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AutoMatik vs Scary Thawghtz
Battle Rules:
10-16 Linez No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-11-05 at 08:44 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Scary Thawghtz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-08-05 09:46 PM.
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This bitch is wack, Jus admit it cause its true soon
Ill put so many sparks tah your verse... They'll come up with a New Blue Mooon You dun throw punches, buh go head start tah fight dude Cause..Im so Cold, you can say i have a heart of ice cubes! Knockin yah lights out, You can't Bare tah Move.. This Kid wouldn't have 2 Souls..If he had a Pair of Shoes Im droppin weights on your verse jus tah pound your game Cause its going no where, except down the Drain Your punches are missin me, Its Dumber Tah Take hits And... Ill put u in so much blackless, u'll hide under the Blankets.. haha 5 minutes key'd didn't feel like writin |
AutoMatik has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 10:56 AM.
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I Make You Bleed In Cry Of Ya Livin Soul That I Caught....
You Winning This Battle Is The Only Time I Get Scary Thawghtz...(nameplay) Your Wack And Theres No Explaintion For Why Ur So Wack.... But If Your A Alias,I See The Reason You Came Back!..... After This Battle You Betta Quote What I Said.... Cuz You Hold No Heat...when Your Hold PENCIL LEAD!!... Heres A Lost To Get Ya On Ya Way..... Ur So Wack,Ya Skill Don't Even Look MY WAY!... As You See I Didn't Try,It Was A Quicky I Layed out..... Watch You Get K.O'ed Like Nas Riped Jigga Out!!..... sorry it was quick but i gotta go...this should be enuff for the win...~1~ |
Voted For: AutoMatik
-This is an LFS Review- Scary Thawghtz This bitch is wack, Jus admit it cause its true soon Ill put so many sparks tah your verse... Just to let you know this didn't rhyme...or make sense.... They'll come up with a New Blue Mooon You dun throw punches, buh go head start tah fight dude What?!? I'm lost lol Cause..Im so Cold, you can say i have a heart of ice cubes! Knockin yah lights out, You can't Bare tah Move.. Whack This Kid wouldn't have 2 Souls..If he had a Pair of Shoes Im droppin weights on your verse jus tah pound your game Didn't rhyme...again...and it sucked Cause its going no where, except down the Drain Your punches are missin me, Its Dumber Tah Take hits Once again...that sucked Ill put u in so much blackless, u'll hide under the Blankets.. Are you gonna finish that bar? Onto the next verse...let's venture AutoMatik I Make You Bleed In Cry Of Ya Livin Soul That I Caught.... You Winning This Battle Is The Only Time I Get Scary Thawghtz...( Decent...and thats a stretch Your Wack And Theres No Explaintion For Why Ur So Wack.... But If Your A Alias,I See The Reason You Came Back!..... Umm no After This Battle You Betta Quote What I Said.... Cuz You Hold No Heat...when Your Hold PENCIL LEAD!!... Didnt get it Heres A Lost To Get Ya On Ya Way..... Ur So Wack,Ya Skill Don't Even Look MY WAY!... Are you sucking on purpose? As You See I Didn't Try,It Was A Quicky I Layed out..... Watch You Get K.O'ed Like Nas Riped Jigga Out!!..... Played...you didnt even use it good [u]Overall:[/]u This battle sucked...pretty bad...oh well Auto gets my vote cuz he made more sese...but both verse sucked....rtf on anythin in my sig....and elevate...for the sake of humanity.... |
^lol...yeah of course i didn't try...lol...dis is me when my powers about to go off..and i don't want to lose....loll
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This bitch is wack, Jus admit it cause its true soon
Ill put so many sparks tah your verse... They'll come up with a New Blue Mooon ^^ its called a 3 line Text Bar.. U dum fucks |
This bitch is wack, Jus admit it cause its true soon
Ill put so many sparks tah your verse... They'll come up with a New Blue Mooon ONE BAR ^^ You dun throw punches, buh go head start tah fight dude Cause..Im so Cold, you can say i have a heart of ice cubes! TWO BAR^^ Knockin yah lights out, You can't Bare tah Move.. This Kid wouldn't have 2 Souls..If he had a Pair of Shoes THREE BAR^^ Im droppin weights on your verse jus tah pound your game Cause its going no where, except down the Drain FOUR BAR^^ Your punches are missin me, Its Dumber Tah Take hits And... Ill put u in so much blackless, u'll hide under the Blankets.. FIVE BAR^^ Jus for you dum ppl.. |
Voted For: AutoMatik
voted for auto Auto ya punches were very creative and hard hittin i was like whoah on every line ya personals were creative as well ya flow was on the point like mad man. The strucutre was good n easy to keep with ya wordplay was also creative nice verse Scary ya came a lil basic in ya verse nothing really stuck out. ya punches were allover the place. didnt see any personals so u need to elevate on that. multies get them in ur verse elevate on those. ya flow was the only thing i seen that i liked, ya structure was choppy as well. both elevate on multies auto gets it to more hard punches an personals v/Auto BE SURE TO RTF battle link in sig |
um i never heard of a three line bar...and I didnt take off for that...yur verse sucked lol....
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lol...haha...buh when i peeped ur verse... it was jus....blah.... anyways no biggie cuz i key'd tha in like 3 minutes cuz i was tired.. and my time was up
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fine wutever...I try to help and have fun but someone has to fuck it up...wutever set up a battle if its that bad lol....whatever
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Voted For: Scary Thawghtz
Alright, let's see. Punches: Scary Personals: Auto...he had one lame one. Opener: Tie, both only somewhat decent. Closer: Meh...Scary Flow: Scary That's about as far as I'm going to go, except for saying one more thing...Auto kept repeating the same word and it got annoying. 'You're wack and no reason you're wack', layed and jigga don't rhyme, so the closer isn't a multi...he rhymed way and way...that just ruined his verse. Vote: Scary Return the favor: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190344 |
^lol....what eva...uppin.....lol...kidd i didn't even try....go look at my otha battles...and you would prasie me for not owning ya ass like i can...lol..uppin....
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I'm not voting for your past battles, I'm voting for this battle. You say it was a quickie, it was forced, I don't care. Take your time before checking in. You have something to do, do it after this, unless it's going on vacation for a month --- which is not the case, obviously, since you're responding quite fine at the moment.
As a matter of fact, AutoMatik[oh, blowing you away with my ability to rhyme and not repeat the words in an attempt to make two lines rhyme unsuccessfully], shut the hell up and take the vote. I'm not changing it because you're a poor ass sportsman when I tell you you suck when you rush things. Slow the hell down. Why do you think I'd waste my time looking over your battles to see you can't do more then repeat a word after each sentence? |
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Voted For: AutoMatik
honestly...WEAK BATTLE...im not haten,but if yall did this quick then u need ta take time and make the utha person neva wanna battle u again..... Punches-None...no punches caught my eye,but if i hadda chose it would be Thawghtz even tho they was weak Multis-None Vocab-Tie...both Basic Opener-Automatik....urs was good,nameplay was on point Closer-Automatik...not sumden ta make me say DAMN!...but in my opinion u did exactly what ya last line said Give an honest vote to: Daubs (vs) _JoOksta_ |
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Voted For: AutoMatik
This bitch is wack, Jus admit it cause its true soon Ill put so many sparks tah your verse... ^^not a punch They'll come up with a New Blue Mooon You dun throw punches, buh go head start tah fight dude ^^doesn't seem like a punch Cause..Im so Cold, you can say i have a heart of ice cubes! Knockin yah lights out, You can't Bare tah Move.. ^^can ya please humilate the oppenent or at least attempt to This Kid wouldn't have 2 Souls..If he had a Pair of Shoes Im droppin weights on your verse jus tah pound your game ^^wtf? Cause its going no where, except down the Drain Your punches are missin me, Its Dumber Tah Take hits And... ^^wak Ill put u in so much blackless, u'll hide under the Blankets.. Conclusion-ok.....you didn't read the tutorials.Ur shit didn't seem to a be batle rap.Flow sucked...I don't even recall seeing one punchline.No hate..but you need work. I Make You Bleed In Cry Of Ya Livin Soul That I Caught.... You Winning This Battle Is The Only Time I Get Scary Thawghtz...(nameplay) ^^^Mediocre...not really insulting. Your Wack And Theres No Explaintion For Why Ur So Wack.... But If Your A Alias,I See The Reason You Came Back!..... ^^ain't feelin this After This Battle You Betta Quote What I Said.... Cuz You Hold No Heat...when Your Hold PENCIL LEAD!!... ^^^ wak Heres A Lost To Get Ya On Ya Way..... Ur So Wack,Ya Skill Don't Even Look MY WAY!... ^^wak As You See I Didn't Try,It Was A Quicky I Layed out..... Watch You Get K.O'ed Like Nas Riped Jigga Out!!..... ^^played out to death. Conclusion-ur shit was weak...but you ain't need much to win this.All you needed was a battle rap verse.Cause your oppenent didn't even have 1 punchline.I'll give ya props for at least posting a battle verse. Vote-Automatik(vote in my battle dawg) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189907 |
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Voted For: AutoMatik
Automatik: fast, nameplay, vocab, flowfull... good punches Scary: Nothing If you don't feel like writtin don't post |
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