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Kawn Flixx 05-07-05 09:36 PM

Bonecollector vs Evolution
 
Battle Rules:

8-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-07-05 at 10:36 PM

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System 05-07-05 09:41 PM

Evolution has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-05 09:41 PM.

System 05-07-05 09:58 PM

Bonecollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-05 09:58 PM.

Cocaine 05-07-05 10:06 PM

bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need to for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit

...

Cocaine 05-07-05 10:07 PM

bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit

...

Kawn Flixx 05-07-05 10:18 PM

Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
....Untouchable huh?...
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose?:( but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...

Cocaine 05-07-05 10:19 PM

..whose ^Lucifier^ ?? ...cuz that isnt me..good drop anywayz

Murdah.txt 05-07-05 10:30 PM

Voted For: Bonecollector

BONE punches were on target and hit well....flow was good i liked how it flowed in this specific verse...structure was also good and a bit diff but easie to read....vocab was ight not your best but okay...

evoloution...punches didnt hit very well sum did but sum were just fillers..flow was ight basic but good...structure was ight too nuthin speacial but enough..vocab was off too simple and your verse just didnt hit him like he hit you good drop both yall though but bone getz this IMO RETURN THA FAVOUR ON ANY OF MY OPEN BATLES

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King Solo 05-07-05 10:31 PM

Voted For: Evolution

bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
5...mah man, aint feelin this, just filler!!
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
5...nice punch but cud be better!!
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
6...LoL!!! gud meta in there!!
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
6...gud shit again!!!!
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
5...not feelin the closer, too played!!

OVERALL: 27/60



Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
6...gud play off his name!!!
....Untouchable huh?...
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
6...first line filler, 2nd line was a gud meta tho!!
Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
5...not feelin it!!!
............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
4...BOOOO!!! that is self - g shit!!!
...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
5...filler, not really feelin it!!!

OVERALL: 26/60


both came pretty weak...close one to call but i'm gonna have to go with Evolution because Bone dropped a self-g line in his verse and they are more played than video games!!!

V/ - Evolution

RTF!!! if ya ain't already....check my stats for battle links!!!

Restricted 05-07-05 11:53 PM

Voted For: Bonecollector

Aight Check It..

Bonecollecor: Hottest Line

Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...

Evolution: Hottest Line

rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved

Overall: I Would Give This Battle To Bonecollector For The Simple Fact That His Wording Had The Concepts and Devlievry A Battle Vesrse Should Have. He Had Better Punches and Personals.

Evolution, Just Work On Wording...Your Hottest Line Could've Beat His Whole Verse If You Woulda Worded It Better. Use More of A Metaphor.

~R~

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Black Dragon 05-08-05 12:07 AM

Voted For: Bonecollector

Yo this wuz some weak shit.......on da real thoe....both cats need to work on Punchlines instead claimin how ur flow or lyrics or ability is da best........but yo Evolution wuz juss plain wack and Bone collector at least had some decent punches so i vote him............

Vote - Bonecollector

Retrospecktive 05-08-05 12:08 AM

Voted For: Evolution


bone..u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
alright 6.5/10
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
koo..... 7.3/10
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. &
starved
Hot 8.1/10
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
bad 4.3
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck
that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
funny ass shit 8.5/10

overall: 34.7/50

Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
bad 4.0/10
....Untouchable huh?...
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
alright 5.0/10
Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
ok... 5.0/10
............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
really bad 4.0/10
...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
ok 5.0/10

23/50
V/Evolution

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Adam 05-08-05 12:41 AM

Voted For: Evolution

bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
Eh....4/10
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
Not bad...5/10
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
Liked this punch...7/10
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
Pretty funny...6/10
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
Nice...7/10

Overall: 29/50


Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
Eh...4/10
....Untouchable huh?...
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
Nah....4/10
Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
Eh...5/10
............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
Wack....3/10
...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
Gay punch....3/10

Overall: 19/50

His verse was just better so...
Vote: Evolution

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Bangalore 05-08-05 12:42 AM

This was feedback posted for Bonecollector
 
bone got this super easy ...... look'n Z@ p-olls ..

Shard 05-08-05 12:52 AM

Voted For: Bonecollector

clooose battle...

BC- You had a coupla lines I liked... that soap bubble ish was aiite... and the maryjane shit was nice... The rest was pretty simplistic but slightly effective... such as food chain and hardly hit...

Ev- you had a coupla lines I liked... money where mouth is... and the 2 hour joint... the rest sorta fell flat... pick wack or played was coo... both y'allh ad pretty good structure and flow...

Imma give this the Bone off the strength of like one line.... just felt he came slighhhtly more creative with his.... close one...


Vote Bonecollector

Mad Dog 05-08-05 01:55 AM

Voted For: Evolution

Evolution

bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
^ opener coulda been better bit too basic for me

ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
^ this is an aight bar better than the opener good flow

rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
^ good punch liked it

u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
^ lol good good this prolly ya best bar

they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
^ na not feelin it again like the opener basic

Overall
Good verse but it was the opener and closer that let you down on this IMO internally was good some good punches, rhyming was basic no multies metas none, personals none bar the money in ya mouth bit but i think that was layout for ya punch so no personals...coulda been better but good drop


Bonecollectors

Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
^ aight opener nuthin special i seen a lot of people start off like this

....Untouchable huh?...
^ Right i can understand where u puttin this it amplifies flow

......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
^ good bar but the untouchable but shoulda jus joined although it would look stretched good none the less though

Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
^ good liked this

............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
^ self-g blah

...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
^ closer is...i dunno i'm not seeing the connection there not feelin it like 1st cat

Overall
Again good verse wit improvements i was likin it up until the self glory bit sorta to the end you fell but you were better in the majority of ya verse opener again was basic but you picked up decently from there fell off near the end again no multies metas none flowed structure good but this is gonna be tough to call ima vote...

Evolution...jus purely outta conisistancy...RTF in my sig within 3 days or vote removed

CrazyDogg 05-08-05 02:27 AM

Voted For: Evolution

bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
-weak punch-
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
-ok-
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
-ok-
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
-decent-
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
-lol ok-

vs.

nothing...sorry but ur shit was either played or pointless or something that don't make sense dogg.....elevate really ur shit was whack IMO

v/Evolution...for having a verse lol.....rtf if I ever open another battle

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13th. 05-09-05 03:27 PM

Voted For: Bonecollector

Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
....Untouchable huh?...
Good
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
Nice
Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
LOL
............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
TITE
=8/10 a reali tite verse, had sum reali good punches


VS


bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
NAH
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
GOOD
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
NAH
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
WTF??? DATS LAME..............
=7/10 DAT WAS AN OK VERSE BUT U DIDNT COME HARD ENUF.........

V/BONECOLLECTOR

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p4ntzistheish 05-09-05 03:36 PM

Voted For: Evolution

-This is an LFS Review-

Bonecollector

Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...

Decent open

......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....

Basic...yea

Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...

This is good...though my area code is 973...so that applys to me lol

............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...

Meh...not the greatest

...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...

Not the best close but was decent

Evo

bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin

Decent at most[/]b

ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname

[b]Got a giggle outta me


rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved

NICE!

u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one

Didn't catch it...I'm slow sometimes

they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit

Decent close...

Overall: Evo...Bone I've seen WAY better from you...Evo got you in this one...rtf in my sig...ALL OF IT or I will NEVER...EVER!!!!!!!!!!! rtf on you. Have a Nice Day.

D523 05-09-05 03:56 PM

Voted For: Bonecollector

Bone you got this one by a long shot

You had some metas... and actually related ur rhymes with things that made sense.. Evo... stick to poetry

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AckRite 05-09-05 03:58 PM

Voted For: Bonecollector

bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
Um, No...3/10
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
Nah Kid...4/10
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
Ok...Not Hard Hittin Tho...4.5/10
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
I Dont Get It....4/10
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
Best Line......5.5/10

Needs Work Buddy....Now Bone....

Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
Tight Open Line...6/10
....Untouchable huh?...
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
Ahhh Dat Was Aight...Didnt Hit Too Hard...5.5/10
Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
Dis Line Was Straight...Was Feelin It...6.5/10
............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
Jeah Dats A Nice Line Son....7/10
...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
Aha Nice Close....6.5/10

Punches- BoneC
Personals- Tie
Creativity- BoneC
Wordplay- BoneC

Its No Contest, He Took Da Opener & Closer, His Middle Was More Enjoyable, Had More Punches...Personals, And He Used Some Creativity...Evo Didnt Get As Creative Wit His Verse So....v/ BoneCollector

Return Da Fav.

J. Luth 05-11-05 05:22 PM

Voted For: Evolution

aiight, wow....... pretty easy win in my eyes.....let me break it down

EVO

bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
no, this was wack, yo. 2/10
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
not hard hitting. jus eh..... 3/10
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
it's aiight.... not bad. 5/10
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
wow... i really liked this. fuckin' dope, yo. 10/10
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
haha... nice... 7/10

Ok, you started out wack as fuck, but finished strong. that "pick either one" oh, damn, original and Real creative, had me like "oh shit, nucca what?!?!" dope shit. 27/50

ok, bonecollector:

Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
wow... no, man... 2/10
....Untouchable huh?...
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
meh, it's ok. 4/10
Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
no. not that great... 3/10
............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
wtf? no.... 2/10
...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
not bad... 5/10

Overall, you really didn't try, or you need to elevate a lot. You have punches, but try makin' them wittier, cuz your punches are plain', nothing to make my mouth drop. nah mean? but keep elevatin, man. pc one. 13/50

Evo got this easy.

v/evo pc one

.Ike. 05-11-05 06:00 PM

Voted For: Evolution



bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
doesnt really mean nothin....1/10

ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
decent 4/10

rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
nice...7/10

u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
decent...5/10

they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
nice...6/10

overall....23/50



Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
decent....4/10

....Untouchable huh?...
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
decent....4/10

Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
ehh...2/10

............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
self glory....0/10

...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
ahh nice...7/10

overall....17/50

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Black Queen 05-12-05 03:40 PM

Voted For: Bonecollector

............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
^^^lmao of dat line
Bonecollector won dis hands down he had way more creative punches den evo evo ya verse was to basic and ya punches wasnt at all hard hittin ya vocab was to basic to while bone on da otha hand had creative punches nice wordplay and nice structure good battle

v/bonecollector

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Ma$fit 05-12-05 06:16 PM

Voted For: Bonecollector

votin for bone...gotta problem wit it?...bite me!!!


evo:
bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
^^wack opener dawg

ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
^^guess u holdin on to dat wack shit huh?...iight

rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
^^nice one...good, good

u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
^^*blank*, what?...dont get it

they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
^^really didnt get it...bad closer

bone:
Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
^^okay opener...could have been much better

....Untouchable huh?...
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
^^lol, had me laughin...iight

Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
^^nice one

............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
^^seemed forced

...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
^^good closer my nig...nice one

now if dat aint enuff...

struc: "hmmmmm"
flow: bone
vocab: niether
punches: bone
personals: bone

dats bout it crab cakes!

my vote=bone collector

stay live

MaRVJay 05-13-05 10:17 AM

Voted For: Evolution

okay....
evo:
bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
^^LOL UUH DECENT OPENER
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
^^^LMAOOO NICE PUNCH....
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
^^^^GOOD CONCEPT BUT U WORDED IT FUKKED UP...BUT STILL A GOOD LINE
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
^^^NAH
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
^^^WASN'T FEELIN DIS...OVERRALL U HAD A SOLID VERSE...NOT DAT MUCH CREATIVITY

bone:
Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
^^^OKAY OPENER
....Untouchable huh?...
^^^???????WHUT IS DIS 4
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
^^^LOL U SOUND LIKE A LIL ASS KID HERE FAM...
Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
^^^LOL NO
............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
^^^WORDED TERRIBLE BUT IT S OKAY
...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
^^^^NOPE....

V/EVO....

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CeleriTy 05-15-05 12:06 PM

Voted For: Evolution

lmao Evo got this one.. he still needs to work on his wording in punches and stuff.. but still his flow and structure was on point.. this was a pretty good battle by both but bone just didnt come as hard as i expected he had some nice punches at first but then fell off more towards the end of his verse... as to evo was hard hitting pretty much the whole way thru... ughh really no personals from either beside bone's opener.... soo no hate but vote goes to evo due to his punches just hitting a little bit harder thru out.... soooooooo good luck to both i just think evo edged it a bit..


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