Stanza vs Bernonedown
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 KO

GL :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-10-05 at 06:30 PM

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Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 05:57 PM.

Bernonedown has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 06:04 PM.

stanza taking on bernonedown,
does he not know i will pound him in the ground,
wrecked, checked and fill in the blank________,
doesnt he know that his verse wont even rank,
hes up against the best, biggest and most feared competitor,
theres nothing that can stop me during rythme, not even STANZA, Rapverse's sexual predator,
if he thinks he can compete give him a chance,
but deep down my words have already put him in a trance

Goodluck Man ..............................Uppin for some votes

Uppin ..........................Uppin ....................Uppin

Voted For: Stanza

Stanza- On the whole, your verse was ok, wasnt feeling the ending though, flowed alright, and punches hit harder than Bernonedowns did

Bernonedown- Wasnt really feeling your verse, punches werent strong, flow was ok

Punches- Stanza
Flow- Tie
Multis- Niether
Wordplay- Stanza
Structure- Stanza
Personals- Niether

Final Vote-------Stanza--------

Wez Bez Uppin .upin Thjis Mofo

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This was feedback posted for Stanza
 

uppin for fam......................................

Voted For: Stanza

Stanza,,,, killed that nigga below cause he suck'd like a mutha fucka shit man that nigga spit so weak personals weere so gay and where are the fuckin pucnhes handsdown u killed that faggot hellz yeah Vote Stanza U win this no matter what ~1~

Wez Bez Uppin .upin Thjis Mofo

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Voted For: Bernonedown

okay, this was one of the whackest battles i've read in a long time....uh stanza, you didn't really diss him at all, no punches really directed at him, structure was bad, stretched lines....everyline
uhmm, nothing really specific, no creativity....opener was just stupid as hell....wow, overall, this was a bad verse by you man....didn't even play off his name at all, no real punches, so i can't even give this to you man

bernone, man, no structure at all, but at least you tried, you gotta elevate madly.....gotta stop self-glorifying....but overall, you attempted more punches at your opponent, kept it consistent, but overall, you both did horrible, but i am giving it to bern one because he was less whack
wrecked, checked and fill in the blank________,
doesnt he know that his verse wont even rank,
^ all because of that line and it was horrible, thats how bad this battle was, but lol, funny to read, keep up both

v/bernonedown

Thanx Man ,.................................................

Voted For: Stanza

Bernonedown:
no flow
no structure
no personals
wack vocab
self-glorification

Stanza:
good flow
good structure
good vocab use
good punchlines
good wordplay

v/ Stanza

Voted For: Stanza

STANZA-good flow, structure, multies, and punches....some of the punches WERE pertty wack though, didnt really notice any personals

bernonedown-WOW, the most fucked up structure ive seen in a while, wack opener, didnt really knew wut went in the blacnk, lmao, overall no good puncehs or personals

this one easily goes to stanza, onesided the whole way, elevate though bern.....werd