verse more... overall/ b-gurl... no hate how i saw it peace... |
^^^ WHAT??? are u serious??? can u see a punch in there??
plez show me where?? fucking dick ryders.... |
Voted For: confidential
Yo here it is...... . . Con-nice punches.... but try to make them hit harder next time you almost lost this......using comedy in ur punches will get you a win almost every time keep that up.....Try using Multies and adding some Metas....it will help you elevate alot more.....your best punch--- . if we was locked in a studio i would walk off in hanf-cuff for verbal-rape cuz ya best spit comes after u swallow....plus i got it on tape.....-----some funnie shit.....oh and by the way i gave her that money.....Holla . . B-Gurl---i liked that you used one rhymin word all the way through...and the multies..but you seriously lost this BAD.......keep on trying wit this battle shit.....elevating easy if you keep at it.......try using metas and personals next time!!!. . . ur best...confidential's here to show his 'potential' its consequential* that i fuck up his credentials . . good battle yall but i goota give this one to Con........V/Con |
upp'in to end this battle already.........................
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Voted For: confidential
ok battle... here it goes confidential's here to show his 'potential' its consequential* that i fuck up his credentials not really a punch.... he didnt realise that wen i spit-its torrential** like a Rain storm,'pac-a-mac', its essential played but still ok 2 beat this bitch,im so hot -im 'quintessential'*** didnt take much thot, hes 'in-consequential'**** diss but not a punch callin evry1 out, actin big and 'presidential!' hate 2 mention boi, but ur rhymes r 'non influential' ok closer but ...blah verse was ok, i seen better punches from you in the cypher, you came week here, have a lot more potential....you had the better vocab but in comparison to his verse....na u a female emcee so actually i admire-when u rhyme, cuz slang gotta be hard to understand when u live in ireland.... yeah nice hit. b-gurl i aint want to do this, but getting fuck was part of the plan but u aint worth the money in the bank..just the money on hand *HA* nice punch if we was locked in a studio i would walk off in hanf-cuff for verbal-rape cuz ya best spit comes after u swallow....plus i got it on tape yeh another nice punch u said u'r crib was nice but now I can tell that u fibbed though If u don't live in a trailor then why r there tail lights in ur window? *HA* meh...ok Sike that aint ur pad, but u aint lettin the truth come out either Cuz u just snapped a pic on the job where u work as a house cleaner ok personal... N fuck ya spit, cuz its the crabs on ya pussy that got me scared diminished in strength, i'll leave u verbally impaired BITCH.... ok closer overall con gets this due to better punches.. no hate, just the way i saw it.. rtf in sig so i dont have to dq my vote :thumbup: |
Voted For: confidential
Punches-Con...had 1 nice punch in ya verse son...try ta add more,i see the potential Multis-Bgurl...u had these down packed,dem big words was killen me at first...gladly u added an explanation... Vocab-Bgurl...again thanks fa adden the explanations of the words u used... Personals-Con...basically this is what got u my vote...all dem personals were funny...ta me personals and punches is what get the win Opener-Con..."u a female emcee so actually i admire-when u rhyme, cuz slang gotta be hard to understand when u live in ireland...." LmaOO funny shit...need i say more Closer-Tie...netha one was hard hitten...so i'd have ta say you both tied on this... V/Con...due to the personals RTF Links in sig |
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