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OG freestyle :) check this OUT
One Step Beyond
D 5 2 3
Os1ris
LFS the Great
Its the spark of illness.... try and split apart the business,
Attempt too? you can hear the beat of ya heart dimenish, Im just a step away from sickness, I can mark the inches, Chainsaws leave you seperated and scarred from stitches, Bitch You couldn't gain green if you stole a cart of spinach, And thats why I'm ahead of the pack, from start to finish... I’m hot with these punches like Muhammed Ali’s That’ll make u sit down like Christopher Reeves O please, leavin these Mc’s dead and deceased Look at us, king of RV it’s easy to see OG’s, Inevitably taking the game to a higher degree Breakin this shit down more technical then M.I.T Now watch as Os1ris take this freestyle from me I'm out ta take it.. fuck status.. half these crews can take the fame-kid i rather mame-they-bitch, ejaculate my words til she spits the same-shit "damn Os1ris you insane-kid", yea didn't know the fury was this vicious and if you missed the hits I'm spittin, how the fuck you gon handle the writtens and when the words-aint-hittin, you'll know when ya nerves-stop-splittin Os1ris soaked in illness, even got ya verbs-ta-stop-n-listen..... Fuck you guys!, I'm takin this "It's mine!" like I was three, I'm sick wit multis, elementary dear Watson like ABC, 123, 4 5 6, 7 8 and bustin to nine and tenon the drop of a dime, Mess wit me I'm leavin you floored like the "Sol" of the "Pine", Closin the door, to open the windows like somebody let a fart, I never fail, its an oxymoron like copying violence seen in Mario Kart, OG Production //// 2005 |
may wanna pick lighter fonts...hard to read...especially D's verse lol...but ofterwise good freestyles...wait I may be biased...LFS SUCKS! lol...just kidding I'm ok at times lol...okay I'm the Shit lol
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I like that pimpin
That was tight"OG’s, Inevitably taking the game to a higher degree Breakin this shit down more technical then M.I.T" ^^^That was coo..^^^ tha rest seems personal..I guess U have sum sortah beef!! explain tha rest..but tha verses were nice!! 8.2-thats my opinion!! |
lol thx for the feed...i think this was all freestyles lol...nuttin personal really
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:: bump :: :) upin this shit for some more feedback!
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^^^Okay!!..whatevah U say^^^ That shit was nice tho...I wanna see some more what else yall got together!! hollah !! |
check my sig for a few lol
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Aiiight fam imma check em out an give sum feed back!!
hollah an be lookin out for sum of my writtens!! |
no doubt...no doubt...oh yeah D drop a link....
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uppin this shit... :: bump ::
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uppin this shittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
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this was good yall all had some nice flows, and some good bars incorporated in there.
could have used somethin tho.................hmmmm oh yeah...ME haha but its all good idk why but i really liked this bar and when the words-aint-hittin, you'll know when ya nerves-stop-splittin Os1ris soaked in illness, even got ya verbs-ta-stop-n-listen keep doin ya thing yall...1... |
thanks for the feed! uppin for more
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chyeah...uppin this...sry City...I'll collab wit u later lol....UPPIN!
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uppingggggggggggggggg :)
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Good Drop Overall Cant Really Fault Anything On This Exept Tha Number Talk In Tha Last Verse Thats For Audio Doesnt Sound Right On Text And Fukks Up Tha Reader On Another Note Flow Was On Point,lyrics Were Good
Structure Was Good For Collab,vocab Was Decent Over All Dope Drop Keep Doin It Big And Return Tha Favour.................... |
thx Cas....upin...oh yea leave sumthin to leave feed on on lol...and check my sig please
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UPPIN THIS SHit cmon yall leave some feed
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Beginning was aight, but it got worse at the end. Creativity started to decrease, and the flow was gettin harder to follow. Overall if this was a freestyle it was good. 6.5/10
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i know mine was a frestyle lol...wrote in about 3 minutes lol...uppin
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uppin this shit for some feed
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yuupppinnnnn :)
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uppin this joint for the fam..........................
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leave feed...I WILL RETURN THE FAVOR GUARNTEED!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin this joint for the fam..........................
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Uppingggggggggggg
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uppin this joint for the fam..........................
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uppin this joint for the fam..........................
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