Re~Verb vs datopprospect
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 05-10-05 at 08:59 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Re~Verb has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 08:31 AM.

datopprospect has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 08:32 AM.

On this microphone i can't be beat,
i treat re-verb like his signature and 'hand' him defeat/
Cuz i'm sick on the mic and and nice when we go textual,
And if this dude hates my knife swings across his face both ways like a bisexual/
I dun know what dude u heard about,
Cuz when them things come out, this dude's face will 'change' just like what in your couch/
Niggas say they ain't feelin me cuz i scare them have they face white like chalk,
Dun get mad cuz i had your girl and pulled out my 'Lexington Steele' and made her 'booty talk'/
This nigga dun have the heart, how you make it to the top of the charts?,/
i'll run up on you in the dark, with the sumthin sharp, put it to where you think you smart, and then kill a different member of your family every week like Kenny on Southpark/


put it to where you think you smart=Brain

This guy wanted to elevate, ok he thought, nows my chance
Told to attempt slant rhymes, so he addopted a backward stance
Wanted to dance, but he lacks stability like a flatpacked shelf
Was gonna try get personal, but his rhymes speak for themself
Theirs no need to hit him hard, hell..hes started crumbling already
Told him just to spit whenever, because he`ll never be ready
Already ya merked, u cnt spit gangsta,mommys boy ya too good
Type to mess wit car engines, in an attept to be "in tha hood"
Drag ya name through the mud, but its that long itll take me 4eva
The sayings wrong, coz this experience wnt bring us "closer 2getha"**


**i mean closer 2 getha as in our battle records

This guy wanted to elevate, ok he thought, nows my chance
Told to attempt slant rhymes, so he addopted a backward stance
Wanted to dance, but he lacks stability like a flatpacked shelf
Was gonna try get personal, but his rhymes speak for themself
Theirs no need to hit him hard, hell..hes started crumbling already
Told him just to spit whenever, because he`ll never be ready
Already ya merked, u cnt spit gangsta,mommys boy ya too good
Type to mess wit car engines, in an attept to be "in tha hood"
Drag ya name through the mud, but its that long itll take me 4eva
The sayings wrong, coz this experience wnt bring us "closer 2getha"**


**i mean closer 2 getha as in our battle records

shit........
that was close..didnt realize id not posted in the correct box until 30seconds left.lol....

Voted For: Re~Verb

da verb winz diz battle for da overral better verse da punchlinez wuz sick da personalz hit hard an da creativity of his bars wuz just much more better so verb getz mih vote on diz battle

On my verse, i jus noticed a line a messed up, on the couch line it is supposed 2 be

I dun know what dude u heard about, Cuz when them things come out, this dude's face will 'change' just like whats in your couch/

Voted For: Re~Verb

one word...E-A-S-Y

well damn...no need to explain but i got to...here we go...

verb:
This guy wanted to elevate, ok he thought, nows my chance
Told to attempt slant rhymes, so he addopted a backward stance
...lolz...iight opener

Wanted to dance, but he lacks stability like a flatpacked shelf
Was gonna try get personal, but his rhymes speak for themself
...nice one right here

Theirs no need to hit him hard, hell..hes started crumbling already
Told him just to spit whenever, because he`ll never be ready
...had me rollin...good

Already ya merked, u cnt spit gangsta,mommys boy ya too good
Type to mess wit car engines, in an attept to be "in tha hood"
...OMG!!!...perfect, perfect, perfect...dat won da battle right there

Drag ya name through the mud, but its that long itll take me 4eva
The sayings wrong, coz this experience wnt bring us "closer 2getha"**
...cool closer, could have been betta

*8/10

spect:
On this microphone i can't be beat,
i treat re-verb like his signature and 'hand' him defeat/
...not really

Cuz i'm sick on the mic and and nice when we go textual,
And if this dude hates my knife swings across his face both ways like a bisexual/
...quit sayin "mic"...u "typed" dis homie

I dun know what dude u heard about,
Cuz when them things come out, this dude's face will 'change' just like what in your couch/
...heard dat before

Niggas say they ain't feelin me cuz i scare them have they face white like chalk,
Dun get mad cuz i had your girl and pulled out my 'Lexington Steele' and made her 'booty talk'/
...no dats iight...only a porn head would get it

This nigga dun have the heart, how you make it to the top of the charts?,/
i'll run up on you in the dark, with the sumthin sharp, put it to where you think you smart, and then kill a different member of your family every week like Kenny on Southpark/
...whoa, too damn long...wtf?

*5/10

structure: verb
flow: verb
punches: VERB
multis: verb
vocab: VERB

overall:
verb, u really didnt have to come hard at all...spect, yo shit was all over tha place and no punch landed...one sided battle famz...

v=re~verb

return tha fava when 8 drop his verse...link in sig

^^aight thas coo............
uppin....................

Voted For: datopprospect

Dun get mad cuz i had your girl and pulled out my 'Lexington Steele' and made her 'booty talk'/

yup i watch alot of porn so i was laughing at that line.
nice shit original too.

reverb came slick tho but ur punches were as effective/
ur flow was better tho. if u need this vote further explained message me.

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Dang yall i vote on all yall battles can sum1 vote on ours?

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This was feedback posted for Re~Verb
 

uppin this ish for the fam, holla at dude wit some honest votes peeps, nah mean....

Good luck @ Big City. Let a nigga get sum votes.......

This was feedback posted for datopprospect
 

prospect definately gets the win in this one...

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Voted For: Re~Verb

This guy wanted to elevate, ok he thought, nows my chance
Told to attempt slant rhymes, so he addopted a backward stance
^^^^this was a solid opener nuthin special but effective...
Wanted to dance, but he lacks stability like a flatpacked shelf
Was gonna try get personal, but his rhymes speak for themself
^^^^First line u came good but second was weak....
Theirs no need to hit him hard, hell..hes started crumbling already
Told him just to spit whenever, because he`ll never be ready
^^^^Agian An Ight punch but effective...
Already ya merked, u cnt spit gangsta,mommys boy ya too good
Type to mess wit car engines, in an attept to be "in tha hood"
^^^^This Punch One the best in this battle Solid...
Drag ya name through the mud, but its that long itll take me 4eva
The sayings wrong, coz this experience wnt bring us "closer 2getha"**
^^^^Ight THe First line was a filler an the punch didnt REally hit hard
This was a good verse all in all but some areas were played but u came wit better structure an punchs......6.5/10=re~verb

On this microphone i can't be beat,
i treat re-verb like his signature and 'hand' him defeat/
^^^^played punch....First was a filler to...
Cuz i'm sick on the mic and and nice when we go textual,
And if this dude hates my knife swings across his face both ways like a bisexual/
^^^^First line filler not a good setup an second line Play heard it before.....
I dun know what dude u heard about,
Cuz when them things come out, this dude's face will 'change' just like what in your couch/
^^^^an ight idea for a Punch if u rewerded it i would of said hot but u had it in the wrong Context.....
Niggas say they ain't feelin me cuz i scare them have they face white like chalk,
Dun get mad cuz i had your girl and pulled out my 'Lexington Steele' and made her 'booty talk'/
^^^^ ight tooo strechted an 2nd line was weak....
This nigga dun have the heart, how you make it to the top of the charts?,/
i'll run up on you in the dark, with the sumthin sharp, put it to where you think you smart, and then kill a different member of your family every week like Kenny on Southpark/
^^^^^was too strechted u did have good multi's but u need to work on ur structure.....but good idea for the endin....
u had some played punchs an bad structure No hat Jus work on those things......5/10=datopprospect
My VOte Goes to Re~verb he came all around harder an had good structure an punchs......RETURN THE FAVOR..

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Voted For: Re~Verb

This guy wanted to elevate, ok he thought, nows my chance
Told to attempt slant rhymes, so he addopted a backward stance
Wanted to dance, but he lacks stability like a flatpacked shelf
Was gonna try get personal, but his rhymes speak for themself
Theirs no need to hit him hard, hell..hes started crumbling already
Told him just to spit whenever, because he`ll never be ready
Already ya merked, u cnt spit gangsta,mommys boy ya too good
Type to mess wit car engines, in an attept to be "in tha hood"
Drag ya name through the mud, but its that long itll take me 4eva
The sayings wrong, coz this experience wnt bring us "closer 2getha"**


Good Verse, Flow Wuz Rite On Point An EZ 2 Follow, Da Punchez Made They Mark On Da Battle & Da Opener Had Me Lyke ''Oooh'' U Wrapped It Up In Dat Bar Alone, Good Job

On this microphone i can't be beat,
i treat re-verb like his signature and 'hand' him defeat/
Cuz i'm sick on the mic and and nice when we go textual,
And if this dude hates my knife swings across his face both ways like a bisexual/
I dun know what dude u heard about,
Cuz when them things come out, this dude's face will 'change' just like what in your couch/
Niggas say they ain't feelin me cuz i scare them have they face white like chalk,
Dun get mad cuz i had your girl and pulled out my 'Lexington Steele' and made her 'booty talk'/
This nigga dun have the heart, how you make it to the top of the charts?,/
i'll run up on you in the dark, with the sumthin sharp, put it to where you think you smart, and then kill a different member of your family every week like Kenny on Southpark/

Yo Verse Started Wit Lyke 5 Words In'a Line, Den 2wardz Da End, U Had Like 25 Wordz In'a Line, Whuzzup Wit Dat? Fix Yo Structure, But Yo Lyrikal Content Wuz Kinda Weak Wit Played Out Punchez, Plz Dont Hate, I'm Jus Telling It How I C It

Vote/ Re~Verb, Much Better Lyrikal Quality

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