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Stu 05-10-05 08:05 PM

Flowin_Phantom vs evil
 
Battle Rules:

6-8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No hate votes

ALL VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED!!

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-10-05 at 09:05 PM

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System 05-10-05 08:13 PM

evil has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 08:13 PM.

System 05-10-05 08:16 PM

Flowin_Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 08:16 PM.

Capone 05-10-05 08:21 PM

im going easy on this victim just cuase he new to the game
he’s not dope he’s wack, just like his fucking noob name
my verse gonna make you not see so its like looking in mist
how is this fag phantom gonna battle me when he don’t exist
………………I know im gonna beat this herb its just a fact
……………Like phantom of the opera he just a fucking act


6 lines lets go.

Stu 05-10-05 08:25 PM

Good luck fam...

Stu 05-10-05 08:29 PM

Look...

Don't test me man, forreal my tech will rip him
And "Evil will Be Gone" like an exorcism
Your text is quite wack kid, but I like practice
Evil will never go big.................................
.............He "sticks to the net" like "arachnids"
You readily strapped? Bring the heat, I don't stress wit a gat
Your verses "pull as many punches" as a "wrestlin match"
This kid is a menace, so Evil endin' up winnin
"wont happen" like the "Chicago Cubs winnin' the pennant" *

For the idiots:
He is from chicago, the home of the Chicago Cubs

Stu 05-10-05 08:31 PM

Good verse man...Uppin to get some votes on this motherfucker!!!

Stu 05-10-05 08:37 PM

By the way...The cubs wont ever win the world series again...havent won since like 1908...(Part of my explanation)

Capone 05-10-05 08:41 PM

i like the sox lol im a sox fan cubs suck,,,,,,,,,,,,

EastCoast 05-10-05 08:49 PM

This was feedback posted for evil
 
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Stu 05-10-05 08:58 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by evil
i like the sox lol im a sox fan cubs suck,,,,,,,,,,,,



^^^Lmao...Weerd

B. Magik 05-10-05 09:24 PM

Voted For: Flowin_Phantom

uppin this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Retrospecktive 05-10-05 09:55 PM

Voted For: Flowin_Phantom

Flowin phantom had way more effective understandable lines you could've made them better with more Vocab but ur best line was He "sticks to the net" Like " arachnids" that junk was tight punchs we're pretty soft but u had the meta's and thats why im givin this to u ur personals were'nt realy active enough but stilll....l.


Evil that was so simple of a verse u really didint try cause ur flow was flowing but everything connected to the flow was straight garbage dogg ur personals where are they?? punches weak structure normal nothing to brag about still got to got with ma man Flowin Phantom wit good stuf V/Phantom.

Retrospecktive 05-10-05 09:55 PM

Retrun...........the...........Favor.............. .please in the sig .....

Stu 05-11-05 05:45 PM

Uppin thru the fucking roof...

B. Magik 05-11-05 08:32 PM

Uppin Thru The Fucking Roof...

MiSk 05-11-05 09:05 PM

Voted For: Flowin_Phantom

-Stu-
Don't test me man, forreal my tech will rip him
And "Evil will Be Gone" like an exorcism
^^^^ 7/10 pretty good opener..decent hit

Your text is quite wack kid, but I like practice
Evil will never go big.................................
.............He "sticks to the net" like "arachnids"
^^^^ 7/10 not sure why the pause is so big...ok wordplay...ok hit

You readily strapped? Bring the heat, I don't stress wit a gat
Your verses "pull as many punches" as a "wrestlin match"
^^^^ 7/10 ok wordplay...ok hit..kinda played 2nd line

This kid is a menace, so Evil endin' up winnin
"wont happen" like the "Chicago Cubs winnin' the pennant" *
^^^^ 8/10 your best line...decent personal...still lacked a hard punch...ok closer

29/40 = %73


-evil-
im going easy on this victim just cuase he new to the game
he’s not dope he’s wack, just like his fucking noob name
^^^^ 7/10 decent opener...good hit

my verse gonna make you not see so its like looking in mist
how is this fag phantom gonna battle me when he don’t exist
^^^^ 6/10 not much of a hit...this bar could of been word'ed better

………………I know im gonna beat this herb its just a fact
……………Like phantom of the opera he just a fucking act
^^^^ 7/10 dont use "herb" in anymore battles unless you can make is HOT...decent hit...ok closer

20/30 = %66


Vote: Stu




*no hate...just honest opinion*

B. Magik 05-11-05 09:08 PM

Thanx man...Uppin this shit!!!!!!!!!!

Stu 05-11-05 10:42 PM

Uppin Thru The Fucking Roof...

K.ontroverz.Y 05-11-05 10:48 PM

Voted For: Flowin_Phantom

dayum stu that shit was murderous. you had good wordplay. in that one. I was feelin that too def. structure was not too good. flow was dope. your vocab was dope. and good personals. shit was hot. oerall 7.5/10

evil:
you had ok punches but thatsd about it. everything else was just fillers and broing. you'll get there fam dont worry. you had good structure.. ok flow....no personals.....vocab was blah... overall 6/10

vote: stu

p4ntzistheish 05-11-05 10:59 PM

Voted For: Flowin_Phantom

-This is an LFS Review-

Let's begin....

Flowin Phantom

Don't test me man, forreal my tech will rip him
And "Evil will Be Gone" like an exorcism

Decent....

Your text is quite wack kid, but I like practice
Evil will never go big.................................
.............He "sticks to the net" like "arachnids"

I'm assuming this goes together...if it does...not that good...

You readily strapped? Bring the heat, I don't stress wit a gat
Your verses "pull as many punches" as a "wrestlin match"

Nice...

This kid is a menace, so Evil endin' up winnin
"wont happen" like the "Chicago Cubs winnin' the pennant"

Clever...

Let's move on to the other verse

evil

IP:


im going easy on this victim just cuase he new to the game
he’s not dope he’s wack, just like his fucking noob name

Dont get it

my verse gonna make you not see so its like looking in mist
how is this fag phantom gonna battle me when he don’t exist

Umm not that good

………………I know im gonna beat this herb its just a fact
……………Like phantom of the opera he just a fucking act

[b]Pretty good...cept for the dots lol

Overall: I give this to Flowin cuz he wrote more so he had more to even out his verse....evil u had to come HARD foronly 6 lines....and you didnt...i wanted more....this was a decent battle...RTF OR I WILL NEVER VOTE OR LEAVE FEED FOR YOU AGAIN!!!!


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